选择性必修第一册 Unit 1 People of Achievement（记叙文）-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019）

Unit 1 People of Achievement单元写作深度指导（人教版2019） Write a description of someone you admire（记叙文） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 记叙文 2020年全国高考I卷 “对社会有突出贡献的人物”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。 Write an introduction： Choose the person you are going to write about. It should be someone you think is great in some way. It can be an ordinary person, such as a parent, a relative, or a friend （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 本单元的写作任务是“介绍你钦佩的人”，属于记叙文的写作范畴。写作时要围绕人物组织材料，通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、性格特点、教育背景、工作经历、专业、爱好、主要事迹等。所选材料要注意客观真实性，不要言过其实。描写人物的外貌、性格、爱好等常用一般现在时，而介绍人物的出生时间及地点、教育背景、工作经历和主要事迹则常用一般过去时。 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 所介绍人物的基本情况（年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等）做简要的概述。 1.was born in/into a poor/rich family in ..;. when .. was young;at the age of..; ... spent one's childhood in..; his parents are both famous musicians... 2.beautiful, pretty, good-looking ，ordinary-looking, odd-looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin .. 3.committed, kind, determined，gentle,considerate，optimistic,easy- going，warm-hearted, hard-working ，responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous... 4.be good at; have a great gift for; be keen on; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about... 5.graduated from; got/earned a(n) .. degree; majored in;went abroad to further one' s study... 第二段 叙述人物事迹或在某个领域做出的突出贡献。 devote oneself to; do sth with great determination; fight for; make up one's mind to do sth; be determined to do sth; overcome many difficulties; try one's best to do sth;enjoy widespread popularity; win fame as; make great contributions to... 第三段 对人物进行评价 one of the best; the most important; one of the heroes of the 20th century; set a good example to;is the pride of; be regarded as...; be recognized as..; be respected/honored as--.; sb still lives in one's heart... 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1． adj.　　　　 热心的 2． adj. 体贴的 3． adj. 大方的；宽宏大量的 4． adj. 意志坚强的 5． adj. 好斗的 6． adj. 有雄心的 7． adj. 有学问的；博学的 8． adj. 可靠的 9． adj. 意志消沉的 10． adj. 坚决的 11． adj. 随和的 12． adj. 外向的 13． adj. 热情的；热烈的 14． adj. 勤奋的 【句式积累】: 1．介绍人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征： ①He had fair hair and blue eyes. ②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. ③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. ④Sue was a young woman who was studying art. ⑤He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man. 2．介绍人物的事迹、成就或取得的成绩： ①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships. ②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature. ③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings. ④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价： ①He became famous for his new theory. ②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. ③We regard him as our model. ④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. ⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 ,who was born in ,was one of the greatest . talent for showed at an early age. He learned . By the time he was ,the young had become a well­known . The following year moved to ,where he spent the rest of his life, as a . , who has been called , about or so throughout his life. As a great , he will be remembered by people forever. 你校英文报新开设的Popular Musician栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克·肖邦(Frederic Chopin)的短文。 生卒年份 1810～1849 生平简介 1.6岁学习音乐，7岁作曲，8岁公开演出，20岁已是颇有名气的作曲家； 2．21岁移居巴黎，以作曲和教学为生。 成就及评价 一生创作了约二百部作品，被誉为“钢琴诗人”。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于人物介绍类写作，故要用第 人称来写；文章的主题内容是写音乐家肖邦的生平经历、取得的伟大成就以及人们对他的评价。时态以 为主。 第二步　确定段落 本篇短文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　总体介绍(包括 等)； Para.2　介绍肖邦的 ； Para.3　总结全文(说明肖邦的 )。 第三步　核心词汇 1． 音乐天赋 2． 举办音乐会 3． 成为著名的作曲家 4． 谋生 5． 永远被人们记住 第四步　句式升级 1．弗里德里克·肖邦出生于1810年，是有史以来最伟大的作曲家之一。 (一般表达) Frederic Chopin was born in 1810 and he was one of the greatest composers of all time. (高级表达)Frederic Chopin, , was one of the greatest composers of all time. 2.到20岁时，这位年轻的音乐家已经成为著名的作曲家。 (一般表达)When he was 20, the young musician had become a well­known composer. (高级表达) he was 20, the young musician had become a well­known composer. 3.第二年，肖邦移居巴黎，在那里他度过了他的余生，以作曲和教学为生。 (一般表达) The following year Chopin moved to Paris and there he spent the rest of his life. He earned a living as a composer and teacher. (高级表达) The following year Chopin moved to Paris, he spent the rest of his life, earning a living as a composer and teacher. [连句成篇] 一、单句翻译 1．（2024高一·全国·专题练习）他性格外向，自信，从不害怕困难，这使得这家伙成为我最好的伙伴。（confident, frighten）(汉译英) 2．（23-24高一下·重庆·期末）正如报道的那样，音乐被证明对很多人的生活产生了积极的影响。 (as, 定从；prove) (汉译英) 3．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）虽然失去了夺冠的希望，但他依然面带微笑奋力完成比赛，这给在场的观众和线上的网友都留下了深刻印象。(which) (汉译英) 4．（2025高三·全国·专题练习）孔子强调尊重老人，这在我们飞速发展的世界中起着指明灯作用。(汉译英) 5．（23-24高一下·上海·期中）屠呦呦将她所有的热情投入到寻找疟疾的治疗方法中，并成为第一位获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的中国科学家。(commit) (汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________________ 二、语篇翻译 6．（24-25高一上·全国·课后作业）使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇 1．我的妈妈是我眼中的英雄。她在一家超市做收银员。 2．我原以为她的工作很容易，但我逐渐意识到，这些年来妈妈一直怀着极大的热情做着一份出色的工作，值得尊重。 3．母亲以她的工作为荣。她笑迎顾客，即使累了也坚持努力工作。 4．虽然她每天工作时间很长，但她仍抽空做家务并花时间陪我。 5．在她的鼓舞下，我学会了在遇到困难时不轻易承认失败。 The Hero in My Eye ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．书面表达 7．（23-24高二上·全国·课后作业）假定你是李华，你将参加校英语报举办的主题为“The Scientist I Admire Most”的演讲比赛。请用英语完成你的演讲稿，内容包括： 1．这位科学家是谁； 2．你崇拜他/她的原因； 3．你从他/她身上学到了什么。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（22-23高二上·福建莆田·期中）假如你是李华，某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇有关著名科学家袁隆平的短文。 1.概况：1930年9月7日出生，毕业于西南农学院(Southwest Agriculture College)； 2.事迹和成就：增加水稻产量，消除世界饥饿，被称为“杂交水稻”(Hybrid Rice)之父； 3. 2019年被授予“共和国勋章”(Medal of the Republic)； 4.生活简朴，淡泊名利，值得学习钦佩。 注意：1.词数80左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（20-21高二上·全国·课时练习）你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍, 以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词左右介绍郎平的短文。 1. 郎平, 1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年, 13岁的郎平开始练习打排球; 2. 1978年, 因在全国排球比赛中表现突出, 进入国家队; 3. 从1980年起, 郎平获得很多荣誉; 4. 退役后, 郎平成为排球教练。2016年, 郎平带领中国女排, 时隔12年, 在里约奥运会(the Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌; 5. 郎平是中国第一个作为球员和教练员均夺取过奥运会冠军的排球运动员。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________      (2020高考年全国Ⅰ卷) 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：人物简介；      2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 The Person I respect There are many respectable people around us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 People of Achievement单元写作深度指导（人教版2019） Write a description of someone you admire（记叙文） 单元话题 真题展示 考情预测 记叙文 2020年全国高考I卷 “对社会有突出贡献的人物”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。 Write an introduction： Choose the person you are going to write about. It should be someone you think is great in some way. It can be an ordinary person, such as a parent, a relative, or a friend （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 本单元的写作任务是“介绍你钦佩的人”，属于记叙文的写作范畴。写作时要围绕人物组织材料，通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、性格特点、教育背景、工作经历、专业、爱好、主要事迹等。所选材料要注意客观真实性，不要言过其实。描写人物的外貌、性格、爱好等常用一般现在时，而介绍人物的出生时间及地点、教育背景、工作经历和主要事迹则常用一般过去时。 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 所介绍人物的基本情况（年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等）做简要的概述。 1.was born in/into a poor/rich family in ..;. when .. was young;at the age of..; ... spent one's childhood in..; his parents are both famous musicians... 2.beautiful, pretty, good-looking ，ordinary-looking, odd-looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin .. 3.committed, kind, determined，gentle,considerate，optimistic,easy- going，warm-hearted, hard-working ，responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous... 4.be good at; have a great gift for; be keen on; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about... 5.graduated from; got/earned a(n) .. degree; majored in;went abroad to further one' s study... 第二段 叙述人物事迹或在某个领域做出的突出贡献。 devote oneself to; do sth with great determination; fight for; make up one's mind to do sth; be determined to do sth; overcome many difficulties; try one's best to do sth;enjoy widespread popularity; win fame as; make great contributions to... 第三段 对人物进行评价 one of the best; the most important; one of the heroes of the 20th century; set a good example to;is the pride of; be regarded as...; be recognized as..; be respected/honored as--.; sb still lives in one's heart... 【词汇积累】:积累单元话题词汇; 1．warm-hearted adj.　　　　 热心的 2．considerate adj. 体贴的 3．generous adj. 大方的；宽宏大量的 4．strong-willed adj. 意志坚强的 5．aggressive adj. 好斗的 6．ambitious adj. 有雄心的 7．learned adj. 有学问的；博学的 8．reliable adj. 可靠的 9．depressed adj. 意志消沉的 10．determined adj. 坚决的 11．easy-going adj. 随和的 12．outgoing adj. 外向的 13．enthusiastic adj. 热情的；热烈的 14．diligent adj. 勤奋的 【句式积累】: 1．介绍人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征： ①He had fair hair and blue eyes. ②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. ③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. ④Sue was a young woman who was studying art. ⑤He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man. 2．介绍人物的事迹、成就或取得的成绩： ①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships. ②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature. ③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings. ④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价： ①He became famous for his new theory. ②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. ③We regard him as our model. ④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. ⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 【万能写作模板】给出写作模板,便于识记。 ,who was born in ,was one of the greatest . talent for showed at an early age. He learned . By the time he was ,the young had become a well­known . The following year moved to ,where he spent the rest of his life, as a . , who has been called , about or so throughout his life. As a great , he will be remembered by people forever. 你校英文报新开设的Popular Musician栏目正面向全校学生征稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇介绍著名音乐家弗里德里克·肖邦(Frederic Chopin)的短文。 生卒年份 1810～1849 生平简介 1.6岁学习音乐，7岁作曲，8岁公开演出，20岁已是颇有名气的作曲家； 2．21岁移居巴黎，以作曲和教学为生。 成就及评价 一生创作了约二百部作品，被誉为“钢琴诗人”。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [审题谋篇] 第一步　明确要求 该写作属于人物介绍类写作，故要用第三人称来写；文章的主题内容是写音乐家肖邦的生平经历、取得的伟大成就以及人们对他的评价。时态以过去时为主。 第二步　确定段落 本篇短文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1　总体介绍(包括其身份及生卒年份等)； Para.2　介绍肖邦的主要经历； Para.3　总结全文(说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价)。 第三步　核心词汇 1．talent for music音乐天赋 2．give public concerts举办音乐会 3．become a well­known composer成为著名的作曲家 4．earn a living谋生 5．be remembered by people forever永远被人们记住 第四步　句式升级 1．弗里德里克·肖邦出生于1810年，是有史以来最伟大的作曲家之一。 (一般表达) Frederic Chopin was born in 1810 and he was one of the greatest composers of all time. (高级表达)Frederic Chopin, who was born in 1810, was one of the greatest composers of all time. 2.到20岁时，这位年轻的音乐家已经成为著名的作曲家。 (一般表达)When he was 20, the young musician had become a well­known composer. (高级表达)By the time he was 20, the young musician had become a well­known composer. 3.第二年，肖邦移居巴黎，在那里他度过了他的余生，以作曲和教学为生。 (一般表达) The following year Chopin moved to Paris and there he spent the rest of his life. He earned a living as a composer and teacher. (高级表达) The following year Chopin moved to Paris, where he spent the rest of his life, earning a living as a composer and teacher. [连句成篇] [参考范文] The Great Composer—Chopin Frederic Chopin, who was born in 1810, was one of the greatest composers of all time. Chopin's talent for music showed at an early age. He learned music at six，composed music at seven, and even gave public concerts at eight. By the time he was 20, the young musician had become a well­known composer. The following year Chopin moved to Paris, where he spent the rest of his life, earning a living as a composer and teacher. Chopin, who has been called “the poet of the piano”， composed about 200 pieces of music throughout his life. As a great composer, he will be remembered by people forever. [亮点点评] 该范文结构完整，作者首先总体介绍(包括其身份及出生年份等)，然后介绍肖邦的主要经历，最后总结全文(说明肖邦的成就以及人们对他的评价)。要点齐全，语言规范地道，环环相扣。文中by the time, the following year, as a great composer等过渡词的衔接，使表达自然紧凑；在句式上，作者巧妙地使用了定语从句等句式，亮点频出，表达形式多样。总之，该范文是一篇朗朗上口的优秀范文，值得学习。 一、单句翻译 1．（2024高一·全国·专题练习）他性格外向，自信，从不害怕困难，这使得这家伙成为我最好的伙伴。（confident, frighten）(汉译英) 【答案】He is outgoing, confident, and never frightened of difficulties, which makes this guy my best companion. 【详解】考查形容词的并列使用、一般现在时态以及定语从句。描述一个人的性格特征通常使用一般现在时态。“性格外向”翻译为outgoing，“自信”翻译为confident，害怕为“be frightened of”“从不”翻译为never，“这使得这家伙成为我最好的伙伴”是一个非限制性定语从句，可以用which makes this guy my best companion来表达。故翻译为He is outgoing, confident, and never frightened of difficulties, which makes this guy my best companion. 2．（23-24高一下·重庆·期末）正如报道的那样，音乐被证明对很多人的生活产生了积极的影响。 (as, 定从；prove) (汉译英) 【答案】As is reported, music has proved to have a positive influence/impact on many people’s lives. 【详解】考查定语从句、动词和时态。“正如报道的那样”用固定句型as is reported表示，该结构也是由特殊关系代词as引导的定语从句，描述客观事实用一般现在时态；“音乐被证明对很多人的生活产生了积极的影响”是主句，主语“音乐”用不可数名词music，谓语“被证明”可理解为“证明(是)”，用系动词prove，不用被动语态，描述过去的行为对现在的影响，用现在完成时态has proved，“对很多人的生活产生了积极的影响”作表语，用不定式短语to have a positive influence/impact on many people’s lives。综上，全句译为：As is reported, music has proved to have a positive influence/impact on many people’s lives. 3．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）虽然失去了夺冠的希望，但他依然面带微笑奋力完成比赛，这给在场的观众和线上的网友都留下了深刻印象。(which) (汉译英) 【答案】Although he lost the hope of winning the championship, he still managed to finish the race with a smile on his face, which left a deep impression on the audience and online users. 【详解】考查时态、从句。根据汉语提示可知，本句为陈述过去的事实，为一般过去时。虽然为although，失去了夺冠的希望为lose the hope of winning the championship ,面带微笑奋力完成比赛为manage to finish the race with a smile on his face 。“这给在场的观众和线上的网友都留下了深刻印象”处理成which引导的非限制定语从句，翻译为which left a deep impression on the audience and online users。故翻译为：Although he lost the hope of winning the championship, he still managed to finish the race with a smile on his face, which left a deep impression on the audience and online users. 4．（2025高三·全国·专题练习）孔子强调尊重老人，这在我们飞速发展的世界中起着指明灯作用。(汉译英) 【答案】Confucius stressed respect for elders, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced world. 【详解】考查名词，动词和定语从句。“孔子”用Confucius作主语，“强调”用动词stress作谓语，描述过去的动作用一般过去时，“尊重老人”用名词短语respect for elders作宾语，“这在我们飞速发展的世界中起着指明灯作用”可以用定语从句表示，“这”指的就是“尊重老人”这件事，故可以用which来引导非限制性定语从句，“起着……作用”用短语serve as...表示，陈述客观事实用一般现在时，“指明灯”用名词a guiding light作宾语，“在我们飞速发展的世界”用in our fast-paced world作状语。故译为Confucius stressed respect for elders, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced world。 5．（23-24高一下·上海·期中）屠呦呦将她所有的热情投入到寻找疟疾的治疗方法中，并成为第一位获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的中国科学家。(commit) (汉译英) _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Tu Youyou committed all her passion to finding a cure for malaria and became the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. 【详解】考查固定短语，时态和不定式。“把所有的热情投入到做某事中”是固定短语commit all one’s passion to doing sth.，句子描述过去的事情，时态用一般过去时，commit用过去式committed，主语Tu Youyou是女士，因此one’s用her，“寻找……的治疗方法”是find a cure for，“疟疾”是malaria，“并”是and，“成为”是become，用过去式became，“第一位中国科学家”是the first Chinese scientist，Chinese scientist被序数词the first修饰，“获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的”用不定式作Chinese scientist的后置定语，“获得”是win，“诺贝尔生理学或医学奖”是the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine，因此整句话翻译为“Tu Youyou committed all her passion to finding a cure for malaria and became the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine”。故答案为Tu Youyou committed all her passion to finding a cure for malaria and became the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine. 二、语篇翻译 6．（24-25高一上·全国·课后作业）使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇 1．我的妈妈是我眼中的英雄。她在一家超市做收银员。 2．我原以为她的工作很容易，但我逐渐意识到，这些年来妈妈一直怀着极大的热情做着一份出色的工作，值得尊重。 3．母亲以她的工作为荣。她笑迎顾客，即使累了也坚持努力工作。 4．虽然她每天工作时间很长，但她仍抽空做家务并花时间陪我。 5．在她的鼓舞下，我学会了在遇到困难时不轻易承认失败。 The Hero in My Eye ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The Hero in My Eye My mother is the hero in my eye. She takes up a position as a cashier at a supermarket. I used to think her job easy, but I gradually realize my mother deserves respect for doing a remarkable job all these years with great passion. Moreover, my mother takes pride in her work. She faces customers with a gentle smile and insists on working hard even when tired. Though she works long hours daily, she finds time to do housework and spends time with me. Inspired by her, I have learnt not to acknowledge defeat easily when I encounter difficulties. 【导语】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生以“The Hero in My Eye”为题，介绍自己心目中的英雄。 【详解】1.词汇积累 职位：position→post 出色的：remarkable→extraordinary 热情：passion→enthusiasm 以……为骄傲：take pride in→be proud of 2.句型拓展 合并简单句 原句：My mother is the hero in my eye. She takes up a position as a cashier at a supermarket. 拓展句：My mother is the hero in my eye, who takes up a position as a cashier at a supermarket. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Though she works long hours daily, she finds time to do housework and spends time with me.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句） [高分句型2]Inspired by her, I have learnt not to acknowledge defeat easily when I encounter difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句） 三．书面表达 7．（23-24高二上·全国·课后作业）假定你是李华，你将参加校英语报举办的主题为“The Scientist I Admire Most”的演讲比赛。请用英语完成你的演讲稿，内容包括： 1．这位科学家是谁； 2．你崇拜他/她的原因； 3．你从他/她身上学到了什么。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear friends,      I’m glad to be here to make a speech. The scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou, the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine.      Her most outstanding contribution is the discovery of artemisinin, which is a highly effective cure for malaria. She convinces us the importance of doing basic research. Besides, her success tells us that we should stick to our dream. I want to be a scientist and spare no effort to save people’s lives, helping them enjoy a healthy life.      I do believe my dream can come true as long as I stick to it firmly. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加校英语报举办的主题为“The Scientist I Admire Most”的演讲比赛，讲明这位科学家是谁，考生崇拜他/她的原因是什么，以及从他/她身上学到了什么。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 钦佩、仰慕：admire→look up to 杰出的、显著的：outstanding→remarkable 有效的：effective→efficient 此外：besides→in addition 坚持：stick to→persevere in 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：The scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou, the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine. 拓展句：The scientist I admire most is Tu Youyou, who is the first Chinese scientist to win the Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Her most outstanding contribution is the discovery of artemisinin, which is a highly effective cure for malaria. （运用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。） 【高分句型2】Besides, her success tells us that we should stick to our dream.（运用了以连接词that引导的宾语从句。） 8．（22-23高二上·福建莆田·期中）假如你是李华，某英文报正在举办主题为“A person I admire most”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇有关著名科学家袁隆平的短文。 1.概况：1930年9月7日出生，毕业于西南农学院(Southwest Agriculture College)； 2.事迹和成就：增加水稻产量，消除世界饥饿，被称为“杂交水稻”(Hybrid Rice)之父； 3. 2019年被授予“共和国勋章”(Medal of the Republic)； 4.生活简朴，淡泊名利，值得学习钦佩。 注意：1.词数80左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A person I admire most Yuan Longping was born in a poor family in Beijing on September 7, 1930. Since his graduation from Southwest Agriculture College, Yuan has done research on rice for over half a century. He has made great contributions to increasing rice production and solving the problem of hunger, which makes him honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice”. Though he is famous, he lives a simple life and cares little about money and fame. In September 2019, he was awarded the honorary title of “Medal of the Republic”. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“A person I admire most”为题，用英语写一篇有关著名科学家袁隆平的短文。 【详解】1.词汇积累 由于：since→due to/because of 贡献：contribution→devotion 解决：solve→work out 有名的：famous→well-known 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Since his graduation from Southwest Agriculture College, Yuan has done research on rice for over half a century. 拓展句：Since he graduated from Southwest Agriculture College, Yuan has done research on rice for over half a century. 【点睛】【高分句型1】He has made great contributions to increasing rice production and solving the problem of hunger, which makes him honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice”. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Though he is famous, he lives a simple life and cares little about money and fame. (运用了Though引导的让步状语从句) 9．（20-21高二上·全国·课时练习）你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍, 以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词左右介绍郎平的短文。 1. 郎平, 1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年, 13岁的郎平开始练习打排球; 2. 1978年, 因在全国排球比赛中表现突出, 进入国家队; 3. 从1980年起, 郎平获得很多荣誉; 4. 退役后, 郎平成为排球教练。2016年, 郎平带领中国女排, 时隔12年, 在里约奥运会(the Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌; 5. 郎平是中国第一个作为球员和教练员均夺取过奥运会冠军的排球运动员。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Lang Ping, who was born on 10th, Dec. 1960 in Tianjin, is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much. She began to play volleyball at the age of 13. She joined the national team because of her excellent performance in the national volleyball game in 1978. She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards from 1980 on. After she retired from the volleyball team, she became a volleyball coach. In 2016 she took the Chinese Women Volleyball team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games and won the gold medal. She is the first Chinese volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach. 【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，根据所提供的信息写一篇80词左右介绍郎平的短文。 【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍, 以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词左右介绍郎平的短文。 1. 郎平, 1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年, 13岁的郎平开始练习打排球; 2. 1978年, 因在全国排球比赛中表现突出, 进入国家队; 3. 从1980年起, 郎平获得很多荣誉; 4. 退役后, 郎平成为排球教练。2016年, 郎平带领中国女排, 时隔12年, 在里约奥运会(the Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌; 5. 郎平是中国第一个作为球员和教练员均夺取过奥运会冠军的排球运动员。 第二，人称为第三人称。第三，时态以一般过去时为主。 第二步：确定关键词汇和短语: retired from ，take the Chinese Women Volleyball team，take part in，win the gold medal. 第三步：确定较为高级的句子: who引导的非限制性定语从句Lang Ping, who was born on 10th, Dec. 1960 in Tianjin, is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much. so…that 引导的结果状语从句She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards from 1980 on. 第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:besides，however，after. 第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。 【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: who引导的非限制性定语从句Lang Ping, who was born on 10th, Dec. 1960 in Tianjin, is a famous volleyball coach and we all admire her very much. so…that 引导的结果状语从句She was so hard-working that she won a lot of awards from 1980 on. 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。      (2020高考年全国Ⅰ卷) 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：人物简介；      2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 The Person I respect There are many respectable people around us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏1】 The person I respect       There are many respectable people around us. My mum, an ordinary middle-aged woman, is one of the people who I love and respect most. Born into a poor family, she has always been independent and cherished what she has had. Now she is a teacher, works well into midnight, but seldom, if ever, complains.       The reason why I show respect for her is that she never loses temper but instead always encourages me. My thoughts flashed back to the days when I felt cast down on account of my poor academic performance. Aware of my low spirits, she told me firmly that as long as I tried my best, she would take pride in me whatever the result would be. In the meanwhile, she secretly stuck some famous sayings such as "where there is a will, there is a way" on my table, reminding me to keep a positive attitude toward life. With her constant encouragement and unconditional trust, I regained my confidence and continued to pursue my dream. Were it not for her, I couldn't be what I am now.  Such is my beloved mum, a simple yet great woman, like a beam of sunshine, shining me the road ahead. 【佳作欣赏2】 The person I respect       There are many respectable people around us. The one I respect most is my aunt, a middle-aged nurse, always wearing a smile and a determined look, who fought against the COVID-19 during the tough times of the epidemic.            Her selfless devotion to her job never fails to appeal to me. With a good knowledge of medical care, she strengthens her resolve to be an excellent nurse and cares enough for her patients. Additionally, it is her passionate belief in what she is doing that leaves a deep impression on me. Faced with the outbreak of the epidemic, she went to Wuhan without a second thought, where she helped to save hundreds of lives. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her heroic deeds will flash through my mind and motivate me to overcome them.   Admittedly, words cannot express my admiration and respect for her. What she has done sheds light on the future lying before me. 【佳作欣赏3】 The person I respect       There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is  Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating virus.       Zhong Nanshan, a medical scientist, is a leading figure in the battles against SARS in 2003 and COVID in 2019, winning him the worldwide respect. Every time I see the pictures, in which he is fighting to save people’s lives, I cannot help being moved by him. What impresses me most is that aged 84, he rushed to the front line of the epidemic area without hesitation at the beginning of the outbreak of COVID-19 epidemic. Dangerous though it was, Zhong Nanshan and his workmates worked hard day and night to treat the patients infected with COVID-19. With their great efforts, remarkable results were achieved and the COVID-19 was finally under control.  His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a man like him in the future. （2023高考全国新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 【佳作欣赏1】 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I have been told that you will randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class, but I have different opinions about it. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other student to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【佳作欣赏2】 Dear Ryan, I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to share a concern I have regarding the recent decision to randomly pair students for the post-class oral practice sessions. While I appreciate the intention to encourage speaking practice, I believe random grouping might have certain issues. Firstly, some students might feel uncomfortable or anxious speaking with someone they aren't familiar with, affecting their confidence. Additionally, varying proficiency levels could lead to imbalanced interactions, hindering effective language practice. To address this, I suggest considering grouping based on students' proficiency levels. This would ensure more balanced conversations and a supportive environment for everyone to engage actively. Moreover, alternating partner assignments periodically could expose students to diverse speaking styles and enhance their adaptability. Thank you for considering my perspective. I believe such adjustments could lead to more productive language practice sessions. Best regards, Li Hua ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$