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Monday
应用文写作训练A+B
A
假定你是李华,你校最近新成立的兵兵球俱乐部正在招幕会员。请你写封邮件告知一直想学兵兵球的交换生好
友John。内容包括:1.俱乐部简介;2.鼓励加入;3.申请方式。
注意1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇招募recruit
Dear John.
Yours.
Li Hua
[范文]
Dear John,
l'm writing to tell uou o qood piece of news that a table tennis club is now recruiting new members, which
I think miaht interest uou.
Aiming to enrich students' after-school life. the club has been set up in our school recentlu. Not onlu will it
organize training on weekends, but also it will offer the members chances to plau matches. As gou like the
sport. / think it's g good opportunity for uou to join the club, where ou will surelu learn much
If uou are interested, please email at TTClub ag.com to make an application before next Wednesdau. It
won't let jou down/
Yours.
Li Hua
高分亮点
高分词汇:①recruitv.招骋,招收 ②aimtodosth.旨在做某事
③set up建立
④opportunityn.时机,机会
applicationn.正式申请,书面申请
let down辜负,令人失望
高分句型:(句型1)I'm writing to tell you a good piece of news that a table tennis club is now recruiting new members
which I thinkmight interest you.(运用了that引导的同位语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(句型 2) As you like the sport, I think it's a good opportunity for you to join the club, where you will surely learn
much.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句、where引导的非限制性定语从句)
B
假定你是校英语社团的负责人李华,本周五下午校英语社团将组织有关中国传统节日的主题活动,请你给你校
外教Jason写一封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.活动时间、地点;2.活动内容、安排。
注意1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
DearJason,
On behalf of the school English club. I'm writing to invite you to take part in our activity.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
[范文]
Dear Jason,
On behalf of the school English club, I'm writing to invite you to take part in our activity. Some detailed
information is as follows
We organize the themed activitu in order to make the students have a qood knowledqe of traditional
Chinese culture, We are expected to qather at the school lecture hall at half post two this Fridau afternoon. We
高一英语应用文写作+读后续写
will have a series of activities, such os making paper cutting. performing Beijing Operg and drowing wosh
paintings. This activitu will provide a platform where uou can get o taste of traditional Chinese culture. I do
hope ou will join us this Fridau afternoon
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
高分亮点
高分词汇:①onbehalf of代表;代表某人或某个团体行事 ②detailedadi.详尽的,详细的
③a series of一系列,
连串 ④Beijing Opera 京剧
Iplatformn.平台;舞台
高分句型:(句型1)This activity will provide a platform where you can get a taste of traditional Chinese culture.(运用
了where引导的定语从句)
(句型2)I do hope you will join us this Friday afternoon.(运用了省略 that 引导的宾语从句)
Tuesday
读后续写训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a cold winter evening. I was terrified that my mom would find out that I had lost the beautiful silver flute (长
笛) she bought me. I felt very sad and I thought that she had given me a big lecture about how valuable it was and that I had
to take good care of it. Now it was missing! And I felt very upset. I was only ten at the time, so it felt like a huge
responsibility. So I didn't dare tell my mum about it. I didn't think my mum would pay attention to my flute.
Mum was a soft-spoken woman who never yelled at me, but she would surely have docked(扣除) my allowance (零
花钱) for a year or two in order to pay for it if I couldn't find it and she discovered that my flute was lost. The wors
punishment. though, would have been disappointing her and being forever regarded as an unreliable person
As I was in the band. I would take the flute to school twice and bring it home after practice. That day, I normally
remembered collecting it after school and then I rushed through the school gate. I even said bye to the guard. But when I
returned home and wanted to take my flute for practice, it was nowhere to be found.
Being afraid to tell anyone, I kept thinking to myself "I'd be in big trouble if I lost it. What should I do?"
Just then, I heard my mum's calling,"Sweetie, dinner is ready!'
"Okay, wait a minute, I... am ... coming ..." I replied. As I slowly stepped out of my bed room, my mind was
still back in the state of searching for my flute
When having dinner. I could hardly focus with my eyes. Although I tried to pretend to be calm. my mum still noticed it
“What is the matter with you. sweetie?" my mum asked
Hearing what she said, I had to tell her the truth.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
To my surprise, my mum didn't scold me but stood up to come to me.
When we drove near the school gate. I could see a person standing from a distance.
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者因长笛丢失而害怕母亲指责,但是最终还是告诉了母亲实情,意外
的是母亲并没有责怪作者,并提出和作者一起找长笛,最终是一个小女孩捡到长笛并归还作者的故事
[段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“令我惊讶的是,我妈妈没有骂我,而是站起来向我走来。”可知,第一段可描写妈
妈知道实情后对作者说的话的经过。②由第二段首句内容“当我们把车开到学校门口附近时,我能看到远处站着一
个人。”可知,第二段可描写作者的长笛被小女孩捡到并且重新拿回的经过。
[范文]
To my surprise, my mum didn't scold me but stood up to come to me. She patted me on the shoulder ond said
that it was not a big deal. Then she told me that we should enjog our dinner first and that she would
accompanu me to look for it after dinner and I replied," Thanks a lot, Mum!" Just at that time, I nodded ang
felt a little relieved at her words. At 8 o'clock that night, Mum and I walked to the parking lot to drive our car
When we drove near the school gate, I could see a person standing from a distance. As I opprooched, I noticed it
was a little girl with a flute in her hand. and I asked what she wos doing there."f'm waiting for.." she replied
with a trembling voice. I came up to make sure the flute in her hand wos mine. I felt excited." Thanks.. It is mu
silver flute. Could you be kind to give it to me?""Here gou arel" Then I offered to drive her to her home ang
we talked happily all the wgu
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高分亮点
高分词汇:①accompanyv.陪伴,陪同
②relievedadj.放心的,宽慰的
③approachv.靠近,临近
④make sure 确保
silver adj.银(白)色的;银制的
高分句型:(句型1) Then she told me that we should enjoy our dinner first and that she would accompany me to look for
it after dinner and I replied."Thanks a lot,Mum!"(运用了从属连词 that 引导的宾语从句)
(句型 2) As I approached. I noticed it was a little girl with a flute in her hand, and I asked what she was doing there
(运用了连词as引导的时间状语从句、what引导的宾语从句)
Wednesday
应用文写作训练A+B
A
假定你是李华,最近收到了笔友Mike的来信,内容如下:
Dear Li Hua,
Recently, Tom, my best friend since when we were in junior high school, has been avoiding me on purpose. I don't
know why. I have tried to talk with him several times, but in vain. I don't want to lose him. What should I do?
Yours.
Mike
请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议;3.表达希望
注意1.词数80个左右;2.请在以下的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Yours.
Li Hua
[范文]
Dear Mike.
I am sorru to learn that you are having trouble with our best friend. Here are some suggestions which1
hope can be of help to uou.
Considering uour unsuccessful attempts to tolk with him. I advise that you turn to his parents, teochers.
and his other friends. to whom he might revegl his discontentment with you. Additionally. uou can tru sending
him a text message, telling him how gou feel and asking about the reason for his getting awau from you
Meanwhile. it is of areat necessitu to include a sincere apologu for doing something thgt miaht have hurt hirr
unintentionallu.
I sincerely wish that with active efforts uou can smoothly remove our misunderstandings and restore
uour friendship
Yours.
Li Hua
高分亮点
②unsuccessfuladj.不成功的;失败的
高分词汇:①suggestionn.建议,意见
③discontentment n. 不平,不满
④additionally adv.另外,此外unintentionally ady.无意地;非故意地
高分句型:(句型1)Considering your unsuccessful attempts to talk with him, I advise that you turn to his parents
teachers, and his other friends, to whom he might reveal his discontentment with you.(运用 了现在分词作状语;that 引
导的宾语从句;whom引导的定语从句)
(句型 2) Additionally, you can try sending him a text message, telling him how you feel and asking about the reason for
his gettingaway from you.(运用了现在分词作状语;how引导的宾语从句)
B
假定你是李华,为让学生更好地了解儒家文化,你校将遨请李教授到校做“儒家思想”讲座。请给在你校就读的
外国学生写份英文通知,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容安排;3.注意事项。
注意1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇 孔子Confucius 儒家思想Confucianism
Notice
Students' Union
lune 17th.2024
高一英语应用文写作+读后续写
[范文]
Notice
ln order to enrich our school life and experience Chinese culture and Confucius, we are planning to hold a
lecture "Confucius and traditional Chinese culture".
The lecture will begin at 9 o'clock and end at 11 o'clock on June 2oth in room 5o1 of the first teoching
building. As o qreat thinker and educator, Confucius wos the founder of Confucianism and has made a deep
influence on Chinese culture.
There is no denuing that the lecture is of great importance to us. Not onlu will it enrich our campus life but
provide us a wonderful chance to appreciate traditional Chinese culture.
I am looking forward to seeing uou in the lecture room.
Students' Union
June 17th.2024
高分亮点
高分词汇:①enrichv. 使充实,使丰富 ②educatorn. 教育工作者③foundern.创立者,缔造者
④make a deep
influence on对.....产生深远影响 be of great importance 非常重要
高分句型:(句型1)There is no denying that the lecture is of great importance to us.(运用了that 引导的同位语从句)
(句型 2) Not only will it enrich our campus life but provide us a wonderful chance to appreciate traditional Chinese
culture.(运用了倒装句;not only... but also句式)
Thursday
读后续写训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
David worked as the cleaner in the same school for 25 years, and he considered his job an important part of his life
Besides keeping the school clean, he was always ready to help teachers carry books from the library to the classroom.
Anyone who needed help in school knew they could count on David.
Decades ago, his wife suddenly passed away soon after their marriage, and since then. David had been living alone.
After returning home from work, David often read cooking magazines because of his passion for baking(烘.). He
would bring freshly baked cookies and bread to school every week and serve them to the teachers.
“Wow! They're so delicious. David!" Samantha. the English teacher, told him. She was one of the teachers that
enjoyed David's love and praised his efforts.
David felt he was losing his strength as he turned old. He'd turn 75 in a week. He thought he should retire (退休). He
told Samantha and other teachers what he had been thinking,"I'm planning to retire. I think there must be someone else
who might need this job to make a living."
"Oh! David! We'll miss you if that happens." the teachers cried."We don't want you to leave!" David smiled and
told them, "You know I don't have a wife to look after or kids to raise, so money isn't what has kept me going all these
years. Your care and praise have encouraged me to work hard."
The next day, David went into the headmaster's(校长的) office and told him about his decision."Are you sure.
David? You're an excellent member of our school, and letting you go isn't easy for us," the headmaster said." Thank you.
Sir," David said."But I feel I'm getting weaker, and it's become difficult for me to keep the school clean. So my decision
is final." The headmaster agreed eventually.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
The day before David's 75th birthday was his last day at work.
The next day after work, Samantha, with other teachers, went to see David with a big cake.
[语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了75岁的David是一名学校的清洁工,在他工作的25年来,他深受学校
老师们的喜爱,因为他总是热心的帮助老师们。但是由于身体的原因,David决定退休。尽管很不舍,校长最后同意
了他的申请。
[段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“David75岁生日的前一天是他工作的最后一天。”可知,第一段可描写老师们为
David送行并决定第二天去他家给他过生日。②由第二段首句内容“第二天下班后,Samantha和其他老师带着一个大
蛋糕去看David。”可知,第二段可描写老师们和David度过了美好的一天。
[范文]
The day before David's 75th birthday was his last day at work. Before leaving the school thot dou: he soid
goodbue to oll the teachers and gifted them baked cookies. " Thank ou for gour hard work and delicious
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cookies, David!" Samantho and other teachers soid. Later thot dau, Samanthg suddenlu realized it was David's
birthdau the next dau. Everu uear. theu would celebrate his birthdou in school bu buuing a cake for him."We
need to celebrate his birthdau!" Samanthg told the other teachers."We should visit David's house tomorrow.'
“Good ideg!" theu all agreed.
The next day after work, Samantha, with other teachers, went to see David with a big cake. Theu drove to Oavid's
house and knocked on his door. Seeing the teachers standing on his doorstep. he covered his mouth with his
hands. "What a pleasant surprisel Please come inl" David was so happu to see all the teachers in his house
"Happu birthdau to uou.." the teachers sang the song to David, who was touched greatly. After learning old
David felt lonelu. Samantho and other teachers promised to come to see him every Saturdau. Theu thought it
was time to return love to him now.
高分亮点
高分词汇:①giftv.赠送;(无意中)让(对手)获得②deliciousadj.美味的,芬芳的 ③doorstepn.门阶
④celebrate v.庆祝,庆贺 lonely adj.孤单的,寂寞的
高分句型:(句型1) Seeing the teachers standing on his doorstep, he covered his mouth with his hands,"What a pleasant
surprise!Please come in!"(运用了现在分词作状语)
(句型2)"Happy birthday to you..." the teachers sang the song to David, who was touched greatly.(运用 了 who 引寻
的非限制性定语从句)
Friday
应用文写作训练A+B
假定你校英语报开辟“我的高中老师”专栏,向高一学生征稿。请你介绍一位学科老师,向报社投稿,内容包括:
1.外貌特征;2.教学风格;3.你的愿望
注意1.词数80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
[范文]
Mu senior high school English teacher is Li Hug, a middle-aged woman about 4O uears old. She's of
medium heiqht with short hair and wears a pair of glasses, She's alwaus smiling and looks full of life
Miss Li's method of teoching is nothing like that of the teachers at my junior high school. Her teaching is
well organized. ln class, she often encouraqes us to ask and answer questions. She's alwaus strict with us, but
we gll like her.
I hope /'ll do well in mu Enalish learning with Miss Li teaching me in mu senior hiah school
-高分亮点
高分词汇:①medium adj.中等的,中间的 ②height n. 身高;高 ③be nothing like完全不像 ④be strict with 对
.....严格organizedadi.有组织的,系统的
高分句型:(句型1)In class,she often encourages us to ask and answer questions.(动词不定式作宾语补足语)
(句型 2)I hope I'll do well in my English learning with Miss Li teaching me in my senior high school.(运用了 省略 that
的宾语从句)
假定你是李华。你班上周五组织了游览国家公园(NationalPark)的活动。请你写一篇报道向校英文报投稿
内容包括:1.活动介绍;2.活动感想。
注意1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
[范文
Dear editor,
Aiming to enrich our life and raise our awareness of protecting the environment, our school orqanized g
trip to Notional Park lost Fridau
Excited, we gathered at the school gate and set off at 8 a.m. Upon arrival, we were amazed bu the diverse
wildlife and breathtaking sceneru. Tigers were wandering freelu while grasses were woving to us. What came
into mg mind was that we're supposed to live in harmony with wildlife.
高一英语应用文写作+读后续写
I can't wait to hove such a precious chance to enjou whot noture offers us. Nevertheless, onlu if joints
efforts are made to conserve the planet con we have the opportunitu to appreciate it.
高分亮点
高分词汇:①enrichv.使充实,使丰富
②set off 出发,启程 ③arrival n.到达,到来 ④diverse adj.不同的,各式各
样的 breathtaking adi.激动人心的
nevertheless adv.然而,不过 conserve v.保护,保存
高分句型:(句型1)What came into my mind was that we're supposed to live in harmony with wildlife.(运用了what 引
导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
(句型 2) Nevertheless, only if joints efforts are made to conserve the planet can we have the opportunity to appreciate it
(运用了倒装句型和被动语态)
Saturday
读后续写训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Many years ago. I was at a girls' school and our teacher made all the girls in the class sit next to someone different
every day.
On one of the days, my teacher paired Madhuri, who I had never talked to. and me to sit next to each other. I notice
that she seemed very anxious. I asked her what was wrong. She remained silent at first. but eventually, she told me that she
had three sisters in her family and that her father couldn't afford school books for all of them.
My primary school was strict. as was the standard then, and if you didn't have your school books the teacher would
make you leave the class. Madhuri was very anxious that day because she thought that the teacher would tell her to leave the
class. When the teacher saw that she didn't have the books. he told Madhuri that she couldn't attend class for a week.
Madhuri was very upset. I felt so bad when I saw her pain that I decided to help her. I went to speak to her and offered
to buy the books for her. She refused my offer to help. She had very strong principles and she would never accept things
bought by others.
When I got home from school I told my mom the story. She said that it was good that I had tried to help but I should
stop worrying about it because there was nothing more that I could do if she had refused my offer to help. I couldn't stop
worrying about it though.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
Then I had an idea.
The next day, I got up early so that I could go to her house before going to sehool.
[语篇解读] 本文以交友为线索展开,讲述了作者在学校无奈地和不喜欢的同学Madhuri做了同桌之后,发现
Madhuri因为买不起课本,很焦虑,作者想要为她买课本,Madhuri坚持不接受别人给买的东西。最终作者想到好主
意,找到用过的一套旧课本送给了Madhuri,Madhuri很高兴地接受了帮助,最后两个人成为好朋友的故事。
[段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“然后我有了一个主意。”可知,第一段可描写作者想出帮助Madhuri的好主意,找
到一套旧课本,打算送给Madhuri。②由第二段首句内容“第二天,我起得很早,这样我就可以在去学校之前去她家。”
可知,第二段可描写作者给Madhuri送课本的过程,以及Madhuri接受课本情况等。
[范文]
Then I had an idea. Mu older brother, who hod once used the same series of books. graduated from schoo
last uear. Why not turn to him for help? Moube those old books were the solution to the problem. They
wouldn't cost anuthing so Madhuri could accept without anu pressure. I went to Mom and mu brother
immediatelu. After hearing Madhuri's situation and mu plon, mu brother was quite willing to help. We sorted
out the needed books for Madhuri together veru quicklu. Looking at the neatly piled books, I felt quite satisfied
and delighted but suddenly a concern flashed across mu mind. "Would Madhuri mind theu are second-hand
books?"
The next day, I got up early so that I could go to her house before going to school. Not knowing what would
happen and not sure whether she would accept the books or not, 1 knocked at the door nervouslu. When the
door opened, I could see her surprised expression. Hearing that these books were old books of mu brother. she
accepted them without hesitation. I also got a weight off mu mind. On the wau to school. I could see from her
face how happu she was. From that dau on. something changed and as the dau passed and the years moveg
on, Madhuri and I became best friends
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高分亮点
高分词汇:①graduate from毕业于②willing adj.愿意的,乐意的 ③flashv. 闪光,闪亮 ④hesitation n.犹豫,不情
愿 nervously adv.神经质地;焦急地
高分句型:(句型I)My older brother, who had once used the same series of books, graduated from school last year.(运
用了关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句)
(句型 2) Not knowing what would happen and not sure whether she would accept the books or not, I knocked at the door
nervously.(运用了现在分词作状语以及what和whether引导的宾语从句)
Sunday
应用文写作+读后续写训练
第一节应用文写作
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike总说学习太忙而没有时间锻炼身体。最近天气变化无常,他生病了。请你给
他写一封电子邮件,对他表示关心并建议他加强锻炼。要点如下:1.对朋友表示关心;2.加强锻炼的好处和建议;3.表
示祝愿。
注意1.词数80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike.
Yours.
Li Hua
[范文]
Dear Mike.
I am sorru to hear that uou have been ill these daus and f'm reallu concerned about uour health
You are alwous sauing thot uou are so busu studuing that uou can't spare anu time for exercise. Actuallu
lock of exercise is harmful to uour health. in mu opinion, it will be beneficiol to our health if ou take exercise
reqularlu. which can not onlu improve uour phusical health and immune sustem but also refresh uour mind. As
a result. uour efficiencu can be qreatlu raised.
I hope you can form the habit of taking exercise everu doy after you recover and wish uou good health.
Yours.
Li Hua
高分亮点
高分词汇:①be concerned about 对.....关心;对....担忧 ②be harmful to对......有害
③beneficial adi.有益的
有利的
④regularlyadv.定期地,有规律地
. immune adj.免疫的
efficiencyn.效率,效能
高分句型:(句型1)I am sorry to hear that you have been ill these days and I'm really concerned about your health.(运
用了that引导的宾语从句)
(句型 2) In my opinion, it will be beneficial to your health if you take exercise regularly, which can not only improve
your physical health and immune system but also refresh your mind.(运用了 if 引导的条件状语从句和 which引导的非
限制性定语从句)
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband Frank and I lived a frugal(节俭的) life, carrying lunch to work, having no vacations, and staying in.
But when it came to our fifteenth wedding anniversary, we decided to"splurge(挥霍)” this one time.
At last, we walked into a beautiful Italian restaurant for a nice dinner. We ordered wonderful food and even a glass of
wine each. Halfway through our very delicious dinner. Frank and I noticed the two diners next to us seemed to be looking
for something under their table and all around. The elegantly dressed woman appeared to be in her late seventies, and he
much younger male companion looked like her son. The woman kept touching her ear
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I asked whether she had lost an earring. The woman shook her head and looked worried."My hearing aid." she said
“My son finally convinced me to buy it this week: it is so expensive." She then added that her son's eyesight was better
than hers but he couldn't find it. either.
No waiters seemed to be helpful. as they were very busy. And the other diners seemed unaware of the woman's
trouble. Frank stood up immediately."Let me try." he offered."Maybe a fresh pair of eyes will find it." The woman said
that it was very small and had the same color as the floor, adding she didn't want to bother Frank."That's okay, I'll try,'
Frank said. Then he bent down and moved a few inches at a time, with his eyes and hands sweeping back and forth
The woman sat down slowly. Her son kept his eyes focused while Frank's feet moved back and forth under the table
Meanwhile. I stood by their table. running my hand over the tablecloth, shifting the plates, etc.
“Thanks." the woman said."But I'm afraid it's lost forever. Your dinner's getting cold. Please don't worry." I saw
tears forming in her eyes. Soon, her son sank back into his chair, too. But Frank kept looking until one of them thanked him
again, and he finally gave up and sat down to eat. Ten minutes later, as we finished our dinner, the mother and son were
drinking coffee, silent "I'll take one more look," Frank said.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
Then, he lowered himself back to the floor.
Her son shook Frank's hand and said, "How can I thank you?"
[语篇解读] 本文以事件发展为线索展开,讲述了作者和丈夫去餐厅就餐时,发现旁边的两位食客似乎在桌子下面
和周围寻找什么,得知他们在寻找助听器时,他主动提出帮忙寻找,但是最后还是没有找到,于是大家都放弃了,吃完
晚饭时,母子俩正在嘱咖啡,沉默着的丈夫说“我再看一眼。”
[段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“他又一次躬身到地板上。”可知,第一段可描写作者的丈夫再次帮助老妇人寻找
助听器。②由第二段首句内容“他儿子激动地握着Frank的手说:,我应该怎样感谢你?'”可知,第二段可描写老妇人
一家想尽办法感谢Frank,都被婉拒,之后作者夫妻俩从帮助别人中获得了快乐,作者感言:善行是美妙的。
[范文]
Then, he lowered himself back to the floor. Realizing it might have rolled a lot further Qwag, Frank wearing his
onlu suit crowled from table to table, moving his hand slowly one wau and then the other, over patches of the
floor. Minutes later. Frank stood up, looking carefullu at something held between his thumb and forefinaer. He
handed it to the woman and asked."ls this it. Madam?""Yesl" she shouted excitedlu, holding out her arms to
hug him. and said that Frank had saved her dau
Her son shook Frank's hand and said, "How can I thank you?" Then, she and her son offered to buy us coffee
and dessert. But both of us declined. After wishing each other qood luck. theu left. Frank and I staued and
ordered coffee and dessert. We talked while enjouing the coffee and dessert. I could tell he felt veru qood abou
helping the old ladu. When we asked for the bil. the wgiter said, " The people at the next table olreadu paid it."
We felt so worm. Thot experience reaffirmed that an act of kindness, especiallg coupled with perseverance. is
wonderful.
高分亮点
高分词汇:①crawIv.爬行;缓慢行进
②patchn.补丁,补片
③thumbn.拇指
④forefinger n.食指
reaffirm
.再肯定,重申
perseverance n.毅力,不屈不挠的精神
高分句型:(句型 1) Minutes later, Frank stood up,looking carefully at something held between his thumb and
forefinger.(运用了现在分词作状语和过去分词短语作后置定语)
(句型2)We talked while enjoying the coffee and dessert.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略句)
(句型3) That experience reaffirmed that an act of kindness, especially coupled with perseverance, is wonderful.(运用
了that引导的宾语从句)
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