Week 11 体育运动类应用文写作&野外探险类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week11体育运动类应用文写作&野外探险类读后续写 Monday 如何写好体育运动类应用文写作 典题示例 假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友Peter在中国象棋网络挑战赛(Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition)中荣获 一等奖。现在请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下：1.表示祝贺：2.赞扬对方的付出：3.向对方学习。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式作答。 Dear Peter. Yours. Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 般过去时为主 话题 祝贺象棋获奖 人称 以第二人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题，说明写信目的：第二段：获奖理由：第三段：再次祝贺 Step Two词汇运用 1.赢得win 7.奉献devotion 2.一等奖the first prize 8.勤奋diligence 3.竞赛competition 9.为某人树立榜样set an example for sb. 4.迫不及待can't wait to do 10.导致，由于account for 5.城挚的祝贺sincere congratulations 1l.技巧technique 6.牺牲sacrifice Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)太棒了。 It's amazing. (2)你以外国人的身份在中国象棋网络挑战赛中获得了第一名。 You have won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. (3)我迫不及待地想写信。 I can't wait to write. (4)我要向你表示衷心的祝贺 I want to express my sincere congratulations to you. (5)俗话说得好。 The old saying goes. (6)不劳无获。 No pains,no gains. (7)我记得。 I remember. (8)在过去的几年里，你柄牲了你的业余时间来提高你的技能。 In the past few years you have sacrificed your spare time to improve your skills. (9)你的奉献和勤奋是你不断进步的原因。 Your devotion and diligence account for your constant progress. 96 Week11体育运动类应用文写作&野外探险类读后续写 (10)你真的为我树立了榜样，推动我前进。 You really set an example for me and push me to move forward. (11)作为一个象棋爱好者，我希望你能教我一些象棋技巧。 As a chess lover,I hope you can teach me some chess techniques. (12)我再次向你表示衷心的祝贺！ I will give sincere congratulations to you again! 2.句式升级 (1)用t作形式主语的用法合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 It's amazing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner. (2)用不定式作日的状语合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。 I can't wait to write to express my sincere congratulations to you. (3)用s引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 As the old saying goes,"No pains,no gains." (4)用hat引导宾语从句合并上题中的句子(7)和句子(8)。 I remember that in the past few years you have sacrificed your spare time to improve your skills. (5)用s0ht引导的结果状语从句合并上题中的句子(9)和句子(10)。 Your devotion and diligence account for your constant progress so that you really set an example for me and push me to move forward. (6)用省略主语和谓语的用法升级句子(12)。 Sincere congratulations to you again! Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Peter. It's amazing that you hove won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a foreigner.I can't wait to write to express my sincere congratulations to you. As the old saying goes."No pains,no gains."I remember that in the past few years you have sacrificed your spare time to improve your skills.Your devotion and diligence account for your constant progress so that you really set an example for me and push me to move forward. As a chess lover,I hope you can teach me some chess techniques.Sincere congratulations to you again! Yours. Li Hua Tuesday 体育运动类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 host主办 the first prize一等奖 competition比赛 participate in参加 event项目 participation参加，参与 team spirit团队精神 athlete运动员 athletic运动的 coach教练 boxer攀击手 high jump跳高 long jump跳远 basketball篮球 volleyball排球 badminton羽毛球 tennis网球 table tennis乒乓球 baseball棒球 wrestling捧跤 boxing拳击 chess象棋 bridge桥牌 marathon马拉松 the shot-put推铅球 gymnastics体操 gymnasium体育馆=gym dash短跑 physical activities体有活动 champion冠军 championship锦标赛 ground/ield场地 tack跑道 coun网球场 gold medal金牌 performance表现 break the record打破纪录 record holder纪录保持者 audience,/spectator现众 judge裁判 competitor运动员，参赛者 applause/.applaud鼓掌欢迎，热情称赞 启航英语1 高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 :2.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m.to 「话题句式 4:30p.m.on our playground.活动定于下午3点至4 引出话题先声夺人 点30分在我们的操场举行。 1.It's amazing that you have won the first prize in the 3.The players are scheduled to practice playing soccer after Chinese Chess Network Challenge Competition as a school every day from5p.m.to6p.m.球员们被安排在每 天下午5点到6点放学后练习踢足球。 foreigner..作为一，个外国人，你在中国国际象棋网络挑 首尾结合余音回味 战赛中获得了第一名，真是太神奇了。 I.If you meet the requirements and love sports,please call 2.The soccer team of our school will invite high school M.Green at 123456 for an interview.如果你符合要求，热爱 students to work as soccer players this term.这学期我们 运动，请致电123456Geen先生进行面试。 学校的足球队将邀请高中生担任足球运动员。 2.We welcome everyone to join in this exciting event and 3.Congratulations on your winning the first place in the make the most of this opportunity to learn about and long-distance running race at the school's sports meeting! participate in traditional Chinese sports..我们欢迎大家参 祝贺你在学校运动会长跑比赛中获得第一名！ 加这个激动人心的活动，充分利用这个机会了解和参 与中国传统体育。 主题部分娓妮道来 3.With each participating team making full preparations for the 1.Anyone who is good at playing soccer and has team spirits coming match,I'm sure this will be a visual feast for will be welcome.任何擅长踢足球和有团队精神的人都 everyone.每个参赛队都在为即将到来的比赛做若充分的 会受到欢迎。 准备，我相信这将是一场视觉盛宴。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 NOTICE We are excited to announce that our school will host the "Traditional Chinese Sports Week"to encourage everyone to participate in sports activities.The event 模板中黑体字部分是描 will be held from next Monday to Friday on the playground. 写体有运动通知类时可以通 During this event,we will introduce a range of traditional Chinese sports. 用的部分，其他部分可以根据 such as martial arts,Dragon and Lion dances,and Jianzi.Through this event,we 写作要求灵活处理。 aim to help promote traditional sports and encourage students to be more active 由于是通知类，因此时态 往往是一般将来时。 and healthy. 文章人称以第一人称 We welcome everyone to join in this exciting event and make the most of this opportunity to learn about and participate in traditional Chinese sports. 为主。 Students'Union Wednesday 体育运动类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆体育运动 假定你是高中生李华，是学校足球俱乐部的一员，俱乐部要招募交换生，请你设计一个海报来吸引他们的加人。 内容包括：1.俱乐部活动内容：2.加人条件。 注意1词数80个左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Soccer Players Wanted [范文] Soccer Players Wanted The soccer team of our school will invite high school students to work as soccer players this term. The players are scheduled to practice playing soccer after school every day from 5 p.m.to 6 p.m.Soccer games are to be held at the end of each term.Anyone who is good at playing soccer and has team spirits will be welcome. 98 Week11体育运动类应用文写作&野外探险类读后续写 If you meet the requirements and love playing.please call Mr.Green at 123456 for an interview.We are looking forward to your participation. School Soccer Club 高分亮点 高分词汇：①schedulev.安排，预定②at the end of在…末端③be good at对…擅长④requirement m.要 求，必要条件⑤interview m.面试，面谈⑥participation m.参加，参与 高分句型：（句型1）Anyone who is good at playing soccer and has team spirits will be welcome..(运用了who引导的定 语从句) (句型2)If you meet the requirements and love playing,please call Mr..Green at123456 for an interview.(运用了if引 导的条件状语从句)】 跟踪训练2◆体育运动 假定你是学生会主席李华，你校运动会于今日结束，交换生Jck在运动会上获得长跑比赛第一名，请你给他写一 封邮件。内容包括：1.向他表达祝贺：2.通知他领奖品。 注意1.写作词数80个左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, Yours, Li Hua [范文] Dear Jack Congratulations on your winning the first place in the long-distance running race at the school's sports meeting! You're the first exchange student to win this honor.We really appreciate your wonderful performance. Following the successful conclusion of the sports meeting is the excitement of collecting prizes.All winners of the event are expected to claim their awards at the Students'Union.Yours.I am happy to say.is a smart watch,which I believe you'll like. Please come to the Students'Union before this weekend.Congratulations again! Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①honor n.荣誉②performance n.表演，演出③award m.奖，奖品④successful adj.成功的，如感以 偿的 高分句型：（句型I)Following the successful conclusion of the sports meeting is the excitement of collecting prizes.(运 用了倒装句) (句型2)Yours,I am happy to say,is a smart watch,which I believe you'll like,(运用了which引导的非限制性定语 从句)】 Thursday新作文基本功提高微技能I1 如何在应用文中使用并列句 并列句是用并列连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连 (续表) 接起来，在这一句型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句 型采取“就近原则”， 转折关系 but,yet,whereas 一、常见并列句的类型及并列连词 选择关系 or,otherwise,or else,either...or.... 类型 连词 not...but... 并列关系 and,as well as,both...and....not 因果关系 for,so,therefore,thus (递进关系) only...but also....neither...nor... 对比关系 while 99 启航演语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 DActually.I've been doing pretty well in my studies as I could also feast on the sweetness！我不仅可以体验水 well as in my1ife.实际上，我的学习和生活一直都很 果采摘，还可以尽情享受水果的甜美！ 顺利。 5.n0t.。.but.,,不是…，而是… 2Everyone in our society should help those in need,but So,from now on,let's not waste our time on it is more important to be sincere and earnest.在我们的社 unimportant things but have a heart-to-heart chat with our 会中每个人都应该帮助那些有困难的人，但更重要的 parents once in a while.因此，从现在起，让我们不要把 是真诚和认真。 时间浪费在不重要的事情上，而是时不时地与父母做 3All the classmates are friendly and kind,so you don't 倾心的交谈。 need to worry about the difficulty.所有的同班同学都非 6..,.while/.whereas…而，…却 常友好和善良，因此你没必要担心有什么困难。 Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had 二、并列句的常用句型 an idea of going to a nicer place.我的大部分同班同学都 l.both.,,and..,既…又… 想去公园，而我想去一个更好的地方。 On the Internet,people can seek information about their7.析使句/名词词组+and/or/otherwise-+陈述句 favourite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well,which DLearn to understand,and you will keep away from a is both time-saving and economical..在网上，人们可以搜 world full of sadness and disappointment..学会理解，你就 寻他们最喜欢的明星的信息，也可以买打折的票，既省 会从满是悲伤和失望的世界中摆脱出来。 时又实惠。 2More healthy food,or you'll break down sooner or 2.either.,0r..或者…或者…；不是…就是… later.多吃健康食品，不然你的身体迟早会垮掉 If you are interested in it,you may either send an e-mail: 8.had done/be doing/be about to do.,when..刚做完 to12345@sina.com or sign up in person.如果你感兴 某事/正做某事/正要做某事，这时… 趣，可以发送电子邮件至12345@sina.com或亲自 DOne day,I was walking to my school when I found an 报名。 old lady lying on the street,looking very painful.一天， 3.neither,,,nor.,,既不…也不+ 我正步行去上学，这时我发现一位老太太躺在街上，看 In autumn,it's neither too hot nor too cold..秋天，既不 上去很痛苦。 太热又不太冷。 2I was about to give up when my best friend 4.not0nly,,.but also.,,不仅…而且 encouraged me to go on.我正要放弃，这时我最好的朋 Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking,but 友鼓励我继续下去。 Friday 读后续写示例指导11 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Last year,during the summer break,my friends and I decided to go for a walk in the forest.The forest had paths,and we decided that we would hike along the paths and meet at a central point to have a drink later.The whole team had several groups and we had planned on meeting with the rest of the team after three hours.I had a lighter,a partially charged phone. and a bottle of water.We continued on our way towards the deeper part of the forest until we were far from any recognizable trail.After two hours,we were in the deepest part of the forest,and we could not trace our other friends. All of a sudden,a bear came rushing along our path,and we all ran in different directions.After running for about five minutes.I stood alone in a bush.I had no clue about my surroundings as I had never been there before.I shouted at my friends'names loudly,but all was in vain:there was no reply,and the whole place was silent.I was confused and felt like crying as I realized I was alone with nothing to protect myself.With a lot of fear,I tried to trace the part where I had come from,but all was useless:I was lost. As I walked along the path trying to locate my friends.I realized that I was tired,and nothing was looking familiar.I was out of food,water,and barely had any battery in my phone.I decided to walk through the bushes as the trees had grown so close together.I squeezed myself between the little trees.After some thirty minutes,it started raining heavily. Though I had heavy clothing,I was rained on until I was soaked up.I started freezing and praying to the God for protection and direction out of the forest. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 With darkness approaching.I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues. Week11体育运动类应用文写作&野外探险类读后续写 While sitting down and warming myself around the fire.I heard some distant noise. 语篇解读 本文以时问为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友去年在森林徒步旅行时，走到森林深处适到熊，狂奔后迷路，如何利 用手头的工具脱险的故事。 审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自然”中的“人类生存社会发展与环境的关系”，写作要用一 般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1.Last year,during the summer break,my friends and I decided to go for a walk in the 1.去年暑假期间，我和朋友们决定去森林里 点题 forest. 散步。 阅读任务 (事件) 2.After two hours,we were in the deepest 2.两个小时后.我们到了森林的最深处，再也 part of the forest,and we could not trace 找不到其他朋友的踪迹了。 our other friends. 1.All of a sudden,a bear came rushing along our path,and we all ran in different directions. 1.突然，一只熊沿着我们的路冲过米，我们都 2.With a lot of fear,I tried to trace the part 朝不同的方向跑去。 where I had come from.but all was useless: 2.带着极大的恐惧，我试图追寻我来时的路， 进程 I was lost. 但一切都是徒劳的：我迷路了。 (发展) 3.As I walked along the path trying to 3.当我沿着小路走着，试图找到我的朋友们 locate my friends.I realized that I was 时，我意识到我累了，什么都不熟悉。 tired,and nothing was looking familiar. 4.我开始冻得发抖，祈求上帝保佑我，指引我 4.I started freezing and praying to the God 走出森林。 阅读任务 for protection and direction out of the forest. 冲突 I was out of food,water,and barely had (矛盾点)》 我没有食物和水，手机里儿乎没有电了。 any battery in my phone. 评议 was confused and felt like crying as I 当我意识到我是一个人，没有任何东西可以保 (议论)】 realized I was alone with nothing to protect 护自己时，我很困惑，想哭。 myself. 结局 结局1（第1段）： 作者利用自己手边的工具寻求方法自救。 (结果) 结局2（第2段）： 同事们寻了过来，作者得救了。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：尝试各种方法—利用火机点燃蒋火—等待救援— 同事寻来一得救—感悟 根据以上提示整理出答案 高救临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 With darkness approaching,I tried to figure out various ways of making a signal to my colleagues.After many vain trials,it occurred to me that I had a lighter with me. was wild with iou and decided to build a signal fire by collecting leaves and lighting them up for mu friends to see the fire.Although it had been raining on.I was finallu 101 启航演语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 successful to light it.Everuthing in silence,only the howling of the winds and the cracking of twigs kept me company.I couldn't help wondering what would have gone wrong because I had never had such kind of experience. While sitting down and warming myself around the fire,I heard some distant noise.As the sounds got closer.I realized that those were my friends.l jumped with a lot of jou as tears filled my eues because l knew l was safe.Theu shouted my name. and I replied very loudly knowing in my mind that I was saved.It showed me the importance of the use of the markings and of course the qualitu-calmness while adventuring in the forest l also thought to muself that mu being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One fall evening,13-year-old Briar Omar agreed to look after his four younger sisters when his parents went to the grocery store to pick up the family dinner.The parents were confident that responsible big brother Briar with their protective dog called Mandy,was capable of managing the family in their absence.During that brief time,an unexpected thing happened:The home suddenly went up in flames ()It was up to Briar and Mandy to save his family. The children smelled smoke soon after their parents left for the store.They turned around to search for where the fire came from and were shocked and frightened to find their baby sister'splaypen(玩耍护栏)on fire. The first thought that came to Briar's mind was to rescue his little sisters.The family had previously discussed what to do in the face of danger.so he was prepared to act. In a few minutes.flames were climbing the ceiling ()Smoke was filling up the hallways.The horrible fire quickly spread throughout the home. Briar remained calm and focused on the urgent task of saving his four younger sisters:Peyton,12,Jocelyn,3. Willow.1.and 6-month-old baby Sawyer.He quickly picked up the two babies and rushed the older sisters out of the door to safety.After making sure his sisters were far away from the danger and breathing in fresh air,he ran back to save their home despite the flames surrounding him. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 He quickly held the fire extinguisher (from the kitchen and tried to put out the flames. Briar cheered up immediately and managed to escape from the fire to safety with the dog following the way [语篇解读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公Biar和狗狗Mand少一起成功地在火灾中救出妹妹们的极事。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“他迅速从厨房拿起灭火器，试图扑灭火焰。”可知，第一段可描写Biar冲进房间 救妹妹的过程。②由第二段首句内容“Br立刻欢呼起来，并设法从火中逃出来，狗紧随其后。”可知，第二段可描写 Briar在和狗狗Mandy的共同努力下成功救出妹妹。 [范文] He quickly held the fire extinguisher (from the kitchen and tried to put out the flames.He quickly grabbed the kitchen fire extinguisher and tried to put out the flames.But at first,he foiled to open the fire extinguisher because he was in a hurry.After several attempts,he managed to open it and quickly sprayed it towards the fire.Just then,he heard Willow and Sawyer crying from the room and ran to the room with the fire extinguisher.At this moment,the fire in the room grew bigger and bigger,a piece of wood that had been burned off pushed against the door.Mandy,the dog.rushed to the door and snotched the board oway with her mouth.The door finally opened and Briar rushed in to save his two sisters. Week11体育运动类应用文写作&野外探险类读后续写 Briar cheered up immediately and managed to escape from the fire to safety with the dog following the way.He picked up his little sister,Sawyer,and Willow and Mandy followed him.They ran quickly to the door,and as Briar ran,he comforted his crying sister.Although his arm burned several times as he put out the fire,he managed to free his four sisters.This is really an incredible thing.and finally with the joint efforts of Briar and Mandy,all the thrills are out. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①grab.抓着②pick up抱起③spray喷，喷洒（液体）④snatch.一把抓住，立马夺下⑤put out 扑灭（火焰）⑥incredible adj.不可思议的，难以置信的 高分句型：（句型I)At this moment,the fire in the room grew bigger and bigger,a piece of wood that had been burned off pushed against the door.(运用了hal引导的定语从句) (句型2)Although his arm burned several times as he put out the fire,he managed to free his four sisters.(运用了 although引导的让步状语从句) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 周四下午，你校篮球队将与光明中学举行一场篮球友谊赛，请你为你校篮球社团写一则通知，内容包括：1.比赛 的时间、地点；2，欢迎同学观赛助威：3.观赛注意事项。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.请按如下格式作答。 Notice Basketball Club [范文] Notice There will be a friendly basketball match between our school and Guangming High School in the coming Thursday,whose purpose is to enrich our campus life,enhance communication between schools and improve our basketball skills.The activity is scheduled to be held from 3:00 p.m.to 4 30 p.m.on our playground. All the students who have affection for basketball games are welcome to watch it.Be sure to arrive at the playground punctually to watch the match and offer your cheers to both teams.With each participating team making full preparations for the coming match,I'm sure this will be a visual feast for everyone.Above all,do keep it in mind that friendship must come first. Thank you for your attention! Basketball Club 高分亮点 高分词汇：①purpose m.目的，意图②enhance.增强，提高，改善 ③affection n.喜爱，关爱④punctually ad.准 时地，如期地⑤visual feast视觉盛宴⑥arrive at到达 高分句型：（句型I)There will be a friendly basketball match between our school and Guangming High School in the coming Thursday,whose purpose is to enrich our campus life,enhance communication between schools and improve our basketball skills.(运用了whose引导的非很制性定语从句) (句型2)Above all,do keep it in mind that friendship must come first.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Grady and his family go camping every summer.As it was becoming hotter,here came the camping time. Having planned the camp long,the family finally decided the destination-the Great National Forest.With food, necessity and cookers loaded onto the car,the family squeezed into the car.The car door closed.heat was shut outside. 03 启航演语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 In the car.Jared,Grady's younger brother was playing with a toy dinosaur.making great noise.Grady's mother talked excitedly with his father.On settling in the car.Grady put on the earphone and turned on the music.He neither wanted to join his brother nor joined any talk.After what seemed to be hours,the car stopped where they headed.Grady threw down his backpack and slammed the car door. "This will be a lengthy week,"he said unhappily to no one in particular.He looked around the campground.Hundreds of tall and green fir trees,some as tall as church towers,covered the mountainside like a green carpet.The sun would be setting soon.Grady thought maybe the heat wouldn't be unbearable.But actually now in the mountain,the hot stickiness of July was closely attached to him. Grady hated camping,but it was something his family stuck to every summer.His father liked cooking over an open air,telling stories about how to survive things like bear attacks and bites of bees.His mother and Jared liked to hike and take pictures of animals.Jared had a collection of bug pictures that he had pinned to the walls in his half of their room.Grady thought they were just scary and proof that Jared was a strange kid. They set up camp-two tents,one for his parents and one for himself and Jared.While everyone else started preparing dinner,Grady,looking for some place to cool down.set off for the nearby stream,which was deep enough to swim in. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 As Grady got close to the stream,an adorable bear cub (caught his eye. Turning around.he saw an angry bear moving swiftly towards him [语篇解读】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Gdy和他的家人每年夏天都去露营。经过长期的营地计划，这家人 最终决定了目的地一大国家森林。Gady讨厌野营，帐篷搭好后，当其他人都开始准备晚餐时，Gady找了个凉快的 地方，向附近的小溪出发，那里足够深，可以游泳。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“Gdy走近小溪时，一只可爱的小熊引起了他的注意。”可知，第一段可描写 G阳dy由于好奇靠近小熊，突然听到有声音。②由第二段首句内容“他转过身来，看见一只愤怒的熊迅速向他走来。” 可知，第二段可描写Gdy遇到了一只愤怒的大熊后逃生的过程以及获得了爸爸的帮助得救后，对大熊抱住孩子的场 景的描述 [范文] As Grady got close to the stream.an adorable bear cub (caught his eye.Though Grady didn't like animals, he couldn't resist such a lovely bear cub measuring no more than two feet tall with a cute face.It was playing pretty joyfully at the edge of the stream.So absorbed was the bear cub in playing that it wasn't aware that someone was approaching.Driven by curiosity.Grady walked on tiptoe,moving closer to have a look at it. Suddenly he heard a sound behind him. Tuming around,he saw an angry bear moving swiftly towards him.Shocked and dumb,Grady wos rooted onto the ground for seconds,and then dashed to their camp desperately,shouting for help in the meantime. Fortunately.Grady's father heard the shout in time to come to his assistance.To their surprise.realizing the danger was oway,the furry giant stopped chasing and returned to the stream,picking up her baby,and holding it in arms tightly.In the distance,attracted by the noise,Jared and his mother were trying to take a photo of the bear cub and its mother. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①resist.阻挡，抵制②be absorbed in聚精会神③come to one's assistance赶来帮忙④joyfully ad. 高兴地⑤desperately ad.绝望地⑥shocked adj.震惊的 高分句型：（句型I)So absorbed was the bear cub in playing that it wasn't aware that someone was approaching.(so- ht.,.引导结果状语从句，且so置于句首，使用了倒装句) (2)Shocked and dumb.Grady was rooted onto the ground for seconds,and then dashed to their camp desperately, shouting for help in the meantime,(shouting为现在分词作伴随状语) 04