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专题08 应用文之求助信 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 形式 话题 2020 2020全国III卷 提纲式 请求外教对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件，请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金，以实现某个目标或完成某项任务。通常，求助信会详细说明请求帮助的原因、需要的具体支持以及如何使用这些支持。 【写作方法】 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容: 1.表明写信目的，请求帮助。 2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。 3.希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。 *** 素材宝库 *** 【常用句式】 1、首段常用语 ① Hearing you have much experience in ... , I am writing to ask you for help. 听说您在......方面很有经验，在此我写信向您求助。 ② I have some difficulty in doing ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做......方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。 2、主体部分常用语 ① I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with ... What's more ... What troubles me most is ... 我遇到的三个问题很困扰我。首先 ...... 另外 ...... 最困扰我的是 ...... ② Unfortunately, I find it quite difficult to do ... 不幸的是，我觉得做 ...... 很困难。 3、结尾常用语 ① Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on ... ? 面对以上问题，我渴望得到您的帮助。您能给予一些关于....... 的建议吗？ ② I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me. 我想知道您能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果您能帮我，我真的感激不尽。 【写作模板】 Dear _____________，      I am Li Hua, a student from ×××school. (正式一些的求助信需要进行自我介绍) / How are you doing these days? (求助熟悉的人需要寒暄问候一下) I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. (说明写信目的) / I wonder whether I could ask you to do me a favor. (正式一点的求助）      Faced with so many problems, I have to turn to you for help. First, I have trouble in ________遇到的困难1_________. What’s more, _____遇到的困难2______ is also very difficult for me to do. (中间段具体说明困难) Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to_________so that I can ________more easily? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.       I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.（表达谢意，期待来信） *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2020全国III卷】 假定你是 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括: 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 结束语已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【广州市2024年第二次模拟考试】 你校英文报将增设主题为“讲好中国故事”的栏目。你是栏目负责人李华，请给外教Kate写邮件咨询她对栏目的建议。内容包括：1.介绍设想；2.咨询建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Kate, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【浙江省精诚联盟2023-2024学年高二上学期返校考英语试题】 假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华，在排练课本剧《百万英镑》The Million Pound Note中At The Tailor’s这一幕时遇到一些困难，希望得到同样酷爱戏剧表演的外教Betty老师的指导。你发邮件邀请她来排练现场，并请求她的帮助。内容包括：1.发出诚挚邀请：2.说明排练难处：3.请求现场指导。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Betty, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【天台中学2023年秋季学期高一年级】 假定你是李华，你校要举办英文短剧展演，你们小组改编了一个关于友情的英文短剧，准备参赛。请你给你的外教Harry写一封邮件，请他帮忙指导，内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.指导时间和地点。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Harry, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题08 应用文之求助信 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 形式 话题 2020 2020全国III卷 提纲式 请求外教对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件，请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金，以实现某个目标或完成某项任务。通常，求助信会详细说明请求帮助的原因、需要的具体支持以及如何使用这些支持。 【写作方法】 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容: 1.表明写信目的，请求帮助。 2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。 3.希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。 *** 素材宝库 *** 【常用句式】 1、首段常用语 ① Hearing you have much experience in ... , I am writing to ask you for help. 听说您在......方面很有经验，在此我写信向您求助。 ② I have some difficulty in doing ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help. 我在做......方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。 2、主体部分常用语 ① I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with ... What's more ... What troubles me most is ... 我遇到的三个问题很困扰我。首先 ...... 另外 ...... 最困扰我的是 ...... ② Unfortunately, I find it quite difficult to do ... 不幸的是，我觉得做 ...... 很困难。 3、结尾常用语 ① Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on ... ? 面对以上问题，我渴望得到您的帮助。您能给予一些关于....... 的建议吗？ ② I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me. 我想知道您能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果您能帮我，我真的感激不尽。 【写作模板】 Dear _____________，      I am Li Hua, a student from ×××school. (正式一些的求助信需要进行自我介绍) / How are you doing these days? (求助熟悉的人需要寒暄问候一下) I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. (说明写信目的) / I wonder whether I could ask you to do me a favor. (正式一点的求助）      Faced with so many problems, I have to turn to you for help. First, I have trouble in ________遇到的困难1_________. What’s more, _____遇到的困难2______ is also very difficult for me to do. (中间段具体说明困难) Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to_________so that I can ________more easily? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.       I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.（表达谢意，期待来信） *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2020全国III卷】 假定你是 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括: 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 结束语已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Miss Evans, How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards! Yours truly, Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。 结构：总分总法 第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient 第三步：连词成句 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【广州市2024年第二次模拟考试】 你校英文报将增设主题为“讲好中国故事”的栏目。你是栏目负责人李华，请给外教Kate写邮件咨询她对栏目的建议。内容包括：1.介绍设想；2.咨询建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Kate, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s new column “Sharing Chinese Stories”. I am writing to seek your advice on this column. The column will share China's history, culture, science and technology, education and other topics in the form of short stories, to make China voice better heard. How do you think we can better tell Chinese stories to our exchange students? Plus we find ourselves in a dilemma on how to attract more readers.We are also wondering if there is any better way to improve the quality and impact of our program. We would appreciate it if you could give us some advice of value. Your favorable reply will be highly expected. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【浙江省精诚联盟2023-2024学年高二上学期返校考英语试题】 假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华，在排练课本剧《百万英镑》The Million Pound Note中At The Tailor’s这一幕时遇到一些困难，希望得到同样酷爱戏剧表演的外教Betty老师的指导。你发邮件邀请她来排练现场，并请求她的帮助。内容包括：1.发出诚挚邀请：2.说明排练难处：3.请求现场指导。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Betty, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Betty, I'm Li Hua, president of the English Drama Club. It is really a headache for us to rehearse the scene, At The Tailor's from the textbook play The Million Pound Note. Given that you are an enthusiast in dramatic performances, we would like you to give us your expert guidance. First and foremost, the adaptation of this scene and the lines baffles us a lot, because the students have limited vocabulary and cannot devote too much time to the rehearsal. I wonder if you could help us to adapt the lines together? What also concerns us is how to combine the lines with the players’ body language, making the play accurate in expression and vivid in performance. Your presence and guidance are highly expected. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【天台中学2023年秋季学期高一年级】 假定你是李华，你校要举办英文短剧展演，你们小组改编了一个关于友情的英文短剧，准备参赛。请你给你的外教Harry写一封邮件，请他帮忙指导，内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.指导时间和地点。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Harry, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Harry, I'm Li Hua from Class 1, Senior 1. An English short play show organized by the school is scheduled to be held. My group chose friendship as the theme and adapted the play. I am writing to ask for your help in providing us with some professional guidance. Our play is mainly about two students who have a disagreement over academic problems. Neither of them, however, can let go of the friendship. They apologize to each other and make up eventually. Despite the simple story, it is really a headache for us to express ourselves with body language. Every day at 4 p.m. will witness our rehearsal in Room 101 on the first floor of the Art Building. Your guidance is highly expected. Looking forward to your favorable reply. Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$