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Week 10 艺术文学类应用文写作&个人成长类读后续写 Monday 如何写好艺术文学类应用文写作 典题示例 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内 容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容：3.商定时间、地点。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.开头和结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 Dear Miss Evans, I'd appreciate it very much if you offer to give any professional advice. Yours truly. Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时 话题 求助短剧改编指导 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：写信目的：第二段：求助具体内容：第三段：期待建议。 Step Two词汇运用 1.真诚，真挚sincerity 6.不恰当的，不适宜的inappropriate 2.请某人帮忙ask sb.a favor 7.弄槽spoil 3.改编adapt 8.依附于attach to 4,与…结合combine..with 9.欣赏的；感激的appreciative 5.脚本seript I0.专业的建议professional advice OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我真诚地写信是想请你帮个忙，关于一出戏。 I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play. (2)我们根据教科书进行了改编。 We adapted it according to the textbook. (3)我们想通过把经典小说《汽船》改编成一部英语短剧的形式，把你们的文化和我们的文化结合起来。 We'd like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. (4)然而.改编是一个相当大的挑战 However.the adaption is quite a challenge. (5)尽管我们已经写好了英语剧本，但我们不想让任何不合适的东西破坏这部剧。 Although we have written the English script.we don't want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. (6)所以你能抽出点时间吗？ So would you please spare some time? (7)审阅本邮件所附的草稿，并做出必要的修改。 Review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes. (8)如果方便的话，我可以在下周二拜访您的办公室，告诉您更多的细节吗？ If it is convenient,may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 86 Week10艺术文学类应用文写作&个人成长类读后续写 (9)如果你能提供一些专业的建议，我将非常感激你。 If you offer to give any professional advice,I'd appreciate you very much. 2.句式升级 (1)用定语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. (2)用although引导的让步状语从句的省略形式来升级句子(5)。 Although having written the English script.we don't want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. (3)用不定式作目的状语合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? (4)用t构成的形式宾语升级句子(9)。 I'd appreciate it very much if you offer to give any professional advice. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Miss Evans, I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook. We'd like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play.However,the adaption is quite a challenge.Although having written the English script,we don't want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes?If it is convenient,may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? I'd appreciate it very much if you offer to give any professional advice. Yours truly. Li Hua Tuesday 艺术文学类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 adapt改编 horizon视野：范围 art艺术：美术 painting油画 painter画家，油漆匠 perform表演：执行 performance表演；执行 stage舞台 scene场面，情景，（戏剧）一场 musician音乐家 classical music古典音乐 concert音乐会 amusement娱乐活动 publishing house出版社 composer作曲家 literature文学 audience听众：观众 theatre剧院，戏剧 director导演 producer制片人 comedy喜别 tragedy悲刷 circus马戏团 instrument乐器：仪器，器具 play the piano弹钢琴 violin小提琴 guitar吉他 j2爵士乐 be crazy about.,.对…着迷 omantic film浪漫电影 a cross talk相声 romance浪漫 lines台i词 TV series电视系列片 Oscar Awards奥斯卡奖 science fiction film科幻片 the setting of the film电影背景 film拍电影：电影：胶卷；薄层 develop a(roll of)m冲洗一个胶卷 studio画室，照相室，演播室，录音棚 go to the theatre=go to see a play去看戏 a social of musicians音乐家协会 comment on a new film评论一部新电影 play a part/role in在…里扮演角色 male/female character男/女主角 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 2.Hence,the film has always had the high rating.因此，这 话题句式 部电影一直有很高的评价 引出话题先声夺人 3.If we read more books,we will naturally know more. 1.I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a 我们读更多的书，我们自然会知道更多。 play we adapted according to the textbook.我真诚地写信 是想请你帮个忙，关于我们根据课本改编的一个剧本。 首尾结合余音回味 2.I'm writing to recommend a classic film The Wandering Earth 1.I strongly hope you can have a try and the film will be Ⅱto you,我写信是想向你推荐一部经典电影《流浪地 suitable for you!我强烈希望你可以尝试一下，这部电 球2》。 影将适合你！ 3.Thank you very much for recommending some English 2.Thank you again for recommending these English novels novels to me last semester..非常感谢你上学期给我推荐 tom心.再次感谢你向我推荐这些英文小说。 了一些英语小说。 3.I have no doubt that you will have a fantastic feast for 主题部分娓妮道来 your eyes.我毫不怀疑，你会有一个梦幻般的视觉盛宴。 1.During the visit,we will learn abundant information about 4.I hope you will treasure music and make it part of your its history.在参观期间，我们将了解到关于它的丰富的 e,我希望你珍惜音乐，让它成为你生活的一部分。 历史信息。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Eric, How's everything going?I'm writing to recommend a classic film The Wandering Earth II to you. 模板中黑体字部分是描写 艺术文学类应用文时可以通用 I saw the film at the local theatre last year,which is considered as the best 的部分，其他部分可以根据写作 science fiction film in Chinese film history.Hence.the film has always had the 要求灵活处理。 high rating.And I was deeply impressed with the film in which people around the world respond actively to protect the splendid earth.It is universally 由于是介绍，第一、二段落 往往是一般现在时，第三段有时 acknowledged that the earth is our common home so that we should spare no effort 可用一般将来时。 to protect it. I strongly hope you can have a try and the film will be suitable for you! 文章人称以第一人称为主， 有时也会运用第三人称。 Yours. Li Hua Wednesday 艺术文学类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆艺术文学 假定你是李华，读完外教Mr.BOwm推荐的一些英文小说后，你的收获很大。请你给他写一封感谢信，内容包括： 1.表示感谢：2.你的收获：3.希望得到进一步指导。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr.Brown, Yours. Li Hua [范文] Dear Mr.Brown, I'm Li Hua,one of your Chinese students.Thank you very much for recommending some English novels to me last semester.I think these novels are very interesting and meaningful. After reading these novels,I have a deep feeling about them.Especially after reading the novel Pride and Prejudice created by British female novelist Jane Austen.I think a marriage can't only have love or material,but should be considered comprehensively.Only when both aspects are considered can we really get happiness. Extensive reading can broaden our horizons.If we read more books,we will naturally know more. 88 Week10艺术文学类应用文写作&个人成长类读后续写 Thank you again for recommending these English novels to me.At the same time.I also hope to get your further guidance. Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①recommend.推荐：介绍②semester n.学期：半学年③meaningful adj.意味深长的：有意义的 ④comprehensively adv,完全地：彻底地⑤happiness n,幸福：高兴⑥extensive reading泛读⑦horizon m.视野：范 围 高分句型：（句型I)Only when both aspects are considered can we really get happiness.(运用了ony放句着的倒装句） (句型2)If we read more books,we will naturally know more.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 跟踪训练2◆艺术文学 假设你校将举办题为“The effect of music on my life”的英语演讲比赛，请写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括：l.音乐 对你的影响：2.你对音乐的感悟。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The effect of music on my life [范文] The effect of music on my life Good morning.everyonel It's an honour to be here to share with you the story of how music has had an effect on my life. Two years ago,my grandmother passed away.I was deep in sorrow,missing her all the time.My parents tried to comfort me,but it didn't help.One day my friend persuaded me to listen to some music.The music made me feel so good that from then on I began to listen to music. When I listen to music,it helps me remember all the great times we had.Music helps me be grateful for the time together.It has become my best friend.I hope you will treasure music and moke it part of your life. 一 高分亮点 高分词汇：①have an effect on对…有影响②pass away去世，消失③persuade.说服，劝服④grateful ad.感 谢的，感激的⑤treasure.珍爱；珍惜 高分句型：（句型I)t's an honour to be here to share with you the story of how music has had an effect on my life.(送 用了how引导的宾语从句) (句型2)When I listen to music,it helps me remember all the great times we had.(运用了when导的时间状语从 句)》 Thursday新作文基本功提高微技能10 续写中情绪活动的描写 情绪描写有两种方法。一种是直接描写法，即句子 3Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds 中直接出现表示情绪的单词。另外一种是间接法，通过and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像 表情和动作来体现某种情绪，使句式表达上升到一个高 钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着沉稳的微笑。 级阶段。 ④Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦 那我们来分别来学习一下情绪表达升级： 绕。 一、开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达】 ⑤His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着 平庙版：He was happy 快乐。 升阶例句 二、伤心（心理、表情、动作） ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.t她脸上 平庸版：He was sad. 的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。 升阶例句 ②Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整 (DDespite my best efforts,I can feel tears starting to 个房间。 pool in my eyes..尽管我努力克制，眼里还是蓄满了泪水。 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 ②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我感 5Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a 觉我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。 volcano.她的回答如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一 3I tried to fight back tears./My eyes were filled with 样爆发了。 tears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。 六、绝望（心理、表情、动作】 ④The last word went like a bullet to my heart,.最后 平庸版：He felt hopeless/.desperate. 句话就像一颗子弹击中了我的心 升阶例句 5It was only then that her still face showed the least DFog began creeping into the forest.Everything around emotion,a tear or【wo beginning to trickle down.直到那 them was swallowed by the darkness.which undoubtedly 时，她麻木的脸上才露出一点儿感情来，一两颗泪珠开始 left them even more helpless.树林开始起雾了，他们周围的 从脸上流下来。 切都被黑暗吞噬，这无疑使他们更加无助和绝望。 三、紧张（心理、表情、动作） 2Mary was close to crying with anxiety and fear.Mary 平庸版：He was nervous 既担心又害怕，快要哭了。 升阶例句 3 His beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive DStanding in the classroom,I became increasingly in everything deserted him.他那种向前看、看到一切事物 nervous and could feel my heart beating wildly.站在教室 积极一面的信念抛弃了他 里，我越来越紧张，我能感受到自己的心跳在加速 七、感谢心理、表情、动作】 2 Her face turned pale,feeling like sitting on pins and 平庸版：I thanked my father. needles..她的脸刷白，感觉如坐针毡。 升阶例句 3Before the competition,his palms were sweaty and DI ran over to my father.reached out my hands and knees were soft.比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软。 hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.我跑向父亲，伸出手， 4The hall crowded with audience made me even more 紧紧抱住他。 uneasy.My heart was pounding/thumping hard,as if it were 2 With grateful tears hanging in his eyes,he kept about to pop.挤满观众的大厅让我更加紧张起来，我的心 extending(表达)his gratitude(感激)，“Thank you so 扑通扑通地好像要跳出来了。 much!”他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！" 5I stood there so nervously that I felt my throat tight, ③Touched deeply/immenscly,we..被深深感动，我 wondering what to do next..我紧张地站在那里，喉咙发紫， 们… 不知道下一步怎么办。 4Tears filling her eyes,she offered her heartfelt 四、尴尬/羞愧（心理、表情、动作】 gratitude..她热泪盈眶，表示裴心的感谢。 平店版：He was embarrassed/ashamed ⑤With tears streaming down her face,she.,泪水顺 升阶例句 若她脸上留下来，她… ①His face burned with embarrassmen/shame.他因t道 八、鼓励（心理、表情、动作】 尬而满脸通红。/他窘得脸都红了。 平庸版：He felt encouraged. ②He hung/dropped/.lowered his head in shame.他羞 升阶例句 愧地低下了头。 (DTaking a deep breath,I managed to calm myself 3"She was truly a caring woman,"her husband said down and walked up to the platform confidently.深吸一口气， with a trembling voice,embarrassment written in his red 我成功地让自己镇定下来，然后自信地走上了讲台。 face.“她是个贴心的人。”她丈夫声音颤抖地说，涨红的脸 2I walked over to him,and patted him on the 上写满了窘迫。 shoulder,encouraging:“Come on!”我走向他，拍拍他的 4She rose from her chair.and hesitated for a moment. 肩膀，鼓励道：“加油！” wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment..她从椅子上站 九、震惊（心理、表情、动作】 起来，迟疑了一会儿，想着如何掩饰内心的尴尬 平庸版：He was surprised/shocked. 5She dropped her eyes and stared at her feet.hoping 升阶例句 no one would notice how embarrassed she was..她垂下双 1 His eyes grew wide/widened with surprise/ 眸，盯着自己的脚，希望没有人会注意到她有多尴尬。 astonishment(震惊)when he heard the news..听到这个消 五、愤怒（心理、表情、动作】 息后，他惊讶地睁大了眼睛。 平庙版：He was angry. 2It's hard to believe.He didn't accept the job that he 升阶例句 was long for.真雄以置信，他竟然没有接受那份期待已久 ①His face clouded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉 的工作。 ②He was fuming with rage.他气得大发雷霆。 Grandfather's death was really a bolt from the blue ③He glared at me with burning eyes,.他用愤怒的目光 for me.祖父去世的消息对我来说简直是晴天霹雳。 怒视着我。 十、疑惑/迷茫（心理、表情、动作） ④He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控 平庸版：He felt confused, 制不住怒火。 升阶例句 Week10艺术文学类应用文写作&个人成长类读后续写 ①With a confused look on his face,he had no idea挠了挠头，不知道该做什么 what to do.他露出困惑的表情，不知道该做什么。 3He scratched his head,not understanding a word. ②He scratched his head,having no idea what to do.他：挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂. Friday 读后续写示例指导10 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Finding Niesha's Courage Niesha could not forget the way she had frozen in front of the class today.Mr.Roberts had divided the class into groups to do presentations.Today had been Niesha's turn.However,her hands had shaken so badly that she couldn't read her notes. Her voice had become softer even to silence.Mr.Roberts kindly ended Niesha's part of the presentation even though she had clearly not finished.He had also asked Niesha to stay after class for a moment. "Niesha.I know you're shy,but you worked hard on this project.I'd hate to see you give up on yourself."Mr. Roberts had hesitated."If I give you another chance tomorrow.do you think you can find your courage?" Niesha had nodded,grateful for the chance.She had gone as quickly as she could to her next class.She had kept her head down and hoped the school day would end soon. When she reached her back steps that afternoon,she could see an inviting light coming from the kitchen windows. Momma was baking. Momma studied Niesha's face as she came into the kitchen."What's wrong,Niesha?" Tears shone in Niesha's brown eyes.She told her the whole story.Momma was silent for a moment,her hands still busy with the cake. "Why is it that you can talk to me about anything and everything,but you can't talk to your class?"Momma asked. She set the timer and then said,"Let me show you something." Niesha followed Momma to her bedroom.There Momma showed her a book filled with newspaper clippings and pictures.In it there was a blue ribbon that said"First Place"and a picture of herself when she was very young,standing with her parents. "I won it for public speaking.I started the school year as the shyest girl on the speech team.but I ended the year as the blue ribbon winner.It wasn't easy because I was lacking in confidence-not sure of myself at all.I worked hard.and mostly I faced my fears.You just need to find your courage." 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 That was the second time someone had told her that today. The next day Niesha again walked to the front of the classroom to give her presentation. 「语篇解读 本文以人物为线素晨开，讲述了Niesha在做报告时非常紧张，不得不终止。回到家后，地告诉了妈妈事情的经 过，妈妈告诉Niesha自己小时候也很害羞，却获得公众演讲奖，妈妈告诉Niesha开学之初，她是演讲队景害羞的女孩， 但结束那年，她成了蓝带冠军，因为她努力，大部分时间敢于面对自己的恐惧，妈妈告诉Niesha需要找到自已的勇气。 「审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”中的“认识自我，丰富自我，完善自我”，写作要用一般 过去时，人称以第三人称为主。 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1.Niesha could not forget the way she had I.Niesha无法忘记今天她在全班同学面前僵 点题 frozen in front of the class today. 阅读任务 住的样子。 (事件) 2.Mr.Roberts kindly ended Niesha's part of 2.Roberts先生亲切地结束了Niesha的演讲部 the presentation even though she had clearly 分，尽管她显然还没有完成。 not finished. 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 (续表) 1.Niesha had nodded,grateful for the chance. 2.She told her the whole story. L.Niesha点了点头，很感激有这个机会 2.她把事情原原本本都告诉了她。 进程 3.Niesha followed Momma to her bedroom. (发展) 3.Niesha跟着妈妈来到她的卧室。在那里，妈 There Momma showed her a book filled 妈给她看了一本满是剪报和图片的书。 with newspaper clippings and pictures. 4.你只需要找到你的勇气。 4.You just need to find your courage 阅读任务 冲突 However,her hands had shaken so badly (矛盾点) 然而，她的手抖得很厅害，看不清笔记 that she couldn't read her notes. 评议 I worked hard,and mostly I faced my fears (议论) 我努力工作，大部分时间我都面对我的恐惧。 结局 结局1（第1段）： Niesha如何克服恐惧的内心活动。 (结果) 结局2（第2段）： Niesha克服恐惧完成报告. 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：凝视蓝丝带—努力练习—非常紧张 看到老师的微笑—想起妈妈的鼓励—鼓起勇气—开始 演讲 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 That was the second time someone had told her that today.Niesha stared at the precious blue ribbon.imaging the scene where her mother tried her best to overcome her fears and pick up her courage to stand on the stage and face the audience.giving a fantastic speech.In front of the mirror was her continuous practice.from pronunciation to gesture.When fatique came.she would sit in her seat and recite the passage over and over again in order to improve her fluency. The next day Niesha again walked to the front of the classroom to give her presentation.Though having made adequate preparations.she was still overwhelmed by great nervousness:her heart beat violently as she dragged herself to the front of the class:her face turned pale and she could hardly squeeze out any word with her absolutely blank mind.Anxiety had almost driven her crazy when suddenly.she caught sight of Mr.Roberts'smile.comforting and inspiring.She remembered her momma's encouraging words."How could I let them down?"she thought to herself Holding the blue ribbon tight in her hand.she took a deep breath.calmed herself down and gathered her courage."Dear fellow students."she started. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 During my sixth-grade year,I was nervous about many things.I was afraid of being a role model on campus.I was afraid of going to a middle school the following year.But nothing compared to my biggest fear of all...puberty () I was getting to the age where my voice would start changing.At first,I was excited for my voice to get deeper.But then I learned that before your voice gets deeper,it can sometimes crack () Week10艺术文学类应用文写作&个人成长类读后续写 The first time it happened to me I was so embarrassed,but to my surprise,my friends didn't make fun of me.In fact. they didn't even mention it.That was reality.But in my self-conscious sixth-grade mind I was certain they were going to spend all day making fun of me behind my back.They were not having the same problem controlling their voices. After my first voice crack experience,I was determined to make sure it wouldn't happen again,at least not in public. So,I began clearing my throat before I spoke.Limiting how much I spoke and clearing my voice before I spoke made my break and lunch experiences much less stressful.This was great but there was a larger problem.I was more scared about having a voice crack during class. There were reasons why having a voice crack in class was scarier.One of these reasons was that our class had a group of popular girls.Having a voice crack in front of them was a fear.Unfortunately,one day my worst frightening dream came true.It was about halfway through the year,when I was happy to have made it so long without a bad voice crack incident. That day,when I walked through the door.the first thing I noticed was that we had a substitute teacher.I immediately started thinking about how the sub would need to take attendance.My permanent teacher never had to.Since he already knew each student and where they sat,he just had everyone sit down in their assigned seat,and marked "absent"the students whose seats were empty. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 I started to feel frightened. The whole class turned to look at me. [语篇解读]本文以人物经历为线索展开，讲述的是作者在变声期的经历和感受，处于变声期的作者一直想维持少 发声，不被别人发现沙哑嗓音的状态，直到有一天新老师的到来让他不得不在全班同学面前发出声音，同学们因为他 的嗓音大笑，作者经历这些后知道积极面对是重要的。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“我开始感到害怕。”可知，第一段描写作者在新老师的课堂上被点名，不得不说 话，听到了自己沙哑的嗓音的过程。②由第二段首句内容“全部同学转身看我。”可知，第二段描写在被大家听到沙哑 的声音后，大家对此大笑以及作者的反应和感悟。 [范文] I started to feel frightened.So many thoughts were rushing through my mind that I could not think straight. I calmed myself down by telling myself that I only had to say one word:"here".Easy enough right?Well.I thought so too until my name was called.I did my normal routine:I cleared my throat,took a breath,and said, "Here."The only problem was that while saying this,I had the worst voice crack in the history of voice cracks. The whole class tumed to look at me.It felt as if everyone was staring into my soul.There was silence,and then the entire class burst into laughter.My worst nightmare had come true,and it was embarrassing.I wanted to run out of the class and go home,get in bed.and pull the covers over my head,but I knew that would only make things worse.The class settled down and then continued as normal.Everything went on as if nothing happened.Actually nobody cared about my voice crack.I learned that it's important to be positive. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①calm down镇静②burst into laughter突然大笑③embarrassing adj.尴尬的④crack n,嗓音变哑 ⑤nightmare n,盟梦；可怕的经历⑥positive ad.乐观的，有信心的 高分句型：（句型I)I calmed myself down by telling myself that I only had to say one word...(运用了动名词作宾语， that引导的宾语从句) (句型2)It felt as if everyone was staring into my soul..(运用了It felt as i迁..句型) 93 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假如你是李华，计划和同学去当地博物馆参观中国绘画艺术展，请你给喜欢中国文化的外教Ai©心写一封邮件， 邀请她一同前往，内容包括以下要点：1.出发及返回时间：2.活动安排：了解绘画艺术的历史，欣赏展出的绘画作品 等：3.请对方告知是否愿意去并期待对方的回复。 注意1.词数80个左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇中国绘画艺术Chinese painting art Dear Alice, Yours sincerely. Li Hua [范文] Dear Alice Knowing that you are keen on Chinese painting art,I'd like to invite you to visit the local museum with us next Soturday to enjoy Chinese paintings. During the visit,we will learn abundant information about its history.On top of that,we will have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare paintings,some of which are exhibited for the first time.As is well known, ink paintings occupy an extremely important position in traditional Chinese paintings.Thus,I have no doubt that you will have a fantastic feast for your eyes.In addition,we should be back around 4 p.m.If you can come,please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 8 a.m. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①be keen on喜爱②abundant adj.丰富的③delicate ad.精致的，精美的④occupyv.占有⑤ fantastic adj.极好的，非常棒的⑥feast m.盛会 高分句型：（句型I)On top of that,we will have a chance to appreciate some delicate and rare paintings,some of which are exhibited for the first time.(运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句) 2)As is well known,ink paintings occupy an extremely important position in traditional Chinese paintings. 了as引导的非限制性定语从句) (句型3)Thus,I have no doubt that you will have a fantastic feast for your eyes.(运用了that引导的同位语从句) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This morning.I got up earlier than ever because of a funny feeling.Today I had to give a report in my class.Though I had been doing this for a long time,I was not sure whether I could make it a success.At that moment,Mom came in and asked."Are you ready,Sam?" "Yes,"I answered quietly.To be honest,I could feel my heart beating fast.I hated this,but I couldn't stop it. Thinking of what I would talk in class,I went into Mrs.Owens'class.She was smiling sweetly and saying hello to all her students as she did every morning. 94 Week10艺术文学类应用文写作&个人成长类读后续写 "Hi,Sam,"she said to me as I walked into the classroom."Hi!"I said and quickly rushed to my seat,feeling my heart beating faster and even my body shaking.I looked at the clock,which told me the class was about to begin.Then Mrs. Owens started."Sam,it's your tum to give us your speech."Stand up in front of everyone?Oh.no! I got up slowly,not daring to look at other things but the ground,as I walked to the front of the classroom.Then I took a deep breath,forcing myself to look up and everyone was looking at me.Mrs.Owens knew I was nervous,so she came beside me and put her hand on my back. She said to the class,"Sam has worked very hard on his report and I know it is a very interesting report."After that, she turned to me and asked,"Sam,what did you like best about the report on Hawaii?" I thought about the funny things I had about surfing,and I started to talk as if I had returned to beautiful Hawaii, watching the white seabirds dancing in the blue sky.I talked and talked proudly in front of the whole class.It was great fun. How strange it was for me not to be nervous and frightened at all!The elass burst into claps as I finished and Mrs.Owens was smiling. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 At this moment,words failed to describe my feeling of pride and excitement. In the following hours that day.I couldn't wait to go home. [语篇解读]本文讲述了“我”在演讲前紧张，心跳加速。Ms.Owes知道“我”很紧张，所以把手放在“我”的背上， 并让“我”讲述最喜欢的有关夏威爽的报告。这让“我”缓解了紧张和害怕，赢得了班里的阵阵掌声。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“此时此刻，言语无法形容我的骄做和兴奋。”可知，第一段可进一步描写作者骄做 和兴奋的行为表现。②由第二段首句内容“那天接下来的几个小时里，我迫不及待地想回家。”可知，第二段可描写作 者回家和妈妈分享此次演讲的经历和感受。 [范文] At this moment,words failed to describe my feeling of pride and excitement.I jumped high joyfully,without caring what others would think of me."How amazing!I made it!"I hugged Mrs.Owens happily like a baby. She touched my head gently."Yes,you did it very well!"Meanwhile,the whole class stood up and gave their loudest claps to express their congratulations to me.I watched them thankfully,letting my tears wash my face. In the following hours that day,I couldn't wait to go home.Finally,the great moment came,and I flew home at the speed of a rocket."Hi.Mom?Guess what?"Before entering the room,I began to cry."I mode it!Mom,the shy Sam has gone!A new Sam was born today."Hearing this,Mom couldn't help hugging me and kissing me. "Oh,my boy.you are so excellent!"That night,we talked and laughed never feeling so happy before.Besides. I made up my mind to become a teacher like Mrs.Owens and I would inspire more students like me to be positive and confident of their life. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①thankfully adv,感激地②gently ad,文静地，温柔地③made up one's mind决心④confident adj. 有信心的⑤congratulation m.恭喜，祝贺 高分句型：（句型I)I watched them thankfully,letting my tears wash my face.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语） (句型2)Hearing this,Mom couldn't help hugging me and kissing me,(运用了现在分词作时间状语) 95