附录部分（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

附录部分 新高考作文评分标准 应用文写作评分原则 1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。 2.评分时应主要从内容组织，词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为： (1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表达的清楚程度和合理性。 (2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 (3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后 给分。 4.评分时还应注意： (1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。 (2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用 法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。 (各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档(13-15分】 能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。 第四档(10-12分) 能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。 第三档(7-9分】 能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。 第二档(4-6分) 能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达 第一档(1~3分】 只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。 读后续写评分原则 1.本题总分为25分，按五个档次进行评分。 2.评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为： (1)续写内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。 (2)所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 (3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 3.评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后 给分。 4.评分时还应注意： (1)词数少于120的，的情扣分： (2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用 法均可接受： (3)书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分 【各档次给分范围和要求】 (1)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接非常合理，文章内容新颍、丰富、合理，非常 第五档（很好）】 有逻辑性，续写完整： (21-25分) (2)所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，语言错误很少，且完全不影响意义表达： (3)自然有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑，全文结构非常清晰，前后呼应， 意义非常连贯。 (1)与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整： 第四档（好） (2)所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，表达比较流畅，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达： (16-20分) (3)比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较 连贯。 161 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 (续表) (1)与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接，与原文情境基本相关， 第三档（适当）】 但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强： (11~15分) (2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，个别部分影响意义表达： (3)应用简单的语句间连接成分，使上下文内容连贯，全文结构基本清晰。 (1)与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接，内容和逻辑上有一些问 第二档 题，续写不够完整： (6-10分) (2)语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达： (3)较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。 (1)与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差，内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄写原文， 第一档（差） 续写不完整，与原文情境脱节： (1-5分) (2)使用的语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义 的表达： (3)缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。 应用文写作高频黄金句式4大类31句 ·首段必背句式· 1.Knowing that you are interested in the charity bazzar held by our class on the afternoon of May 25th on our school playground,it is more than delighted to write more details to you about the activity.得知您对5月25日下午我们班在 学校操场举行的义卖活动很感兴趣，我们很高兴给您写信详细介绍这次活动。 2.More than delighted to learn that you are keen on the coming seminar,I'm writing to inform you of the details as ollows..得知你对即将到来的研讨会很感兴趣，我非常高兴，我写信通知你如下细节。 3.Great joy wells up from the bottom of my heart the moment I am informed that you are due to sign up for the competition.当我得知你要报名参加比赛的那一刻，我的内心涌起了巨大的喜悦。 ·首段必背过渡句· l.In order to organize it successfully,we made full preparations..为了成功组织，我们做了充分的准备。 2.Now I will introduce something about my holiday.现在我将介绍一些关于我的假期. 3.When it comes to the band that I love most,Ican't help thinking of the Beatles..说到我最喜欢的乐队，我不禁想到了披 头士乐队。 4.In response to your email asking for help with regard to the competition,I feel honored to lend you a hand.回复你关于 比赛的邮件，我很荣幸能帮你一把。 5.Here are some approaches to using our eyes correctly.这里有一些正确使用眼睛的方法。 。中段必背经典句· I.First and foremost,you are advised to practice speaking more from now on.首先，我建议你从现在开始多练习口语。 2.Last but not least,when and where shall I meet and give you a hand?最后但并非最不重要的是，我什么时候在哪里见 你，帮你一把？ 3.The seminar is due to be held from3:00p.m.to5:00p.m.on Tuesday.研讨会定于星期二下午三点至五点举行. 4.As scheduled,the seminar will be held in the lecture hall,lasting two hours from3:O0p.m.按照计划，研讨会将在演 讲厅举行，从下午3点开始，持续两个小时。 5.Ir's such a golden chance for you to get exposed to Chinese culture that you can'tafford to miss it.这是你接触中国文化 的黄金机会，你不能错过。 6.Whenever I look back on the wonderful time we spent together.I just can't help thinking of what you have done for me. 每当我回忆起我们一起度过的美好时光，我就会情不自禁地想起你为我所做的一切。 7.It was you who built up my confidence and assisted me with my English.是你让我建立了信心，帮助我学习英语。 8.On behalf of my whole family,r'd like to express my sincere gratitude for your support.我谨代表我全家对您的支持表 示衷心的感谢。 9.You are welcome to show up on stage,which will definitely add color and fun to our festival,.款迎大家上台表演，这一 定会为我们的节日增添色彩和乐趣。 附录部分 I0.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.如果您方便的话，我们希望您能接受我们的 邀请。 ·尾段必背精彩句· L.I am sure you'll learn more when you come to the spot.Looking forward to your reply.我相信您到现场后会了解更多。 期待您的回复。 2.If you'd like to participate,please let me know at your earliest convenience..如果你想参加，请尽早让我知道。 3.Your prompt reply to this letter would be highly appreciated.如能及时回复此信，将不胜感激。 4.n short,I think smartphones should not be forbidden as long as they are used wisely.简而言之，我认为只要他们明智地 使用，智能手机不应该被禁止。 5.In conclusion.by protecting traditional Chinese culture,we can ensure that future generations continue to appreciate and embrace our rich culture..总之，通过保护中国传统文化，我们可以确保后代继续欣赏和接纳我们丰富的文化 6.I firmly believe that you will have a wonderful time and find it rewarding.我坚信你会度过一段美好的时光，并发现这 是值得的。 7.Only when you've understood it can you write it well..Hope my advice will be of some help.只有当你理解了它，你才能 把它写好。希望我的建议能有所帮助。 8.So I highly recommend this book to you and'm sure you'll like it.Enjoy reading！所以我强烈推荐这本书给你，我相 信你会喜欢的。享受阅读吧！ 9.Looking forward to communicating with you face to face as soon as possible.期待能尽快与您面对面地交流。 IO.Whenever in trouble,don'thesitate to turn to me for help.无论什么时候遇到困难，都不要犹豫向我求助。 Il.May you win the first prize in the Chinese Speaking Competition!祝你在汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名！ 12.All in all,my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer..总之，我的责任感会使我成为一名合格的志 愿者。 I3.Hopefully,you will have great fun at the wedding ceremony.希望你们在婚礼上过得偷快。 三 应用文写作高频增分句式6大类30句 高频增分句式一：很高兴得知你…，我写信… Il.Words fail to convey my heartfelt delight on hearing that you will participate in the competition,听说你将参加比赛，我 内心的喜悦无法用言语表达。 2.Exceedingly delighted to know you are fond of Chinese idioms,I'm writing to inform you of some tips..非常高兴知道你 喜欢中国成语，我写信是想告诉你一些建议。 3.Great joy wells up from the bottom of my heart the moment I know you are to sign up for the competition.当我知道你 要报名参加比赛的那一刻，我从心底里涌起了巨大的喜悦。 4.Having known that you'll attend the Chinese idiom story competition,I will spare no effort to do you a favor. 参加中国成语故事比赛，我将不遗余力地帮助你。 5.Having learnt that you are keen on Chinese idiom story competition,I am privileged to do you a favor.得知你热衷于中 国成语故事比赛，我很荣幸能帮你一个忙。 高顺增分句式二：写信目的，发出邀请 1.Overwhelmed to learn that you are keen on the coming seminar,I'm writing,on behalf of the Student Union,to inform you of the details as follows.得知您对即将到来的研讨会非常感兴趣，我代表学生会写信通知您以下细节。 2.Exceedingly delighted to know you show a keen interest in the Chinese Classics Seminar,I'm writing a few lines to offer some details for your reference.非常高兴得知您对中国古典研讨会表现出浓厚的兴趣，我写了几行，提供一些细节供 您参考 3.Having known with delight that you take a keen interest in the seminar to be held in our school.I'm writing to share with you the details as follows.得知您对即将在我校举行的研讨会有浓厚的兴趣，我很高兴，特此写信与您分享以下 细节。 高频增分句式三：就…提一些，希望… L.My suggestions with regard to this topic are as follows..我对这个话题的建议如下。 2.I'd like to give you some practical suggestions,which I hope will be of some help.我想给你一些实际的建议，希望能有 所帮助。 03 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 3.When it comes to traditional Chinese culture,I'd like to offer you some tips for your reference,.说到中国传统文化，我想 提供一些建议供你参考。 4,To help you get fully prepared,I will give you some advice.为了帮助你做好充分的准备，我将给你一些建议。 高频增分句式四：盼望… l.I'd appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.如果您能考虑一下我的建议，我将不胜感激。 2.If you have any problem,don't hesitate to let me know,如果你有任何问题，请尽管告诉我。 2.Look forward to further discussion with you as soon as possible.期待尽快与您进一步i讨论 3.Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated,如能及时处理此信，将不胜感激， 4.Should you take my advice into consideration,I would be highly grateful.如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。 5.Don't hesitate to turn to your teacher for help provided that you have any trouble.如果你有任何困难，不要犹豫向老师 求助。 高频增分句式五：参与回复，不胜感激 l.「d be much obliged if you could confirm your participation.如果您能确认参加，我将不胜感激。 2.I'm sincerely looking forward to your presence at the seminar.我真诚地期待着您的出席。 3.Your prompt response to my letter would be highly appreciated..如能及时回复我的来信，我将不胜感激。 4.Nothing can delight me so much as your participation in the seminar.没有什么比你参加研讨会更让我高兴的了： S.It would be highly appreciated if you could respond to me at your earliest convenience.如果您能尽快给我答复，我将不 胜感激。 6.l【couldn't be better if you could let me know whether you will make it or not in advance,.如果你能提前告诉我你是否 能来，那就再好不过了。 7.Should you take my invitation into consideration,I would be more than obliged,.如果你考虑我的邀请，我将不胜感激e 高频增分句式六：祝愿 I.Wish you best luck in the coming Chinese idiom story competition..祝你在即将到米的中国成语故事比赛中好运 2.May you win the first prize in the competition！祝你在比赛中获得第一名！ 3.With your effort and my guidance,I'm one hundred percent sure you'll make it.有你的努力和我的指导，我百分之百确 定你会成功。 4.Devote yourself to your speech and you'll surely make it.专心演讲，你一定会成功的 5.Words failed to convey how rejoiced I am that I can be of any benefit to you.我无法用言语表达我是多么高兴能对你 有所帮助。 6.Nothing can delight me so much as your success in the competition.没有什么比你在比赛中获胜更i让我高兴的了。 四 读后续写情感心理描写20类72句 (一)喜悦 I.Her smile bloomed like a flower.她的笑容像花朵一样开放。 2.A bright smile spread across her face.她脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。 3.He was in high spirits,and felt like being on top of the world.他情绪高涨，感觉自己好像站在了世界之巅。 4.She laughed,her eyes shining/twinkling with excitement..她笑了起来，她的眼睛因兴奋而闪闪发光。 (二)同情 I.She pressed my hand in sympathy.她握了握我的手表示同情。 2.His painful eyes seem to beg me to spare him.他痛苦的眼睛似乎在恳求我放过他。 3.Franklin stood silently,torn by sorrow and compassion,.weighing what to say.当Franklin默默地站着，悲伤和同情让 他心碎，犹豫若着该说些什么。 4.Seeing her condition,I immediately felt a huge sympathy for her.It was coming deep from within my heart.看到她的情 况，我立即对她产生了极大的同情。这种感觉深深地发自我的心。 (三)感动 l.Tears welled up in her eyes.她泪如泉酒。 2.A warm current rose in her heart.一股暖流涌上她的心头。 3.With tears streaming down her face,she thanked him again and again.她泪流满面，再三感谢他。 4.I was deeply moved by what he had done,tears rolling down without control.我被他的所作所为深深打动了，泪水情不 自禁地夺眶而出。 附录部分 5.Tears dropping from his eyes,he ran to Mum's warm hug,and said gently“Mum,thank you.."他热泪盈眠，跑到妈妈 温暖的拥抱前，温柔地说：“妈妈，谢谢你。” (四)宽慰 1.Hearing this,I felt a warm flow spreading inside of me..听到这儿，我感觉一股暖流在我体内蔓延。 2.She stroked her fingers through my hair and said,“Things are going to be fine."她用手指抚摸着我的头发说：“一切都 会好起来的。” 3.He reached out his hand with his finger forming a“heart”,saying,“I'll always be there with you."他伸出手，用手指 捏成“心形”，说：“我将永远与你同在” 4.She held my hands,.weeping,“Thank you so much!You have no idea how much this means to me,"她握若我的手哭 着说：“非常感谢！你不知道这对我有多重要。” (五)鼓励 I.My mom,wearing a smile on her face,always encourages me.妈妈.总是面带微笑鼓励我。 2.He smiled with satisfaction,patting me on the shoulder and said,“Well done!”他满意地笑了，拍了拍我的肩膀说：“做 得好！” 3.“You matter.”I said that sentence to myself,feeling a warm glow spreading inside of me.“你很重要。"我对白己说了 这句话，感到一股暖意在我体内蔓延。 4.Thanks to the encouragement,which calms me down gradually,I began to accept that failure is a part of great value. 亏了鼓励，我渐渐平静下来，我开始接受失败是天赋价值的一部分。 (六)希望 l.A spark of hope kindled in their hearts..他们心中燃起了希望的火花。 2.Life bloomed with happiness and hope.生活充满了幸福和希望。 3.Hope for the best and prepare for the worst..抱最好的希望，做最坏的打算。 4.After all the problems,we are finally beginning to see some light at the end of the tunnel..在经历了这么多困难之后，我 们终于看到了曙光。 (七)激动 L.His face is glowing with excitement.他的脸因激动而容光焕发。 2.He was so thrilled that he could hardly speak.他微动得几乎说不出话来。 3.She felt her heart racing and her blood rushing..她的心跳加速，热血沸腾。 4.A shiver of excitement passed through her stomach when she heard the news,听到这个消息，她激动得胃里直打战。 (八)愤怒 1.His voice trembled with anger,.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 2.He was really angry,shaking his fists..他非常生气，挥动着拳头e 3.Her color went up:a heavy rage came over her like a dark cloud.她的脸色涨了起来，一股沉重的怒气像一片乌云笼罩 着她。 4.He stormed out of the room with anger,shutting the door hard behind him.他怒气冲冲地冲出了房间，重重地关上 了门。 (九)悲伤 1.He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.他默默地站着，泪水顺着脸颊流了下来。 2.She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间 3.She shook her head miserably,tears pouring down her cheeks.她痛苦地摇了摇头，泪水顺着脸颊流下。 4.She walked to me,with great sorrow,the light in her eyes darkened,and said with sadness,“I failed."她走到我面前， 悲痛万分，眼睛里的光芒暗了下来，悲伤地说：“我失败了。” (十)惊恐 1.A flood of fear welled up in her..她心中升起一股恐惧的洪流。 2.Scared and shocked,she couldn't say a word.她又害怕又震惊，一句话也说不出来。 3.Frozen with fear,he was too scared to move an inch.他吓得僵住了，不敢动弹。 4.Her face turned pale and stood there,tongue-tied.她的脸色变得苍白，站在那里，说不出话来。 5.At the sight of the fierce wolf,Mike felt so scared that his throat tightened and his knees felt weak.看到那只凶猛的狼， Mk感到非常害怕.喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。 (十一)紧张 I.His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled.他的心脏狂跳着，双腿颤抖着。 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 2.His heart beat so violently that he felt like sitting on pins and needles.他的心脏跳动得如此剧烈，他感到如坐针毡。 3.He was about to respond when he felt his tongue tied in and palms sweating.他正要回答时.感到舌头被绑住了，手掌开 始出汗。 4.As the bus got closer and closer,Tom's heart beat so violently that he felt nearly breathless..公共汽车越来越近了，Tom 的心脏刷烈跳动，几乎呼吸困难。 (十二)悔孩 1.I stood there,with regretful tears in my eyes.我站在那里，眼里含着遗憾的泪水。 2.On hearing the bad news,she felt extremely guilty.听到这个坏消息，她感到非常内疚。 3.Desperate and helpless,Janet knelt down with tears of regret streaming down her cheeks.铯望而无助的Janet跪了下来 后悔的泪水顺者面颊流了下来。 (十三)困惑 l.His sudden change in mood completely confused her.他情绪的突然变化完全把她弄糊涂了。 2.We are a little confused about what we are supposed to be doing.我们对正在做的事情有点困惑 3.When I stood on the stage in front of the large audience.my mind went blank.站在舞台上面对大批观众时.我的头脑 一片空白 (十四)忧虑 l.Worried about the journey,I was unsettled for the first few days.由于担心这次旅行，头几天我心神不宁。 2.He was so nervous about the English test that he lay awake half the night,.worried.他对英语考试感到如此紧张，以至于 大半夜都睡不着觉，心神不宁。 (十五)震惊 l.It gave me a shock when I realized...当我意识到…，我感到震惊。 2.He froze,with his mouth hanging open,.他僵住了，张着嘴。 3.I jumped to my feet and stepped back in no time,completely at a loss.我跳了起来，立刻后退了一步，完全不知所措。 4.Everyone gasped in astonishment as the cars came around the last bend.汽车驶过最后一个弯道时，每个人都惊呆了。 (十六)羞愧 l.So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears.她感到非常羞愧，几平要哭了。 2.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rushed to her face.她感到非常羞愧，甚至能感觉到鲜血涌到脸上a 3.She felt so ashamed of her foolish behavior that she could feel her face burning.她为自已的愚盒行为感到非常羞愧，以 至于感到脸红了。 (十七)疲惫 l.Exhausted,I slid into bed and fell fast asleep.我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡着了 2.“Are we almost there?”she asked,feeling burnt out.“我们快到了吗？”她问道，感到筋疲力尽 3.She felt exhausted and sat by the stream resting her aching feet..她感到精疲力竭，坐在溪边休，息着疼痛的双脚。 (十八)孤独 l.A wave of loneliness washed over her.一阵孤独感席卷了她的全身 2.Cold with no hope for warmth,she felt like drowning in a crowd of people.她感到又冷又无取暖的希望，感觉就像被 人群淹没一样。 (十九)尴尬 I.The wife stood there with embarrassment and she felt blood rushing to her face.妻子道尬地站在那里，感到鲜血涌向她 的脸。 2.All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world was watching her.所有的空气似乎都消失了，她觉得 整个世界都在看若她。 3.He lowered his head,hesitated for a moment,wondering how to hide his inner embarrassment..他低下头，犹豫了一会 儿，不知道如何掩饰内心的尴尬。 (二十)绝望 I.Hearing the news,so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine,听到这个消息，他非常绝望以至于借酒浇愁。 2.He gazed at the confusion around him and was overwhelmed by a feeling of despair.他凝视着周围一片混乱，感到一阵 绝望。 3.Desperate and helpless,.she knelt down,with tears of regret streaming down her cheeks.绝望而无助的她跪了下来，悔 恨的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。 166