专题04 应用文之建议信-【妙笔生花】2025年高考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

专题04 应用文之建议信 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 形式 话题 2024 2024北京卷 提纲式 介绍中国的发展成就 2023 2023新课标I&II卷 提纲式 对学生分组提出建议 2023北京卷 提纲式 “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 建议信是向收信人针对某事提出自己的建议或忠告，以便让对方接受自己的想法，主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。 【写作方法】 建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分： （1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。 （2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 （3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。 *** 素材宝库 *** 【常用句式】 第一部分：说明写信的目的 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起…… During the afternoon, we’ll...together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。 Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分：提出建议 我建议…… I’d like to suggest that… May I suggest that…? In my opinion… I would like to make a recommendation that… I am writing to advise… If I were you, I would… 第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! （给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 【写作模板】 Dear ________,        I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _________(别人求助内容). Here are my suggestions. / You have asked me for my advice with regard to__________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.      To get started, you had better _________(建议一). Besides, it’s a good idea to _________(建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to _________(建议三).        With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will _________(成功解决问题). / I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your__________(祝愿) Best wishes,                                                               Yours, Li Hua *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2023新课标I&II卷】 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【2023北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【浙江省杭州市2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末】 假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Noah正在策划一项主题为“探寻中国文化”的课外实践活动，写信征询你的建议。请你给他回一封信，内容包括：1.活动建议及理由；2.鼓励与祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Noah, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2024年湖北省八市高三3月联考】 假定你是李华，你的笔友Jack因高三学习压力增大，总为一些小事对家长或同学发脾气，为此他很懊恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【2024年河南省普通高中毕业班高考适应性测试】 假如你是李华，你校计划举行以“Fly Your Dream”为主题的英语周活动。现就活动的内容、形式征集建议，请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题04 应用文之建议信 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 形式 话题 2024 2024北京卷 提纲式 介绍中国的发展成就 2023 2023新课标I&II卷 提纲式 对学生分组提出建议 2023北京卷 提纲式 “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 建议信是向收信人针对某事提出自己的建议或忠告，以便让对方接受自己的想法，主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，针对遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。 【写作方法】 建议信要给出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，而且提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要得当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。 一般来说，建议信可分为三个部分： （1)开头；开门见山，简要陈述事由，简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点，注意语气。 （2)主体；说明建议的内容，对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简 明扼要，目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 （3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。 *** 素材宝库 *** 【常用句式】 第一部分：说明写信的目的 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起…… During the afternoon, we’ll...together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。 Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分：提出建议 我建议…… I’d like to suggest that… May I suggest that…? In my opinion… I would like to make a recommendation that… I am writing to advise… If I were you, I would… 第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! （给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 【写作模板】 Dear ________,        I was glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _________(别人求助内容). Here are my suggestions. / You have asked me for my advice with regard to__________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.      To get started, you had better _________(建议一). Besides, it’s a good idea to _________(建议二). Last but not least, I think the most efficient way is to _________(建议三).        With all the factors taken into consideration, I’m sure you will _________(成功解决问题). / I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your__________(祝愿) Best wishes,                                                               Yours, Li Hua *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【2023新课标I&II卷】 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括； 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） 【2023北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 【详解】 1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→tip 提供：offer→provide 开展：carry out→conduct 主题：theme→topic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【浙江省杭州市2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末】 假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Noah正在策划一项主题为“探寻中国文化”的课外实践活动，写信征询你的建议。请你给他回一封信，内容包括：1.活动建议及理由；2.鼓励与祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Noah, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Noah, I hope this email finds you well! Learning that you are planning an extra-curricular practice of "Exploring Chinese Culture", I am writing to share with you some of my suggestions. Practice Chinese calligraphy is my top recommendation. As a unique art form in China, calligraphy is a mix of Chinese characters and beauty, showcasing the essence of Chinese culture. Plus it is also preferable to practice Tai Chi. Focusing on the perfect combination of wisdom and strength, Tai Chi is a traditional Chinese boxing that gives you a deep insight into the profound traditional Chinese culture, and frees you from the academic pressure. I hope my advice is of some help to you and wish you a complete success! Yours, Li Hua 【2024年湖北省八市高三3月联考】 假定你是李华，你的笔友Jack因高三学习压力增大，总为一些小事对家长或同学发脾气，为此他很懊恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Jack, I learn that the increasing academic pressure is becoming a headache for you. Actually, it is not uncommon for senior three students of your age to lose your temper with parents and classmates. So just take it easy and here comes my advice. It always comes first to do exercise, such as running, climbing, playing basketball, and the like, so that you can relieve yourself both physically and mentally. Balancing your work and play to guarantee your study efficiency is also preferable, Equally important is to communicate with your parents and friends to gain their understanding and support. I hope my advice is of some help to you. Looking forward to your breaking free from your bother. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 【2024年河南省普通高中毕业班高考适应性测试】 假如你是李华，你校计划举行以“Fly Your Dream”为主题的英语周活动。现就活动的内容、形式征集建议，请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chris, I am glad to learn that our school is scheduled to hold an English week activity of "Flying Your Dreams". This activity, I believe, will be of extraordinary significance. And here comes my proposal. Themed with "dream", it would be preferable to focus on the diversity in various forms of the big event. On the top of my list are stage activities, ranging from painting and speech contests, to the English song performance. Flying kites is another alternative. Every individual can make a kite with a dream on it and fly their dreams. Not only will it stimulate the students' interest, it will also improve their hands-on ability, killing two birds with one stone. I hope my suggestions are of some help and wish this event a complete success! Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$