Week 13 健康与饮食类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 13 健康与饮食类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 Monday如何写好健康与饮食类应用文写作 典题示例 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Sev对中国美食很感兴趣，他想让你推荐一种中国传统美食。请给他回信，内容 包括：1.推荐的美食：2.推荐的理由：3.希望有机会来中国品尝美食。 注意1.词数80个左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Steve. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 般现在时为主 话题 推荐中国美食 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题，说明写信目的：第二段：推荐美食理由：第三段：希望对方接受推荐建议 OStep Two词汇运用 l.对…感兴趣be interested in 7.可口的delicious 2.推荐recommend 8.与…有联系be associated with 3.理由factor 9.乡愁homesickness 4.如下as follows 10.口味和馅料f1 avors and fillings 5.被认为是be considered as 1l.各不相同vary from 6.传统食物traditional food OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我知道你对中国菜感兴趣。 I know that you're interested in Chinese food. (2)我想向你推荐饺子。 I'd like to recommend you dumplings. (3)我推荐的理由如下。 The factors for my recommendation are as follows. (4)饺子被认为是中国文化的象征。 Dumplings are considered as a Chinese cultural symbol. (5)饺子是一种传统食物。 Dumplings are a kind of traditional food. (6)这种传统食物几乎受到中国各地人们的喜爱。 The kind of traditional food is loved by people almost everywhere China. (7)饺子很容易做。 Dumplings are easy to make. (8)饺子吃起来很可口。 Dumplings are also delicious to eat. 115 启航语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 (9)饺子里面通常是白菜，猪肉或其他东西。 What usually goes inside dumplings is cabbage and pork or something else. (10)最重要的是，自制饺子往往与乡愁联系在一起。 Most importantly homemade dumplings are often associated with homesickness. (11)不同家庭的饺子口味和馅料各不相同。 Flavors and fillings vary from family to family. (12)如果你能考虑我的推荐，我会非常高兴。 I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation. (13)我希望有一天你能来中国品尝中国菜。 I hope you can come to China to taste Chinese food some day. 2.句式升级 (1)用现在分词作状语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 Knowing that you're interested in Chinese food,I'd like to recommend you dumplings. (2)用过去分词作状语，ht引导定语从句合并上题中的句子(4)、(5)和句子(6)。 Considered as a Chinese cultural symbol,dumplings are a kind of traditional food that is loved by people almost everywhere China. (3)用not only..but also句式合并上题中的句子(7)和句子(8)。 Dumplings are not only easy to make but also delicious to eat. (4)用s引导原因状语从句合并上题中的句子(10)和句子(11)。 Most importantly homemade dumplings are often associated with homesickness,as flavors and fillings vary from family to family. OStep Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Steve, Knowing that you're interested in Chinese food,I'd like to recommend you dumplings. The factors for my recommendation are as follows.Considered as a Chinese cultural symbol,dumplings are a kind of traditional food that is loved by people almost everywhere China.Dumplings are not only easy to make but also delicious to eat.What usually goes inside dumplings is cabbage and pork or something else. Most importantly homemade dumplings are often associated with homesickness,as flavors and fillings vary from family to family. I'll be glad if you con consider my recommendation.I hope you can come to China to taste Chinese food some day. Yours. Li Hua Tuesday 健康与饮食类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 traditional food传统食物 delicious美昧的，芬芳的 dumpling水饺 healthy food健康食品 temper性情，脾气 recipe菜谱 lour面粉 powder粉，粉末 harvest收割，收获（物） feed喂（养）：饲（养） go bad(食物等的)变坏，变质 slim纤细的：苗条的 put on weight发福：增加体重 lose weight体重减轻 a healthy diet健康饮食 cure治愈；除掉 recover痊愈，恢复 energetic精力充沛的 well-built身材健美的 suffer from.,,忠上 mentally unhealthy心理不健康的 go on diet节食 proper diet恰当的饮食 be in good health/shape/condition身体健康 take three meals on time按时吃三餐 feel weak(well,terrible,sick)感觉虚弱（健康/很槽/恶心） 16 Wek13健康与饮食类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 :3.Adopt good sleep habits,as early to bed and early to rise 话题句式 makes you energetic,养成良好的睡眠习惯，早睡早起会 引出话题先声夺人 让你精力充沛。 1.Knowing that you're interested in Chinese food,I'd like 4.In addition,during the period of exams,we should not to recommend you dumplings.知道您对中国菜感兴趣， stay up too late.此外，在考试期间，我们不应该熬夜 我想向您推荐铰子。 太晚。 2.A healthy lifestyle always counts.健康的生活方式总是 5.Additionally,we are at your service from eight in the 很重要的。 morning to ten in the evening.另外，我们从早上8点到 3.I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at 晚上0点为您服务 the moment..我很遗悠知道你现在过得很糟糕。 首尾结合余音回味 4.Want to enjoy healthy food?Our Green Restaurant located on the north of the City Square will be your best choice! 1.I hope you can come to China to taste Chinese food some dy.我希望有一天你能来中国品尝中国菜。 想要享受健康食品？我们的位于城市广场北侧的绿色 餐厅将是您最好的选择！ 2.Hope you can enjoy a happy and healthy vacation！希望 主题部分娓娓道来 你能享受一个快乐健康的假期！ I.Considered as a Chinese cultural symbol,dumplings are a 3.I promise you'll fall in love with our healthy dishes on the kind of traditional food that is loved by people almost first visit!Please come and taste！我保证你第一次来就 everywhere China.饺子被认为是中国文化的象征，是 会爱上我们的健康菜肴！快来尝尝！ 种深受中国各地人们喜爱的传统食物。 4.I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. 2.Dumplings are not only easy to make but also delicious to 希望你能很快平静下来，像往常一样生活。 eat.饺子不仅容易做，而且好吃。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 How to Stay Healthy During Summer Vacation A healthy lifestyle always counts.With summer vacation approaching. 模板中黑体字部分是写健康饮食 here are some tips for your reference. 应用文类时可以通用的部分，其他部分 Adopt good sleep habits,as early to bed and early to rise makes you 可以根据写作要求灵活处理。 energetic.Exercising regularly helps a lot,too.It's also strongly 第一段和第二段往往是一般现在 recommended to keep a balanced diet,which consists of a modest 时，第三段主要是一般将来时。 amount of meat.vegetables and fruit,especially during family reunions. 文章人称以第一人称和第二人称 Besides,don't forget to spare some time for your favorite books. 为主。 Hope you can enjoy a happy and healthy vacation! Wednesday 健康与饮食类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆健康与饮食 假如你是李华，你校国际部的交流生Tom给你发来电子邮件，说他在即将到来的考试前出现了忧虑、头痛、睡眠 差等情况，请你给他发一封电子邮件提出你的建议，内容包括：1.说明考试的目的：2.为考试做好必要的准备：3.注意 健康饮食、运动和睡眠等。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom. I have received your email saying that you are worried about the coming exam. Yours. Li Hua [范文] Dear Tom. I have received your email saying that you are worried about the coming exam.It is common for most of us students,but I think we can get rid of it. 启航语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 First of all,in my opinion,it's important for us to have a wise attitude towards exams.They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies,so there is no need to worry too much about the results.Furthermore,study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam.Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.In addition,during the period of exams,we should not stay up too late. I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval. Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①get rid of摆脱，除去②in one's opinion在某人看来③attitude n.态度④get along with进展 suffer from忍受，遭受⑥pressure n.压力⑦suggestion n.建议⑧approval m.赞成；认可 高分句型：（句型I)They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies,so there is no need to worry too much about the results..(运用了how引导的宾语从句) (句型2)Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams..(运用了部分倒装结构) 跟踪训练2◆健康与饮食 为吸引外国友人前来就餐，某绿色餐馆委托你用英语为其写一份广告宣传。要点如下：1，特点：(1)使用绿色材 料（无化学肥料，添加剂等）：(2)价格合理（优惠政策等）：2.地址：市广场北侧：3.营业时间：早八点至晚十点。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇添加剂additive [范文] Want to enjoy healthy food?Our Green Restaurant located on the north of the City Square will be your best choice! We offer all kinds of green products grown without any chemical fertilizers.In addition.we never use illegal cooking oil but use pure peanut oil while cooking.No forbidden additives are used in our dishes.If you come with over six other people,you'll enjoy the privilege of a 20%discount.Interested in our restaurant? Please come and enjoy in person.Additionally.we are at your service from eight in the morning to ten in the evening. I promise you'll fall in love with our healthy dishes on the first visit!Please come and taste! 高分亮点 高分词汇：①healthy food键康食品②chemical fertilizer化学肥料③in addition另外④illegal adj.非法的，违法 的⑤privilege m.特权，特殊待遇⑥fall in love with爱上 高分句型：（句型I)In addition,we never use illegal cooking oil but use pure peanut oil while cooking.(运用了while 引导的时间状语从句) (句型2)If you come with over six other people,you'I enjoy the privilege of a20%discount.(运用了if引导的条件状 语从句) Thursday新作文基本功提高微技能13 如何在应用文中使用三大从句 复合句可划分为状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句 2If you want to apply for membership.you are 三大类，而名词性从句又分为主语从句、宾语从句、表语 required to fill in the application form and send an e-mail to 从句和同位语从句。 pingpong(@123.com.如果你想申请成为会员，就需要填个 一、条理分明的状语从句 表格并发送到pingpong@I23.com。 状语从句主要包括时间、地点、条件、原因、让步、比 3Whenever I encounter difficulties,you always cheer 较、方式、目的和结果九类从句。在英语写作中，状语从me up and help me out.无论我何时遇到困难，你总是使我 句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用使作文更具吸引力。 振作起来，帮助我摆脱困境。 First of all,you'd better arrive on time because it is When I came back home,I shared my experiences polite to be punctual in China.首先，你最好按时到达，因 with my parents..我回家后，和父母分享了我的经历。 为在中国守时是礼貌的行为。 Week 13 健康与饮食类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 二、润色添彩的定语从句 (续表) 定语从句能够比较清楚地反映出学生对于语言较高 What's more,years of being monitor makes me a 的掌握能力，所以建议学生一定要在写作中至少使用 brilliant organizer,which will help a lot to keep the 个恰到好处的定语从句。 exhibition in order. DDuring the coming-of-age ceremony,the headmaster 2During holiday seasons,I will live in the countryside. congratulated us on stepping into the adult.reviewing the In the countryside air is fresh and people are friendly. growth period that we had experienced.在成人礼仪式上， During holiday seasons.I will live in the 校长向我们迈入成人阶段表示祝贺，回顾了我们成长的 countryside,where air is fresh and people are friendly. 经历 三、丰富多样的名词性从句 2It has always been an attraction for those who are 名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句，表语从句和同 keen on anything that is Chinese.它对和中国有关的任何 位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表达方式。 东西都狂热的人一直都有吸引力。 (DThrough the activity,what I felt is that I am able to 3 The film is mainly related to the development of our shoulder the responsibility and it makes us stronger and more school,which will greatly help us students know the determined.通过此次活动，我感到我能够承担责任了，这 school's history better and appeal to us to make 使我们更加坚强、更加坚定。 contributions to our school's development.这部影片主要 2It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing 与我们学校的发展有关，它不仅很大程度上帮助我们学 ping pong..众所周知，我们可以从打乒乓球中获益匪浅。 生更好地了解学校的历史，也呼吁我们要为学校的发展 3I hope the change will not cause you too much 做出贡献。 trouble.我希望这种改变不会给你带来太多麻烦。 As we all know,most of the ratings are based on To practise as much as possible is where the secret others'judgment on the product or service concerned.我们Iies.尽可能多地练习就是秘密之所在。 大家都知道，大部分排名是基于其他人对有关产品和服 5I hold the opinion that we should go to help them 务的评价」 (to)overcome the present difficulty.我认为，我们应该去 5We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People's 帮助他们克服目前的困难。 Park,where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. 在写作中如果我们能够把两个简单句合并为一个 们打算周日上午在人民公园会面，那里空气清新、风景 含有名词性从句的复合句，对写作是一种质的升华。 优美。 He said a lot at the meeting.His words were very 在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一·个 attractive. 定语从句，就是从低级到高级的转换。 -What he said at the meeting was very attractive. 2 Our women volleyball team had won the (What's more,years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer,and it will help a lot to keep the championship.The news encouraged us all greatly. -The news that our women volleyball team had exhibition in order. won the championship encouraged us all greatly. Friday 读后续写示例指导13 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 "What will we be singing for the contest this year?"a student from my high school choir.a singing team,asked eagerly. I hesitated this moment."I was thinking."I said."maybe we'll skip the contest and just work hard on the concerts this year. “NO！"the kids protested. "We've got to go to contest!" “n Class A." “lr's tradition!" This was true.Awards lined the front wall of the music room from the past successes of large,talented classes.But a change in educational policies,with an emphasis on academics,had reduced my choir to a mere thirty-two students.My section leaders had graduated or been forced to drop music classes,leaving me with young.inexperienced kids who couldn't read music,couldn't hold their parts,and could sing only a simple melody or song. "Maybe we could enter Class B this year,"I suggested,knowing even that would be a near-impossible mission. “No!"the kids screamed.“Class A!” I shook my head."Class A is extremely difficult." "We can do it!"they shouted."We can do it!" "I'll have to think about it,"I said,hoping their enthusiasm would die off in a couple of weeks. But that didn't happen.If anything,the class became more fixed.Every day they begged and begged and they insisted. Because I had to protect their self-pride I couldn't tell them they weren't good enough.My efforts to prevent their eagerness by showing them a difficult piece of music from the contest list,simply ended with."It's okay,Mrs.Pliszka,we'll get it." 79 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 I struggled to make a decision. When the contest day finally arrived,the kids felt ready to take on the world! 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的唱诗班因为教有政策政变，导致唱诗班的优秀学生变少，剩余一些音乐资 质不好的学生，但学生们对待青乐的热情高涨，蛋烈要求参加比赛，虽然作者勉强答应，但担心比赛结果会打击孩子 们的自尊心，然而孩子们并没有就此放弃，于是作者决心与他们一起迎接挑战，经过不解的努力，最终取得第一名的 成绩，孩子们永不放弃的精神使作者明白，永远不要怀疑任何学生或任何班级获得成功的可能性的故事。 审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”中的“积极的生活态度，正确的人生态度”，写作要用一 般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1."What will we be singing for the contest this year?"a student from my high school L.“今年的比赛我们要唱什么歌？”我高中唱诗 点题 choir,a singing team,asked eagerly 班的一个学生急切地问。 (事件) 2.“I was thinking."I said.“maybe we'l 2.“我在想，”我说，“也许我们今年不参加比 skip the contest and just work hard on the 赛，只在音乐会上努力。 concerts this year." l,“We've got to go to contest！" 2.“I'll have to think about it,”I said, 1.“我们必须去比赛！” hoping their enthusiasm would die off in a couple of weeks. 2.“我得考虑一下，”我说，希望他们的热情能 进程 在几周内消退。 3.Every day they begged and begged and 3.他们每天都求啊求啊，一直坚持。 (发展)》 they insisted. 4.My efforts to prevent their eagerness,by 4.为了阻止他们的热情，我从比赛名单上给他 showing them a difficult piece of music from 们看了一首难度很高的曲子，最后只是说：“没 the contest list,simply ended with."It's 关系，Pliszka夫人，我们会搞定的。” 阅读任务 okay,Mrs.Pliszka,we'll get it. My section leaders had graduated or been forced to drop music classes,leaving me 我的小组负责人要么毕业了，要么被迫放弃了 冲突 with young,inexperienced kids who 音乐课，留给我的是一群年轻的、没有经验的 (矛盾点) couldn't read music,couldn't hold their 孩子，他们不会读乐谱，不会演奏，只会唱简单 parts,and could sing only a simple melody 的旋律或歌曲。 or song. 评议 (议论) I hesitated this moment. 这一刻我犹豫了。 结局1（第1段）： 作者虽然担心孩子们会受到打击，但最终决定要参加比赛，并与孩子 起努力练习的过程。 结局 (结果) 孩子们带着作者的鼓励信心满满地参加比赛，并取得了令人难以置信 结局2（第2段）： 的优异成绩一第一名。孩子们水不放弃的精神使作者明白了，永远 不要怀疑任何学生或班级取得成功的可能性。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：担心但决心参赛一一努力练习一一参加比赛 取得第一名一感悟 20 Week13健康与饮食类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 I struggled to make a decision.On one hand,if I destroyed their hope,would I destroy their spirit?on the other hand.if we entered class A.would they be humiliated by the judges'comments?Finally one morning I walked into class."Kids!" demanded."We are entering the contest in Class A..."The rest of my sentence was lost in screams of delight and applause.As the weeks progressed.each morning the kids practised singing.worked on reading music.learned musical terms.practiced rhuthm and marked changes.prepared concert music.and went over and over the three contest numbers. When the contest day finally arrived,the kids felt ready to take on the world!As my choir went on the stage.I mouthed."Smile!"They looked confident.I took a deep breath.and we began.They performed masterfully.Two very long hours later the results were posted.I stood frozen.staring at the list in disbelief:a First Place award with the highest marks of all.All around kids were screaming and embracing.Warm tears wetted my cheeks.I was surrounded by kids who had a dream-kids who refused to give up-kids who taught me to never doubt the possibility of success for any student or any class ever again. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Rescue me My high school was in a border town,meaning we got new students who came over with their families from another country.Sometimes they'd speak English,and sometimes they didn't.Due to differences in various aspects.we were just sort of stuck with our own group. Lisa was a new one in our class,who sat beside me.She always wore a shining smile on her face,making her a bit different from others.However,we seldom talked to each other.The first time she was called on in my favorite U.S. History,she knew the answer (which I didn't),and she spoke in perfect English,which completely shocked me.Later,I secretly found she was also a U.S.history addict. One day,I was sitting in U.S.History,totally stressing about a midterm we were having the next day.I didn't even notice the headteacher come in.When he called my name.I didn't hear him.Then Lisa clapped me on the shoulder.When looking up,I found a strange expression on his face.Something was wrong.I figured I was in trouble,but I couldn't imagine for what. I followed the headteacher into his office.After being silent for a minute,the headteacher began to speak,"Your father has had a car accident.The doctors did everything they could to save him,but I'm afraid he didn't make it..."The news came as a big blow.I stood silently,tears rolling down my face. The next few weeks were a blur as we had the funeral (and began adjusting to life without my dad.I went back to school after I ran out of things to do at home.Everything felt a little different.I couldn't exactly explain how,but it just did.I felt like I couldn't talk to my friends about the same old things and couldn't deal with listening to the same stupid jokes.I started eating lunch on the bench (alone.Sometimes,I was just sitting there,eating nothing. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 One day,at lunch time,I sat on the bench as usual,staring off into space. Lisa and I started having lunch on that bench everyday. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在班级很少与Ls阳交谈。有一天，校长告诉作者父亲出了车祸。 父亲的葬礼后，作者脑子一片混乱，但不得不适应没有父亲的生活。作者回到了学校。作者觉得自已不能和朋友谈 论同样的旧事，也不能忍受听同样的愚鑫笑话。作者开始独自在长椅上吃午饭。有时，只是坐在那里，什么也不吃。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“一天，午饭时间，我像往常一样坐在长凳上发呆。”可知，第一段可描写作者沉浸 在失去父亲的悲伤中.这时Lsa主动接近作者，和作者交流，以及作者的感受。②2由第二段首句内容“从那以后，Ls 和我每天都在那张长凳上吃午饭。”可知，第二段可描写Ls每天中午陪着作者，给作者以安慰，作者逐渐从失去父亲 的悲痛中走出来，过上积极的生活。 [范文] One day,at lunch time,I sat on the bench as usual,staring off into space.Deeply immersed in sorrow,I tried to fight back my tears but I missed my dad so much.I could vividly remember the unforgettable moments spent with him.Suddenly.my thoughts were interrupted by a voice."Do you want something to eat?"I looked up and saw Lisa standing in front of me with two sandwiches in her hands."What?"I responded,feeling shocked at her question.Before I could realize what happened,she had sat down next to me.Then she handed me a sandwich,smiled at me and began to eat hers.We sat there,silently having our lunch without a word,but it seemed comfortable to just sit there with her. Lisa and I started having lunch on that bench everyday.We were always together,like peas and carrots. Sometimes,we talked about her hometown,U.S.history,school and other interesting stuff.Occasionally.we sat there,enjoying the silent company of each other.Being accompanied by her,I could feel a wave of warmth running through me.It was she who comforted me about my dad's death and helped me go through the darkest time in my life.Gradually,I found myself able to lead a positive and happy life.I owed Lisa a lot because she gave me warmth and comfort.She rescued me. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①vividly ad.生动地：强烈地②interrupt.打断③shocked adj.惊讶的④accompany.陪伴，陪同； 伴随⑤positive adj.积极的 高分句型：（句型I)Before I could realize what happened,she had sat down next to me.(before引导的时间获语从句 和what引导的宾语从句) (2)It was she who comforted me about my dad's death and helped me go through the darkest time in my life. 调句式) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收 到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了 影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1，表示理解并给予安慰：2.提出建议并说明理由。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息：3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇脾气，情绪n.temper Week13健康与饮食类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 Hi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Yours. Jamie [范文] Hi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.I can understand how you feel.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret.Here are three useful tips: First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play team games with your friends,as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours. Jamie 高分亮点 高分词汇：①control v.指挥；控制②temper m.性情，脾气③let out发泄：发出④effective adj.有效的：起作用的 ⑤positive adj.积极乐观的⑥carry on继续，坚持 高分句型：（句型1）The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'l 心g心t.(运用了soha引导的目的从句；省略了关系代词的定语从句) 2)Second.go outdoors and play team games with your friends.as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.（运用了祈使句；as引导的原因秋语从句) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Little Tom was a student in senior high school.He was not good at his work and failed many times in the exams,and he never knew why he couldn't catch up with others. One day.Tom and his teacher were walking through the forest.He was disturbed by the fact that his mind was in constant unrest.He asked his teacher."Why most people's minds are restless,and only a few have a calm mind?What can one do to calm the mind down?" The teacher looked at Tom,smiled and told him a story: On one beautiful day,an elephant was standing by the shade of a tree,eating its leaves.Suddenly.a small fly came buzzingly and landed on the elephant's ear.The elephant stayed calm and continued eating.ignoring the fly.The fly flew around the elephant's ear.buzzing noisily,yet the elephant seemed to be unaffected.This confused the fly,and it asked. “Are you deaf?” “No！”the elephant answered. "Why aren't you bothered by my buzz?"the fly asked. "Why are you so restless and noisy?Why can't you stay calm just for a few moments?"asked the elephant.and peacefully continued eating the leaves. The fly answered,"Everything I see,hear and feel attracts my attention,and all noises and movements around me affect my behavior. "What is your secret?How can you stay so calm and still,while I am buzzing around your ears?" "I can continue eating peacefully,because my five senses do not disturb my peace." 启航语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 "How is it possible?"asked the fly amazed and confused. "Because I don't let them rule my attention,"answered the elephant. "I am in control of my mind and my thoughts,and therefore,I can direct my attention where I want,and ignore any disturbance including your buzz." "And therefore."continued the elephant,"I am completely lost in the act of eating.enjoying my food and chewing it peacefully." 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 After listening to the story,Tom's eyes opened wide and smiled. From that day on,he paid his attention to whatever he was doing. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Tom是一名高中生。他不擅长他的学习，在考试中经常不及格，他从 来不知道为什么他赶不上别人。某天老师和伦在森林中散步时，老师给他讲述了苍蝇和大象的故事，大象因为注意 力菜中所以不会在意苍蝇的打扰，Tom也从中知道要集中注意力做率情的道理。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“听了这个故事，Tom睁大了眼睛，笑了。”可知，第一段可描写Tom从故事中得到 的感悟。②由第二段首句内容“从那天起，无论做什么，他都全神贯注。”可知，第二段可描写Tom的变化。 [范文] After listening to the story.Tom's eyes opened wide and smiled.He looked at his teacher and said."I now understand!When I am doing something.I am always not paying attention and I am easily disturbed by the things around me.So my mind is always in constant unrest.If I focus my attention on the things that I am doing,I will not care about whatever happens in the world around me and I will control my five senses and control my mind.""Yes,that's right,"the teacher answered. From that day on,he paid his attention to whatever he was doing.In class,his attention was completely fixed on what the teacher was saying.and he didn't talk with his deskmate any more,which made his deskmate amazed.When he was doing his homework no matter what was going on outside,he was not affected.His parents were surprised at his change and asked what had happened to him.He told the story about the fly and the elephant to them.Because of his efforts,he made great progress in the final examination. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①care about关心②ixon集中③constant adj,持续不断的，经常发生的④unrest m.不安⑤affect 以.影响：（疾病）侵袭，感染⑥make great progress取得巨大进步 高分句型：（句型I)When I am doing something,I am always not paying attention and I am easily disturbed by the things around me.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) (2)In class,his attention was completely fixed on what the teacher was saying,and he didn't talk with his deskmate any more,which made his deskmate amazed.(运用了what引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语 从句) 124