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Unit 1 Food matters
Writing 专训讲练
假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Jack来信向你询问中国的传统食物。你打算向他介绍中国的传统食物粽子。请从粽子的做法由来及寓意等方面给他回信。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数
【参考词汇】 糯米stickyrice 爱国主义的 patriotic
写作题目
Step 1: 拆 题 定 段
拆题干 主 题:
人称:
时态:
定三段 第一段:
第二段:
第三段:
向朋友介绍中国的传统食物粽子
第三人称
一般现在时
引出话题
粽子的做法、由来及寓意
表达祝愿
Step 2: 激 活 素 材
1. 用本单元所涉及的单词或短语填空
(1) ________________adj. 传统的
(2) ________________adj. 最喜欢的
(3) _______________ 中国的各种食物
traditional
favourite
various Chinese foods
Step 2: 激 活 素 材
2. 用本单元所涉及的语块或语法完成句子
(1) 我很高兴向你介绍粽子,中国的一种传统食物。
It is my pleasure to introduce zongzi to you, ________________
a traditonal Chinese food
Step 2: 激 活 素 材
2. 用本单元所涉及的语块或语法完成句子
(2)在中国的各种食物中, 粽子也是我最喜欢的一种。
Zongzi is ________________________
also my favourite among various Chinese foods
Step 2: 激 活 素 材
2. 用本单元所涉及的语块或语法完成句子
据信,人们最初把粽子做好后撒入河中是为了保护古代爱国主义诗人屈原的尸体不被鱼破坏。(believe)。
_____________________zongzi was originally cooked and thrown into rivers to protect the body of Qu Yuan, an ancient patriotic poet, from being spoilt by fish.
It's believed that
Step 3: 连 句 成 篇
Dear Jack ,
lt is my pleasure to introduce zongzi to you , a traditional Chinese food, which is also my favourite among various Chinese foods.
It is believed that zongzi, generally made of sticky rice or other fillings wrapped in bamboo leaves, was originally cooked and thrown into rivers to protect the body of Qu Yuan , an ancient patriotic poet from being spoilt by fish. Since then, in honor of the great patriotic poet , eating zongzi on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year has become a tradition across China.
Hope my introduction is helpful to you !
Yours,
Li Hua
【高分表达】
语句赏析
①从句: 定语从句
(which is also ...Chinese foods)
【高分表达】
语句赏析
(2)非谓语:
过去分词短语 generally made of...fillings wrapped in bamboo leaves 作定语;
being spoilt by fish 作介词宾语;
eating zongzi on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year 作主语
【高分表达】
语句赏析
③固定句式:
It is my pleasure to do sth. ;
It is believed + that 从句
Thanks for your attention
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