专题04 书面表达(2017-2024年浙江高考真题)-备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(浙江专用)

备战2025年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(浙江专用) 第一期 专题04 书面表达(2017-2024年浙江高考真题) 1．（2024年新高考I卷高考真题）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： （1）你完成的作品； （2）你的感想。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted. In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 决定：decide→determine 整个的：entire→whole 提供：offer→provide 总之：in a word→in short 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. 拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers. 【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句) 2．（2024·浙江·高考真题）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动； 2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答： Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons. First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with 首先：first→above all 减轻：combat→relieve 提高：improve→enhance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语) [高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句) 3．（2023年浙江卷高考真题）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                     Getting to Know the Plants Around Us    Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.    The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.     Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 参与：participate in → attend 开始：begin → start 观察，调查：observe → survey 震惊：strike → astonish/surprise 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union. 拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句） 4．（2023年新高考I卷高考真题）  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） 5．（2022·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括： 1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Michael, Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it? Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 由……组成：consist of→ be made up of 位于：be located on→ be situated on 与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to 预定：reserve→book 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. 拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.（of which引导的非限制性定语从句） [高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.（过去分词作状语） 6．（2022·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。 注意： 1 . 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Chris, How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.    I hope we can keep in touch often. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。 【详解】1.词汇积累 返回：come back to → return to 思念：miss→ yearn 分享：share → exchange 玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun 开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content 过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.   拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.（运用了定语从句） 【高分句型2】It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.（运用了强调句型和定语从句） 【高分句型3】What’s far more important is that we became good friends then.（运用了主语从句和表语从句） 7．（2021·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 介绍活动安排； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】Distinguished guests, On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting. At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students. As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience. 【导语】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。 【详解】1.词汇积累 诚挚的：sincere→ genuine 首先：at first → first of all 欣赏：appreciate →admire 期待：expect→ look forward to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. 拓展句：At first, it is of great significance that you could fully understand the school. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students. (运用了强调句型) 8．（2021·浙江·高考真题）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括： 1. 展览时间、地点; 2. 观展感受; 3. 推荐观展。 注意：1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】     In order to enrich students’ after-school life, an exhibition of students’ traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school, which sparks a growing love for traditional art. The exhibition is held on the first floor of the school litrary. Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.     Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also you will be able to understand the art of traditional Chinese paintings better. The exhibition will last for two weeks, and every student is welcome to visit. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高度赞扬：think highly of→sing high praise for 激发：spark→stimulate 欣赏：admire→appreciate 探索：explore→detect 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The exhibition will last for two weeks, and every student is welcome to visit. 拓展句：The exhibition will last for two weeks, during which every student is welcome to visit. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Most of the students think highly of this exhibition，which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】 Through the exhibition,  not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also will you be able to understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better. (运用了部分倒装) 9．（2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。 注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter, I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now? I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。 结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。 要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now?）      2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）      3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery） 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery 第三步：连词成句 1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. 2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. 3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. 4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如： I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。 Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。 As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。 2.使用了一些固定词组，如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 10．（2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括: 1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。 注意: 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear George,      I'm writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.      The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.      Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners.com. I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.                                               Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。 第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。 第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.运用了定语从句；I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。 11．（2019·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 表示感谢； 2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助； 3. 临别祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Alex, Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help. Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。 【详解】1. 审题立意 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。 2.谋篇布局 书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。 3. 关键词和句子 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。 【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次 12．（2019·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括： 1. 行程信息； 2. 钱包特征； 3. 联系方式。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London. I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me. Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com Thank you for your time and support. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【分析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信 【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。 第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane, on arrival…, I found it gone. it must have……Has anybody happened to find it? Thank you for your time and support. 第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。 第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】【高分句型1】 What’s worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。What’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。 【高分句型2】 I’d appreciate it if you could help me to get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。 13．（2018·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括： （1） 口语能力： （2） 相关经验； （3） 应聘目的。注意： （1） 词数80左右； （2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】One possible version: Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association. I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students. I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。 第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。 第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for…，a good command of English，communicate with，get along with等。 第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。 第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 14．（2018·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信，内容包括： 1.时间 2.一同过节的家人 3.活动 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr. Hall,     I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place. Best wishes Li Hua 【分析】本文是一篇书信类作文。要求给外教Mr. Hall写封信，邀请他到你家过春节。 【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求： 1. 介绍同学们的听说训练情况； 2. 希望提供更有效的学习方法; 3. 询问对方的意向。 第二步:列提纲 celebrate the Spring Festival， have a big dinner，make dumplings，able to come，pick up 第三步：连词成句1. I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January19. 2. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner. 3. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala onTV. 4. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考） 表因果关系：so 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. 本句是典型的书信开头句，表达写信的目的。 [高分句型2]It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there.本句是so连接的并列句。 [高分句型3]If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.if在本句引导条件状语从句。 15．（2017·浙江·高考真题）第一节  应用文写作 假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括： 1. 参加者； 2. 时间、地点； 3. 活动：登山、野餐等。注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Chris, How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7:00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain. Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don’t have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It’s just up to you. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。 【详解】本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。根据提示要求，本文要涵盖以下三点内容，1. 参加者；2. 时间、地点；3. 活动：登山、野餐等。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。 【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m very honored to invite you to join us touring to the Green Hill this Saturday. 我非常荣幸邀请您加入这周六我们到绿山的旅行。I’m very honored to...非常荣幸做某事 【高分句型2】 I hope you can take my advice into consideration. 我希望你能考虑一下我的建议。运用宾语从句，take…into consideration顾及；考虑到…… 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$