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Week 16
自然探索类应用文写作&和谐自然类读后续写
Monday
如何写好自然探索类应用文写作
典题示例
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道,内容包括:1,活动的过
程:2.收获与感想。
注意1.词数80个左右:2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
思路点拨
Step One审题谋篇
体裁
记叙文
时态
一般过去时和一般现在时
话题
认识植物活动报道
人称
以第三人称为主
结构
第一段:引出话题:第二段:详细报道陈述事实:第三段:感想评论
OStep Two
词汇运用
1.参加:加入某个活动、事件或组织participate in
6.样本sample
2.组织organise
7.不可思议的,难以置信的incredible
3.以…开始:开始于…begin with
8.也;还有as well as
4.特征,特点characteristic
9.保持,维持maintain
5.物种plant species
10.生态系统ecosystem
Step Three句式表达
1.完成句子
(1)上周末,我参加了一个“认识我们周围的植物”的活动
Last weekend,I participated in a"Getting to Know the Plants Around Us"activity.
(2)这次活动是由我们学生会组织的。
The activity was organised by our Students'Union.
(3)这项活动以一位当地植物学家的讲座开始的。
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist.
(4)当地的植物学家教我们各种植物的不同特性和用途。
The local botanist taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.
(5)然后我们在大自然中散步,观察和收集不同植物的样本
We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants.
(6)在整个活动过程中,我被世界上存在的各种各样的植物所震惊。
Throughout the event.I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world.
(7)我还了解了用于医疗目的的植物,以及那些为动物提供食物和住所的植物。
I also leamed about plants that are used for medical purposes,as well as those that provide food and shelter for
animals.
(8)我也对这个作用获得了更大的赞赏。
I also gained a greater appreciation for the role.
(9)植物起者维持生态系统平衡的作用。
Plants play a role in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
(10)总的来说,这是一次有价值且充实的经历。
Overall,it was a valuable and enriching experience.
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2.句式升级
(1)用过去分词作后置定语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。
Last weekend,I partieipated in a"Getting to Know the Plants Around Us"activity organised by our Students'
Union.
(2)用who引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist.who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of
various plant species.
(3)用not only,·.but also句式合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。
Throughout the event,not only was I struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world,but also I
learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
(4)用定语从句合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。
I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
OStep Four连句成篇
[范文]
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Lost weekend,I participated in a "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us"activity organised by our
Students'Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and
uses of various plant species.We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different
plants.Throughout the event,not only was I struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world,but
also I learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,as well as those that provide food and shelter
for animals.I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our
ecosystem.
Overall,it was a valuable and enriching experience.
Tuesday
自然探索类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵
晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式
常用词汇
botanist植物学家
spacewalk太空漫步
arouse引起,激起
awareness认识.意识
explore探讨,探索
launch发射
identify认出,识别
part from除了…之外
deepen(使)变深,加
insight了解:洞察力
strait海峡
exploit开发:利用
marine海的:海产的:海生的
helicopter直升机
survival program生存J项目
pilot飞行员
breakthrough突破
space太空;空间
spaceship字宙飞船
man-made satellite人造卫星
manned satellite载人卫星
rocket火箭
astronaut宇航员
planet行星
universe宇宙,万物
desert沙漠
space exploration太空探索
aerospace knowledge航空航天知识
the City Astronomy Museum城市天文博物馆
aircraft航行器(飞机、滑翔机、热气球等)
an unforgettable experience一场难忘的经历
”十”十”
2.Today's trip to the City Astronomy Museum was really a
话题句式
memorable experience and this will be engraved in my
引出话题先声夺人
mind forever.今天的城市天文博物馆之旅真是一次难
1.Last weekend.I participated in a "Getting to Know the
忘的经历,这将永远铭刻在我的脑海里。
Plants Around Us"activity organised by our Students'
3.To arouse our awareness of protecting the ocean,an
Union.上周末,我参加了由学生会组织的“认识我们身
English speech contest about whether we should explore
边的植物”活动。
the ocean was organized in our school library last
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Saturday.为了唤起我们保护海洋的意识,上周六在我3.All senior I students visited an exhibition themed on
们学校图书馆组织了一场关于我们是否应该探索海洋
“Achievements of China Aerospace".高一全部学生参
的英语演讲比赛。
观了“中国航天成就”展览。
主题部分娓娓道来
首尾结合余音回味
1.The wonderful exploration began with a 30-minute
1.Overall,it was a valuable and enriching experience.
instruction in our classroom through which we knew our
来说,这是一次宝贵而丰富的经历。
hands-on tasks and basic principles of making plant2.I believe that the science of artificial intelligence is waiting
labels.精彩的探索从30分钟的课堂教学开始,通过课
for humanity to explore it step by step.我相信,人工智能的科
堂教学,我们了解了制作植物标签的动手任务和基本
学正在等待人类一步一步地去探索。
原理。
3.Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the
2.The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who
spirit of China Aerospace experts,I'll apply myself to
taught us about the different characteristics and uses of
study so that I can make contributions to our country like
various plant species.活动以当地植物学家的讲座开始,
them one day.中国航天专家的杰出成就让我惊叹,中国
他向我们介绍了各种植物的不同特性和用途。
航天专家的精神让我感动,我将努力学习,希望有一天
能像他们一样为国家做出贡献。
晨诵2◆背满分模板
Achievement Expo of China Aerospace
Today's trip to the City Astronomy Museum was really a memorable
experience and this will be engraved in my mind forever.
模板中黑体字部分是描写
自然探索应用文时可以通用的
All senior I students visited an exhibition themed on "Achievements of China
部分,其他部分可以根据写作要
Aerospace".First,we attended informative lectures and watched extremely
求灵活处理。
exciting videos about launching rockets,which allowed us to get deeper insights
第一、二段往往是一般过去
into China Aerospace.Then came the highlight,experiencing thrilling and
时,第三段有时可用一般将
funny spacewalks in almost zero gravity.
来时。
Amazed by the outstanding achievements and touched by the spirit of
文章人称以第一人称为主。
China Aerospace experts,I'll apply myself to study so that I can make
contributions to our country like them one day.
Wednesday
自然探索类应用文写作跟踪训练
跟踪训练1◆自然探索
假定你是李华,上周六你校在图书馆举办了一场学生英语演讲比赛,主题为“是否应该进行海洋探索”。现在请
你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参赛对象:2.比赛情况:3.比赛意义。
注意1.词数80个左右:2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
An English Speech Contest on Ocean Exploration
[范文]
An English Speech Contest on Ocean Exploration
To arouse our awareness of protecting the ocean,an English speech contest about whether we should
explore the ocean was organized in our school library last Saturday.
The competition started at 9:00 a.m.and lasted two hours.Students who had a good command of
English and showed great interest in this topic took turns to give us a speech.Their performances on the stage
were so wonderful that they were greeted with applause and praise.
It was evident that the activity was well organized and was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich
our school life but also enable us to realize the importance of protecting the ocean.
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高分亮点
高分词汇:①arouse.☑引起,激起②awareness n.认识,意识③take turns轮流④performance n.表演,演出
⑤applause n.掌声,喝彩⑥be highly spoken of受到高度评价⑦enrich.使充实,使丰富
高分句型:(句型I)To arouse our awareness of protecting the ocean,an English speech contest about whether we should
explore the ocean was organized in our school library last Saturday..(运用了不定式作目的状语和whether引导的宾语
从句)
2)Students who had a good command of English and showed great interest in this topic took turns to give us a
speech..(运用了who引导的定语从句)
3)It was evident that the activity was well organized and was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our
school life but also enable us to realize the importance of protecting the ocean.(运用了that引导的主语从句,because引
导的原因状语从句以及部分倒装)
跟踪训练2◆自然探索
前不久,你校学生一同观看了神舟十七号飞船发射直播,大家备受鼓舞。为使学生了解更多的航天知识,你校决
定举行一次关于航天科学的讲座,假设你是国际学校的学生会主席李华,请用英语写一则书面通知,内容包括:1.讲
座的时间、地点:2.讲座的目的及内容:3.希望同学们踊跃参加。
注意1.词数80个左右:2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
The Students'Union
[范文]
Notice
Aimed at enabling students to acquire more knowledge about space flight,a lecture themed on space
science will be held in the school hall at 2 o'clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours.
The lecture mainly consists of three parts,the first of which is a brief introduction of the history,recent
lounch as well as development trends of space flight in our country.The second part presented by the same
experts will deal with the related scientific benefits.Additionally the third part highlights interaction,where
participants can ask questions they are curious about further arousing their enthusiasm in space exploration
and raising awareness of the importance of scientific innovation.
Those interested in the lecture are highly welcome to take part.
The Students'Union
高分亮点
高分词汇:①acquire v.获得②consist of组成3 interaction n.互动,交流④trendn.趋势,动态⑤additionally
ad.另外,此外⑥enthusiasm m.热情,热忧⑦innovation m.新事物;革新
高分句型:(句型1)The lecture mainly consists of three parts,the first of which is a brief introduction of the history,
recent launch as well as development trends of space flight in our country,(运用了“介词+关系代词which"引导的菲限
制性定语从句)
2)Additionally the third part highlights interaction,where participants can ask questions they are curious about
further arousing their enthusiasm in space exploration and raising awareness of the importance of scientific innovation.
用了wher心引导的非限制性定语从句)
Thursday
新作文基本功提高微技能16
续写中主旨句的描写
一、充满希望
l.Never give up no matter what happens,.no matter how hopeless.无论发生什么,无论多么绝望,都不要放弃。
2.Every cloud has a silver lining.There is always light at the end of the tunnel.Somebody sometime somewhere will shine
a lamp of hope..黑暗中总有一线光明。隧道尽头总有光明。某个地方的某个人在某时会点亮一盏希望之灯。
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二、追求梦想
1.As long as you have a dream,just go for it,and never give it up easily.Your dream might not come true in one or two
days,but it will someday.只要你有梦想,就去追求它,不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现,但总有
一天会实现的。
2.As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way,anything is possible-there's no end to where our
dreams can take us.只要我们敢于梦想,不让困难阻碍我们,一切皆有可能一我们的梦想能带我们去的地方永无
止境。
三、活到老学到老
l.It's never too late to lear.Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习求远不
会太晚。每个人都有权接受更多的挑战,做出更多的尝试。
2.It's never too late to go for your dream.As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it,you will
stand a chance to realize your dream.追求梦想水远不会太晚。只要你抓住每一个机会,充分利用它,你就有机会实
现你的梦想。
四、成功没有捷径
1.There is no elevator to success,onl少y stairs.通往成功没有电梯,只有楼梯
2.There is no such thing as free lunch.天下没有免费的午餐。
五、坚持
I.Life is tough,but you can be tougher.生活很艰难,但你可以更坚强。
2.As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties.we will surely achieve our goal
in the end.只要我们不放弃希望,全力以赴克服一切困难,我们一定会最终实现我们的目标。
六、生活
I.Life is full of twists and turns,ups and downs,peaks and valleys.人生充满曲折,起起落落,高峰和低谷。
2.Life consists not in holding good cards,but in playing well those you hold..人生不在于拿好牌,而在于打好手中的牌。
七、积极乐观
l.Life is full of smiles and tears.Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life.生活充满了微笑和泪水。只有接受
它们,我们才能享受我们的生活。
2.Attitude is more important than facts for us.We cannot change our past;we cannot change the fact.However,the only
thing we can do is to hold a positive attitude.对我们来说,态度比事实更重要。我们无法改变我们的过去:我们无法
改变事实。但是,我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度
八、勇敢面对挫折
1.Neither should we try to escape from difficulties nor should we be defeated by them.As the saying goes,what does not
kill you makes you stronger..我们既不应该递避困难,也不应该被闲难打败。俗话说,杀不死你的,只会让你更强大。
2.As Hemingway put it,a man can be destroyed but not defeated.正如海明威所说,一个人可以被摧毁,但不能被打败。
九、帮助
1.From then on.I would try my best to help others like the stranger I met.Only in this way,could more and more people
help each other in the futur心.从那时起,我会尽我所能像我遇到的陌生人一样帮助别人。只有这样,未来才能有越来
越多的人互相帮助。
2.It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world
so much better..我突然意识到,一瞬间的善意对另一个人来说意义重大,一个简单的行为就能让世界变得更美好。
十、自信
I.Never underestimate your power to change yourself.永远不要低估你改变自己的力量。
2.Though roses are the most beautiful,not everyone can have the chance to be a rose and Mimosas are also beautiful in
their unique way.政瑰虽然最美,但不是每个人都有机会成为玫瑰,含羞草也有自己独特的美丽。
十一、友爱善良
L,Kindness/Love makes the world go around..爱让世界运转。
2.He knew that with love and kindness from the world,he could go further.他知道,有了这个世界的爱和善意,他可以走
得更远。
十二、亲情
1.My father's love is like the sunshine,which brings me firmness and enthusiasm so that my will is strengthened.
就像阳光,带给我坚定和热情,使我的意志更加坚定。
2.Mother's love is the fuel that enables a normal human being to do the impossible,.母爱是i让一个正常人做不可能的事的
燃料。
十三、友情
l.Friendship is like the light of fireflies.The darker it is,the brighter the light will be,友谊就像萤火虫的光。越暗,光就
会越亮。
2.Make friends with people who build you up rather than tear you down.Spend time with people who inspire you to reach
for new heights.与建立你而不是摧毁你的人交朋友。花时间与微励你达到新高度的人在一起。
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Friday
读后续写示例指导16
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was admitted to the University of Alabama.I decided to get a puppy.So I adopted an adorable Golden
Retriever(金毛猎犬)puppy against my parents'wishes.
Soon,I realized my parents were right.The dog was so naughty that it caused me a lot of trouble every day.In fact.
she soon earned the nickname (Bella the Devil at school.
However.as time went by,she taught me how to be a better dog mom,and I taught her how to be a better dog.We
became best friends and did everything together.Bella was there for me all the time:parties,restaurants,games,even
dates!We loved spending time together.By the time I was a senior.Bella and I developed a stronger relationship.She was
truly my best friend.
In the third year.I worked at the local college bar not far from the house.One night,I was running late.Bella and I had
been with friends down the street when I realized it was already 9:00 p.m.We had to rush home so I could make it to work
by 9:30.I ran through the front door and jumped to the bathroom to have a shower.Bella followed me into the bathroom and
lay in her usual place on the bathroom floor.Then I heard my front door open.It was so loud that I thought it was strange.It
couldn't be my roommate for she had flown to New York.I turned off the shower and yelled her name.No answer.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
Instantly.I knew something was seriously wrong.
Then I went outside to find Bella with the policemen.
语篇解读
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了主人公在上大学的时候领养了一只金毛猎犬,开始的时候因为狗狗的调皮而感
到烦恼,但随着时问的推移,她和狗狗建立了深厚的友谊,成为最好的朋友。在主人公忙绿的大学生活中,狗狗一直
陪伴在地身边,成了地最忠实的伴侣。然而,在主人公的大三那年,她经历了一件惊险的事情,狗狗的表现让地感到
惊异和感动。
审题要素
本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文,属于“人与自然”中的“人与环境、人与动植物”,写作要用一般过去时,
人称以第一人称为主。
“五维立意”写作法结构图
维度
原文
文意
1.When I was admitted to the University of
1,当我被阿拉巴马大学录取时,我决定养一
点题
Alabama.I decided to get a puppy.
只小狗。
(事件)
2.So I adopted an adorable Golden Retriever
2.所以我违背父母的意愿,收养了一只可爱
(金毛猎犬)puppy against my parents'wishes.
的金毛猎犬。
1.The dog was so naughty that it caused me a
lot of trouble every day.
1.这只狗太淘气了,每天都给我带来很多
麻烦。
2.We became best friends and did everything
进程
(发展)
together.
2.我们成了最好的朋友,做什么事都在一起。
阅读任务
3.Then I heard my front door open.
3.然后我听到前门开了。
4.I turned off the shower and yelled her
4.我关掉淋浴器,大声喊着她的名字。没有
可应。
name.No answer.
冲突
It couldn't be my roommate for she had flown
(矛盾点)
to New York.
不可能是我的室友,因为她已经飞去纽约了。
评议
(议论)
She was truly my best friend.
她真的是我最好的朋友。
结局
结局1(第1段):
在家中出现的情况及作者的应对措施。
(结果)
结局2(第2段):
找到了Bla,警察发现了闻入家中的男子,以及作者的心情。
写作任务
回应
生成答案
续写线索:意识到问题一迷花无助
拨打电话
-找到Bella-
警察搜查—一感悟
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根据以上提示整理出答案:
高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文
Instantly,I knew something was seriously wrong.At this moment.Bella faced the door.
growling)with the hair raised on her back I had never seen her like that before.
Someone was in mu house,and I was in danger.When I felt lost and helpless.Bella charged
through the bathroom door.I heard a struggle in the living room.crashing of
furniture.a man yelling,and then the front door opening again.Bella went barking after
him I iumped out of the shower got dressed quicklu and called 911.Scared to go out.I
waited until the police came.
Then I went outside to find Bella with the policemen.Thank goodness,we found her.
unharmed As the police asked questions and searched the house Bella staued by mu
side the whole time.the police found a man hidina behind a house down the street with
a broken forearm and blood on his shirt from something that looked like a dog bite.Bella
was my hero.and I was so thankful for her courage that niaht.I couldn't imagine what
would have happened if she hadn't reacted so quickly and bravely.There is no doubt
that she is mu Bella the Angle!
Saturday
读后续写话题训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Allen was playing in his room.He heard a familiar chirping and rustling from the cage in the bedroom corner.It was his
beloved Blue Finch,named Mary.The boy had cared for the bird since he was six,a gift from his mother for graduating
from kindergarten and entering primary school.Now.at 12 years old,Allen had just recently celebrated his primary school
graduation and was about to take another step in his life journey toward junior high school.For the past six years.Mary was
his constant companion and closest friend.
As he grew up,Allen found it difficult to make friends or be close to others.Having had to move around many times
and transfer schools due to his father's work in the military.Allen never felt like he truly belonged in any one place.He
always knew it wouldn't be long before he would have to move yet again.The stress and pressure of a constantly mobile life
also led to strain and pressure at home,leading to loud arguments and fights between his mother and father which he could
hear from behind closed doors.
But,throughout all of this,Allen's closest friend and companion-the true source of stability in his life-was Mary.
his finch.But Mary was more than just a simple and calm pet:whenever Allen felt sad,the bird would always be singing
and chirping,almost as if she sensed how he felt and wanted to lift his spirits.And when Allen fed the bird,Mary always
moved across her branch to rest against his finger,never failing to bring a smile to Allen's face.Yet,one summer day after
Allen had come home after a walk at the park.he found the window of his bedroom open and the door of Mary's cage
open-the bird was gone.Suddenly,Allen realized that he must have left the cage open after cleaning it and forgot about the
window being open on such a hot day.Upset,Allen fell down to the floor sobbing.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右:2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
Upon hearing the noise,Allen's mother rushed upstairs and asked what had happened.
Filled with anticipation.Allen and his mother went outside to look for Mary.
[语篇解读]文章以男孩和蓝榔Mary的故事展开。Allen从6岁就开始养Mary,Mary对他来说不仅是宠物鸟,更是
他的朋友。因为父亲在军队工作,Alen需要常常搬家,换新的学校,因此他发现很难和别人相处。每当Allen感到悲
伤时,Mary的叫声就像给他安慰。但是有一天,Allen忘记关密户,Mary飞走了,Allen非常难过。
Week16自然探索类应用文写作&和谐自然类读后续写
[段落续写]①根据第一段首句“一听到声音,Aln的母亲冲上楼,问发生了什么事。”可知,下文可描写妈妈安慰
Allen,并带着他一起去寻找Mary。②根据第二段首句“Alen和妈妈满怀期待地出去找Mary。”可知,下文可描写他们
寻找Mary的经过,以及最终找到Mary。
[范文]
Upon hearing the noise,Allen's mother rushed upstairs and asked what had happened."Mary.she's...she's gone,"
Allen sighed sadly with disappointment."Don't worry.honey,"said his mother,trying to convey comfort and
confidence."Let's move together and find Mary.Six years of companion has established a close bond between
both of you.She will definitely come back to her family."Allen's mother then kissed him fondly on the forehead
and helped him back up from the floor.Hand in hand,they made their way downstairs and to the front door.
Filled with anticipation,Allen and his mother went outside to look for Mary.They called out Mary's name,even
imitating bird sounds as they walked down the street.They scanned their way down one block after another-
eventually they found themselves at the entrance of the park Allen and Mary had been to multiple times.
Amazingly,it was Mary that was perching atop of the bench where Allen always liked to sit in times of sorrow
and loneliness.At the sight of Allen,Mary unhesitatingly spread her wings and flew,chirping all the way.into
Allen's cupped hand.His mother was right after all:Mary always found her way back to Allen's heart.
高分亮点
高分词汇:①sigh v.叹气,叹.息②disappointment n.失望,沮丧③convey.传送;表达④anticipation m.f预期,预
料⑤imitate.模仿,仿效6 multiple adj.多个的,多种的⑦perch(鸟)栖息,停留⑧unhesitatingly ad血.不
踌躇地:迅速地
高分句型:(句型1)“Don'tworry,honey,”said his mother,trying to convey comfort and confidence,.“Letr's move
together and find Mary..”(运用了现在分词作状语)
2)Amazingly,it was Mary that was perching atop of the bench where Allen always liked to sit in times of sorrow
and loneliness.(运用了强调句及where引导的定语从句)
Sunday
周末跟踪提分训练
第一节◆应用文写作
上周末你参加了英语老师组织的“探索校园植物,制作英语树签”的活动。请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包
括:1.活动过程:2.收获与感想
注意1.词数80个左右:2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
参考词汇树签plant label
[范文]
To encourage us to explore plants on our campus,our English teacher launched an activity "exploring
campus plants,making plant labels"last Sunday.
The wonderful exploration began with a 30-minute instruction in our classroom through which we knew
our hands-on tasks and basic principles of making plant labels.Then we went to our school botanical garden to
identify each plant,making a note of their names and looking for information online about the plants.At last,
wonderful plant labels were made.
The activity greatly won our favor.Apart from providing us with a chance to relax physically and mentally.
it also helped us deepen our insight into the plant world.
高分亮点
高分词汇:①explore v.探讨,探索②launchv.发起③label n.标签,标牌④identify.认出,识别⑤apart from
除了…之外6 deepen(使)变深,加深⑦insight.了解:洞察力
高分句型:(句型I)The wonderful exploration began with a30-minute instruction in our classroom through which we
knew our hands-on tasks and basic principles of making plant labels..(运用了“介词+which”引导的定语从句)
(2)Then we went to our school botanical garden to identify each plant,making a note of their names and looking
for information online about the plants.(运用了现在分词作结果抉语)】
启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写
第二节◆读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文
Willie's aunt sent him for a birthday present a little writing book.There was a place in the book for a pencil.Willie
thought a great deal of this little book,and always kept it in his pocket.
One day.his mother was very busy,and he called his dog,and said,"Come.Caper.let us have a play."When
Willie's mother missed him,she went to the door and looked out,and could not see him anywhere:but she knew that
Caper was with him,and thought they would come back before long.She waited an hour,and still they did not come.When
she came to the gate by the road,she met Mr.Lee,Willie's father,and told him how long Willie had been gone.Mr.Lee
thought he must have gone to sleep under the trees.So they went to all the trees under which Willie was in the habit of
playing.but he was not here to be found.By this time the sun had gone down the news that Willie was lost soon spread over
the neighborhood,and all the men and women turned out to hunt.They hunted all night.The next moming the neighbors
were gathered round,and all were trying to think what to do next,when Caper came bounding into the room.
There was a string tied round his neck,and a slip of paper tied to it.Mr.Lee,took the paper,and saw that it was a
letter from Willie.He read it aloud.It said,"Ooof.father!Come to me.I am in the big hole in the pasture ().
Everybody ran at once to the far corner of the pasture;and there was Willie,alive and well in the shaft ()
Oh,how glad he was when his father caught him in his arms,and lifted him out!
Now I will tell you how Willie came to be in the shaft and the whole story.He and Caper went to the pasture field,and
came to the edge of the shaft and sat down.In bending over to see how deep it was,he lost his balance and fell in.
注意1.续写词数应为150个左右:2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
He tried very hard to get out,but could not.
When he awoke,it was morning,and he began to think of a way to get out.
[语篇解读】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Willie和他的狗出去玩儿,很久都没有回来,后来狗Caper回来的时候
脖子上系着一根绳子,上面系着一张小纸片,是Wie的求救纸条,Willie的爸爸看了以后找到了Wi心并把他从井
里救了出来。
[段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“他非常努力地想逃出去,但是逃不出去。”可知,第一段可描写狗也掉下井及
wlie呼救。②由第二段首句内容“当他醒来时,已经是早晨了,他开始想办法出去。”可知,第二段可描写Wie想到
的出去的办法是什么。
[范文]
He tried very hard to get out,but could not.When the good little dog saw that his master was in the shaft,he
would not leave him,but ran round and round,reaching down and trying to pull him out.But while Caper was
pulling Willie by the coat sleeves,o piece of sod gave way under his feet,and he fell in too.Willie called for his
father and mother as loud as he could call but he was so far away from the house that no one could hear him.
He cried and called till it was dark,and then he lay down on the ground,and Caper lay down close beside him.
It was not long before Willie cried himself in sleep.
When he awoke,it was morning,and he began to think of a way to get out.The little writing book that his aunt
had given him was in his pocket.He took it out,and after a good deal of trouble,wrote the letter to his father.
Then he tore the leaf out,and took a string out of his pocket,and tied it round Caper's neck,and tied the letter
to the string.Then he lifted the dog up,and helped him out,and said to him,"Go home,Caper,go home!"The
little dog scampered away,and was soon at home.
高分亮点
高分词汇:①sleeve n.轴子:袖套②lie down躺下③a good deal of很多④sodn.草地;草皮⑤scamper away
跑开
高分旬型:(句型I)Willie called for his father and mother as loud as he could call but he was so far away from the house
that no one could hear him.(运用了that引导的结采状语从句)
(句型2)The little writing book that his aunt had given him was in his pocket.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)