高考题型逐个击破14 应用文写作升级之道歉信（必备素材，写作模版，写作训练）-2025届高三英语一轮复习闯关攻略

道歉信 必备素材 道歉信是要向对方陈述自己不当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意，或者无法答应对方不违常理的所托的原因。具体写作步骤为： 表明写信意图,对某事表示歉意 说明道歉的具体原因 再次表明歉意,请求谅解,并提出补救措施 提升表达 [首段句] 开门见山,表达歉意: (1)I􀆳m writing this letter to make an apology to you for not being able to… (2)I am more than sorry to tell you that I’m not available to… (3)I􀆳m terribly/awfully sorry that I can’t make it to… (4)I feel extremely sorry that I have to be absent from…, which I once promised for special reasons. [中段句] 说明理由并请求原谅: (1)Because of/Owing to/Due to/On account of…, I’m unable to spare time to… (2)The reason why I can’t keep my promise is that… (3)What troubles me is that…, which led to my absence. (4)I am awfully sorry for breaking my promise and I apologize for any inconvenience it brings to you. I hope you can understand me. [尾段句] 再次阐述歉意并提出弥补措施: (1)I sincerely hope that you will accept my apology. (2)If it’s convenient for you, I recommend that we… (3)Maybe we can fix another time to…next week as long as you are available. (4)I hope you’ll forgive me for causing you so much trouble. However, if it’s convenient for you, what about…? 写作模板 Dear__________， I am excessively sorry to tell you that__________(陈述道歉原因). Now I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deepest regret. I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(请求对方原谅的事由). The reason for my delay/absence was/is that__________(解释道歉原因). I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to__________(提出补救措施). Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely， __________(署名) 写作训练 （一） （2024·江西景德镇·三模）假定你是李华，与外教Peter约好周六下午一起去爬南山，但因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件表示歉意，内容包括： 1.表达不能赴约的歉意；2说明原因；3.另约时间； 注意：写作词数应为80左右； Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua （二） （2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·模拟预测）假设你是李华，作为交换生正在美国哥伦比亚大学(Columbia University)学习。今早你不小心刮蹭(scratch)了一辆汽车。请给车主留一张便条 内容包括： 1.简述事情经过; 2.提出解决办法。注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Car Owner, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards! Li Hua （三） （2024·宁夏石嘴山·三模）假设你是李华，你和英国好友Jim约定本周天一起去森林公园游玩放松，但你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （四） （2024·山东·一模）假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(coming-of-age ceremony), 但你无法应邀, 请写信告知, 内容包括: 1. 表达歉意; 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Michael, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （五） （2024·江西·三模）假定你是李华，你的好友Susan想约你周末聚餐，但你因故不能前往。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因; 3. 另约时间。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （2024·浙江嘉兴·三模）假定你是校英语话剧社社长李华，原定于下周举行的英语话剧表演赛因故推迟，请给担任评委的外教Katherine写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.推迟原因； 3.后续调整。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·广东·二模）假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩，你因故无法前往，请你回信表达歉意，内容包括： 1. 谢绝的理由； 2. 提议暑假去拜访他。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jerry, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （八） （2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假定你是李华，你的外籍好友 Jenny 邀请你周末一起去参观博物馆，但你因故不能接受邀请。请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.感谢邀请； 2.表达歉意并解释原因； 3.另约时间。 注意：1.词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jenny, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （九） （2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意并说明原因； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） （2024·宁夏银川·一模）假定你是校中国象棋俱乐部的李华。你与留学生朋友Dan约好本周五下午一起下中国象棋，但是你因故无法赴约。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意； 2. 说明原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意： 1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：中国象棋Chinese chess （十一） （2024·江西上饶·二模）假定你是中学生李华，你的外教Miss White要求你们周一下午去听一个关于英国历史文化的讲座，你因故不能参加。请你写一张请假条向 Miss White 请假。要点如下： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明理由； 3.其它。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十二） （2024·西藏山南·三模）假定你是李华,因下周五要到机场接表妹,所以不能陪Tom去北京旅行。请你给Tom写一封道歉信。 内容主要包括： 1. 向Tom表达歉意。 2. 向Tom解释原因。 3. 祝Tom下周愉快并另约时间陪Tom去北京旅游。 注意: 1. 词数100 左右 2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 道歉信 必备素材 道歉信是要向对方陈述自己不当行为给对方造成不利影响的歉意，或者无法答应对方不违常理的所托的原因。具体写作步骤为： 表明写信意图,对某事表示歉意 说明道歉的具体原因 再次表明歉意,请求谅解,并提出补救措施 提升表达 [首段句] 开门见山,表达歉意: (1)I􀆳m writing this letter to make an apology to you for not being able to… (2)I am more than sorry to tell you that I’m not available to… (3)I􀆳m terribly/awfully sorry that I can’t make it to… (4)I feel extremely sorry that I have to be absent from…, which I once promised for special reasons. [中段句] 说明理由并请求原谅: (1)Because of/Owing to/Due to/On account of…, I’m unable to spare time to… (2)The reason why I can’t keep my promise is that… (3)What troubles me is that…, which led to my absence. (4)I am awfully sorry for breaking my promise and I apologize for any inconvenience it brings to you. I hope you can understand me. [尾段句] 再次阐述歉意并提出弥补措施: (1)I sincerely hope that you will accept my apology. (2)If it’s convenient for you, I recommend that we… (3)Maybe we can fix another time to…next week as long as you are available. (4)I hope you’ll forgive me for causing you so much trouble. However, if it’s convenient for you, what about…? 写作模板 Dear__________， I am excessively sorry to tell you that__________(陈述道歉原因). Now I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deepest regret. I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(请求对方原谅的事由). The reason for my delay/absence was/is that__________(解释道歉原因). I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to__________(提出补救措施). Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely， __________(署名) 写作训练 （一） （2024·江西景德镇·三模）假定你是李华，与外教Peter约好周六下午一起去爬南山，但因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件表示歉意，内容包括： 1.表达不能赴约的歉意；2说明原因；3.另约时间； 注意：写作词数应为80左右； Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go climbing with you on Saturday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Sunday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to enjoy the breathtaking scenery. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Looking forward to your early reply. Li Hua 【导语】本文是一篇道歉信，要求考生给外教写信道歉，解释不能如期赴约的原因，并且提出补救措施。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 ① 重要：important → crucial/ significant ② 改变：change → alteration/ modification ③ 麻烦：trouble → inconvenience/ difficulty ④ 享受：enjoy → appreciate/ savor 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I should be available any time after school next week. 拓展句：I should be available any time if it is after school next week. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to enjoy the breathtaking scenery.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句） 【高分句型2】If not, let me know what time suits you best.（运用了宾语从句） （二） （2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·模拟预测）假设你是李华，作为交换生正在美国哥伦比亚大学(Columbia University)学习。今早你不小心刮蹭(scratch)了一辆汽车。请给车主留一张便条 内容包括： 1.简述事情经过; 2.提出解决办法。注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Car Owner, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards! Li Hua 【答案】Dear Car Owner, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student at Columbia University. This morning, while riding my bike to school, I unfortunately scratched your car parked along the road. Due to the urgency of attending classes, I couldn’t wait for you on the spot. I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood. I deeply apologize for the inconvenience caused and promise I will deal with all the relevant damage. Please contact me at 12345 to discuss a solution. I’m willing to either cover the repair costs or make alternative arrangements to rectify this situation. Thank you for your understanding. Best regards! Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为交换生正在美国哥伦比亚大学(Columbia University)学习，今早你不小心刮蹭了一辆汽车这一情况，给车主留一张便条。 【详解】1.词汇积累 在现场：on the spot→ on the scene 知道：understand→ know 处理：deal with→ handle 纠正：rectify→ correct 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student at Columbia University. 拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is a Chinese exchange student at Columbia University. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This morning, while riding my bike to school, I unfortunately scratched your car parked along the road.（运用了连词while引导的时间状语从句以及从句的省略用法。） 【高分句型2】I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood.（运用了省略从属连词that引导的宾语从句。） （三） （2024·宁夏石嘴山·三模）假设你是李华，你和英国好友Jim约定本周天一起去森林公园游玩放松，但你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】范文1: Dear Jim, I am writing to express my sincere apologies for not being able to join you for our planned trip to the forest park this Sunday. I understand that we were both looking forward to this outing for relaxation and I am truly sorry for any inconvenience caused. The reason why I break the appointment is that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital.   I understand that this is disappointing and I deeply regret not being able to fulfill our plans. I would like to propose an alternative date for our trip. How about we reschedule our outing for next weekend? I will make sure to join you on that day. Please let me know if the new date works for you. Thank you for your understanding and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 范文2: Dear Jim, I am terribly/truly sorry that I didn't join you for our outgoing to the forest park this Sunday to relax ourselves as planned. I understand that we were both looking forward to this outing and I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble. The reason why I fail to do so is that I injured my ankle in a basketball game several days ago. I went to the hospital and to my disappointment, the doctor advised me not to walk for two weeks. I have to stay in bed in order to recover as soon as possible . My apologies again for all the inconvenience I’ve caused you, and I wonder if we could postpone our schedule until this summer vacation? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封邮件，表达歉意，告知不能赴约的原因并另约时间。 【详解】1.词汇积累 理解：understand→make out 导致：cause→lead to 真地：truly→really 感谢：thank→appreciate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I would like to propose an alternative date for our trip. 拓展句：I would like to propose an alternative date for our trip, when we are both available. 【点睛】[高分句型1]I understand that we were both looking forward to this outing for relaxation and I am truly sorry for any inconvenience caused.（运用了that引导宾语从句） [高分句型2]The reason why I fail to do so is that I injured my ankle in a basketball game several days ago.（运用了why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句） （四） （2024·山东·一模）假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(coming-of-age ceremony), 但你无法应邀, 请写信告知, 内容包括: 1. 表达歉意; 2. 说明理由。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Michael, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Michael, I hope this letter finds you well. I am extremely grateful for you inviting me to attend your school’s coming-of-age ceremony online next Monday. However, I regret to inform you that I won’t be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it. Therefore, I’d like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it’s a special moment for you. Wish your coming-of-age ceremony a complete success. Looking forward to sharing more wonderful time together. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式, 但你无法应邀，要求考生写信告知。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 极度地：extremely→overly 感激的：grateful→appreciative 有空的：available→free 因此：therefore→thus 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am extremely grateful for yoa inviting me to attend your school’s coming-of-age ceremony online next Monday. 拓展句：I am extremely grateful because you have invited me to attend your school’s online coming-of-age ceremony, which is scheduled for next Monday. 【点睛】[高分句型1]However, I regret to inform you that I won’t be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it.(that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]Therefore, I’d like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it’s a special moment for you.(as引导的原因状语从句) （五） （2024·江西·三模）假定你是李华，你的好友Susan想约你周末聚餐，但你因故不能前往。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因; 3. 另约时间。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Susan, I am truly sorry that I am unable to have dinner with you this weekend. The reason why I am not available is that I will have an important exam next week, which will determine which class I will be assigned to. So I must go all out to prepare for the exam. Please accept my sincere apology again. By the way, is it possible for you and me to have dinner together another day? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Susan写道歉信，因为你的好友Susan想约你周末聚餐，但你因故不能前往。 【详解】1.词汇积累 非常：truly→extremely 无法……：be unable to→fail to do sth. 重要的：important→vital 决定：determine→decide 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：So I must go all out to prepare for the exam. Please accept my sincere apology again. 拓展句：As I must go all out to prepare for the exam, please accept my sincere apology again. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am truly sorry that I am unable to have dinner with you this weekend. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] The reason why I am not available is that I will have an important exam next week, which will determine which class I will be assigned to. (运用了why引导定语从句以及that引导表语从句) （六） （2024·浙江嘉兴·三模）假定你是校英语话剧社社长李华，原定于下周举行的英语话剧表演赛因故推迟，请给担任评委的外教Katherine写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.推迟原因； 3.后续调整。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Katherine, How are things going with you these days? I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed for some reason. Today the school announces that there are some security problems in the auditorium, where the competition is supposed to be held, so the place will be locked for repair. The greatest influence on us is that the competition this year has been postponed to next month. And we will rearrange the competition and inform you in time. I hope it would be convenient for you to be our judge then. Looking forward to your early reply Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Katherine写封邮件，告诉她英语话剧表演赛因故推迟，向她表示歉意，解释推迟原因，并告知后续调整事项。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 竞赛：competition→contest 推迟：postpone→put off 安全：security→safety 影响：influence→effect 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed for some reason. 拓展句：I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition which was scheduled to be held next week has been postponed for some reason. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed for some reason.(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句、过去分词作后置定语) 【高分句型2】Today the school announces that there are some security problems in the auditorium, where the competition is supposed to be held, so the place will be locked for repair. (使用了that引导宾语从句、there be句型、where引导非限制性定语从句、be supposed to do…结构、so连接并列句) （七） （2024·广东·二模）假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩，你因故无法前往，请你回信表达歉意，内容包括： 1. 谢绝的理由； 2. 提议暑假去拜访他。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jerry, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jerry, Thanks for inviting me to London in the coming winter holiday. I’d love to visit you, but I’m sorry that I really cannot make it. As you know, I am in Senior Three this year, which means I am in the middle of preparing for the college entrance examination to be held in the coming June. Therefore, I’m determined to make the best use of every minute I have, the holiday included, to improve my academic performance. Additionally, the winter holiday lasts only for two weeks, a bit short for a trip abroad, so I’m considering rescheduling the trip for the coming summer holiday. What do you think of this plan? Once again, I’d like to express my sincere apology. Looking forward to meeting you in London! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Jerry写信邀请你寒假期间去伦敦游玩，你因故无法前往给他回信表达歉意并说明自己的想法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 因此：therefore → hence 另外：additionally → in addition/besides 考虑：consider → think about 衷心的：sincere → heartfelt 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：What do you think of this plan? 拓展句：What do you think of the plan I put forward? 【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, I am in Senior Three this year, which means I am in the middle of preparing for the college entrance examination to be held in the coming June.(运用了关系代词as引导非限制性定语从句和关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Therefore, I’m determined to make the best use of every minute I have, the holiday included, to improve my academic performance. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句) （八） （2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假定你是李华，你的外籍好友 Jenny 邀请你周末一起去参观博物馆，但你因故不能接受邀请。请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.感谢邀请； 2.表达歉意并解释原因； 3.另约时间。 注意：1.词数应为80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Jenny, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jenny, Thank you very much for inviting me to visit the museum with you this weekend. It sounds like a great plan and I appreciate your kindness. But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates. I feel sorry for letting you down and hope you can understand my situation. However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time. Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us. Thank you again for your kind invitation, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的道歉信。要求考生给外籍好友 Jenny写封道歉信，表示自己因故不能接受她的邀请——周末一起去参观博物馆。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great→ wonderful 不幸地：unfortunately→ unluckily 使……失望：let down → disappoint 机会：opportunity→ chance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：However, I’d love to have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time. 拓展句：However, I’d love it if I can have the opportunity to visit the museum with you another time. 【点睛】【高分句型1】But unfortunately I won’t be able to join you this time because I have to rehearse an English drama with my classmates.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】Maybe we can arrange another date that suits both of us.（运用了that引导的定语从句） （九） （2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意并说明原因； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jack, I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go out next Sunday afternoon? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack写一封信，对不能如约一起外出表示歉意，并说明原因。 【详解】1.词汇积累 非常地：terribly→extremely 出发：set out→set off 会面：meet→get together 不变：trouble→inconvenience 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. 同义句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon, when I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句） 【高分句型2】If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句） （十） （2024·宁夏银川·一模）假定你是校中国象棋俱乐部的李华。你与留学生朋友Dan约好本周五下午一起下中国象棋，但是你因故无法赴约。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意； 2. 说明原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意： 1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：中国象棋Chinese chess 【答案】Dear Dan, I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to play Chinese chess with you this Friday afternoon as planned. I want to make an apology if I cause any inconvenience to you. I was informed yesterday that I need to meet a master in Chinese chess at the airport at that time. Then I will show him around our city and treat him to a big dinner. Therefore, I can't spare time for you on Friday afternoon. I do apologize for my absence. But I want to make up for it. Will you agree to make some adjustments for the time? Would it be convenient for you to meet me on Saturday afternoon? If you are available, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生朋友Dan写一封邮件，告知他你因故无法赴约本周五下午一起下中国象棋并向他道歉。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 按计划：as scheduled→ as planned 道歉：say sorry→ make an apology 被告知：be told→ be informed 弥补：compensate for→ make up for 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I do apologize for my absence. But I want to make up for it. 拓展句：I do apologize for my absence while I want to make up for it. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to tell you that I can't make it to play Chinese chess with you this Friday afternoon as planned.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作tell的宾语） [高分句型2] I want to make an apology if I cause any inconvenience to you.（运用了由if连接的条件状语从句） [高分句型3] I was informed yesterday that I need to meet a master in Chinese chess at the airport at that time. （运用了由that引导的宾语从句作was informed的宾语） （十一） （2024·江西上饶·二模）假定你是中学生李华，你的外教Miss White要求你们周一下午去听一个关于英国历史文化的讲座，你因故不能参加。请你写一张请假条向 Miss White 请假。要点如下： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明理由； 3.其它。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Miss White, I’m Li Hua, deeply sorry for not being able to attend your lecture about English history next Monday afternoon. I’m writing to ask for a leave. I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time. Personally, I’m desperate to achieve a preferable result. There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up. Would it be possible for me to have my classmates take notes for my later use. Hoping to have your permission. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就自己因故不能去听周一下午举办的关于英国历史文化的讲座给外教Miss White写假条请假。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明理由； 3.其它。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） deeply sorry for; be able to do; attend your lecture about English history; ask for a leave; be desperate to do; try hard to do; make up; participate in 第三步：连词成句 1. I’m Li Hua, deeply sorry for not being able to attend your lecture about English history next Monday afternoon. 2. I’m writing to ask for a leave. 3. I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time. 4. There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）(供参考) 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including 3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am to participate in my final-round English Speech Contest on the same day, for which I have prepared for a long time.（运用“介词+关系代词”引导的非限定性定语从句） [高分句型2] There is no doubt that the lecture about English history interests me most and I will try hard to make up.（运用that引导的同位语从句） （十二） （2024·西藏山南·三模）假定你是李华,因下周五要到机场接表妹,所以不能陪Tom去北京旅行。请你给Tom写一封道歉信。 内容主要包括： 1. 向Tom表达歉意。 2. 向Tom解释原因。 3. 祝Tom下周愉快并另约时间陪Tom去北京旅游。 注意: 1. 词数100 左右 2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Tom, I am very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you. I am writing to tell you the reason for it. Just now, my cousin, Li Ying, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that she would return the next Friday morning. She asked me to pick her up at the airport with her parents. As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I have to see her in the first place. I really hope that you can accept my apology and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing. Wish you have a good time this weekend. Yours Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封道歉信：假定你是李华,因下周五要到机场接表妹,所以不能陪Tom去北京旅行。请你给Tom写一封道歉信。内容主要包括：1. 向Tom表达歉意。2. 向Tom解释原因。3. 祝Tom下周愉快并另约时间陪Tom去北京旅游。时态应为一般过去时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； promise（承诺），airport（机场），inform（通知），cousin（表妹）， apology（道歉），return（回来）及places of interest（名胜古迹）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有go abroad for further education（出国深造），pick sb up（接某人），in the first place (首先)，show sb around somewhere（带某人参观某地）以及have a good time（玩得开心），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“I am very sorry that I can’t go on a trip to Beijing with you next weekend, which I have promised you.”，“Just now, my cousin, Li Ying, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that she would return the next Friday morning.”及“As you know, we haven’t seen each other for about a year, so I have to see her in the first place.”，宾语从句“I really hope that you can accept my apology and understand me.”，形式宾语“I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$