Unit 1 Penfriends 单元话题满分范文必背-2024-2025学年八年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（牛津上海版）

Unit 1 Penfriends 单元话题满分范文必背 1．Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the situation given.（根据所给情景写一篇短文，字数不少于60词。） Situation: Suppose your class are having a discussion about what kind of pen friend you would like to have. Please write about your opinions and give reasons.（假设你们班里正在进行一项讨论，主题是关于希望拥有怎样的笔友，请谈谈你的想法和理由。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： All kinds of friends play an important role in our life. I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties. Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger. A friend in need is a friend indeed. There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again. I wish I will have such a pen friend in the near future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕主题进行发挥，适当拓展，注意语言流畅，逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述朋友的重要性； 第二步，讲述自己想要拥有的笔友是怎么样的； 第三步，表达希望能拥有这样的笔友。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中起重要作用 ②be willing to do sth.愿意做某事 ③cheer up振作起来 [高分句型] ①I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties.（who引导的限制性定语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句） ②Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger.（although引导的让步状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句） ③There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again.（that引导的同位语从句；when引导的时间状语从句） 2．Writing(作文) 82. Write a letter of at least 60 words to your pen friend, introducing yourself (给你的笔友写一封信介绍你自己，不少于60词） Dear _________, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, ________________ 【答案】I am Helen, I live in Shanghai, China. I am 12 years old and my birthday is in November. I can speak Chinese and a little English, I can talk with foreigners. My hobbies are swimming and reading, reading can make our spirit clearer, swimming can make us keep healthy, I also like going to the movies with my friends and family. My favourite subject is English, it is so interesting. Can you write to me soon? 【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时，把邮件的姓名以及结尾的姓名写清楚。 例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述自己的个人情况；时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍自己描写细致，整体条理清晰。 高分亮点： 短语：speak Chinese and a little English；talk with foreigners；keep healthy；write to me。 句型：My hobbies are swimming and reading, reading can make our spirit more clear, swimming can make us keep healthy；Can you write to me soon? 3．假设你是王红，你的笔友林芳来信，说她转学到一所新的学校，没有朋友，又碰上数学考试没有考好，感到既难过又孤独。请你给她写封回信，安慰她并给她一些建议，帮助她解决现在的难题。 参考要点： 1. 必须写出安慰的话语； 2. 给出合理的建议：可多参加各种活动；多交朋友；可找老师和朋友谈谈；…… 要求： 1. 词数：80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总数)； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Lin Fang, I’m sorry to hear that… __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Lin Fang, I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble in your life. Don’t worry too much and don’t lose heart. I understand your feeling very well, so I will give you some advice. You went to a new school and had a new life. It is normal that you don’t have any friends. But you can be active and communicate with others. Besides, you can join some clubs. I think you will have many friends gradually. You said you didn’t do well in the math exam. Don’t feel upset. Math is a little difficult, but if you can work harder and do your best, you will make progress. Why not ask your teacher for help? Cheer up. Believe in yourself. I think you will be better soon. Good luck! Yours, Wang Hong 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出写作目的，是为了安慰她并给她一些建议； 第二步， 给出一些合理的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达鼓励。 [亮点词汇] ①ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 ②do well in擅长 ③make progress取得进步 [高分句型] ①Math is a little difficult, but if you can work harder and do your best, you will make progress. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②I think you will be better soon. (宾语从句) 4．每年的7月30日是“International Day of Friendship”，值此佳季，你校 English Club 即将开展以“朋友”为主题的短视频分享活动。假如你是李辉，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，为你的短视频配文。 内容包括： （1）你对朋友的定义； （2）你的一段经历； （3）你的感悟。 注意： （1）词数不少于 80词； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Hello, everyone! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Most of us have some friends. So do I. I think that a good friend will never let you down and always help you when you are in trouble. I’m so lucky to have such a good friend who have helped me a lot.  His name is Tom. One day, I did so badly in a math test that I could’t help crying. When he saw this, he came to cheer me up and encouraged me. Besides, he taught me how to learn math. With his guidance and help, I made progress soon in my math. I can always remember how he taught me math patiently. Day by day, we shared happiness and sadness together and became best friends.     Although friends may have difficult time, we are always there to help and support each other. I am thankful that I can make friends with Tom because he makes me a better person in my growth. I hope that our friendship will last forever.     Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是发言稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“大多数人都有朋友。我也一样。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——朋友的定义、经历、感悟等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”。 [亮点词汇] ①be in trouble处于困境中 ②could’t help crying禁不住哭 ③cheer me up为我加油 [高分句型] ①When he saw this, he came to cheer me up and encouraged me. (when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope that our friendship will last forever. (宾语从句) 5．你是否有曾经被你的朋友帮助或者帮助过朋友的经历呢？学校校刊邀请你来写一篇短文，请根据以下思维导图，介绍你的朋友，以及一次你被朋友帮助或者帮助朋友的经历。注意: 不得出现真实的人名和学校的名字；语句连贯；词数80左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My best friend Jim is an outgoing and warm-­hearted boy. He is tall and strong. He likes all kinds of sports. He is really nice to me. I still remember one thing that happened last year. It was Friday. I got the result of my English exam. I didn’t do well. I thought it was the worst thing in the world and felt really sad. Then, Jim came to me and told me a joke to let me forget about the result. And it really worked. I laughed and felt better. He also gave me some advice on learning English. His words and advice really helped me a lot. I hope we can try our best to help our friends when they need us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给思维导图完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的好朋友是谁、朋友的外貌及爱好； 第二步，介绍好朋友与自己之间发生的事情； 第三步，谈论自己的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①outgoing爱交际的 ②happen发生 ③joke笑话 ④advice建议 ⑤try one’s best to尽最大努力 [高分句型] I hope we can try our best to help our friends when they need us.(省略that的宾语从句；when引导时间状语从句) 6．朋友是我们为自己选择的亲人，虽然没有血缘关系，但是真正的朋友会像亲人一样，给我们带来诸多温暖与陪伴。你最好的朋友是谁呢？请根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 提示：1. 你最好的朋友是谁； 2. 你和他（她）有哪些相同和不同之处； 3. 你认为朋友之间应该怎样相处。 要求：1. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2. 词数：70左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 It’s believed that everyone needs friends and friendship plays an important part in our lives. I have many friends and my best friend is a beautiful and kind girl called Linda. Linda and I have been friends for many years. We both like reading a lot and we often spend time reading together. However, we have quite a few differences. Linda is much more outgoing than me, and she brings me lots of happiness every day. I always get better grades than she does, so I often help with her study. I don’t think friends should be the same as long as they understand each other. I hope our friendship will last forever and both of us can become better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述友谊的重要性，并介绍自己的好朋友是谁； 第二步，介绍自己和好朋友的相同和不同之处； 第三步，谈谈朋友之间应该怎样相处。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important part 起重要作用 ②as long as 只要 [高分句型] ①Linda is much more outgoing than me, and she brings me lots of happiness every day. (and连接的并列句) ②I don’t think friends should be the same as long as they understand each other. (as long as引导的条件状语从句) 7．每个人都离不开朋友，朋友是雨中递来的伞，是支援的手，是善意的笑脸，友谊让我们的生活变得更精彩更有意义。你校英文周刊正以“My best friend”为题征稿，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的好朋友李华。 内容要点： 1.你朋友的基本信息（外貌，性格，爱好）； 2.你们是如何成为好朋友（起因，经过，结果）； 3.你想对他/她说的话及祝福。 写作要求： 1.必须包含所有内容要点； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得透露个人信息； 4.词数80左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：share happiness and sadness (分享快乐和悲伤), hard-working (adj. 努力的), cherish (v. 珍惜), forever (adv. 永远) My best friend A life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friends play an important role in our lives. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My best friend A life without a friend is a life without the sun. Friends play an important role in our lives. My best friend is Li Hua. He is tall and has black hair and big eyes. Li Hua is hard-working and outgoing, and always ready to help others. He likes basketball and he is good at playing it. Li Hua has helped me a lot since we met each other for the first time. I was very interested in a singing competition, but I was afraid to sing in front of others. Li Hua encouraged me to try and told our music teacher about this. I got lots of help from our teacher. Finally, I got the first prize. Since then, we have become good friends. I really want to say “Thank you” to him and we will share happiness and sadness in the future and cherish our friendship forever! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：要求以“My best friend”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍朋友的重要性以及自己的好朋友是谁； 第二步，具体介绍你们是如何成为好朋友； 第三步，表达自己想跟朋友说的话。 [亮点词汇] ①be ready to 愿意做某事 ②be good at 擅长 ③each other 彼此 ④encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I was very interested in a singing competition, but I was afraid to sing in front of others.（并列句） ②I really want to say “Thank you” to him and we will share happiness and sadness in the future and cherish our friendship forever!（并列句和并列结构） 8．英语里有句谚语“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”。朋友在我们的生活中是不可或缺的。假如Tony是你最好的朋友，请你以“My Best Friend”为题，根据下面的要点提示写一篇英语短文。 要点：1. How did you become friends? 2. Your wish for your friendship (友谊). 要求：1. 语句通顺，表述连贯，书写工整； 2. 短文须包含所有要点提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 词数：70词左右（短文开头部分已给出，且不计入总词数）。 My Best Friend Tony is my best friend. We have been friends ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Best Friend Tony is my best friend. We have been friends since Grade 7. I used to be poor at English and I didn’t know how to improve it. Tony is good at English and he gave me a lot of help and advice in learning English. With his help, I made great progress in English. We became good friend as time went on. Whenever I meet with trouble, he’d like to help me. It’s lucky for me to be friends with Tony. I hope our friendship will be forever and forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生要记得补全短文开头，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全短文开头； 第二步，具体阐述你们是如何成为朋友的； 第三步，表达对于你们友谊的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①be poor at不擅长 ②improve提高 ③make great progress取得巨大的进步 [高分句型] ①Whenever I meet with trouble, he’d like to help me.（whenever引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope our friendship will be forever and forever.（省略that的宾语从句） 9．假如你是朱迪(Judy)，请你以“My Best Friend”为题，写一篇英语短文，发表在学校的英语校报上。 提示： 1. Who is your best friend? 2. What is he/she like? 3. Why did he/she become your best friend? 4. …… 要求： 1. 不要出现真实姓名和学校； 2. 80词左右，要点齐全，语句通顺； 3. 书写认真规范，书写分占3 分。 My Best Friend ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Best Friend Hello, everyone! My name is Judy. I’m a student in No. 1 Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my best friend. My best friend is my classmate. Her name is Mary. She is a tall and thin girl, who wears a pair of glasses. She is friendly and nice and always ready to help others. Last term, I had some trouble with English. When I was worried, Mary came to help me. She encouraged me to work harder and taught me how to study English well. She provided me with trust and help. With her help, my English improved a lot. I even won an English speaking competition at school. Since then, we have been close friends. This is my best friend—Mary. Do you want to make friends with her? 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍自己的基本情况，引出话题——介绍最好的朋友； 第二步，介绍朋友的姓名、外表、性格等情况； 第三步，叙述过去发生的一件事情，促使她/他成为你最好的朋友； 第四步，书写总结。 ［亮点词汇］ ① since then 自那以后 ② have trouble with 遇到麻烦 ［高分句型］ ① When I was worried, Mary came to help me.  (when引导时间状语从句) ② She is a tall and thin girl, who wears a pair of glasses.  (who引导非限制性定语从句) 10．假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办一次题为“A real friend of mine”的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下要点提示完成你的征文。 要点提示： 1. 朋友间的一次经历； 2. 朋友必备的品质； 要求： 1. 词数：80 词左右。 2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A real friend of mine Everyone has his or her best friend. When I was in middle school, one of my classmates sat right beside me. His name is Chen Liang. He is my unforgettable person in my life. I remembered my math was not good at that time, but he was good at solving math questions. I failed in one exam and I was very sad. I asked him how to solve those difficult questions. He was so patient and polite to help me. Gradually, I built my confidence at math and finally passed the exam. A true friend should be kind and helpful. Friends are like books. You don’t have a lot of them as long as they are good. 【详解】【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为征文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：按照要点内容进行写作，重点谈谈和朋友间的一次经历，具体发生了什么，并谈谈自己的感受，可适当添加细节，突出写作的重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，结合文章要求，可开门见山介绍自己的一个好朋友； 第二步，介绍和朋友之间发生的一件难忘的事，具体阐述发生了什么，他或她是怎么帮助你的； 第三步，结合发生的这件事，谈谈自己的感受和对友谊的看法。 【亮点词汇】 ①be good at doing sth.擅长于做某事 ②build one’s confidence建立自信心 ③as long as只要 【高分句型】 ①When I was in middle school, one of my classmates sat right beside me.（when当……时候，引导时间状语从句） ②I remembered my math was not good at that time, but he was good at solving math questions. （be good at doing sth. 擅长干某事） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$