内容正文:
求助信
必备素材
求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。具体写作步骤为:
开门见山表明求助意图(针对陌生对象需自我介绍)
介绍求助事项及具体情况
表达感谢或希望,并期待对方回复
提分表达
[首段句] 呈现问题,表明写作目的:
(1)I’m writing to ask you for help/to do me a favour.
(2)I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
(3)I hope you will not mind me writing to ask if you are available to offer me some guidance, as…
(4)I’m…, one of your students. I have some difficulty in…/I feel it difficult to…/I am unable to…I’m writing to seek for your advice.
[中段句] 按照要点,提出请求:
(1)To begin with, I don’t feel quite accustomed to/can’t adapt/adjust to…here. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
(2)I hope you can give me some guidance on…so that I can behave myself better and leave a good impression on…
(3)Faced with so many difficulties, I wonder if you could do me a favour and help with…
(4)Now I have two problems. One is that…and the other is that…
[尾段句] 表示谢意和希望:
(1)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour.
(2)I wonder if you can help us with these difficulties. We would appreciate it/be grateful/thankful if you could lend us a hand.
(3)I will be more than happy if you can come to my aid. Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
(4)I’m eager to get your timely help. Please reply at your earliest convenience!
写作模板
首段:点明身份,描述困难。
My name is ________ (自我介绍). I'm writing the letter to you to ask for some help. I have met much difficulty in ________ (困难的事情).
主体:求助原因,渴望得到帮助。
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce me to some good ways to ________ (解决该困难) so that I can deal with it more easily? In the meanwhile, I hope ________ (具体问题一). Also, I would like you to ________ (具体问题二).
尾段:表达感谢。
I will be very grateful if you do me the favor.
写作训练
(一)
(2024·江西·模拟预测)假如你是李华, 刚刚获悉你的澳大利亚笔友Jessica在她学校的“汉语歌唱比赛”活动中获得一等奖,请给她写一封英文信表示祝贺,并表示自己即将参加学校举行的英语歌唱比赛,请她为自己备赛提出建议。
注意:
1. 词数:80 左右;
2. 开头结尾已写出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jessica,
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jessica,
How are you? I wanted to extend my heartfelt congratulations on winning the first prize in the “Chinese Singing Competition” at your school! What an incredible achievement! Your dedication and talent shine brightly.
I’m also writing to share my excitement about an upcoming English singing competition at our school. As someone with experience in competitions, I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you could offer to help me prepare.
Thank you in advance for your guidance, and once again, congratulations on your well-deserved success! Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,就刚刚获悉你的澳大利亚笔友Jessica在她学校的“汉语歌唱比赛”活动中获得一等奖一事,给她写一封英文信表示祝贺,并表示自己即将参加学校举行的英语歌唱比赛,请她为自己备赛提出建议。
【详解】词汇积累
想要做某事:wanted to → intended to
衷心的:heartfelt → sincere
成就:achievement → accomplishment
感激:appreciate → be grateful for
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I wanted to extend my heartfelt congratulations on winning the first prize in the “Chinese Singing Competition” at your school!
拓展句:I would like to express my sincere congratulations on securing the first prize in the “Chinese Singing Competition” held at your school!
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m also writing to share my excitement about an upcoming English singing competition at our school. (使用了动词不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】As someone with experience in competitions, I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you could offer to help me prepare.(使用了介词短语作定语以及省略关系词的限制性定语从句,先行词为advice or tips)
(二)
(2024·河北沧州·三模)假设你是李华,希望在未来成为一名农业专家,但是你的家长并不支持,于是你给外教Alice写信,征求她的意见。内容包括:
1. 说明你的想法;
2. 家长反对的理由;
3. 征求老师的意见。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
I feel upset these days because I have conflicts with my parents over my career choice.
Inspired by Yuan Longping, a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture in the future. However, my parents are strongly opposed. They wish me to become a lawyer, thinking I will find a good job after graduation. I am caught in a dilemma. I don’t know whether I should obey my parents or pursue what brings me happiness and satisfaction.
What would you do if you were in my position? I really hope that you can give me some advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Alice写一封信,就希望在未来成为一名农业专家,但是家长并不支持这件事来征求她的意见。内容包括:说明你的想法、家长反对的理由、征求老师的意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
奉献,投身于:devote→dedicate
强烈地:strongly→violently
顺从:obey→be obedient to
建议:advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Inspired by Yuan Longping, a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture in the future.
拓展句:Inspired by Yuan Longping, who is a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture in the future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel upset these days because I have conflicts with my parents over my career choice.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I don’t know whether I should obey my parents or pursue what brings me happiness and satisfaction.(运用了whether以及what引导的宾语从句)
(三)
(2024·贵州·三模)假定你是李华,外教Annie想了解学生在英语学习中遇到的问题,你就此做了调查。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.调查结果;
2.希望得到帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Annie,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Annie,
I’ve conducted a survey among my classmates to gather insights on the challenges that we face in English learning. The results indicate that the most common difficulties are related to vocabulary retention and comprehension of native English speakers’ accents. Additionally, some students struggle with grammar rules and the application of them in real-world conversations.
Given our collective interest in improving these areas, I would greatly appreciate your guidance and assistance. Your expertise in English teaching would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles. Thank you for considering our needs.
Yours, sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Annie想了解学生在英语学习中遇到的问题,考生就此做了调查,要求考生按照要求给外教写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实施,做:conduct→ do
收集:gather→ collect
表明:indicate→ suggest
困难:difficulty→ trouble
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Your expertise in English teaching would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles.
拓展句:It is your expertise in English teaching that would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve conducted a survey among my classmates to gather insights on the challenges that we face in English learning.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The results indicate that the most common difficulties are related to vocabulary retention and comprehension of native English speakers’ accents.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(四)
(2024·吉林·一模)假定你是李华,一名高三学生。英语作文读后续写这一项让你备受困扰。你计划向吉林大学张教授(此领域的专家)写一封求助信。希望他给予指导。内容包括:
(1)介绍困扰;(2)希望得到帮助。
注意: (1)词数 80 左右: (2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Professor Zhang,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Professor Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student. Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing. Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.
I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. First of all, I have difficulty in designing plot. In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.
Facing the problems, I’m anxious’ to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给吉林大学张教授(英语作文读后续写领域的专家)写一封求助信,希望他在英语作文读后续写方面给予指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:recently→lately
专家:expert→specialist
首先:first of all→first and foremost
面对……:face→be faced with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing.
拓展句: Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing, which troubles me a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(五)
(2024·江西吉安·模拟预测)假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”,请你给外教Johnson 写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 请他推荐一部英文电影;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Johnson,
Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”. Knowing that you are a movie fan, I’m writing to ask for your recommendation.
It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’ interest and acquisition of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding. As a movie fan, you must have seen a lot of English movies that are both interesting and thought-provoking. Could you please recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it? I’m sure students will like it.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,学校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”,要求考生给外教Johnson 写封邮件,请他推荐一部英文电影并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
普遍地:widely→universally
提高:improve→boost
肯定的:sure→certain
打算做某事:intend to do→plan to do
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”.
拓展句:Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column, whose name is “English Movie Appreciation”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’ interest and acquisition of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding. (运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】Could you please recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it? (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)
(六)
(2024·广西贵港·模拟预测)假定你是学生会主席李华,近期计划组织以“Cross-Cultural Food Exhibition”为主题的活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写信,内容包括:
1.活动介绍;
2.征求建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. We’ll hold the Cross-Cultural Food Exhibition, which is believed to be able to enrich our school life and facilitate culture exchange.
According to our plan, all the students will get gathered at 8 a. m. this Sunday at our school playground. The activity will kick off with a host welcoming all the guests and introducing the activity. Afterward, students can go to small booths, each of which will offer free traditional dishes from different countries. To enhance engagement, we will add live cooking shows where students can get a taste of making authentic cuisine themselves.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这些写作是一封求助信,要求考生给外教老师写一封信,就学生会准备举办的跨文化食品展咨询一些建议。考生应添加合适细节以使行文流畅。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
① 主席:chairman → leader, president
② 丰富:enrich → enhance, improve
③ 促进:facilitate → promote, encourage
④ 展览:exhibition → showcase, fair
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:The activity will kick off with a host welcoming all the guests and introducing the activity.
拓展句:The activity will kick off with a host who welcomes all the guests and introduces the activity.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We’ll hold the Cross-Cultural Food Exhibition, which is believed to be able to enrich our school life and facilitate culture exchange.(which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Afterward, students can go to small booths, each of which will offer free traditional dishes from different countries. (介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)
(七)
(2024·河南·三模)假定你是李华,你在英语阅读过程中时常对一些习语感到困惑。请给外教Mr. Smith 写封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的困惑;
2.寻求帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua from Class 5, Grade 3 of our school. I’m writing to seek your help regarding idioms. I find it quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms while reading English texts. They often confuse me, and I’m not sure how to interpret them correctly. I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning, and I am eager to improve my understanding of them.
I would really appreciate it if you could share some strategies or tips on how to better understand and remember idioms. Your guidance would be invaluable to me. Thank you very much for your time and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith 写封邮件,说明自己在英语阅读过程中时对一些习语感到的困惑并向对方寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关于:regarding→concerning
理解:grasp→comprehend
使困惑:confuse→puzzle
无价的:invaluable→priceless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:They often confuse me, and I’m not sure how to interpret them correctly.
拓展句:They often confuse me, and I’m not sure how I can interpret them correctly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I find it quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms while reading English texts.(运用了状语从句的省略,不定式作真正宾语,it为形式宾语)
【高分句型2】I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning, and I am eager to improve my understanding of them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(八)
(2024·山东威海·二模)假定你是李华,现已完成主题为“Food & Culture”英语演讲比赛的写作大纲,请给外教写一封邮件,简述大纲中你的观点和论证思路,并就此征求对方的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sara,
I’m seeking guidance on my speech outline about “Food & Culture”....
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I’d greatly appreciate your thoughts and any suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sara,
I’m seeking guidance on my speech outline about “Food & Culture”. My point is that food and culture go hand in hand. Two sub-points are provided to support it. One is that food reflects culture and the other is that cultural changes and integration influence food landscape. To support the two points, many examples are used. For example, people’s preference for spicy food is a way to adapt to the humid climate. Moreover, Chinese cuisine and culinary culture were introduced to the world through the Silk Road. Apart from giving examples, other methods, including making comparison and quotation, are also employed in my essay. Do you think my outline is well-organized?
I’d greatly appreciate your thoughts and any suggestions.
Your,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教写一封邮件,简述大纲中自己的观点和论证思路,并就此征求对方的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的:many→all kinds of
例如:for example→for instance
除了:apart from→in addition to
此外:moreover→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To support the two points, many examples are used.
拓展句:Many examples are used so that I can support the two points.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
My point is that food and culture go hand in hand.(运用了that引导表语从句)
[高分句型2]
For example, people’s preference for spicy food is a way to adapt to the humid climate.(运用了动词不定式作后置定语)
(九)
(2024·河北衡水·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校将于下周末举办英语朗诵比赛(recitation competition),请给你的外教Mr. Wesley写一封电子邮件,请他给你指导一下英语发音。内容包括:
1. 朗诵比赛情况介绍;
2. 请求老师帮助;
3. 附带你的朗读录音。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Wesley,
How is everything going with you?
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wesley,
How is everything going with you? An English recitation competition aimed to raise students’ interest in learning English is to be held next weekend. This competition is an excellent opportunity for us students to showcase our language skills and build confidence in public speaking.
I am writing to kindly request your assistance in improving my English pronunciation for the competition. I believe your guidance will greatly benefit my performance. Your expertise in English phonetics would be invaluable in helping me refine my pronunciation and delivery.
I have also attached a recording of my recitation for your reference. I would greatly appreciate any feedhack or advice you could provide. Thank you in advance for your assistance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Wesley写一封电子邮件,请他给你指导一下英语发音,参加学校于下周末举办的英语朗诵比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:opportunity →chance
请求:request →ask for
建议:competition→match
帮助:assistance →help/aid
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:An English recitation competition aimed to raise students’ interest in learning English is to be held next weekend.
拓展句:An English recitation competition which is aimed to raise students’ interest in learning English is to be held next weekend.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This competition is an excellent opportunity for us students to showcase our language skills and build confidence in public speaking.(运用了不定式短语作定语修饰名词opportunity)
【高分句型2】I would greatly appreciate any feedhack or advice you could provide.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
(十)
(2024·湖北·三模)假定你是李华,是一名高一学生,进入高中之后你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给学校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.作业多,没有时间运动。
2.压力大,难以入睡。
3.希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kate,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a freshman in our school. I was really happy and excited when I first entered senior high school, but recently I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to do exercise. Moreover, the high expectations from the teachers and my parents make me extremely stressed because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就遇到的问题,给学校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
向某人求助:ask sb. for help→turn to sb. for help
首先:first→to begin with
想要做某事:want to do sth.→would like to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am Li Hua, a freshman in our school.
拓展句:I am Li Hua, who is a freshman in our school.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to do exercise.(运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]
What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.(运用了what引导主语从句,that引导表语从句)
(十一)
(2024·山西·二模)假定你是李华,暑假你准备去澳洲游学,为了更快地融入当地生活,你准备求助你的澳洲好友William。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.表达期望。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear William,
I am one of your Chinese friends, Li Hua. I will come to your country for a study tour on July 5th. Could you do me a favour to help me adapt to local life more quickly?
First, I’d be grateful if you could help me find an apartment next to Tanner High School. Besides, it would be better if you could tell me some customs and lifestyle of your country. Actually, any constructive suggestions are welcome.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就去澳洲游时如何能够更快地融入当地生活,给澳洲好友William写一封邮件,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮某人一个忙:do sb. a favour→give sb. a hand
使用:adapt to→adjust to
首先:first→to begin with
事实上:actually→as a matter of fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am one of your Chinese friends, Li Hua.
拓展句:I am one of your Chinese friends, whose name is Li Hua.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
First, I’d be grateful if you could help me find an apartment next to Tanner High School.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]
Besides, it would be better if you could tell me some customs and lifestyle of your country.(运用了it would be better if…这个固定句型)
(十二)
(2024·重庆·二模)假定你是李华,你向你的外教Stephen 询问关于网络流行词“显眼包”(goof, class clown, laughing stock) 的使用。请你写一封信,要点如下:
1. 自己对英语的喜爱;
2. 如何使用网络流行词“显眼包”;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
1. 词数80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Stephen,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Stephen,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. Thank you for being our teacher. Never will you know how much I love English owing to your instruction.
English-learning now becomes part of my life, without which I will feel bored. Recently I have come across a few popular words from the Internet that arouse my interest. I’m wondering if you could help me with it. I guess “goof, class clown, laughing stock” refer to a silly or stupid person. In the following sentence “His policies became the laughing stock of the financial community.”, can I use “goof” to replace “laughing stock”? Would you please -tell me how to use these words?
I’m really grateful for your commitment and efforts. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写信给外教Stephen并询问关于网络流行词“显眼包”的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢:love→be fond of
因为:owing to→because of
偶遇:come across→meet with
想知道:wonder→want to know
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is one of your students in China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Never will you know how much I love English owing to your instruction.(由how much引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】English-learning now becomes part of my life, without which I will feel bored.(由without which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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求助信
必备素材
求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时。具体写作步骤为:
开门见山表明求助意图(针对陌生对象需自我介绍)
介绍求助事项及具体情况
表达感谢或希望,并期待对方回复
提分表达
[首段句] 呈现问题,表明写作目的:
(1)I’m writing to ask you for help/to do me a favour.
(2)I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
(3)I hope you will not mind me writing to ask if you are available to offer me some guidance, as…
(4)I’m…, one of your students. I have some difficulty in…/I feel it difficult to…/I am unable to…I’m writing to seek for your advice.
[中段句] 按照要点,提出请求:
(1)To begin with, I don’t feel quite accustomed to/can’t adapt/adjust to…here. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
(2)I hope you can give me some guidance on…so that I can behave myself better and leave a good impression on…
(3)Faced with so many difficulties, I wonder if you could do me a favour and help with…
(4)Now I have two problems. One is that…and the other is that…
[尾段句] 表示谢意和希望:
(1)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favour.
(2)I wonder if you can help us with these difficulties. We would appreciate it/be grateful/thankful if you could lend us a hand.
(3)I will be more than happy if you can come to my aid. Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
(4)I’m eager to get your timely help. Please reply at your earliest convenience!
写作模板
首段:点明身份,描述困难。
My name is ________ (自我介绍). I'm writing the letter to you to ask for some help. I have met much difficulty in ________ (困难的事情).主体:求助原因,渴望得到帮助。
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce me to some good ways to ________ (解决该困难) so that I can deal with it more easily? In the meanwhile, I hope ________ (具体问题一). Also, I would like you to ________ (具体问题二).
尾段:表达感谢。
I will be very grateful if you do me the favor.
写作训练
(一)
(2024·江西·模拟预测)假如你是李华, 刚刚获悉你的澳大利亚笔友Jessica在她学校的“汉语歌唱比赛”活动中获得一等奖,请给她写一封英文信表示祝贺,并表示自己即将参加学校举行的英语歌唱比赛,请她为自己备赛提出建议。
注意:
1. 词数:80 左右;
2. 开头结尾已写出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jessica,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
(二)
(2024·河北沧州·三模)假设你是李华,希望在未来成为一名农业专家,但是你的家长并不支持,于是你给外教Alice写信,征求她的意见。内容包括:
1. 说明你的想法;
2. 家长反对的理由;
3. 征求老师的意见。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(三)
(2024·贵州·三模)假定你是李华,外教Annie想了解学生在英语学习中遇到的问题,你就此做了调查。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.调查结果;
2.希望得到帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Annie,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, sincerely
Li Hua
(四)
(2024·吉林·一模)假定你是李华,一名高三学生。英语作文读后续写这一项让你备受困扰。你计划向吉林大学张教授(此领域的专家)写一封求助信。希望他给予指导。内容包括:
(1)介绍困扰;(2)希望得到帮助。
注意: (1)词数 80 左右: (2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Professor Zhang,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(五)
(2024·江西吉安·模拟预测)假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”,请你给外教Johnson 写封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 请他推荐一部英文电影;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
(2024·广西贵港·模拟预测)假定你是学生会主席李华,近期计划组织以“Cross-Cultural Food Exhibition”为主题的活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写信,内容包括:
1.活动介绍;
2.征求建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(2024·河南·三模)假定你是李华,你在英语阅读过程中时常对一些习语感到困惑。请给外教Mr. Smith 写封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的困惑;
2.寻求帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(2024·山东威海·二模)假定你是李华,现已完成主题为“Food & Culture”英语演讲比赛的写作大纲,请给外教写一封邮件,简述大纲中你的观点和论证思路,并就此征求对方的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sara,
I’m seeking guidance on my speech outline about “Food & Culture”....
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’d greatly appreciate your thoughts and any suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
(九)
(2024·河北衡水·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你校将于下周末举办英语朗诵比赛(recitation competition),请给你的外教Mr. Wesley写一封电子邮件,请他给你指导一下英语发音。内容包括:
1. 朗诵比赛情况介绍;
2. 请求老师帮助;
3. 附带你的朗读录音。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Wesley,
How is everything going with you?
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(十)
(2024·湖北·三模)假定你是李华,是一名高一学生,进入高中之后你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给学校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.作业多,没有时间运动。
2.压力大,难以入睡。
3.希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kate,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(十一)
(2024·山西·二模)假定你是李华,暑假你准备去澳洲游学,为了更快地融入当地生活,你准备求助你的澳洲好友William。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.表达期望。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(十二)
(2024·重庆·二模)假定你是李华,你向你的外教Stephen 询问关于网络流行词“显眼包”(goof, class clown, laughing stock) 的使用。请你写一封信,要点如下:
1. 自己对英语的喜爱;
2. 如何使用网络流行词“显眼包”;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:
1. 词数80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Stephen,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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