06 Unit 4 单元写作指导(典题例析&即学即练)-2024-2025学年高一英语重难知识&题型精练(译林版2020必修第一册)

Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good (译林版2020必修第一册) 单元写作知道(典题例析&即学即练)(写一个关于整形手术看法的议论文) 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于整形手术的看法的观点类议论文。观点类议论文是一种表达自己观点，并用事实和例子来支持这种观点的文体。 高考要求 主要采用“三段式”： (1)首先说明现状。开篇点明你的观点是什么。 (2)其次分析这种现状产生或存在的原因。 你要用几条理由、个人经历或证据来支持你的观点。 (3)最后，给予解决问题的建议或总结。 技巧点拨 注意议论文的写作特点。‘ 课本词汇 yogurt n. 酸奶 faint vi. 昏厥adj. 昏眩的；微弱的；可能性不大的 pass out 昏迷，失去知觉 concentrate vi. & vt. 集中(注意力、思想等)；全神贯注 extreme adj. 极端的；严重的n. 极端不同的感情(或境况、行为方式等) immediately adv. 立即，马上conj. 一……就…… slim vi. 变苗条，减肥adj. 苗条的；微薄的，小的 slim down 变苗条，减肥 concerned adj. 担心的，忧虑的；关注的，关切的 side effect 副作用 diet n. 日常饮食；节食vi. 节食，进行规定饮食 nutrition n. 营养 function vi. 起作用，正常工作，运转n. 作用，功能，职能 take in 摄入，吸收 energetic adj. 精力充沛的，充满活力的 effective adj. 有效的；生效的 get into shape 强身健体 pressure n. 心理压力，紧张；压力；要求，催促 contribute vi. & vt. 是……的原因之一；捐赠，捐献；增加，添加 contribute to 促成，造成 schedule n. 日程安排，工作计划；时间表 surgery n. 外科手术 plastic surgery 整形手术；整形外科 treatment n. 治疗；对待，待遇；处理 beauty n. 美，美丽；美人，美好的东西 fight a losing battle 打一场无望取胜的仗 fashion n. 时尚，时兴；流行款式 strength n. 优势；力气，力量；实力 课外常用词汇 increasingly popular　　　 越来越流行 bear the risk of 承担……的风险 in my view 依我看 hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点 various senses of beauty 不同的美感 a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛 satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望 boost one’s confidence 增强某人的信心 facial expression 面部表情 常用句式 (1)描述现象 More and more people choose to take the plastic surgery to make themselves look more perfect. 越来越多的人选择接受整形手术, 让他们自己看起来更完美。 (2)表达观点 ①Every coin has two sides. 事物都有两面性。 ②After the surgery, there are always side effects, which haunt people all the time. 手术过后, 总会有副作用, 它们会一直困扰着人们。 (3)得出结论 ①Outer beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes. 就像俗语所说的那样, 外在美不过是肤浅的。 ②The real beauty is from the soul. 真正的美丽是从心灵散发出来的。 典题例析 现在做整容手术很流行。假设你是李华, 你的英国好友Peter来信向你询问你周围的同学以及你对整容的看法。请你给他写一封回信。内容包括: 1. 持支持态度的人的看法和理由; 2. 持反对态度的人的看法和理由; 3. 你的看法。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题布局】 【遣词造句】 完成句子 1. 我的一小部分同学认为这是人们提高自己的颜值、增强自信心的一个很好的选择。 →_______________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我的大部分同学持有不同的观点。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.整容手术中受伤的风险不可以被我们忽视。 →_______________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 失败的手术会让人看起来不自然, 他们无法做出某些面部表情。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我们的内心世界比外表要重要得多。 Our inner world is _______________________________________________________ our appearance.   6. 整容手术不是必要的。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 我们应该爱自己本来的样子。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 句式升级 8. 将1句升级为“vt. +it+n. +for sb. to do sth.” _________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 将3改为被动语态 →_______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. A small part of my classmates think it is a good choice for people to improve their physical appearance and boost their confidence. 2. Most of my classmates hold a different opinion.   3. We can’t ignore the risk of injury in plastic surgery.   4. A failed surgery will make people look unnatural and they will be unable to make certain facial expressions. 5. much more important than 6. Plastic surgery is unnecessary.   7. We should love ourselves just the way we are.   8. A small part of my classmates think it a good choice for people to improve their physical appearance and boost their confidence. 9. The risk of injury in plastic surgery can’t be ignored by us. 【成篇】 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Peter, I am writing to share what my classmates and I think of the plastic surgery. A small part of my classmates think it a good choice for people to improve their physical appearance and boost their confidence. However, most of my classmates hold a different opinion. They think the risk of injury in plastic surgery can’t be ignored by us. A failed surgery will make people look unnatural and they will be unable to make certain facial expressions. As for me, our inner world is much more important than our appearance. So plastic surgery is unnecessary, and we should love ourselves just the way we are. Yours, Li Hua 即学即用 I. 应用文写作 Passage 1 如今越来越多的人追求外在美，你是如何看待这一问题的呢？请以“My View on Beauty”为题并根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： (1)越来越多的人通过做整形手术、穿奇装异服、过度化妆等来追求外在美； (2)你的看法及理由； (3)结论。 注意： (1)词数80左右； (2)不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：plastic surgery 整形手术 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (2023-2024学年高一下·四川南充·阶段练习)假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lily在信中说她为了减肥吃减肥药，而且经常不吃饭，导致身体变得很虚弱，状态很不好。请你用英文给她回信，内容包括： 1. 对她的现状表示担心； 2. 吃减肥药和经常不吃饭的坏处； 3. 提出一些健康的减肥方法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：weight-loss pills减肥药 Dear Lily, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 (2023-2024学年高一下·江苏常州·期末)假如你是李华，你的英国同年人笔友Mary正在通过节食来减肥，你认为这样不合理。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely Passage 4 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda因为肥胖问题(obesity)而遭到同学的嘲笑，为此她感到非常苦恼，写信向你求助。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 给予安慰； 2. 提供建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的对应位置作答。 Dear Linda, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 5 假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友 Mike 体弱易病，于是向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下内容给他回信提些建议，要点如下： 1.合理饮食；2. 加强锻炼；3. 保证睡眠。 注意: 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Mike, I’m sorry to know that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Ⅱ读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Passage 1 (2023-2024学年高一下·江西余姚·期中)My parents would not let me go to school that morning. “Why not?” I argued. “I have exams. I have work in Spanish class that I can’t miss!” My mother gave me a sad look. “You have to get a checkup(身体检查),” she explained. I screamed, “NO!” My father pulled me over to the couch. “Alison,” my father said in a tone that was quiet but powerful. “You’re in the state of malnutrition(营养不良). And you know that. You can have all in the world, but if you don’t have your health, you have nothing.” For some reason, I believed him. I hadn’t wanted it to be this way. I was a girl who didn’t like doing sports but was fond of snack food. I weighed 50kg at my age of 14. Most of the time, I avoided parties with my friends, afraid of how ugly they would think I looked. One day, I found a slim girl on TV was so attractive that I wanted to look like her. I forced myself to do exercise and started going on a diet for a good-looking body shape. During the summer, I did weekly weigh-ins(称重) and kept a strict diet. I memorized the calories of almost everything that I may eat. My only goal was to lose weight. Later, when it became too cold to run outside, I restricted my calories even more to make up for not being able to burn them. Gradually I lost my weight a lot. But things turned out to be worse. My hands were especially dry, peeling and wrinkled. My sister called them old people’s hands. Once, I went shopping with my mom. While we waited in line to pay for our items, I felt I was going to faint(昏厥). I felt dizzy and standing was getting harder and harder. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As my mom tried to figure out which exit we should go through, she noticed my pale face. _____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Incidents (发生的事情) like the one in the store were in my thoughts as my parents had a talk with me that morning—the morning when I refused to see the doctor regularly._______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 (2023-2024学年高一下·湖北孝感·开学考) Already Perfect Each one of us struggles with self-worth to some degree. I spent much of my time attempting to achieve perfection in every aspect of my life. What I didn’t realize was that in my efforts to be perfect, I almost lost my life. During my childhood, I wanted everyone’s praise and acceptance. After I graduated from high school, my struggles with self-worth increased. I began to put pressure on myself to succeed in the adult world. Meanwhile, I wasn’t feeling very confident and successful. I started to believe that my difficulties and “failures” in life were caused by my weight. I had always been a thin-to-average sized person. Suddenly, I was convinced that I was overweight. In my mind, I was FAT! Slowly, I began to control my food by trying to diet, but nothing seemed to work. I continued to reduce what I ate each day and told myself that I would succeed, and in turn, I felt good about myself. People around me began to notice my weight loss. At first, they weren’t alarmed; maybe some were even envious. But then the comments showed some concern. “You’re losing too much weight.” “Elisa, you’re so thin.” “You look sick.” “You’ll die if you keep this up.” All their words only made me believe that I was on the right path, getting closer to “perfection.” My poor nutrition (营养) began to cause me to lose sleep. I found it hard to concentrate on my work or to focus on anything for a long time. I was pushing myself harder and harder at the gym, struggling to burn fat. My parents tried to stop me but I disagreed that I had a problem. None of my clothes fit, and it was hard to buy any, since I had become too thin! 注意： 1.续写词数应为 150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then one night, I couldn’t sleep again, and my heart beat its way out of my chest._____________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I lay on the hospital bed, I began to rethink what I did to my body.____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 (2023-2024学年高一上·安徽阜阳·期末) It is a challenging journey to change their lives for the best and get the healthiest they knew how to. Lexi and Danny lived their lives like most other young couples who fell in love with each other and then made the decision to spend the rest of their lives together. The couple spent a lot of time watching TV and going to different restaurants, and as you would imagine, the endless junk foods were their “go-to” choice. Though they would manage to lose some weight during the time, but before long, they would gain it back. Lexi weighed a 485 pounds at the age of 25, a weight that was quite unbelievable to imagine. Danny, on the other hand, was also overweight himself even though he was 200 pounds less than Lexi. However, the sad part of everything was that they were both gaining more weight on what they already had with each passing day. Some of their daily activities, no matter how simple, became a real problem for the couple. They couldn’t go for walks or bicycle rides no matter how easy they were. However, in 2016 just after a year after the marriage, they decided to make a positive change in their life. The couple decided to take on a challenge that would change their lives forever and for good! So many people make promises to themselves and others that they don’t really carry out but the couple were not about to do like the others. Theirs were destined (注定的) to come to reality. They made a detailed plan to go on a diet and take exercise on a daily basis. At first, they thought the whole process would have been a piece of cake. As they pressed on, each passing day showed them that this challenge would not be a walk in the park. They got a gym membership to help out. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The weight-losing lessons offered at the gym were not easy, a real challenge for them. __________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Just after a month, they both felt so much better, and they were pleased with the way they looked. _________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 9 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good (译林版2020必修第一册) 单元写作知道(典题例析&即学即练)(写一个关于整形手术看法的议论文) 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于整形手术的看法的观点类议论文。观点类议论文是一种表达自己观点，并用事实和例子来支持这种观点的文体。 高考要求 主要采用“三段式”： (1)首先说明现状。开篇点明你的观点是什么。 (2)其次分析这种现状产生或存在的原因。 你要用几条理由、个人经历或证据来支持你的观点。 (3)最后，给予解决问题的建议或总结。 技巧点拨 注意议论文的写作特点。‘ 课本词汇 yogurt n. 酸奶 faint vi. 昏厥adj. 昏眩的；微弱的；可能性不大的 pass out 昏迷，失去知觉 concentrate vi. & vt. 集中(注意力、思想等)；全神贯注 extreme adj. 极端的；严重的n. 极端不同的感情(或境况、行为方式等) immediately adv. 立即，马上conj. 一……就…… slim vi. 变苗条，减肥adj. 苗条的；微薄的，小的 slim down 变苗条，减肥 concerned adj. 担心的，忧虑的；关注的，关切的 side effect 副作用 diet n. 日常饮食；节食vi. 节食，进行规定饮食 nutrition n. 营养 function vi. 起作用，正常工作，运转n. 作用，功能，职能 take in 摄入，吸收 energetic adj. 精力充沛的，充满活力的 effective adj. 有效的；生效的 get into shape 强身健体 pressure n. 心理压力，紧张；压力；要求，催促 contribute vi. & vt. 是……的原因之一；捐赠，捐献；增加，添加 contribute to 促成，造成 schedule n. 日程安排，工作计划；时间表 surgery n. 外科手术 plastic surgery 整形手术；整形外科 treatment n. 治疗；对待，待遇；处理 beauty n. 美，美丽；美人，美好的东西 fight a losing battle 打一场无望取胜的仗 fashion n. 时尚，时兴；流行款式 strength n. 优势；力气，力量；实力 课外常用词汇 increasingly popular　　　 越来越流行 bear the risk of 承担……的风险 in my view 依我看 hold the idea that. . . 持有……观点 various senses of beauty 不同的美感 a lifelong pain 终生的疼痛 satisfy one’s appetite for 满足某人对……的欲望 boost one’s confidence 增强某人的信心 facial expression 面部表情 常用句式 (1)描述现象 More and more people choose to take the plastic surgery to make themselves look more perfect. 越来越多的人选择接受整形手术, 让他们自己看起来更完美。 (2)表达观点 ①Every coin has two sides. 事物都有两面性。 ②After the surgery, there are always side effects, which haunt people all the time. 手术过后, 总会有副作用, 它们会一直困扰着人们。 (3)得出结论 ①Outer beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes. 就像俗语所说的那样, 外在美不过是肤浅的。 ②The real beauty is from the soul. 真正的美丽是从心灵散发出来的。 典题例析 现在做整容手术很流行。假设你是李华, 你的英国好友Peter来信向你询问你周围的同学以及你对整容的看法。请你给他写一封回信。内容包括: 1. 持支持态度的人的看法和理由; 2. 持反对态度的人的看法和理由; 3. 你的看法。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题布局】 【遣词造句】 完成句子 1. 我的一小部分同学认为这是人们提高自己的颜值、增强自信心的一个很好的选择。 →_______________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我的大部分同学持有不同的观点。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.整容手术中受伤的风险不可以被我们忽视。 →_______________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 失败的手术会让人看起来不自然, 他们无法做出某些面部表情。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 我们的内心世界比外表要重要得多。 Our inner world is _______________________________________________________ our appearance.   6. 整容手术不是必要的。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 我们应该爱自己本来的样子。 _________________________________________________________________________________________ 句式升级 8. 将1句升级为“vt. +it+n. +for sb. to do sth.” _________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 将3改为被动语态 →_______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. A small part of my classmates think it is a good choice for people to improve their physical appearance and boost their confidence. 2. Most of my classmates hold a different opinion.   3. We can’t ignore the risk of injury in plastic surgery.   4. A failed surgery will make people look unnatural and they will be unable to make certain facial expressions. 5. much more important than 6. Plastic surgery is unnecessary.   7. We should love ourselves just the way we are.   8. A small part of my classmates think it a good choice for people to improve their physical appearance and boost their confidence. 9. The risk of injury in plastic surgery can’t be ignored by us. 【成篇】 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Peter, I am writing to share what my classmates and I think of the plastic surgery. A small part of my classmates think it a good choice for people to improve their physical appearance and boost their confidence. However, most of my classmates hold a different opinion. They think the risk of injury in plastic surgery can’t be ignored by us. A failed surgery will make people look unnatural and they will be unable to make certain facial expressions. As for me, our inner world is much more important than our appearance. So plastic surgery is unnecessary, and we should love ourselves just the way we are. Yours, Li Hua 即学即用 I. 应用文写作 Passage 1 如今越来越多的人追求外在美，你是如何看待这一问题的呢？请以“My View on Beauty”为题并根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： (1)越来越多的人通过做整形手术、穿奇装异服、过度化妆等来追求外在美； (2)你的看法及理由； (3)结论。 注意： (1)词数80左右； (2)不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：plastic surgery 整形手术 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My View on Beauty Nowadays, many people are doing plastic surgery or wearing excessive make-up to pursuit outward beauty. Some attempt to boost their confidence by removing freckles, changing the jawline or doubling eyelid. My roommates even acknowledge a stereotype that bizarre clothes from head to toe, skinny figure and exquisite lipstick are the real beauty. I think they misjudge the beauty. As for beauty, I hold the opinion that an ordinary girl with righteous personality is more graceful than a beautiful girl with monstrous manner. All in all, we should make an effort for true beauty by improving our inner qualities. 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以“My View on Beauty”为题写一篇演讲稿，发表对越来越多的人追求外在美的看法，需涵盖现状、个人看法及理由、结论。 【详解】1.词汇积累 目前：nowadays → currently 很多：many → plenty of 追求：pursue → seek 尝试：attempt → try 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Nowadays, many people are doing plastic surgery or wearing excessive make-up to pursuit outward beauty. 拓展句：Nowadays, it is common that people are doing plastic surgery or wearing excessive make-up to pursuit outward beauty. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】My roommates even acknowledge a stereotype that bizarre clothes from head to toe, skinny figure and exquisite lipstick are the real beauty. (运用了that引导的同位语从句) 【高分句型2】I think they misjudge the beauty. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) Passage 2 (2023-2024学年高一下·四川南充·阶段练习)假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Lily在信中说她为了减肥吃减肥药，而且经常不吃饭，导致身体变得很虚弱，状态很不好。请你用英文给她回信，内容包括： 1. 对她的现状表示担心； 2. 吃减肥药和经常不吃饭的坏处； 3. 提出一些健康的减肥方法。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：weight-loss pills减肥药 Dear Lily, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Lily, I’m sorry to learn that you are upset about being overweight recently. Here’re some tips for you. In my opinion, you should stop taking weight-loss pills in no time because they’ll attack the function of your immune system within your body. Many sorts of ways to keep fit can be satisfying. For example, jogging and gym are considered as effective and healthy ways to become slim. As for diet, you’d better get a proper recipe for it. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给正在吃减肥药，且经常不吃饭，导致身体变得很虚弱的英国笔友Lily回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：tip →suggestion 依我看来：in my opinion →from my point of view 马上，立刻：in no time →at once 例如：for example →for instance 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：For example, jogging and gym are considered as effective and healthy ways to become slim. 拓展句：For instance, it is jogging and gym that are considered as effective and healthy ways to become slim. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]I’m sorry to learn that you are upset about being overweight recently.(运用了that引导的宾语从句，动名词作宾语) [高分句型2]In my opinion, you should stop taking weight-loss pills in no time because they'll attack the function of your immune system within your body.(运用了动名词作宾语，because引导原因状语从句) Passage 3 (2023-2024学年高一下·江苏常州·期末)假如你是李华，你的英国同年人笔友Mary正在通过节食来减肥，你认为这样不合理。请你给她写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely 【答案】 Dear Mary, Learning that you are going on a diet to lose weight, I feel terribly sorry and I do regard it as inappropriate. I am writing to offer some constructive proposals. Skipping meals or eating less does harm to you to a great extent, giving rise to the weakness both physically and mentally. Instead, working out regularly in the gym may be a much wiser alternative, which enables you to stay energetic and efficient. Additionally, I also highly recommend sleeping earlier and rising earlier, which is said to be of great use in controlling weight. I do hope my suggestions above are of help and that you will get an ideal figure in a healthy way. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国同年人笔友Mary写封邮件，告诉她通过节食来减肥是不合理的，并提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 不合适的：inappropriate → improper 提供：offer → provide 另外：additionally → in addition 对……有害：do harm to → be harmful to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Skipping meals or eating less does harm to you to a great extent, giving rise to the weakness both physically and mentally. 拓展句：Skipping meals or eating less does harm to you to a great extent, which gives rise to the weakness both physically and mentally. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Instead, working out regularly in the gym may be a much wiser alternative, which enables you to stay energetic and efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]Additionally, I also highly recommend sleeping earlier and rising earlier, which is said to be of great use in controlling weight. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 4 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Linda因为肥胖问题(obesity)而遭到同学的嘲笑，为此她感到非常苦恼，写信向你求助。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 给予安慰； 2. 提供建议。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的对应位置作答。 Dear Linda, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Linda, I’m sorry to hear that you’re upset at being laughed at by your classmates because of your obesity. But I think it unnecessary for you to care about that. In my opinion, you are great as you are. After all, it is what you are rather than how you look that counts. On the other hand, I have some advice for you if you want to lose some weight. Firstly, change your eating habits and keep a balanced diet, which will help prevent diseases. Secondly, take exercise regularly, which is a good way for you to get rid of your obesity. Thirdly, make sure you get enough sleep. If you follow my advice, you are sure to look nice and feel good. I hope you can get out of trouble soon. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给因为肥胖问题受到同学嘲笑的笔友Linda写一封信，需对她的苦恼进行安慰，并为她提供建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 烦恼的：upset → distressed, unsettled 因为：because of → due to, owing to, on account of 没必要的：unnecessary → inessential, needless, dispensable 在我看来：in my opinion → from my perspective, as far as I am concerned, from my point of view 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：But I think it unnecessary for you to care about that. 拓展句：But I think (that) it is unnecessary for you to care about that. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】After all, it is what you are rather than how you look that counts.(运用了what引导名词性从句作is的表语，how引导名词性从句作rather than的宾语，it is… that…的强调句型) 【高分句型2】I have some advice for you if you want to lose some weight.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 【高分句型3】Firstly, change your eating habits and keep a balanced diet, which will help prevent diseases.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) Passage 5 假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友 Mike 体弱易病，于是向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下内容给他回信提些建议，要点如下： 1.合理饮食；2. 加强锻炼；3. 保证睡眠。 注意: 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Mike, I’m sorry to know that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, I’m sorry to know that you feel weak and often fall ill. Here, I’m writing to give you some advice. First, you should have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day. Additionally, it is of equal importance to take exercise regularly, which not only contributes to strengthening your bodies but also rids you of the stress from study. Most importantly, have enough sleep instead of staying up too late. I’d be more than glad if my advice would be adopted and I sincerely hope that you can live a healthy life. Yours, Li Hua 【语篇导读】本文是应用文。要求考生给体弱易病的美国朋友Mike写信，告诉他如何保持健康。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 生病的：ill → sick 建议：advice → suggestion 此外：Additionally → in addition 规律地：regularly → on a regular basis 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Most importantly, have enough sleep instead of staying up too late. 拓展句：What’s most important is that you should have enough sleep instead of staying up too late. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】Additionally, it is of equal importance to take exercise regularly, which not only contributes to strengthening your bodies but also rids you of the stress from study.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】I’d be more than glad if my advice would be adopted and I sincerely hope that you can live a healthy life.(由if引导的条件状语从句和that引导的宾语从句) Ⅱ读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Passage 1 (2023-2024学年高一下·江西余姚·期中)My parents would not let me go to school that morning. “Why not?” I argued. “I have exams. I have work in Spanish class that I can’t miss!” My mother gave me a sad look. “You have to get a checkup(身体检查),” she explained. I screamed, “NO!” My father pulled me over to the couch. “Alison,” my father said in a tone that was quiet but powerful. “You’re in the state of malnutrition(营养不良). And you know that. You can have all in the world, but if you don’t have your health, you have nothing.” For some reason, I believed him. I hadn’t wanted it to be this way. I was a girl who didn’t like doing sports but was fond of snack food. I weighed 50kg at my age of 14. Most of the time, I avoided parties with my friends, afraid of how ugly they would think I looked. One day, I found a slim girl on TV was so attractive that I wanted to look like her. I forced myself to do exercise and started going on a diet for a good-looking body shape. During the summer, I did weekly weigh-ins(称重) and kept a strict diet. I memorized the calories of almost everything that I may eat. My only goal was to lose weight. Later, when it became too cold to run outside, I restricted my calories even more to make up for not being able to burn them. Gradually I lost my weight a lot. But things turned out to be worse. My hands were especially dry, peeling and wrinkled. My sister called them old people’s hands. Once, I went shopping with my mom. While we waited in line to pay for our items, I felt I was going to faint(昏厥). I felt dizzy and standing was getting harder and harder. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As my mom tried to figure out which exit we should go through, she noticed my pale face. _____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Incidents (发生的事情) like the one in the store were in my thoughts as my parents had a talk with me that morning—the morning when I refused to see the doctor regularly._______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As my mom tried to figure out which exit we should go through, she noticed my pale face. “Alison,” her voice sounded alarmed, but also far away. “You look like you’re going to pass out. Are you OK?” I couldn’t answer with more than a mumble. My mom was suddenly speeding things up, taking charge and locating the nearest exit. She told me to wait inside. She soon drove the car over and took me to the hospital. Later, I was told this was a symptom of malnutrition. I was told to visit the doctor twice a week. Incidents (发生的事情) like the one in the store were in my thoughts as my parents had a talk with me that morning—the morning when I refused to see the doctor regularly. I finally decided to see the doctor instead of going to school. Dad was right—without health, nothing would I own, including that morning’s important exams or Spanish class. Before, I suffered a lot from my eating disorder and weakness. Now, I put my wants of a healthy body above the needs of a slim girl. Remembering the doctor’s advice, I add healthy foods to my meals and keep doing proper sports. I become both happy and strong. 【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了减肥进行节食和锻炼，身体状况却越来越差，几乎晕厥。父母要带她去医院检查身体。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当我妈妈试图找出我们应该从哪个出口出去时，她注意到了我苍白的脸。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈发现作者快晕厥了之后的反应，应该是急忙把她送到医院。 ②由第二段首句内容“那天早上，当我拒绝定期去看医生的时候，我的父母和我谈话时，我一直在想商店里发生的事情。”可知，第二段可描写作者想明白了，健康高于一切，不应该为了追求身材苗条而不顾健康。 2.续写线索：妈妈担心——去医院检查——检查结果——认识到健康的重要性——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①昏迷，晕厥：faint/pass out/ lose consciousness ②告知：tell/inform ③决定：decide/determine/make a decision 情绪类 ①开心的，快乐的：happy/delighted/joyful ②惊恐的：alarmed/frightened 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Later, I was told this was a symptom of malnutrition. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) [高分句型2]I finally decided to see the doctor instead of going to school.(运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型3]Remembering the doctor’s advice, I add healthy foods to my meals and keep doing proper sports.(运用了现在分词作状语) Passage 2 (2023-2024学年高一下·湖北孝感·开学考) Already Perfect Each one of us struggles with self-worth to some degree. I spent much of my time attempting to achieve perfection in every aspect of my life. What I didn’t realize was that in my efforts to be perfect, I almost lost my life. During my childhood, I wanted everyone’s praise and acceptance. After I graduated from high school, my struggles with self-worth increased. I began to put pressure on myself to succeed in the adult world. Meanwhile, I wasn’t feeling very confident and successful. I started to believe that my difficulties and “failures” in life were caused by my weight. I had always been a thin-to-average sized person. Suddenly, I was convinced that I was overweight. In my mind, I was FAT! Slowly, I began to control my food by trying to diet, but nothing seemed to work. I continued to reduce what I ate each day and told myself that I would succeed, and in turn, I felt good about myself. People around me began to notice my weight loss. At first, they weren’t alarmed; maybe some were even envious. But then the comments showed some concern. “You’re losing too much weight.” “Elisa, you’re so thin.” “You look sick.” “You’ll die if you keep this up.” All their words only made me believe that I was on the right path, getting closer to “perfection.” My poor nutrition (营养) began to cause me to lose sleep. I found it hard to concentrate on my work or to focus on anything for a long time. I was pushing myself harder and harder at the gym, struggling to burn fat. My parents tried to stop me but I disagreed that I had a problem. None of my clothes fit, and it was hard to buy any, since I had become too thin! 注意： 1.续写词数应为 150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then one night, I couldn’t sleep again, and my heart beat its way out of my chest._____________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When I lay on the hospital bed, I began to rethink what I did to my body.____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Then one night, I couldn’t sleep again, and my heart beat its way out of my chest. I tried to relax, but I couldn’t. The beating became so rapid and so strong that I could no longer breathe. Really scared and ill, I felt I was going to die. Knowing that help was needed, I stood up, went towards the door, and immediately fell down, letting out a cry of pain. Awakened by the unusual sound, my parents came in to see what had happened. Shocked and worried, they rushed me to the hospital. It took doctors and nurses several hours to bring me back to life. When I lay on the hospital bed, I began to rethink what I did to my body. I decided to stop my foolish way of losing weight and pursuing perfection. Instead, I must be confident of myself and stay committed to being healthy. I now use my intelligence, talents and acts of kindness to express myself. This is true beauty, and it has nothing to do with the size of my body. With my experience of trying to be “perfect” on the outside, I had forgotten who I was on the inside. What I know now is that we are — each and every one of us — already perfect. 【语篇导读】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了作者在追求完美的过程中，由于过度关注体重和外表，导致营养不良、失眠、工作困难等一系列健康问题。尽管周围人开始对她的体重下降表示担忧，但她却误以为这是接近“完美”的标志，直到最终意识到问题的严重性并开始寻求帮助。文章强调了追求完美可能带来的负面影响以及接受自己的重要性。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“然后有一天晚上，我再也睡不着了，我的心从胸腔里跳了出来。”可知，第一段可描写作者试图放松，但心跳加速，被家人发现后送往医院。 ②由第二段首句内容“当我躺在病床上的时候，我开始反思我对自己的身体做了什么。”可知，第二段可描写作者决定停止自己的减肥方式，保持自信和健康，最后懂得了什么才是真正的美。 2.续写线索：试图放松——心跳加速——摔倒在地——家人送往医院——反思——保持自信和健康——懂得了美与体型无关——感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①试图做：try to do/attempt to do ②决定做：decide to do/be determined to do ③表达：express/convey 情绪类 ①感到害怕的：be scared/be panic-stricken ②震惊的：shocked/stunned 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Knowing that help was needed, I stood up, went towards the door, and immediately fell down, letting out a cry of pain. (使用现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2]What I know now is that we are — each and every one of us — already perfect. (使用What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句) Passage 3 (2023-2024学年高一上·安徽阜阳·期末) It is a challenging journey to change their lives for the best and get the healthiest they knew how to. Lexi and Danny lived their lives like most other young couples who fell in love with each other and then made the decision to spend the rest of their lives together. The couple spent a lot of time watching TV and going to different restaurants, and as you would imagine, the endless junk foods were their “go-to” choice. Though they would manage to lose some weight during the time, but before long, they would gain it back. Lexi weighed a 485 pounds at the age of 25, a weight that was quite unbelievable to imagine. Danny, on the other hand, was also overweight himself even though he was 200 pounds less than Lexi. However, the sad part of everything was that they were both gaining more weight on what they already had with each passing day. Some of their daily activities, no matter how simple, became a real problem for the couple. They couldn’t go for walks or bicycle rides no matter how easy they were. However, in 2016 just after a year after the marriage, they decided to make a positive change in their life. The couple decided to take on a challenge that would change their lives forever and for good! So many people make promises to themselves and others that they don’t really carry out but the couple were not about to do like the others. Theirs were destined (注定的) to come to reality. They made a detailed plan to go on a diet and take exercise on a daily basis. At first, they thought the whole process would have been a piece of cake. As they pressed on, each passing day showed them that this challenge would not be a walk in the park. They got a gym membership to help out. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The weight-losing lessons offered at the gym were not easy, a real challenge for them. __________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Just after a month, they both felt so much better, and they were pleased with the way they looked. _________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1: The weight-losing lessons offered at the gym were not easy, a real challenge for them. At first, no matter what efforts they made, they couldn’t keep at the pace of the other people in the class, because of their huge weight. Especially for Lexi, she was unable to get through with the lessons. However, the encouragement and support from their friends and family led them to keep up. They worked as a team, supporting each other, so none of them would fail. They kept up on the journey to lose weight. Paragraph 2: Just after a month, they both felt so much better, and they were pleased with the way they looked. Of course, this new feeling gave them a lot of confidence to keep pushing to achieve the final goal they were working for. Before long, their efforts began to pay off. Lexi was dropping about 20 pounds and Danny 11 pounds per month. Now the couple both have a good shape and enjoy a happy life. To keep up the gain, they are still taking exercise every day, however busy they are. Importantly, they keep off junk foods. 【语篇导读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lexi和Danny是一对年轻的夫妇，由于他们不健康的生活和饮食习惯，他们变得超重了。然而在结婚一年后，他们决定在生活中做出积极的改变，于是他们制订了详细的计划。一开始他们以为减肥是小菜一碟，但随着时间的推移，他们发现并不简单，后来他们去了健身房。健身房的课程很有挑战，但在亲朋好友和彼此的支持下，他们坚持了下来。一个月后他们发现自己有了积极的变化，也增加了信心，他们继续在减肥的道路上前进。现在他们有了好身材和幸福的生活，也养成了健康的生活和饮食习惯。 【详解】1. 续写线索： ①由续写第一段首句“健身房提供的减肥课程并不容易，对他们来说是一个真正的挑战。”可知，第一段可以描写他们在健身房锻炼时面临的困难，以及他们如何坚持下来。 ②由续写第二段首句“一个月后，他们俩都感觉好多了，他们对自己的体型很满意。”可知，第二段可以描写这种感受让他们俩增加了信心，并继续在减肥道路上前进，他们一点点地发生变化，后来有了好身材和幸福的生活，也养成了健康的生活和饮食习惯。 2. 段落续写：减肥课程很有挑战——他们跟不上其他人的节奏——亲朋好友和彼此的鼓励让他们继续下去——一个月后他们身材有了积极变化——增加了信心并决定继续下去——努力获得回报——有了好身材和幸福的生活，也养成了健康的生活和饮食习惯 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①跟上……的步伐：keep at the pace of/keep pace with/catch up with ②完成：get through with/complete/finish ③奏效：pay off/work 情绪类 ①对……满意：be pleased with/be satisfied with/be content with ②给予信心：give sb. confidence/give sb. faith ③快乐的：happy/delighted 【点睛】 【高分句型1】At first, no matter what efforts they made, they couldn’t keep at the pace of the other people in the class, because of their huge weight.(使用了no matter what引导让步状语从句) 【高分句型2】Of course, this new feeling gave them a lot of confidence to keep pushing to achieve the final goal they were working for.(使用了不定式作后置定语和目的状语、省略关系词的定语从句) ( 3 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$