高考题型逐个击破07 应用文写作升级之建议信（必备素材，写作模版，写作训练）-2025届高三英语一轮复习闯关攻略

建议信 必备素材 建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。 具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly、 secondly、 thirdly或to begin/start with、 then、 later、 last but not least 等依次陈述建议。具体写作步骤为： 表明写信目的是提出建议 提出具体的建议并给出相应的理由 指出采纳建议的好处,表达愿望 提分句子 [首段句] 呈现问题,表明写作目的: (1)I am writing to express my views concerning/convey my concern about… (2)You have asked for my advice about…and I will try to make some suggestions. (3)In response to your letter telling me you hope to…, I have some ideas for you. (4)I’m sorry to hear you’re having difficulty/trouble in…; I’m only too willing to help you and my tips are as follows. [中段句] 介绍建议的内容并说明建议的好处: (1)I think the most suitable…for you is…, so that… (2)You’d better…/It’s better to…In that way,… (3)Why not do…?/What about doing…?/It’s strongly advised/suggested that you should…Thus,… (4)If I were you, I would…/It would be a good choice to…By doing that,… (5)In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you/more helpful to do… [尾段句] 希望建议有用或被接受: (1)I hope my suggestions can make a difference to you. (2)I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. (3)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. (4)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 写作模板 Dear Sir/Madam， I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to__________(引出对方需要建议的主题)． Here are a few suggestions. Firstly, it is important to__________(建议一). Then, it also helps to__________(建议二). Besides, it should be a good idea to__________(建议三). You can also __________(根据要求用不同的句式提出建议). As to__________(其他建议), I suggest__________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition，__________(其他建议). I'm sure, in that way/by doing that，__________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)． I hope you will find my suggestions useful and I'm looking forward to__________(表达愿望)． Yours， Li Hua 写作训练 （一） （2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： （1）说明问题； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christine, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （二） （2024·福建福州·三模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想要在学校举办中国传统文化展，希望你给他一些建议，请你向他推荐至少两个展示内容，并陈述理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear of your exhibition about Chinese traditional culture. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （三） （2024·天津和平·二模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国朋友Chris计划今年暑假来中国研学旅行（study tour），正在考虑选择哪所大学、参加科技项目还是文化项目，特写信向你征求建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）支持他来研学旅行： （2）阐述需要考虑的因素（如地域，课程特色等）； （3）研学期间相约游玩。 参考词汇：特色，专长：specialty 注意： （1）词数不少于100； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Dear Chris, I'm glad to hear that you’re coming to China for a study tour this summer. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin （四） （2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.使用教材的收获； 2.改进教材的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Professor Nunan, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua （五） （2024·福建福州·一模）假定设你是李华，你们班外教Chris要求每位同学针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给他写一封信，发表自己的看法。内容包括： 1. 分析原因； 2. 提出解决办法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Adele计划拍短视频向她的亲友介绍你们的校园生活，为此征求你的建议，请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐拍摄内容： 2. 陈述推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Adele, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua （七） （2024·湖南怀化·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack正在策划一次“了解中国茶文化”活动，他发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他回复，就活动内容提出建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （八） （2024·广东东莞·三模）假定你是李华，正在参加一个文化交流营（Cultural Exchange Camp），因生活习惯差异与外国室友产生分歧，如室友经常在晚上举办派对。向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰，内容包括： 1. 描述情况； 2. 个人建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Committee Office, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （九） （2024·山西运城·二模）假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐一种活动形式； 2. 说明理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （十） （2024·浙江绍兴·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友John 来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目，他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节，但不知道如何将文化节办好，请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括： 1.活动项目和意义；2.你给对方的鼓励。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十一） （2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （十二） （2024·河北张家口·三模）假定你是李华，你校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。内容如下： 1.你对社团的认识； 2.你的建议。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 建议信 必备素材 建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。 具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly、 secondly、 thirdly或to begin/start with、 then、 later、 last but not least 等依次陈述建议。具体写作步骤为： 表明写信目的是提出建议 提出具体的建议并给出相应的理由 指出采纳建议的好处,表达愿望 提分句子 [首段句] 呈现问题,表明写作目的: (1)I am writing to express my views concerning/convey my concern about… (2)You have asked for my advice about…and I will try to make some suggestions. (3)In response to your letter telling me you hope to…, I have some ideas for you. (4)I’m sorry to hear you’re having difficulty/trouble in…; I’m only too willing to help you and my tips are as follows. [中段句] 介绍建议的内容并说明建议的好处: (1)I think the most suitable…for you is…, so that… (2)You’d better…/It’s better to…In that way,… (3)Why not do…?/What about doing…?/It’s strongly advised/suggested that you should…Thus,… (4)If I were you, I would…/It would be a good choice to…By doing that,… (5)In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you/more helpful to do… [尾段句] 希望建议有用或被接受: (1)I hope my suggestions can make a difference to you. (2)I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. (3)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. (4)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 写作模板 Dear Sir/Madam， I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to__________(引出对方需要建议的主题)． Here are a few suggestions. Firstly, it is important to__________(建议一). Then, it also helps to__________(建议二). Besides, it should be a good idea to__________(建议三). You can also __________(根据要求用不同的句式提出建议). As to__________(其他建议), I suggest__________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition，__________(其他建议). I'm sure, in that way/by doing that，__________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)． I hope you will find my suggestions useful and I'm looking forward to__________(表达愿望)． Yours， Li Hua 写作训练 （一） （2024·安徽黄山·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Christine正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品，你认为该形式存在问题。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括： （1）说明问题； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Christine, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Christine, I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming English handwriting competition. As scheduled, our submissions are required to be handed in online. This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition. I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestion into account. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Christine写封邮件，说明正在筹办校英语书法大赛，要求学生线上提交作品存在的问题。 【详解】1.词汇积累 要求：require→ request 可能：likely→ probably 减少：reduce→ decrease 考虑：take … into account→ take … into consideration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. 拓展句：I consider it a better alternative that all participants should complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, such as our library, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.（不定式作宾语） 【高分句型2】This, however, is very likely to cause problems such as cheating, which may reduce the effectiveness of the competition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） （二） （2024·福建福州·三模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想要在学校举办中国传统文化展，希望你给他一些建议，请你向他推荐至少两个展示内容，并陈述理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear of your exhibition about Chinese traditional culture. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear of your exhibition about Chinese culture. I would like to offer my recommendations. As a passionate advocate for promoting cultural heritage, I believe that a section dedicated to traditional Chinese tea ceremonies would provide visitors with a sensory experience like no other. Also I suggest hands-on workshops be included where visitors can try their hand at traditional Chinese arts and crafts such as paper cutting, knot tying, or calligraphy. By connecting with the audience, the exhibition can offer a comprehensive exploration of Chinese traditional culture. Thank you for considering my advice. Looking forward to the opening of the exhibition. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友Peter想要在学校举办中国传统文化展，希望给他一些建议，要求考生按照要求向他推荐至少两个展示内容。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：recommendation→ suggestion 热情的：passionate→ enthusiastic 相信，认为：believe→ suppose 考虑：consider→take sth. into consideration 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：By connecting with the audience, the exhibition can offer a comprehensive exploration of Chinese traditional culture. 拓展句：By connecting with the audience, the exhibition can offer a comprehensive exploration of Chinese traditional culture, which is beneficial to the students. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As a passionate advocate for promoting cultural heritage, I believe that a section dedicated to traditional Chinese tea ceremonies would provide visitors with a sensory experience like no other.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，和过去分词作定语） 【高分句型2】 Also I suggest hands-on workshops be included where visitors can try their hand at traditional Chinese arts and crafts such as paper cutting, knot tying, or calligraphy.（运用了虚拟语气，where引导定语从句） （三） （2024·天津和平·二模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国朋友Chris计划今年暑假来中国研学旅行（study tour），正在考虑选择哪所大学、参加科技项目还是文化项目，特写信向你征求建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）支持他来研学旅行： （2）阐述需要考虑的因素（如地域，课程特色等）； （3）研学期间相约游玩。 参考词汇：特色，专长：specialty 注意： （1）词数不少于100； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Dear Chris, I'm glad to hear that you’re coming to China for a study tour this summer. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China for a study tour this summer. Since your customs are quite different from ours, and in order to make your stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to give you some advice. First, you need to consider the location of your study tour. It is quite cold here in winter, so you’d better wear heavy clothes when you are out. Additionally, you need to learn about the local customs in order to adapt to it soon. Besides, what is the most important is the course features. When choosing the courses, you need to take your specialty into account. Hope you can have a chance to play with me and I will accompany to some tourist attractions. Yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Chris计划今年暑假来中国研学旅行，正在考虑选择哪所大学、参加科技项目还是文化项目，特写信向考生征求建议，要求考生按照要求给他回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 为了：in order to→ so as to 舒服的：comfortable→ comfy 非常：quite→ extremely 重要的：important→ significant 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：First, you need to consider the location of your study tour. 拓展句：First, it is the location of your study tour that you need to consider. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Since your customs are quite different from ours, and in order to make your stay here safe and comfortable, I’d like to give you some advice.（运用了Since引导的原因状语从句） 【高分句型2】Besides, what is the most important is the course features.（运用了what引导的主语从句） （四） （2024·江苏南京·二模）假定你是李华，英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见。请给你所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.使用教材的收获； 2.改进教材的建议。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Professor Nunan, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Professor Nunan, Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I’m glad to share my thoughts. I find the textbooks incredibly beneficial. The well-selected materials, filled with intriguing stories and fresh opinions, have aroused my interest in language learning and opened up a new world for me. My language skills have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook. However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience. Thank you for considering my feedback. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英语教材出版社正面向学生征求使用意见，要求考生按照要求给考生所用教材的主编Professor Nunan写一封电子邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 搜集：gather→ collect 高兴的：glad→ pleased 想法：thought→ idea 难以置信地：incredibly→ fabulously 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My language skills have also been significantly enhanced with the help of the Workbook. 拓展句：It is with the help of the Workbook that my language skills have also been significantly enhanced. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you are gathering feedback on our English textbooks, I’m glad to share my thoughts.（运用了现在分词Learning作状语、that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】However, it would be better to include more interactive activities, such as role-plays or debates, to add more fun to our learning experience.（运用了it作形式主语、不定式作真正的主语） （五） （2024·福建福州·一模）假定设你是李华，你们班外教Chris要求每位同学针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给他写一封信，发表自己的看法。内容包括： 1. 分析原因； 2. 提出解决办法。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Chris, I am writing to share my thoughts on the phenomenon that many of us are hesitant to ask questions and lack of awareness in asking questions during English class. The reasons are as follows. Some students may be afraid of being judged or criticized for asking questions. Additionally, our education system often emphasizes memorization and test-taking, rather than critical thinking and inquiry. I think creating a more supportive and encouraging learning environment could help boost our confidence in asking questions. Organizing more interactive activities is also of equal significance. I’m confident that we can overcome this challenge under your guidance. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给Chris写一封信，发表自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 害怕：be afraid of→fear 强调：emphasize→stress 重要：significance→importance 克服：overcome→conquer 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I’m confident that we can overcome this challenge under your guidance. 拓展句：If you could offer some guidance, I’m confident that we can overcome this challenge. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to share my thoughts on the phenomenon that many of us are hesitant to ask questions and lack of awareness in asking questions during English class. (运用了that引导同位语从句) [高分句型2] I think creating a more supportive and encouraging learning environment could help boost our confidence in asking questions. (运用了动名词作主语) （六） （2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Adele计划拍短视频向她的亲友介绍你们的校园生活，为此征求你的建议，请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐拍摄内容： 2. 陈述推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Adele, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Adele, I’m writing to provide you with some suggestions for filming our campus life. As a foreign teacher, I believe your video will be a great way to introduce our school to your friends. Firstly, I would recommend that you film some of our classrooms and labs, which will give your viewers a sense of high-quality education we offer here. Secondly, you should capture some of the beautiful landscaping on campus and give your friends a sense of the serene environment we enjoy here. Last but not least, please film some of our students and teachers at work or play to showcase the friendly atmosphere. Best regards! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Adele写信，就她计划拍短视频的事提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→offer sb. sth. 首先：firstly→to begin with 应该：should→be supposed to 展示：showcase→display 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to provide you with some suggestions for filming our campus life. 拓展句：I’m writing to provide you with some suggestions which are related to filming our campus life. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, I would recommend that you film some of our classrooms and labs, which will give your viewers a sense of high-quality education we offer here.（运用了that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Last but not least, please film some of our students and teachers at work or play to showcase the friendly atmosphere.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语） （七） （2024·湖南怀化·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack正在策划一次“了解中国茶文化”活动，他发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他回复，就活动内容提出建议。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack. Learning that you are planning an activity named “Understanding Chinese Tea Culture”, I’m writing to offer you some advice. As for the content, I highly recommend a Chinese tea culture exhibition, where varieties of tea from different regions of China can be displayed so that visitors can gain a further insight into the history of Chinese tea culture. It’s necessary to hold a tea art performance, during which visitors can be given an opportunity to experience the tea-making process and taste different types of tea. Thus, they are bound to better understand Chinese tea culture. I hope these suggestions are helpful. If you prefer to know more, please don’t hesitate to let me know. May your activity be successful! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】这是一封建议信，要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Jack回复关于“了解中国茶文化”活动的建议。 【详解】词汇积累 建议：advice→ recommendation 举办：hold→ organize 机会：opportunity→ chance 成功的：successful→ fruitful 句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：I hope these suggestions are helpful. 拓展句：I sincerely hope that these recommendations prove to be beneficial. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】Learning that you are planning an activity named “Understanding Chinese Tea Culture”, I’m writing to offer you some advice.（使用了现在分词短语作状语） 【高分句型 2】As for the content, I highly recommend a Chinese tea culture exhibition, where varieties of tea from different regions of China can be displayed so that visitors can gain a further insight into the history of Chinese tea culture.（使用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句、so that连接的目的状语从句） （八） （2024·广东东莞·三模）假定你是李华，正在参加一个文化交流营（Cultural Exchange Camp），因生活习惯差异与外国室友产生分歧，如室友经常在晚上举办派对。向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰，内容包括： 1. 描述情况； 2. 个人建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数80词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Committee Office, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Committee Office, I, Li Hua, am writing due to a challenge I face with my foreign roommate. There are significant lifestyle differences causing some disagreements. Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. I kindly request the office to mediate and suggest setting party rules or providing separate accommodation options for those with different lifestyles. If you could take my opinion into account, I would be grateful. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰。 【详解】1.词汇积累 明显的：significant→obvious 具体来说：specifically→to be specific 建议：suggest→advise 考虑：take into account→take into consideration 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. 拓展句：Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, which disrupts my sleep and daily schedule. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Specifically, my roommate often hosts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] I kindly request the office to mediate and suggest setting party rules or providing separate accommodation options for those with different lifestyles. (运用了动名词作宾语) （九） （2024·山西运城·二模）假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐一种活动形式； 2. 说明理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear you plan to organize an activity with the theme of environmental protection. And I’m willing to offer my advice. I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. Biking is familiar to a majority of people, so the race will definitely attract many participants, contributing to spreading the awareness of environmental protection. Moreover, it’s such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green practice. I hope my idea is helpful and that your event will be a great success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面属于应用文，新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，要求考生回复一封邮件，向他推荐一种活动形式并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： ①环保：environmental protection → environmental conservation ②鼓励：encourage → inspire/motivate ③绿色出行：green travel → eco-friendly transportation/sustainable commuting ④意识：awareness → consciousness 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：And I’m willing to offer my advice. 拓展句：And I’m willing to offer my advice which I hope can be of assistance. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Moreover, it’s such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green practice.(such...that引导的结果状语从句) （十） （2024·浙江绍兴·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友John 来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目，他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节，但不知道如何将文化节办好，请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括： 1.活动项目和意义；2.你给对方的鼓励。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear John, Hearing that you are in charge of holding the Chinese Culture Festival at school, I’m writing to give you some advice. To begin with, it’s highly recommended that the festival should consist of paper-cutting, calligraphy and Chinese art paintings, which indicate Chinese traditional culture and convey the beauty of Chinese art. Additionally, some Chinese activities, Lion Dancing for example, can be included to motivate students’ love for Chinese culture. To sum up, the programme not only gives your peers deep ins ight into Chinese culture but builds up interaction between British and Chinese people. I hope my ad vice will be of help to you and I’m looking forward to your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生给英国朋友John回信，给出关于如何策划中国文化节的建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：To begin with→Firstly 表达，传递：convey→express 此外：Additionally→Moreover 总之：To sum up→In a word 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Additionally, some Chinese activities, Lion Dancing for example, can be included to motivate students’ love for Chinese culture. 拓展句：Additionally, what motivates students’ love for Chinese culture, Lion Dancing for example, should be taken into account. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are in charge of holding the Chinese Culture Festival at school, I’m writing to give you some advice.（运用了现在分词Hearing作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】To begin with, it’s highly recommended that the festival should consist of paper-cutting, calligraphy and Chinese art paintings, which indicate Chinese traditional culture and convey the beauty of Chinese art. （运用了固定句型it’s highly recommended that...以及which引导的非限制性定语从句） （十一） （2024·广东深圳·三模）假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为 80 左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Dear Mike, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Mike, Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers. May your entry stand out in the competition! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的交换生Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 想法：idea →opinion 安全：security →safety 因此：therefore →thus 确信：convinced →sure 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.（运用了虚拟语气） 【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语） （十二） （2024·河北张家口·三模）假定你是李华，你校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。内容如下： 1.你对社团的认识； 2.你的建议。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 School clubs play an important role in enriching students’ campus life, promoting students’ abilities and developing students’ interests. In my opinion, it is best to follow some principles to join clubs. First of all, the club you choose must be relevant to your interests and strengths. Secondly, don’t try to attend every club, which will affect your normal study. Finally, it is better to join the club under the guidance of the teacher, so that you can avoid blindly following the trend. I hope all students can develop their own specialties and hobbies while studying well. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议，要求考生按照要求用英语写一篇短文并投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→ significant 提升：promote→ improve 相关的：relevant→ related 参加：attend→ participate in 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Finally, it is better to join the club under the guidance of the teacher, so that you can avoid blindly following the trend. 拓展句：Finally, to avoid blindly following the trend, you had better join the club under the guidance of the teacher. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, it is best to follow some principles to join clubs.（运用了it作形式主语、不定式to follow作真正的主语） 【高分句型2】Secondly, don’t try to attend every club, which will affect your normal study. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$