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近年建议信真题回顾赏析 2024北京卷 新中国成立75周年，介绍新中国主要的发展成就 2023新Ⅰ+II卷 针对外教老师随机挑选两人为一组进行口语练习提出自己的建议 2023北京卷 关于“绿色北京”社团活动的建议。 2022年乙卷 课堂外英语学习的建议 2021年乙卷 Be smart online learners的学习建议 2021甲卷 你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris, 向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。 2019年北京卷 你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息（交通出行；必备衣物） 2019年天津卷 英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。 2017北京卷 你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。请你给出建议。 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear Jim, I hope you are doing well. Delighted to hear that you are writing an article for Asia. Today about the 75th anniversary of New China, I am writing to share my suggestions. It is a good option to write about China's fast economic growth. Over the past 75 years, China has changed from a farming country to the world's second-largest economy, showing how quickly China has developed. Another helpful strategy is focusing on China's amazing new technology, such as high-speed trains, space exploration, and renewable energy, all of which show that China is now a leader in technology and innovation. If I were you, I would discuss China's efforts to reduce poverty, which have lifted millions of people out of poverty and improved the lives of many people. These points not only highlight important achievements but also help readers understand how China has become such an important country. I hope these suggestions help! If you need more information, feel free to ask. Best regards, Li Hua 【2023全国I+II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件， 内容包括：1.说明问题 2.提出建议 注 意：1.写作词数应为80个左右 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. Knowing you plan to pair up students randomly for oral practice, I'm writing to share my ideas. I am afraid it is unwise to pair up students randomly for oral practice. If the two students who are poor at English are in the same group, they may have trouble communicating in English. Therefore, pairing students with different levels or learning styles cannot help them make progress and is likely to make them frustrated. To encourage their involvement and achieve better results, you had better divide the students based on their levels. By doing so, not only can you improve their oral English, you can also strengthen their cooperation. I hope you can take my suggestions into account. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【2023北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua Dear Jim,     I’m thrilled to hear that you’re organizing the “Green Beijing” event, and I’d like to offer some suggestions for the activity content, which includes promoting green travel and garbage classification.     To highlight the importance of green travel, you can organize an event of riding shared bikes together. With the same clothes and banners “Green Beijing”, the event is sure to attract citizens’ attention and raise their awareness of green travel. Regarding garbage classification, if I were you, I would organize an educational workshop, where relevant experts can be invited to discuss the impact of improper waste disposal on the environment and enlighten us how to better classify garbage.     I hope these suggestions help you to plan your event more effectively and increase environmental awareness in Beijing. Please feel free to let me know if you need any further support. Best regards, Li Hua [2022年乙卷] 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 学习活动状况描述： 2. 简单评论; 3. 你的建议。 注意：词数100左右; 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. A recent survey has been conducted on how to learn English beyond the classroom. As can be clearly seen from the chart, students listening to English songs account for 65%, compared with 50% watching English movies. Those who read English books makeup 18%, with another 12% visiting English learning websites. It is obvious that students attach greater importance to entertainment than traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English. From my perspective, the best way is the one that suits you. I hope students can choose what suits them best, so that they can find pleasure in learning English beyond the classroom. 【2021年乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1.分析优势与不足； 2.提出学习建议。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.题目和首句已为你写好。 满分范文1 Be smart online learners Online learning has recently become an increasingly important way to study. Its convenience and flexibility won over a significant number of students. For one thing, it allows us to learn by ourselves without time and space limits. For another, it can offer us a variety of learning materials. However, it can sometimes be boring through lack of face-to-face interaction. Worse still, because of lack of self-discipline, some students study very inefficiently. As far as I am concerned, we should develop a good habit of online learning. Turn off our cellphones and close irrelevant web browser windows when studying online. Only in this way can we avoid distraction and improve learning efficiency. Each of us should strive to be smart online learners. Thank you for listening. 【2021年甲卷】假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1.阐明写信事由； 2.征求建议； 3.表示感谢。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Chris. A class meeting on the theme of traditional Chinese culture will be held in our school and presented on an English website. I'm writing to consult you about some information on this topic. As is known to all, China has abundant and unique culture with a long history, such as ancient costumes, tea culture, Chinese opera, and traditional handcraft. From your perspective, which ones appeal to foreign friends the most? Do you have any suggestions, or can you put forward alternatives if possible? Thank you for your suggestions and your early reply will be greatly appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 【2019北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。 注意: 1.词数不少于50； 2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear Jim, I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China. I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities. Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you. Looking forward to your arrival. Yours, Li Hua 【2019天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件: ⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； ⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； ⑶希望从中有何收获。 注意： ⑴词数不少于100； ⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； ⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin Dear Chris, I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation. When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you for your time. Yours, Li Jin 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$