高考题型逐个击破08 应用文写作升级之感谢信（必备素材，写作模版，写作训练）-2025届高三英语一轮复习闯关攻略

感谢信 必备素材 必备词汇 1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人 2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人 3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意 4.in trouble 陷入困境 5. make great／good progress 取得很大的进步 6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年 7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取 8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我 9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！ 10．As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移 11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助 12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴 13.pay a visit to. 去参观，拜访 14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解 15.a place of interest 名胜 提分表达 首段：表达真挚谢意 1. Thank you so much for your generous help. 非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。 2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help. 我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。 3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister. 谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。 4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me. 我很感谢你为我所做的一切。 5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help. 我想感谢你的帮助。 6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London. 我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。 7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help. 我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。 8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you. 为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。 中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处 1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English. 多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。 2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English. 要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。 3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor. 我太感谢你的帮助了。 结尾段：再次感谢 1.Thanks again for helping me. 再次感谢你对我的帮助。 2.Thank you again for your generous help. 再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。 3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks. 如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。 4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered. 我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。 5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）． 我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。 写作模板 模板① Dear ________(对象), I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear ______, How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果). During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因) Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢) Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿) Yours sincerely Lihua 写作训练 （一） （2024·北京朝阳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校这学期进行了一系列的英语讲座，上周邀请外教Jim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢并说明原因； 2.建议下周讲解的内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） （2024·河南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 难忘的一件事； 3. 你的祝福。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2024·辽宁辽阳·模拟预测）假定你是校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1．感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议; 2．希望有机会再次来节目做客。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （四） （2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1. 感谢邀请； 2. 作品简介。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （五） （2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （六） （2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教Mr Potter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢，内容包括： 1.对老师的辛勤工作表示感谢； 2.感谢老师对自己的教导和帮助； 3.表达对老师的祝愿。 注意：1.可适当补充信息，以使行文连贯； 2.词数为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.目前状况及感谢； 2.介绍健身计划。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Oliver, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （八） （2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （九） （2024·全国·模拟预测）假定你是李华。寒假里，你应美国朋友Mrs. Davis的邀请到芝加哥（Chicago）旅游。其间，你受到她们一家人的热心帮助和款待，使自己享受到了一个很愉快的旅行。请给Mrs. Davis写一封感谢信，并且希望她到中国游玩时住到自己家里。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mrs. Davis, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （十） （2024·辽宁·二模）假定你是李华。几个月前，你由于英语学习进步缓慢而感到沮丧，外教Mr. Smith给予了帮助。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示感谢； 2.回顾Mr. Smith对你的帮助； 3.你的感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 80个左右。 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （十一） （23-24高二上·浙江宁波·期末）假定你是李华, 最近你因在学业上遇到了困难而十分沮丧，你的英国朋友Edward推荐你读一些科学家的励志故事。阅读之后，你收获颇丰，打算写一封信给他，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 分享收获。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Edward, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua （十二） （2024·山东日照·一模）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，最近英文报开设了“英文诗歌创作”专栏，外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 表达感谢； 2. 回顾所提供的帮助。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Andy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 感谢信 必备素材 必备词汇 1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth. 因某事而感激某人 2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人 3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意 4.in trouble 陷入困境 5. make great／good progress 取得很大的进步 6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年 7. be admitted to/into a university 被一所大学录取 8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我 9. How time flies! 时间过得真快！ 10．As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移 11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help 多亏了你的帮助 12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴 13.pay a visit to. 去参观，拜访 14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解 15.a place of interest 名胜 提分表达 首段：表达真挚谢意 1. Thank you so much for your generous help. 非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。 2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help. 我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。 3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister. 谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。 4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me. 我很感谢你为我所做的一切。 5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help. 我想感谢你的帮助。 6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London. 我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。 7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help. 我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。 8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you. 为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。 中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处 1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English. 多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。 2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English. 要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。 3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor. 我太感谢你的帮助了。 结尾段：再次感谢 1.Thanks again for helping me. 再次感谢你对我的帮助。 2.Thank you again for your generous help. 再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。 3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks. 如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。 4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered. 我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。 5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）． 我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。 写作模板 模板① Dear ________(对象), I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear ______, How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果). During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因) Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢) Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿) Yours sincerely Lihua 写作训练 （一） （2024·北京朝阳·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你校这学期进行了一系列的英语讲座，上周邀请外教Jim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表达感谢并说明原因； 2.建议下周讲解的内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on English vocabulary learning. I’ve learnt really a lot from the lecture, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck of vocabulary memorization. However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in reading, especially when it comes to strange words. For example, I find it hard to guess the unfamiliar words when reading. Would you please give me some advice? Would you give a speech about the use of different words in different contexts next week? I would be really grateful if you could help me out. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校这学期进行了一系列的英语讲座，上周邀请外教Jim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座，请考生给他写一封邮件，表达感谢并说明原因并建议下周讲解的内容。 【详解】1.词汇积累 帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth. 克服：overcome→get over 困惑的：puzzled→confused 建议：advice→suggestion 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：For example, I find it hard to guess the unfamiliar words when reading. 拓展句：For example, I find that it is hard to guess the unfamiliar words when reading. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on English vocabulary learning. (运用了省略that或者which引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I’ve learnt really a lot from the lecture, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck of vocabulary memorization. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句) （二） （2024·河南·模拟预测）假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括： 1. 写信目的； 2. 难忘的一件事； 3. 你的祝福。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Miss Gao, I would like to write a letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for tomorrow’s Teachers’ Day. I remember one Monday I was reading in class when my stomach hurt. Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. You are a reliable teacher. I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life. Happy Teachers’ Day and wish you success in work and good health. Your student, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封感恩信，介绍自己最难忘的一件事，并表达祝福。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感谢：gratitude→thankfulness 立刻：immediately→right away 买：buy→purchase 照顾：take care of→look after 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. 拓展句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore which was next to the school to buy me some medicine. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. (运用了现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) （三） （2024·辽宁辽阳·模拟预测）假定你是校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人李华，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1．感谢他精彩的发言和真诚的建议; 2．希望有机会再次来节目做客。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in China”. Your insightful comments and valuable suggestions made for a truly memorable interview. The response from our listeners was overwhelmingly positive, and many have expressed their appreciation for your participation and the depth of your insight. We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experiences and knowledge with our community. We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future. Your insights and perspectives would be a valuable addition to our discussions. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为校电台访谈节目“Live in China”的主持人，上周五你校外教Mr. Smith接受了你的访谈，节目播出后反响很好这一情况，给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 见解：insights→ opinion 建议：suggestions→ advice 高兴的：delighted→ happy 宝贵的：valuable→ precious 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, “Live in China”.. 拓展句：I am writing to extend my sincerest gratitude for your participation on our radio program, whose theme is “Live in China”.. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experiences and knowledge with our community.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式to do作后置定语修饰willingness。） 【高分句型2】We would be delighted if you come back on the program in the future.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。） （四） （2024·辽宁沈阳·模拟预测）假定你是李华，从小练习国画，你的美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。请给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加，内容包括： 1. 感谢邀请； 2. 作品简介。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version 1 Dear Peter, Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature! I’d like to attend it and here briefly introduce my work. In line with the theme, I will create a traditional Chinese painting featuring my picturesque hometown. Trees and flowers will be highlighted with bright and vivid colors. The spectacular mountains and the crystal water are certain to impress you. When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development. Please let me know if you need any further details. Thanks again for this opportunity. Yours sincerely, Li Hua One possible version 2 Dear Peter, I am delighted to accept your invitation to the art exhibition themed “Amazing Nature”. Thank you for the fantastic opportunity and I am writing to give you a brief introduction of my work. The painting I created features the harmony of natural world. I am an enthusiast of both nature and art; therefore, my works are often full of elements of nature. You will be deeply impressed by the peaceful landscapes, elegant birds and delicate flowers in the paining, which is in line with the theme. Thanks again for the opportunity to demonstrate my passion for art and nature. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国朋友Peter邀请你参加主题为Amazing Nature的青少年画展。要求考生给他回复一封邮件，表示同意参加。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：attend→participate in 给人印象深刻：impress→make an impression on 对……感到惊奇：be amazed at→be astonished at 感激：thank→appreciate 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition themed on Amazing Nature! 拓展句：Thank you very much for inviting me to the painting exhibition which is themed on Amazing Nature! 【点睛】【高分句型1】When observing the painting, you will also be amazed at the achievements that have been made in sustainable development.（运用了状语从句的省略，that引导定语从句） 【高分句型2】Please let me know if you need any further details.（运用了条件状语从句） （五） （2024·山东·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris得知你在学校迷你马拉松比赛（mini-marathon）中获奖，来信向你表示祝贺并询问相关情况。请你给Chris回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 介绍赛前准备。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Chris, Thanks for your letter and for your question as well. Now I am delighted to share with you more details about the mini-marathon. Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. Be careful to avoid injury. Besides, you should stay confident and keep a good mood. As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. I think you can enter the one next year. Looking forward to your participation. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生向英国朋友Chris写信感谢他向你在学校迷你马拉松中获奖表达的祝贺，并介绍相关情况。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴：delighted→pleased 重要的：important→significant 避免：avoid→prevent 自信：confident→assertive 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. 拓展句：Before the race, it is important that we should practice running and do some physical training every day. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, the mini-marathon in our city is scheduled to take place every year, with hundreds of people participating in it. (运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Before the race, it is important to practice running and do some physical training every day. (运用了it作形式主语) （六） （2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教Mr Potter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢，内容包括： 1.对老师的辛勤工作表示感谢； 2.感谢老师对自己的教导和帮助； 3.表达对老师的祝愿。 注意：1.可适当补充信息，以使行文连贯； 2.词数为80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr Potter, I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. Firstly, I’d like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me! It’s you who cheered me up. Never will I forget what you said — doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instructions. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you all the best! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你被你心仪的大学录取了。请你给你在高中期间的外教Mr Potter写一封邮件表达对他的感谢。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感激：gratitude→thankfulness 表达：express→extend 高兴的：glad→delighted 快乐：happiness→joy 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instructions. 拓展句：I really appreciate your instructions because without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Never will I forget what you said — doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. (运用了否定词Never置于句首引起的部分倒装以及what引导的宾语从句) （七） （2024·河北承德·二模）假定你是李华，前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好。你的网友Oliver时常关心着你。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.目前状况及感谢； 2.介绍健身计划。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Oliver, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Oliver, This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence. I feel warm to have friends like you. Spring has arrived. A year’s plan lies in spring. I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said. Firstly, participate in more outdoor activities and breathe fresh air. Secondly, handle the relationship between learning and health correctly, and emphasize the role of physical health in learning. In the future, I will continue to communicate with you about this situation. I also wish you better health. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好，你的网友Oliver时常关心着你”这一情况，用英语写一封回复邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 缺乏：lacked→ was short of 增强，提升：strengthened → enhanced 参加：participate in→ take part in 强调：emphasize→ stress 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. 拓展句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, which led to my physical condition poor. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。） 【高分句型2】I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句。） （八） （2024·山东菏泽·一模）假定你是李华，你在你校上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。此前，你的交换生好友Peter给予了你很多帮助。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享获奖的喜悦； 2. 感谢他的帮助； 3. 邀请他到你家做客以表谢意。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week! This accomplishment is undoubtedly a result of your invaluable assistance. Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. I really appreciate your help. To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit. It would be a pleasure to have you as my guest and to thank you in person for all your help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Peter写封邮件，告诉他在上周举办的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，同时感谢他的帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→ excited 帮助：assistance→ help 至关重要的：crucial→ vital 感谢：appreciate→ thank 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial in helping me prepare for the competition. 拓展句：Your insights, suggestions, and encouragement were crucial, which helped me prepare for the competition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am thrilled to share with you that I just won the first prize in our school’s English speech competition last week!（运用了从属连词that引导的宾语从句。） 【高分句型2】To express my heartfelt gratitude, I would like to invite you to my home for a visit.（运用了非谓语动词中的动词不定式To express作目的状语。） （九） （2024·全国·模拟预测）假定你是李华。寒假里，你应美国朋友Mrs. Davis的邀请到芝加哥（Chicago）旅游。其间，你受到她们一家人的热心帮助和款待，使自己享受到了一个很愉快的旅行。请给Mrs. Davis写一封感谢信，并且希望她到中国游玩时住到自己家里。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mrs. Davis, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mrs. Davis, I am writing the letter to thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me when I stayed in Chicago during the winter holiday. Certainly, my visit to Chicago was truly memorable, thanks in no small part to your thoughtful hospitality. You certainly know how to make a guest feel at home! Your delicious meals were a treat, and your flexibility in adapting to my irregular schedule made many things possible. It was just because of the affection of your whole family that I could enjoy such a pleasing holiday. I hope your travels to China will soon realize. Plan on staying with my family, and we will look forward to more hours of enjoyment. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给Mrs. Davis写一封感谢信，并且希望她到中国游玩时住到自己家里。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感谢：thank→appreciate 难忘的：memorable→unforgettable 适应：adapt to→adjust to 因为：because of→due to 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I am writing the letter to thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me when I stayed in Chicago during the winter holiday. 拓展句：I am writing the letter so that I can thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me when I stayed in Chicago during the winter holiday. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing the letter to thank your whole family for the many kindnesses you showed me when I stayed in Chicago during the winter holiday.（运用了when引导时间状语从句） [高分句型2] It was just because of the affection of your whole family that I could enjoy such a pleasing holiday.（运用了强调句） （十） （2024·辽宁·二模）假定你是李华。几个月前，你由于英语学习进步缓慢而感到沮丧，外教Mr. Smith给予了帮助。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示感谢； 2.回顾Mr. Smith对你的帮助； 3.你的感受。 注意： 1.写作词数应为 80个左右。 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mr. Smith, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, How are you going? I want to take a moment to express my sincere gratitude for your invaluable assistance in improving my English. A few months ago, I was at a loss what to do because I had little progress in English. It’s your guidance and support that have made a significant difference to my academic performance. You not only helped me expand vocabulary but also directed me to improve my grammar. Most importantly, with your help, I have gained confidence in English and achieved results that I never thought possible. I have benefited a lot. Once again, thank you, Mr. Smith, for being such an outstanding teacher and mentor. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mr. Smiths写一封感谢信，就对方在英语上给与自己的帮助表示感谢。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 宝贵的：invaluable→precious 进步：progress→advance 帮助：help→assist 指导：direct→instruct 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：You not only helped me expand vocabulary but also directed me to improve my grammar. 拓展句：Not only did you help me expand vocabulary but also you directed me to improve my grammar. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s your guidance and support that have made a significant difference to my academic performance.（运用了It’s…that强调句型） 【高分句型2】Most importantly, with your help, I have gained confidence in English and achieved results that I never thought possible.（运用了that引导限制性定语从句） （十一） （23-24高二上·浙江宁波·期末）假定你是李华, 最近你因在学业上遇到了困难而十分沮丧，你的英国朋友Edward推荐你读一些科学家的励志故事。阅读之后，你收获颇丰，打算写一封信给他，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 分享收获。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Edward, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Edward， I want to convey my gratitude for recommending that I read some illuminating stories of scientists. Your suggestion came at a time when I was facing academic challenges and feeling quite disheartened. Learning about the struggles and breakthroughs of contemporary scientists has offered a fresh perspective on overcoming obstacles. It reminds me that setbacks are often part of the journey toward success. The resilience and passion displayed by these scientists have inspired me to take on challenges and regard them as chances for growth. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Edward写信，因他推荐你读一些科学家的励志故事而表示感谢，并分享收获。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想要做某事：want to do sth→would like to do sth 表达：convey→express 感谢：gratitude→thank 建议：suggestion→advice 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：I want to convey my gratitude for recommending that I read some illuminating stories of scientists. 拓展句：I want to convey my gratitude for recommending me to read some illuminating stories of scientists. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Your suggestion came at a time when I was facing academic challenges and feeling quite disheartened. (运用了关系副词when引导的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】It reminds me that setbacks are often part of the journey toward success. (运用了that引导宾语从句) （十二） （2024·山东日照·一模）假定你是校英文报编辑李华，最近英文报开设了“英文诗歌创作”专栏，外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1. 表达感谢； 2. 回顾所提供的帮助。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Andy, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Andy, I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry writing”column started by the English newspaper. I am grateful for what you have done for me. Without your patient guidance and continuous encouragement, I could not have made it. It was kind of you to set aside half an hour every day from your busy schedule to teach me how to write a poem. Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice. Thanks again for your generous help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇感谢信，感谢外教Andy在你参加“英文诗歌创作”活动中所提供给你的的支持和帮助。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感激的：grateful→thankful 指导：guidance→direction 友好的：kind→nice 此外：Besides→In addition 2.句式拓展 改为定语从句 原句：Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice. 拓展句：Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice, which played a very important role in winning the first prize. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry writing”column started by the English newspaper. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】I am grateful for what you have done for me. (运用了what引导的宾语从句) 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$