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2024模拟题建议信汇编 ---From 2024年各地100套一模试题 模拟题来源 内容 主题 1. 绍兴市高考科目诊断性考试 无法适应新校园生活而焦虑 人与自我 2. 广东省广州市一模 图书馆前绿化的绿化建议 人与自然 3. 24届高三一轮总复习验收考试 校国际网站增加互动栏目的建议及理由 人与社会 4. 湛江市2024年普通高考测试(一) 学习中国成语的建议 人与自我 5. 2024年高考诊断性测试 “课前3分钟演讲”活动的改进建议 人与社会 6. 2024届山西省省际学校一模 丰富课余生活的建议 人与自我 7. 北京市房山区一模 英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，询问你的建议 人与自我 8. 长春市 2024 届高三质量监测 远离快餐食品的建议 人与社会 9. 北京市西城区一模 询问关于校园文创设计大赛的建议 人与社会 10. 河北省衡水市部分一模 征求“城市漫步”（Citywalk）活动的改进建议 人与社会 11. 长沙市一中适应性演练 因故不能赴约道歉并提出建议 人与社会 1. [2023年11月绍兴市高考科目诊断性考试] 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David刚升入高中，但因一时无法适应新的校园生活而焦虑，写信向你倾诉他的烦恼。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 分析可能的原因； 2. 给出合理的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear David, I’m sorry to hear that you feel confused and anxious as a freshman at senior high school. I truly understand your situation since I’ve been there. Going to senior high school is really a big challenge, especially when you face the higher academic pressure and new interpersonal relationship. However, you can make it easier by following some golden rules. First, work out an appropriate schedule — good time management helps reduce your stress. If necessary, turn to the school adviser for help, who is experienced in tackling tricky problems for students like you. Finally, stay positive all the time, because a positive attitude sparks extraordinary results. I really hope the suggestions will be of benefit to you. All the best! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2. [2024届广东省广州市第三中学高三下学期一模模拟考英语卷] 学校新建图书馆前的空地即将绿化，现征求学生的建议。假如你是李华，请给校英语报Colorful Campus编辑Martin写封邮件，内容包括： 1.绿化布局； 2.设计理由。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Martin, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear Martin, Hearing our school is to green the empty space in front of the new library, I would like to share my suggestions. Colorful flowers can be planted in the east part where students will enjoy the beauty of nature. Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section providing students with a place to study and relax. Besides, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, reflecting the culture of our school. Thank you for considering my opinion. I hope our school will become more beautiful. Yours, Li Hua 3. [24届高三一轮总复习验收考试] 12月3日，在克罗地亚一场精彩的中国民族舞蹈表演吸引了国内外关注，获得了中国外交官的点赞。假定你是李华，你校国际部的网站正在就改版征求学生建议。你觉得这个网站缺少一个中外学生可以互动的社区功能和介绍中国文化的栏目。请你给该网站负责人写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你的建议； 2. 陈述你的理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Sir/Madam, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to suggest that the website should include a community function for Chinese and foreign students to interact and a section for introducing Chinese culture Firstly, it would allow us to communicate with foreign students on the website, make new friends and learn about different cultures. It’s crucial for us to have a platform to share our culture with them. Secondly, the Chinese culture section would help foreign students learn and understand more about China, and would also help them better adapt to the life in China, promoting inclusiveness and diversity in our campus community. I hope you can take my advice into account. Best regards Li Hua 4. [湛江市2024年普通高考测试(一)] 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Paul给你发邮件说他对中国成语感兴趣，想学习更多的中国成语。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 你对中国成语的认识； 2. 学习中国成语的建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Paul, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Paul, How are you? I’m excited to receive your last email and learn about your passion for Chinese idioms. Chinese idioms are an essential part of the Chinese language, history and culture. Behind each of them there is a story, which implies important lessons about life. There are a lot of texts, images and videos on the Internet about them, from which you can learn a great deal. It’s also beneficial to search for sentences containing the idioms you are learning. I believe your knowledge about China will be enriched through your exploration of Chinese idioms. Hopefully, we can share our ideas about them. Yours, Li Hua 5. [长沙市一中2024届高考适应性演练（一）] 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 表达歉意并说明原因； 2. 提出建议并给出理由。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 注意书信格式。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jim, How is everything going? We have planned to go for a walk in Haidian Park this weekend, where we could enjoy the beautiful scenery of early spring. But I am afraid I couldn’t make it. I was severely injured in a soccer game last night. The doctor examined me carefully and told me that I had to stay in bed for at least one week. I asked him whether there was any possibility that I could recover faster, yet the answer was negative. My condition doesn’t allow me to go anywhere until my legs are fully recovered. It is a pity for me to miss this trip that I have been longing for. Shall we put it off until next weekend if the weather permits? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 6. [2024届山西省省际学校高三下学期一模考试英语试题] 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Terry来信询问你丰富课余生活的建议，请你回复，内容包括： 1.你的建议； 2.你的理由； 3.你的祝愿。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Terry, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear Terry,     How is everything going? I’m writing to give you some suggestions on how to enrich your after-school life.     Above all, you are supposed to do sports regularly, which can keep you healthy and in good spirits. Additionally, I suggest that you have more communication with your friends and family because it can make you feel less bored and lonely. Last but not least, make the most of your free time by participating in some after-school activities or school clubs. Only in this way can you live a rich and colorful life.     Hopefully, you’ll enjoy your free time soon. Yours, Li Hua 7. [2024届北京市房山区高三下学期一模英语试题] 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 推荐他上哪所大学； 3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：1. 词数100 词左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear Jim, You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. Welcome to Beijing! I strongly recommend Peking University to you. It offers the best courses of Chinese history and philosophy. Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture. As for preparation, I suggest you surf the Internet for some relevant information about this university, such as its history and development, its academic performance and various departments. Moreover, you had better learn some Chinese in order to communicate with others better on campus. Hope my suggestions will be of some help. If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. I couldn’t wait to see you next semester in Beijing! Yours, Li Hua 8. [长春市 2024 届高三质量监测(一)] 假定你是李华，你们学校近期开展以“Say No to Fast Food”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： 1.快餐食品的危害； 2.你的建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为 80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear friends, 9. [2024届北京市西城区高三下学期一模英语试题] 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和你校交换生Jim准备联合参加学校组织的校园文创设计大赛(Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition), 请给Jim发邮件，内容包括： 1. 分享你的创意; 2. 询问Jim的建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear Jim, How is it going? I’ve just had a “light bulb” moment for our entry in the upcoming Campus Cultural and Creative Design Competition, and I can’t wait to share it with you to get your thoughts. How about creating a series of bookmarks? On one side, we’ll have our school motto, and on the flip side, breathtaking illustrations showcase our campus throughout the four seasons. Each bookmark will capture a special moment or scene that perfectly reflects the essence of that particular season. I really think this idea not only nails the competition theme but also offers a practical yet visually stunning product that truly represents the spirit of our school. What do you think? Would love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions you might have! Yours, Li Hua 10. [2024届河北省衡水市部分高中高三下学期一模] 假定你是校英文社长李华，上周外教James参加了你社举办的“城市漫步”（Citywalk）活动，徒步游览了湖边绿道（lakeside greenway）, 请给他写一封邮件邀请地对这次活动做出反馈，内容包括； 1. 活动感受； 2. 改进建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear James, I hope you enjoyed the citywalk event organized by our English Club last week, where we explored the lakeside greenway. We would be grateful if you could share your thoughts on the following aspects. First, we are eager to know about your overall experience during the walk. Please feel free to share any positive highlights or memorable moments from the excursion. More importantly, as we strive to enhance our events, we kindly request your suggestions on how to make our citywalks more organized and enjoyable. It would be wonderful if you could recommend some fun activities. Your feedback is greatly appreciated. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 11. [2024年高考诊断性测试] 假定你是李华，从上学期以来，外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动，你觉得活动很好，但存在不足之处。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．你对活动的评价； 2．说明问题并提出改进建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Mary, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mary, I really appreciate the activity “Pre-class 3-minute English Speech”, which boosts our speaking skills and confidence. However, I’ve noticed some problems needing to be solved. The students crazy about English are always seizing the opportunity to present themselves, leaving shy students no chance. So I suggest making some adjustments. First, students can take turns giving presentations to guarantee everyone an equal chance to express themselves. Moreover, you can require students to review each other’s speeches in groups, which will not only greatly reduces the error rate but also improves their writing skills. I'd appreciate it if my advice could be considered. Yours, Li Hua 2 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$