专题05 应用文之短文投稿-【妙笔生花】2025年高考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

专题05 应用文之短文投稿 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 形式 话题 2023 2023全国甲卷 提纲式 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 2022 2022全国甲卷 提纲式 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 2021 2021新课标I&II卷 提纲式 庆祝Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 投稿，通常会有特定的主题，如你最敬爱的人等等，话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。 【写作方法】 把握投稿的写作框架。其写作框架如下： 第一段：开门见山，引出话题。 第二段：介绍主题人或事物细节。 第三段：表达愿望。 *** 素材宝库 *** 【常用句式】 第一部分：引出话题 1.as we all know,..../ as is known to all,....众所周知...... 2.it is widely acknowledged that....人们普遍认为... 3.Nowadays, with the development of..../ with the increasing popularity of ... 如今，随着...的发展/流行 when it comes to ....当谈到...时 4.In the long span of the Chinese history...在中国漫长的历史中...... 5.When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life. 说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 第二部分：介绍主题细节 1．Nowadays many students care too much about high grades, which contributes to growing inappropriate behaviors in exams.现在许多学生过于关心高分，导致考试中的不当行为增多。 2．Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns. 如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。 3．Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others. 打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。 4．As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet. 作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。 5．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 第三部分：表达愿望 1.I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and enjoy more popularity. 我真诚地希望青年能取得更大的成功，更受欢迎。 2.I believe that with the tips above we will become smart online learners． 我相信，有了以上提示，我们将成为聪明的在线学习者。 3.For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals. 首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。 【写作模板】 Dear _____________，     I'd like to ask/invite you to write an article for 某媒体某栏目，which provides a nice platform for某媒体受众to do sth. It carries articles written by XXX concerning Chinese cultures.     Would you please write something about XXX?You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.        结尾1:If you are interested, you are supposed to subscribe your article by Sep.10.     结尾2:Could we have your article before Sep.10? I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2023全国甲卷】 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【2022全国甲卷】 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性； 2. 保护海洋的倡议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【2021新课标I&II卷】 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 读报的经历； 2. 喜爱的栏目； 3. 期望和祝福。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Youth and Me *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【成都石室中学2023-2024学年度下学期2024届三诊模拟】 针对当前大多数学生不重视书写的现象，你校英文报正在征集此方面的文章。请写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.描述现象；2.分析原因并建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Value Good Handwriting ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【2024年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试浙江卷】 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1.介绍这项运动：2.说明推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【河南省顶尖计划联盟2023-2024学年高一上学期期中大联考】 随着杭州亚运会的成功举办，运动健将们又得到了全民的关注。你校英文报正在以体育为主题进行征稿，请你写一篇短文进行投稿，描述一位擅长体育运动的同学或朋友。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题05 应用文之短文投稿 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 形式 话题 2023 2023全国甲卷 提纲式 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 2022 2022全国甲卷 提纲式 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 2021 2021新课标I&II卷 提纲式 庆祝Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 投稿，通常会有特定的主题，如你最敬爱的人等等，话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。 【写作方法】 把握投稿的写作框架。其写作框架如下： 第一段：开门见山，引出话题。 第二段：介绍主题人或事物细节。 第三段：表达愿望。 *** 素材宝库 *** 【常用句式】 第一部分：引出话题 1.as we all know,..../ as is known to all,....众所周知...... 2.it is widely acknowledged that....人们普遍认为... 3.Nowadays, with the development of..../ with the increasing popularity of ... 如今，随着...的发展/流行 when it comes to ....当谈到...时 4.In the long span of the Chinese history...在中国漫长的历史中...... 5.When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life. 说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。 第二部分：介绍主题细节 1．Nowadays many students care too much about high grades, which contributes to growing inappropriate behaviors in exams.现在许多学生过于关心高分，导致考试中的不当行为增多。 2．Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which arouses social concerns. 如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。 3．Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with others. 打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。 4．As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet. 作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。 5．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience. 第三部分：表达愿望 1.I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and enjoy more popularity. 我真诚地希望青年能取得更大的成功，更受欢迎。 2.I believe that with the tips above we will become smart online learners． 我相信，有了以上提示，我们将成为聪明的在线学习者。 3.For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals. 首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。 【写作模板】 Dear _____________，     I'd like to ask/invite you to write an article for 某媒体某栏目，which provides a nice platform for某媒体受众to do sth. It carries articles written by XXX concerning Chinese cultures.     Would you please write something about XXX?You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.        结尾1:If you are interested, you are supposed to subscribe your article by Sep.10.     结尾2:Could we have your article before Sep.10? I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2023全国甲卷】 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond. Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 著名的：well-known → famous 人物：figure → person 强调：emphasize → stress 基础：foundation → basis 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语) 【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【2022全国甲卷】 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性； 2. 保护海洋的倡议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is. All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves. 【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 越来越：more and more→increasingly 重视：place importance on→attach importance to 重要的：key→significant 此外：what’s more→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation. 【点睛】 [高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构) [高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型) [高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句) 【2021新课标I&II卷】 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 读报的经历； 2. 喜爱的栏目； 3. 期望和祝福。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Youth and Me 【答案】 Dear Editor-in-Chief， Congratulations on the 10th anniversary of Youth. I have been a devoted reader since I subscribed to the newspaper. Obsessed with it, I read each issue from cover to cover. It boasts a variety of columns, of which Chinese culture is my favorite. The series of contents not only introduces abundant cultural knowledge but also values the inheritance of brilliant culture and strengthens our cultural confidence. As a fan of Youth. I recommend that it will be better if it carries some articles about the life of foreign teens and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。这是一篇针对报纸创刊10周年投稿的文章。通过审题，我们可以确定，本文主要以第一人称进行展开和叙述。文章可以用三段式的结构。第一段简明表示对报刊创办10周年的祝贺。第二段是文章的主体，主要阐述阅读报纸的经历和喜爱的栏目。第三段表达对报纸的期望和祝福。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 建立：found→establish 沮丧的：depressed→upset 此外：besides→what’s more 得到：receive→obtain 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. 拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【成都石室中学2023-2024学年度下学期2024届三诊模拟】 针对当前大多数学生不重视书写的现象，你校英文报正在征集此方面的文章。请写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.描述现象；2.分析原因并建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Value Good Handwriting ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Value Good Handwriting In recent years, there has been an increasing tendency among students to overlook the significance of handwriting. Many students’ handwriting are so poor as not to be recognized in class, and a sharp rise in corrections and mistakes in homework and exams has been brought into public focus. For one thing, technological advancements have made it accessible for students to rely on electronic devices instead of writing by hand. For another, the focus on speed and efficiency results in low standards. To address this issue effectively, regular calligraphy competitions and handwriting instruction courses are strongly recommended. Additionally, students are encouraged to practice by choosing a suitable copybook and develop a good writing habit. Let us pass on this valuable cultural skill while shaping a more promising future for ourselves. 【2024年1月普通高等学校招生全国统一考试浙江卷】 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1.介绍这项运动：2.说明推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody! As we all know, exercise can build up our health and improve our mood. Tai Chi, in my opinion, is the top recommendation of the exercise between classes. Added to the World Intangible Cultural Heritage List, Tai Chi focuses on the perfect combination of wisdom and strength, making it a kind of traditional Chinese boxing with a mix of maintaining temperament, strengthening fitness and fighting against others. Not only will it give us a deep insight into the profound traditional Chinese culture, it will also free us from the academic pressure. 20-minute exercise a day keeps the doctor away. Let’s stand up and exercise! 【河南省顶尖计划联盟2023-2024学年高一上学期期中大联考】 随着杭州亚运会的成功举办，运动健将们又得到了全民的关注。你校英文报正在以体育为主题进行征稿，请你写一篇短文进行投稿，描述一位擅长体育运动的同学或朋友。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A sports talent who impressed me deeply Sport knows no borders. It is the athletes in the Asian Games who definitely deserve our admiration. Not only did they achieve excellent results in the big events, they also won honor for our country and therefore enhanced our national pride. The athletes around us, however, are also worthy of being well thought of. Among them, Li Hua, my classmate, impressed me the most. Despite being a sports enthusiast who has not participated in any events, his love for sports, persistence and perseverance have a great effect on every individual around him. Encouraged by him, the students have joined him in the early exercise, which has strengthened their fitness as well as relaxed themselves. This is Li Hua, a sports talent who has given us positive energy and set a good example for us! 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$