UNIT 2 Section Ⅳ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语必修第二册（外研版2019）

UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ (单元主题语境：人与社会——节日庆祝) Section Ⅳ　Writing UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 have observed Having UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 to off because people have a five­day holiday UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 have a family feast stay up till midnight UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 one of the most important traditional festivals get together UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 a time for family reunion visit their relatives and friends express their best wishes like the Spring Festival UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 We succeeded in making the Christmas tree/... They all went to sleep/... Put gifts into the socks and placed the socks under the tree/... UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 The three boys found their gifts/... Excited/Happy/Satisfied/... UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 promising that Santa would definitely bring some presents to those who behaved well UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 Not until all of them fell asleep did we quietly take UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 UNIT 2　Let’s celebrate！ 英语　必修　第二册　W　 返回导航 谢 谢 1.写作词汇再现 (1)中国节日 the Spring Festival春节 Dragon Boat Festival端午节 Mid­Autumn Festival中秋节 Tomb Sweeping Day清明节 Double Ninth Festival重阳节 the Lantern Festival元宵节 (2)西方节日 Christmas Day圣诞节 Thanksgiving Day感恩节 Valentine's Day情人节 April Fool's Day愚人节 Halloween万圣节 Easter复活节 2.精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 ①Since 1950，people around the world _____________(observe) World Health Day on 7 April with a different theme each year. ②______(have) a history of more than 2，000 years，the Double Ninth Festival took form in the Warring States Period. ③The Dragon Boat Festival can date back __ 278 BCE. ④Generally speaking，people can have seven days ___ for the Chinese New Year. ⑤通常，这是旅行和探亲访友的好时机，因为人们有一个为期五天的假期。 Usually，it is a popular time for trips and to visit family and friends ______________________________________． ⑥在除夕夜，他们有一个家庭宴会，然后他们熬夜到午夜放鞭炮迎接新的一年。 On the New Year's Eve they ___________________，and then they _____________________ to set off firecrackers to welcome the New Year. Ⅰ　写一封表达观点的信 ►文体感知 观点表达类信件通常使用的行文结构为“介绍现象→具体分析→陈述个人观点”，即首先从宏观角度对某种现象进行整体描述，然后分析该现象，深度剖析这种现象，最后基于对这种现象的分析，对该现象作出评价，陈述个人看法。 ►写作技巧 具体在写作过程中，要注意以下三点： 1．描述现象 文章一开始，我们就需要对某现象进行描述，语言要精练，言简意赅，不要过度发挥。 2．分析现象 分析现象时，按要求写完并适当拓展即可。如果题目没有明确表述，则需要认真思考，并注意其逻辑性。 3．发表观点 表明观点时，陈述的理由要让人觉得真实、可信，能够充分支持自己的观点。 ►典例展示 假设你是李华。最近，你的外国笔友约翰发来一封电子邮件，请你为班级墙报的“Festivals Around the World”栏目提供一篇稿件。请根据下面的写作提纲，为他写一篇英语稿件，介绍中国的春节。内容包括： 1．春节的重要性； 2．主要的庆祝活动； 3．你的感受。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题谋篇] 确定体裁、话题 体裁：说明文 话题：节日庆祝 确定时态、人称 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称为主 布局文章架构 首段：引入话题——春节 中段：庆祝春节的方式 尾段：强调对春节的喜欢 列出核心要点 1．春节的重要性 2．人们在春节期间经常做的一些特色活动 3．人们在除夕夜所做的一些庆祝活动 [实践应用] 1．完成句子 ①在中国，春节是最重要的传统节日之一。 The Spring Festival is _____________________________________ in China. ②在除夕夜，全家人聚在一起吃饭。 On New Year's Eve，the whole family ____________ to have a feast. ③春节期间，人们将走亲访友，表达对新年最美好的祝愿。 During the festival，people will _______________________________ and _________________________ for the New Year. ④我非常喜欢春节。 I ________________________ very much. ⑤春节是一个家人团聚的时刻。 The Spring Festival is _________________________． 2．句式升级 ⑥用现在分词作状语改写句③ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⑦用because引导原因状语从句合并句④和句⑤ _____________________________________________________________________________ During the festival，people will visit their relatives and friends，expressing their best wishes for the New Year. I like the Spring Festival very much because it is a time for family reunion. 3．靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.It usually falls in late January or early February and is celebrated in different ways. People clean up their houses and prepare all kinds of delicious food. On New Year's Eve，the whole family usually get together to have a feast. During the festival，people will visit their relatives and friends，expressing their best wishes for the New Year.Children are the happiest because they will get red envelopes from their relatives. I like the Spring Festival very much because it is a time for family reunion. ►实战演练 假定你是李华，计划和同学们一起过端午节，请给你的外籍朋友Sam写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括： 1．介绍时间与地点； 2．对端午节做简单介绍。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Dear Sam， I'd like to invite you to join us to go to the park near our school next Sunday for the Dragon Boat Festival. The Dragon Boat Festival，also called Duanwu Festival，falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the lunar year to honor the great poet，Qu Yuan.On that day，there will be a variety of activities such as eating rice dumplings，throwing rice dumplings into the river and so on.People will also enjoy themselves in watching the dragon boat race，which will make them experience traditional Chinese culture. If you want to take part，please let us know and we'll meet at the school gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua Ⅱ　读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2023·南昌高一检测)It was now December twenty­fourth.So here we were，travelling about 2，000 miles and finally reaching our destination San Diego at last.We'd rented a room in a small，well­worn motel(汽车旅馆) near the beach. Six­year­old Chat frowned.“There is no Christmas tree，Mommy! But it's almost Christmas.How can Santa know where to put our presents without a Christmas tree？” “Yes，a Christmas tree！” echoed(附和) his four­year­old brother Jay.“I want a Christmas tree！” “Couldn't we just get a small Christmas tree and set it up in this room somewhere？”asked Chat.“That way，Santa Claus will know where to put our presents.” I sighed，looking around at our squeezed­in beds and bags.“But，honey，the five of us can barely move around in here with all our suitcases and everything.I'm sorry，but we just don't have the room for something extra like a Christmas tree.” Our oldest son，seven­year­old Robin，had been listening quietly.Suddenly，he grinned(咧嘴笑).“Yes，we do.” I stared.“Where？” He pointed to our motel room's door.“Right there—on the back of that door.Please，Mommy，if we can't get a real tree，can't we make a pretend tree and put it up there? Then Santa will know we love Christmas just as much as he does.” “And leave us some presents，too！”Chat added. Make a tree? I looked at the newspaper that I had bought when I was searching for places to rent.If I taped some of those pages together，cut them out into a tree shape，and bought some poster paint and brushes at the store next door ... Now，I was grinning，too.“Okay，boys! Ready to make the very best Christmas tree in the whole wide world？” “Yes！” 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： So we bought some paint and then taped and cut and painted. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： The next morning，I heard，“Mommy！Daddy！Look！Santa did find us after all！”______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：I；my husband；our children：six­year­old Chat，four­year­old Jay，seven­year­old Robin Where：well­worn motel near the beach in San Diego When：December twenty­fourth What：to prepare for Christmas How：make a Christmas tree using newspaper 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： ...we were travelling in San Diego.All of my children wanted to have a Christmas tree. ↓ I decided to make a Christmas tree using newspaper. 情感线：puzzled→excited & happy [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句内容“So we bought some paint and then taped and cut and painted.(所以我们买了一些油漆，然后粘好、剪好、涂好。)”可知，第一段可描写作者一家人制作圣诞树，父母在孩子睡着后准备圣诞礼物。 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句内容“The next morning，I heard，‘Mommy！Daddy！Look！Santa did find us after all！’(第二天早上，我听到：‘妈妈！爸爸！看！圣诞老人还是找到我们了！’)”可知，第二段可描写孩子们在圣诞节早上发现了圣诞礼物和作者此时的感慨。 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)What about our DIY Christmas tree? _____________________________________________ (2)What did the children do? __________________________ (3)What did my husband and I do? ________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： (1)What happened the next morning? ____________________________________ (2)How did all of us feel? ___________________________ [雕句式] 根据提示升级下列句子 1．“Time for bed！” urged my husband，and promised that Santa would definitely bring some presents to those who behaved well. →“Time for bed！” urged my husband，_______________________ __________________________________________________________．(现在分词作状语) 2．It was not until all of them fell asleep that we quietly took Christmas gifts from our suitcases，put them into the socks and placed the socks under the tree. →_____________________________________________________ Christmas gifts from our suitcases，put them into the socks and placed the socks under the tree.(not until倒装句) 3．Not the size of the tree or the price of the gifts but the love and joy that we all shared together made it truly special. →_____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ made it truly special.(强调句) It wasn't the size of the tree or the price of the gifts，but the love and joy that we all shared together that [成美文] Paragraph 1： So we bought some paint and then taped and cut and painted._______ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： The next morning，I heard，“Mommy！Daddy！Look！Santa did find us after all！”________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Paragraph 1： So we bought some paint and then taped and cut and painted.2 hours later，our DIY Christmas tree stood behind the door，with our handmade ornaments around it.Our boys folded their hands and began to pray.“Time for bed！” urged my husband，promising that Santa would definitely bring some presents to those who behaved well.Not until all of them fell asleep did we quietly take Christmas gifts from our suitcases，put them into the socks and placed the socks under the tree.Without dazzling lights and colourful lights，it may not be the biggest or shiniest Christmas tree，but the primitive tree was the most special one to us. Paragraph 2： The next morning，I heard，“Mommy！Daddy！Look！Santa did find us after all！” “Yeah，and Santa left us presents！” Then I found the three boys running to the Christmas tree eagerly and unbelievably， checking the presents in the socks.Considering our financial situation，what we could prepare for them were ordinary but practical.Exposed to the love of our family，I knew that this Christmas would be one that we would never forget.It wasn't the size of the tree or the price of the gifts，but the love and joy that we all shared together that made it truly special. $$