Week 12 爱心志愿类应用文写作&亲情友情类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week12爱心志愿类应用文写作&亲情友情类读后续写 Monday 如何写好爱心志愿类应用文写作 典题示例 假定你是李华，打算报名参加2024年巴黎夏季奥运会全球志愿者。你的新西兰笔友Tm有相关经验，请你写一 封信向他咨询，内容包括：1，写信目的：2.咨询内容：3.期待回复。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时和一般将来时 话题 咨询如何申请志愿者 人称 以第一人称和第二人称为主 结构 第一段：写信目的：第二段：具体咨询内容：第三段：期待回复 Step Two 词汇运用 L.热切地eagerly 6.提前in advance 2.申请appy 7.至关重要be of vital importance 3.志愿者volunteer 8.分享share 4.相关的relevant 9.变得熟悉become familiar with 5.寻求seck 10.机会opportunity Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)得知您正在为本月底参观我市博物馆寻找一名志愿者导游，我写此信是为了自我推荐。 Knowing you are searching for a volunteer guide for your coming visit to our city museum at the end of the month. I am writing to recommend myself. (2)我知道你有相关的经验。 I know you have relevant experience. (3)我写信向你寻求建议 I'm writing to seek advice from you. (4)首先，请告诉我应该提前准备什么。 To begin with,please tell me what I should prepare in advance. (5)一份令人信服的申请是至关重要的。 A convincing application is of vital importance. (6)你能给我一些关于如何写申请的建议吗？ Could you give me some advice on how to write it? (7)另外，如果您能详细地与我分享您的志愿者经历，我将非常感激。 What's more.I would appreciate you too much if you could share your volunteer experience with me in detail. (8)我认为这将有助于我熟悉这种工作。 I think it will help me to become familiar with this kind of work. (9)志愿服务可以提高我的社交能力，建立新的关系。 Volunteering can improve my social skills and build new relationships. 6 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 (10)我真的很希望得到这个机会。 I really hope to get this opportunity. (11)我一直等若你的回信。 I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. 2.句式升级 (1)用现在分词作状语合并上题中的句子(2)和句子(3)。 Knowing you have relevant experience,I'm writing to seek advice from you. (2)用since引导的原因状语从句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 Since a convincing application is of vital importance,could you give me some advice on how to write it? (3)用it作形式宾语升级句子(7)，同时运用whih引导的非限制性定语从句合并句子(7)和句子(8)。 What's more.I would appreciate it if you could share your volunteer experience with me in detail.which I think will help me to become familiar with this kind of work. (4)用s0that引导的结果状语从句合并上题中的句子(9)和句子(10) Volunteering can improve my social skills and build new relationships so that I really hope to get this opportunity. (5)把句子(11)升级为省略主语和谓语的省路句。 Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Tim. I am eagerly planning to apply to be a volunteer in the Paris 2024 Olympic Summer Games.Knowing you have relevant experience,I'm writing to seek advice from you. To begin with,please tell me what I should prepare in advance.Since a convincing application is of vital importance,could you give me some advice on how to write it?What's more.I would appreciate it if you could share your volunteer experience with me in detail,which I think will help me to become familiar with this kind of work.Volunteering can improve my social skills and build new relationships so that I really hope to get this opportunity. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua Tuesday 爱心志愿类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 call on号召 fraud欺诈，编局 outgoing爱交际的，外向的 warm-hearted热心的：热减的 offer提供 selfless help无私的帮助 overcome克服 orphanage孤儿院 charity慈善 do some charity做慈善 donate捐赠 enthusiasm热情 serve others服务他人 make a difference有作用或影响 volunteer志愿者，自告奋勇 rewarding值得的：有报酬的 take care of照顾，照料 think highly of高度评价 traditional virtue传统美德 appeal呼吁，恳请 grateful感激的；表示感谢的 respectful山y恭敬地；此致敬礼 kindness仁慈，善行：友好的行为 harmonious society和谐社会 offer a hand伸出援手 the promotion of morality道德的提升 responsible(对某人，某事)负责的 106 Week12爱心志愿类应用文写作&亲情友情类读后续写 :3.Or you ean design posters explaining to the elderly how to 话题句式 guard against the potential danger of Internet frauds. 引出话题先声夺人 你可以设计海报，向老年人解释如何防范网络欺诈的 1.I am eagerly planning to apply to be a volunteer in the 潜在危险。 Paris2024 Olympic Summer Games..我急切地计划中请 4.Secondly.I am so responsible,outgoing and warm- 。 成为2024年巴黎夏季奥运会的志愿者。 hearted that I can get along well with others easily. 2.In view of this phenomenon.we would like to call on all 我很负责、外向、热心，我可以很容易地与他人相处。 of you to give a hand.鉴于这种现象，我们想呼吁大家 伸出援助之手。 5.Moreover,my working experience as a volunteer in our 3.Knowing that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in local museum gives me another advantage over others. the local art gallery,I'm writing to apply to be a 外我在当地博物馆做志愿者的工作经历给了我另一 volunteer..得知当地美术馆将举办中国画展，我写信申 个优势。 请成为一名志愿者。 首尾结合余音回味 主题部分娓娓道来 1.If I'm lucky enough to be admitted,I will work hard to 1.The reason why I apply for this job is that I like English provide the best service for the contest..如果我有幸被录 and voluntary work very much,我申请这份工作的原因 取，我会努力为比赛提供最好的服务。 是我非常喜欢英语和志愿工作。 2.Small acts of kindness will go a long way..小小的善举会 2.Volunteering can improve my social skills and build new 大有悟助。 relationships so that I really hope to get this opportunity. 3.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into 志愿服务可以提高我的社交能力，建立新的关系，所以 consideration.如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。 我真的很希望得到这个机会。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Mr.Smith, Learning from the advertisement that you need some volunteers to serve the International English Speech Contest to be held in my city.I do hope to be 模板中黑体字部分是描写 one of them. 申请志愿者时可以通用的部分， The reason why I apply for this job is that I like English and voluntary 其他部分可以根据写作要求灵 work very much.For one thing,I'm good at expressing myself in English which 活处理。 helps me better communicate with others.For another,I'm outgoing and easy to 第一、二段往往是一般现在 get along with,which helps me work well with others. 时，第三段有时可用一般将 If I'm lucky enough to be admitted,I will work hard to provide the best 来时。 service for the contest.Thanks for considering my application and I'm looking 文章人称以第一人称为主。 forward to your early reply. Yours. Li Hua Wednesday 爱心志愿类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆爱心志愿 假定你是李华，你校学生会决定发起一项慈善活动，号召同学们帮助老年人学会使用智能手机，请你在学校英文 报上写一封倡议信。内容包括：1.活动的原因：2.活动的内容。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, Smartphones are essential in today's world. The Students'Union 107 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文] Dear fellow students, Smartphones are essential in today's world.However,many senior citizens find it difficult to use them.In view of this phenomenon,we would like to call on all of you to give a hand. Volunteers are in need.Join us,and you can contribute by demonstrating how to shop online,make appointments with doctors or communicate on social media with smartphones.Or you can design posters explaining to the elderly how to guard against the potential danger of Internet frauds. Small acts of kindness will go a long way.Looking forward to your active participation. The Students'Union 高分亮点 高分词汇：①essential adj.必不可少的，非常重要的②phenomenon m.现象③call on号召④demonstrate.示 范，演示⑤guard against防范⑥potential danger潜在危险⑦fraud n.欺诈，骗局 高分句型：（句型I)However,many senior citizens find it difficult to use them.(逵用了it作形式宾语） (2)Or you can design posters explaining to the elderly how to guard against the potential danger of Internet frauds. (运用了现在分词短语作后置定语) 跟踪训练2◆爱心志愿 假设你是李津，暑假在悉尼(Sydney)学习，得知当地美术馆(art gallery)要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志 愿者，主要内容包括：1.写信目的：2.个人优势：3.能做的事情。 注意1.词数80个左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯：3.开头和结束语已为你写好。 To whom it may concer, Yours. Li Jin [范文] To whom it may concern. Knowing that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in the local art gallery.I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer. Firstly.I am proficient in both Chinese and English.Therefore,I can answer various questions that people ask.Secondly.I am so responsible,outgoing and warm-hearted that I can get along well with others easily. Moreover,my working experience as a volunteer in our local museum gives me another advantage over others. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Jin 高分亮点 高分词汇：①apply.中请②volunteer.志愿者，义务工作者③proficient ad山.熟练的，精通的④responsible ad.(对某人，某事)负责的⑤outgoing adj.爱交际的，外向的⑥wam-hearted adj.热心的；热诚的⑦advantage n.有利条件，优势⑧application n.正式申请，书面申请 高分句型：（句型I)Secondly,I am so responsible.outgoing and warm-hearted that I can get along well with others easily.(运用了s0,.,that,,引导的结果状语从句) (2)Knowing that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in the local art gallery,I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer.(运用了现在分词作状语) 108 Week12爱心志愿类应用文写作&亲情友情类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能12 续写中环境的描写 在续写中，环境描写往往可以衬托出人物心情和事： 寒冷而凝结起的冰霜，在月光下变幻着色彩，若隐若现 件性质，如果是个人经历的话，环境变化一般都是用来村 地闪烁着。 托心情变化。比如，风和日丽，和风细雨能够衬托出人物 :5.A refreshing breeze brushed the mountain top,miles of 快乐幸福的心情或美好的事物：漆黑的夜晚，那主角一定 trees spread out below us and birds chirped between 是感到害怕：如果是写一个事件的话，环境变化也预示或 branches.清爽的微风拂过山顶，几英里长的树木在我们 者暗示事态变化，比如阴转晴那么事态就是走向了一个 脚下伸展开来，鸟儿在树枝间明啾。 好的方向，比如符合主角利益或者符合道义什么的。总 第二节：季节描写 的来说，“环境多次变化”就是烘托气氛、为文章做铺垫 一、常用词汇 表示情节走向，还有对主角心理的衬托。 L.autumn.秋季 第一节：天气描写 2.fall n.秋季（美） 一、常用词汇 3,spring n.春天 1.cloudless ad山.无云的，睛朗的 4.summer m.夏天 2.wave n.水浪 5.winter n.冬天 3.glitter vi.闪烁，闪耀 6.season m.季节 4.melt v,融化 7.monthly ad.&n.每月的：月刊 5.howl.嚎叫，咆哮 8.seasonal adi.季节的 6.cloudy adj.多云的 9.yearly adj.&ad.每年的 7.rainy adj..多雨的 10.do.点缀 8.windy ad.多风的 1l.transparent adj.透明的 9.foggy a山.多雾的 12.bum',炙烤 10.snowy ad.多雪的 13.frozen adj.冻僵的 11.icya.冰冷的：冷淡的 14.brown.变褐色 12.sunny adj.阳光明媚的，晴朗的 15.overwhelming adj.势不可挡的，压倒一切的 13.frost n,&i.霜东，结霜 16.torrent n.奔流，急流 14.frosty adj.降霜的，冻寒的 17.heat n.热，热浪 15.weather n.天气 18.atmosphere n.大气层：空气：氛围 16.hurricane n.腿风，狂风 I9.uneasy adj.心神不安的：不稳定的 17.yphoon n.台风 20.discomfort m.不舒适，不舒服 18.windstorm n.暴风 二、高频词块 19.storm n.暴风雨 1.spring rains春雨 20.snowstorm n.暴风雪 2.give out发出 21.sandstorm n.沙尘暴 3.a rainy season多雨的季节 二、高频词块 4.in the warm spring sunshine在春天温暖的阳光里 1.a full moon一轮满月 5.be buried in snow深埋在雪中 2,on the side of the sun太阳的另一面 6.under the blazing/scorching/buming sun of midsummer 3.creep into飘进 夏灼热的阳光下 4.sun1ight阳光 7.year after year年复一年 5.wet and cloudy climate潮湿阴沉的气候 8.year by year逐年 三、亮点句式 9.icy water冰冷的水 1.The sky was cloudless and a full moon hung in the sky. I0.bright green绿意盎然 天上没有一丝云彩，一轮满月挂在天空。 1I.flow through动 2.The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 12.be filled with充满着 晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云常在翩翩起舞。 13.fallen leaves落叶 3.The moon was a sharply defined crescent and the sky 三，亮点句式 was perfectly clear..天空异常明净，一轮弯月挂在天上， L.The spring rains quickened the earth.春雨让大地复苏。 轮廓十分清晰。 2.The lotus flowers are now in full bloom.The rose gives 4.The frost on the glass,frozen by the cold,changed out a sweet smell.荷花盛开了。玫瑰散发出甜美的 colors in the moonlight.and flickered faintly.玻璃上因 气味。 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 3.The icy water pierced my skin wit油needle--like chill..冰I9.romantic adj.浪漫（主义）的，有情调的：爱情的 冷的水像针一样刺穿我的皮肤。 20.reflect.反射 4.It was autumn,and the land was dotted with the gold and 二、高频词块 red and yellow of the changing leaves..秋天到了，金色 l.shine brightly闪闪发光 红色和黄色的叶子点缀着大地。 2.golden glow金色光芒 5.Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with 3.full moon growing rice.During autumn,these same mountains are 4.night sky fash gold,and in winter they are covered in sheets of5.beyond expression难以言表 white frost.夏天，水稻生长，群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山6.the Milky Way银河 铺金，冬天银装素裹。 7.orange light橙色的光 第三节：日月星辰景色的描写 8.blue sky晴空 一、常用词汇 9.light up照亮 1.skyn.天空 三、亮点句式 2.heaven n.天空 1.The moon was shining brightly on the snow,and in the 3.moon n.月亮 cold still air not a leaf moved on the trees.月亮在雪地上 4.star n.星星 闪闪发光，在寒冷的空气中，树上没有叶子在动。 5.planet n.行星 2.Tom lay in the warm sunshine,which cast a warm 6.universe n.字宙，万物 golden glow on his face.Tom躺在温暖的阳光中，阳光 7.sunny adj..和煦的：照到阳光的 在他的脸上投射出温暖的金色光芒。 8.sunshine n.阳光 3.Sparkling stars dotted in the sky blinked at us.星星点缀 9.blink,眨眼：闪烁 在空中，对着我们眨限睛。 10,dotp.散布于，遍布：点缀 4.The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the green 11.dawn n.黎明 grass underfoot.it was as if night and day had become 12.curtain n.幕布 one beautiful moment.Dawn had come,天空像是一亿只 13.ise.升起 纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼 13.hang.悬挂 已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。 14.sparkle vi.闪耀，闪烁 5.The lingering sunlight was swept by the rapidly falling 15.diamond m.珍珠 night,resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the 16.sunset n.夕阳 sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦 17.moonlight n.月光 除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。 I8.lighten以.使（某物）更明亮 Friday 读后续写示例指导12 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Right Thing My mother worked as a housekeeper and she was often given used toys as well as many other goodies by her clients. My elder sister and I always loved sharing the recycled books and board games brought home by my beloved mom.which we considered great gifts life presented us. The long-awaited Christmas finally approached.One December day,an old model toy car arrived in the load of goods. It was as long as my forearm and took both hands to lift.My sister didn't want it,so it was all mine.I immediately set down to wiping it clean and polishing it to a bright candy-apple red.It turned to be a thing of beauty,and I became overjoyed at possessing it.My elder sister was amazed at the newly-polished,refreshing toy car,with a hint of regret and envy in her eyes. As was planned,our relatives from France came to visit us that Christmas.It was a time when the family bond got strengthened.I shared the prized toy car with Alex,my young French cousin.Eyes glued to it,he fell in love with the wonderful,shiny red automobile the instant he saw it.It was a rare moment to see him feeling so relieved and happy.He'd been unlucky so far in life,suffering severe,life-threatening illnesses as a child,leaving him mentally and physically stuck and the family starved of cash.Of course,such lovely toys like my dear model car were unreachable dreams for him Seeing Alex's consuming thrill brought by the red car.I was seized by immense joy as well.But contrary to Alex's excitement,a voice inside me constantly reminded,"Watch out!He'd keep it for himself.",which got me faintly worried.I followed my cousin for fear of something. 0 Week12爱心志愿类应用文写作&亲情友情类读后续写 My mother also noticed Alex's fondness for the car.Approaching me,she asked gently in a low voice,"Would you like to give it to Alex?" 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Giving or keeping?I struggled with myself. In the moment of parting,my model car went with Alex. 语篇解读 本文以故事发展的线索展开，讲迷了作者在圣诞节临近的一天，收到了一辆老式二手玩具车，作者把它打磨得光 克，姐姐都很淡幕，在圣诞节，作者法国的亲戒来拜访作者一家，作者的表弟似乎是喜欢上了这辆红色的汽车玩具，作 者有点担心。 审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”中的“个人，家庭生活”，写作要用一般过去时，人称以 第一人称为主 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1.My mother worked as a housekeeper and she was often given used toys as well asI.我的母亲是一名管家.她经常从客户那里得 many other goodies by her clients. 到二手玩具和许多其他的好东西。 点题 阅读任务 2.My elder sister and I always loved sharing 2.我姐姐和我总是喜欢分享我亲爱的妈妈带 (事件)》 the recycled books and board games brought 回家的回收书籍和棋盘游戏，我们认为这是生 home by my beloved mom.which we 活送给我们的伟大礼物。 considered great gifts life presented us. 1.One December day,an old model toy car arrived in the load of goods. 1.12月的一天，一辆满载货物的旧模型玩具车 2.I shared the prized toy car with Alex,my 来了。 young French cousin. 2.我和我年轻的法国表弟Alex分享了这辆珍 进程 3.Seeing Alex's consuming thrill brought by 贵的玩具车。 (发展) the red car,I was seized by immense joy as3.看到Alex被那辆红色的车所带来的巨大的 well. 兴奋，我也被巨大的喜悦所占据。 4.Approaching me,she asked gently in a4.她走近我，轻轻地低声问：“你愿意把它给 low voice."Would you like to give it to Alex吗？” 阅读任务 Alex?” But contrary to Alex's excitement.a voice 冲突 inside me constantly reminded,"Watch 但与AIex的兴奋相反，我内心的一个声音不断 (矛盾点) out!He'd keep it for himself."which got 提醒我：“小心！他会自己留着的。”这让我有 点担心。 me faintly worried. 评议 (议论) I followed my cousin for fear of something 我跟着我的表弟是因为害怕会发生一些事情。 结局 结局1（第1段）： 作者内心所想，以及作者听到母亲的问题后的反应。 (结果) 结局2（第2段）： 作者最后决定把车给了表弟。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：送与不送的挣扎 送给表弟玩具的痛苦—想到表弟对玩具渴望后的决定—表弟带玩具离开—分 享带给作者的快乐—感悟 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 Giving or keeping?I struggled with myself.Giving it?Hardly could L imagine life without the model car!After all.it was my most precious treasure.which I had been proud of My heart kept aching at the prospect of giving it away.Nope!l shook my head determinedly.Glancing at my mother's expectant eyes.I couldn't help sobbing. Keeping it?Definitely.it would otherwise upset Alex.Torn between the two tough choices.I was totally at a loss.Nevertheless.deep down.I could feel my affection to Alex.Yep!l resolved to do the right thing In the moment of parting.my model car went with Alex.Though Lwas crushed to see it go.my heart sang when I saw his beaming face as he tightly clutched it.Seeing the thumbs-up from my mother and sister.I did swell with relief pride and iou.for I knew it was not a gift:to some extent.it was our concern and love for him.Plus. sharing the model car also strengthened our bond.which.I was fully convinced.would always uplift him.An effort made for the happiness of others lifted us above ourselves as well. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I still remember the day when we decorated the house,I was ten and it was two weeks before Christmas.I was looking forward to my presents.Since I'm the youngest in the family,all of the family members would give me a gift one way or another.Sometimes it was a cookie or a hug but it was always there.I was the only center of attention and it was feeling good. My uncles usually would ask me what I wanted before Christmas and that year I knew what I wanted.It was the spaceship I saw in the ads.I was dreaming of opening a big gift box,and it was there.But that year it came in a way that I wasn't expecting. It was two weeks before Christmas.Just two weeks.She couldn't wait.My dear mother told my father that it was time. and then we went to the hospital.After an hour,they told me that I had a sister now.But I didn't want a sister.I wanted a spaceship.The next few days went so fast.No one was caring about me.Everyone was talking about her and I knew that my life is never going to be the same ever again.I wasn't ready to grow up.to be a big brother.But it just happened in an instant. On the day before Christmas,everyone was in our home,talking only about my newborn sister.My family was becoming hers.Even my uncles didn't ask me anything about the gift.She stole everything I'd ever had,my life and my presents.Thinking about this.I cried to sleep.I had a nightmare (and woke up at the middle of the night.Shadows were all around me.and I was defenseless and so weak.I ran into my parents'bedroom but couldn't wake up my poor parents who were just too worn out.I was standing near their bed.trying not to cry when I saw her.She was awake and looking at me with her big eyes in her small bed. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying. After having comforted her,something slowly changed inside me. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索晨开，讲述了作者每年部会收到家里人的圣诞节礼物，而且作者是家里的唯一焦点， 这种感觉很好，但是那一年的圣诞节似乎不一样，作者的蛛妹在离圣诞节两周的时候出生了，于是在圣诞节的前 天，所有人的关注点都转移到了妹妹身上，没人何作者礼物的事情，作者很伤心，于是哭着睡着了，微了墨梦，在半夜 醒来，跑进父母卧室却叫不醒父母，结果发现妹妹醒了，正用她的大眼晴看着作者。 Week12爱心志愿类应用文写作&亲情友情类读后续写 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“突然，一个长长的影子走进卧室，她哭了起来。”可知，第一段可描写作者的妹妹 被长长的影子吓到害怕得哭了起来，作者安慰妹妹的过程。②由第二段首句内容“安慰了她之后，我的内心慢慢发生 了变化。”可知，第二段可描写作者的内心变化，有了当哥哥的责任感并且开始关心妹妹。 [范文] Suddenly a long shadow came into the bedroom and she started crying.Panic at first,I then realized that it was just a car passing by.But she felt uneasy,her mouth wide opening.arms waving.and legs kicking.I thought she might be scared too,so I held out my hand to hold hers,patting her on the back with the other.I even moved a bit closer to her little bed,whispering my favorite song to her ears.just as my mum did when I got scared.Surprisingly,she seemed to understand me and stopped crying.Looking into her big eyes,I breathed a sigh of relief. After having comforted her,something slowly changed inside me.The sense of loneliness was replaced by the responsibility of being an elder brother.Even though her arrival took over the center of the whole family initially. she started to become the center of my attention too.With her cute round face and sparkling eyes,she also won my love and care for her.I looked around and found my parents,awake,smiling at me.With a shadow of a happy family cast on the window,I felt my little sister was the best gift I'd ever got. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①pass by经过②whisper.耳语，低语，小声说③replace.取代：（用…）替换④cute adj.可爱的 ⑤uneasy ad.不安的⑥sparkling ac.闪烁的，闪亮的 高分句型：（句型I)I thought she might be scared too,so I held out my hand to hold hers,patting her on the back with the other.(省略连词的宾语从句和现在分词作状语) (2)I even moved a bit closer to her little bed,whispering my favorite song to her ears.just as my mum did when I got scared,(现在分词作状语和连词when引导的时间状语从句) (3)Even though her arrival took over the center of the whole family initially.she started to become the center of my attention too.(运用了even though连接的让步状语从句) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假定你是校青年志愿者协会会长李华，你校新来的交换生Jas0n有意加人该协会，写邮件向你咨询相关情况，请 你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示欢迎：2.协会介绍：3.加入方式。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [范文] Dear Jason, Glad to know your desire to be a volunteer of the Youth Volunteer Association.As a member,I do regard it worthwhile to be engaged in volunteering and I'm writing to give you my warm welcome. As for mojor activities,regularly.we are committed to raising funds and donations for those in need. Sometimes we hold events in the local community whose aim is to promote people's awareness of environmental protection. Once you have decided,please fill in the application form attached and send it to me.Looking forward to your participation. Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①as for关于②be committed to奉献③promote,.促进④be engaged in从事⑤association n.协 会，社团⑥awareness n.认识，意识 高分句型：（句型1）Sometimes we hold events in the local community whose aim is to promote people's awareness of environmental protection.(运用了whose引导的定语从句) (句型2)Once you have decided,please fill in the application form attached and send it to me.(运用了once引导的时 间快语从句) 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In order to join the Merchant Marines,I had dropped out of college after my first semester.Using an article from Life magazine as my guide I decided to hitch-hike down to New Orleans and see the world. My family was relatively poor and my youth had been in the workingman's section of a large New England mill town. My father and I had a hard time since my mother passed away.As she lay dying,my mother said to me in a weak voice, "Son,remember to ask your father for advice at every juncture of your life."Yet we seemed more like room-mates rather than father-son.He thought I was foolish for dropping out of school,so I didn't inform him of my plans. I left a note on the kitchen table,telling him I was going to New York City for a few days and would be back soon I walked to a highway near where I lived.stuck my thumb out,and was "on the road". My trip to New Orleans was a mistake.The Merchant Marine wasn't taking on any people for a while.I decided to wait in New Orleans until it did.I lasted over a week,living in a dirty hotel until my money started to run out.I had to stay up in the park for a few days.Life seemed to become a continuous adventure.From New Orleans I went to New York and stayed with a friend for a few weeks,and then went to Martha's Vineyard.living on the beach in April.Later,I lived in an abandoned house in Nantucket and ended up with a long stop in Boston.There was no word from the Merchant Marine.I felt so desperate. My close friend Jimmy called me one day and asked me how everything was going.I had to tell him the truth and he persuaded me to go back soon. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 When I returned to my father's,I had been away for more than two months. Finally,he said something about his childhood [语篇解读]这是一篇记叙文。作者在大学第一学期时退学，想要到新奥尔良去阅荡，结果并未如自已所想的那般 顺利，在花光身上的钱之后，不得不回家。回家后父亲没有责备作者，作者也听从了父亲的建议，去完成了学业。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“当我回到父亲家时，我已经离开两个多月了。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到家后 忐忑的心情。②由第二段首句内容“最后，他谈到了他的童年。”可知，第二段可描写父亲谈论自己的童年，给作者 建议。 [范文] When I returned to my father's,I had been away for more than two months.I expected him to be really angry becouse I hadn't colled or even sent a post card since I left.I walked into the living room and sat down,waiting for his anger to explode.My father was reading a piece of newspaper,glanced up,nodded at me,and then went back to his paper.He kept on reading for what seemed an hour but was probably only 5-10 minutes. taking no notice of me. Finally,he said something about his childhood.He put his newspaper down and looked at me.He shook his head,saying."It doesn't matter to make mistakes,but you should learn a lesson from mistakes."He said when he was young he didn't like listening to his parents and didn't take his parents'advice either,so he made a few big mistakes.At last he realized what he had done was wrong and asked for his parents'advice ever since.He suggested that I should go back to college to finish my degree.I decided to agree.After four years,years'hard study in college,I found a good job. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①explode,.(使)爆炸，（使）操破；急剧扩大②glance up抬头看③take no notice of忽视，不理会 ④make mistakes犯错误⑤keep on继续⑥realize.了解，意识到 高分句型：（句型I)I expected him to be really angry because I hadn't called or even sent a post card since I left.(运用 了because引导的原因状语从句：since引导的时间状语从句) 2)He kept on reading for what seemed an hour but was probably only 5-10 minutes,taking no notice of me. 用了what引导的宾语从句) 14