Week 9 网络手机类应用文写作&家庭亲情类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 9 网络手机类应用文写作&家庭亲情类读后续写 Monday 如何写好网络手机类应用文写作 典题示例 随着手机的普及程度不断提高，有很多背少年喜欢戴着耳机(headphones)听音乐。请你针对上述现象写一篇短 文发表自己的看法，内容包括：1.耳机给我们带来的好处：2.长时间使用耳机可能造成的伤害：3.你的建议。 注意1.词数80个左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 思路点拨 Step One审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 般现在时 话题 戴耳机现象评论 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：论证自己的观点：第三段：提出建议 OStep Two词汇运用 l.手机mobile phone 6.听力hearing 2.青少年，十几岁的孩子teenager 7.伤害damage 3.快乐和乐趣pleasure and fun 8.建议，意见：提议suggestion 4.方便的，便利的convenient 9.保护protect 5.使满意，使满足satisfy Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)手机正在被广泛使用。 Mobile phones are being used widely. (2)越来越多的人，尤其是青少年喜欢戴者耳机听音乐。 More and more people enjoy listening to music with headphones.especially teenagers. (3)我们可以看到他们戴着耳机从一个地方到另一个地方。 We can see them moving from place to place with headphones in their ears. (4)当然，耳机给我们带来了很多快乐和乐趣。 Of course,headphones bring us much pleasure and fun. (5)由于它们的体积小，我们使用它们也很方便。 For us.to use them is also convenient because of their small size. (6)耳机会产生高质量的声音效果。 Headphones will produce high quality sound effects. ()这可以满足很多人。 This can satisfy many people. (8)然而，长时间戴着耳机听音乐会逐渐损害我们的听力。 However,listening to music for too long with headphones can damage our hearing gradually. (9)因此，我建议我们青少年不要每天戴耳机太久。 Therefore,I suggest that we teenagers should not wear headphones too long each day. (10)我们可以使用耳机一次15分钟。 We can use headphones for 15 minutes once. 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 (11)我们可以更好地保护我们的耳朵。 We can better protect our ears. 2.句式升级 (1)用wt复合结构合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 With mobile phones being used widely.more and more people enjoy listening to music with headphones. especially teenagers. (2)用it构成的形式主语升级句子(5)。 It is also convenient for us to use them because of their small size. (3)用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 Besides,headphones will produce high quality sound effects,which can satisfy many people. (4)用hat引导的表语从句升级句子(9)。 Therefore.my suggestion is that we teenagers should not wear headphones too long each day. (5)用s0h引导的目的状语从句合并上题中的句子(10)和句子(11)。 We can use headphones for 15 minutes once so that we can better protect our ears. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] With mobile phones being used widely,more and more people enjoy listening to music with headphones, especially teenagers.We can see them moving from place to place with headphones in their ears Of course,headphones bring us much pleasure and fun.It is also convenient for us to use them because of their small size.Besides,headphones will produce high quality sound effects,which can satisfy many people. However,listening to music for too long with headphones can damage our hearing gradually. Therefore,my suggestion is that we teenagers should not wear headphones too long each day.We con use headphones for 15 minutes once so that we can better protect our ears. Tuesday 网络手机类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 mobile phone移动手机 teenager青少年 get in touch with与…取得联系 tip建议 privacy隐私，秘密 personal information个人身份信息 questionable website可疑网站 click(用鼠标)点击 online store在线商店 complaint抱怨，投诉 refund退款，偿还金额 pplication应用程序 design设计 platform平台 digital payment数字支付 transfer money转账 screen幕，荧光屏 computer电子计算机 keyboard键盘 mouse(计算机)鼠标 download下载 store存储 copy复制 ype打字 virus病毒 website网址 network网络 document文件，文档 the Internet因特网：互联网 hacker黑客，编制程序专家 network design网络设计 chat online在线聊天 driver驱动程序，驱动器 message board留言板 distant learning远程教育 software软件 hardware硬件 data数据 IT(Information Technology)信息技术 cancel取消 secure安全的，保护 78 Week9网络手机类应用文写作&家庭亲情类读后续写 :2.First,make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled. 话题句式 which will guard against your personal information from 引出话题先声夺人 being stolen..首先，确保你的隐私设置完全启用，这将防 1.With the Internet around us,we can get in touch with 止你的个人信息被盗。 each other much easier.由于我们身边的互联网，我们可 3.Online safety has become a matter of great concern. 以更容易地相互联系。 安全已经成为人们非常关注的间题。 2.The cellphone has become a part of people's daily life.F 首尾结合余音回味 机已经成为人们日常生活的一部分。 1.Therefore,my suggestion is that we teenagers should not 3.With mobile phones being used widely,more and more wear headphones too long each day.因此，我的建议是， people enjoy listening to music with headphones, 我们青少年不应该每天戴耳机太久。 especially teenagers..随着手机的广泛使用，越来越多的 2.Can you change it for a new one or offer me a full refund? 你能换一个新的或者给我全额退款吗？ 人喜欢戴着耳机听音乐，尤其是青少年。 3.As the "app for everything",I believe it will make your 主题部分娓娓道来 life here much easier,.作为“万能的app”,我相信它会让 1.But I think spending too much time playing the cellphone 你在这里的生活更轻松 is bad for us..但是我认为花太多时间玩手机对我们 4.I sincerely hope my recommendation will be of some 不好。 help.我真诚地希望我的推荐能有所帮助.。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 The cellphone has become a part of people's daily life.We use it to communicate with others,post pictures and update our profile.But I think 模板中黑体字部分是描写 spending too much time playing the cellphone is bad for us. 网络手机应用文类时可以通用 In order to use the cellphone properly.I set some rules for myself,for 的部分，其他部分可以根据写作 example,I only used my cellphone for I hour on weekends and let my parents 要求灵活处理。 supervise me.I benefit a lot from it.Firstly.I feel energetic and I can concentrate on 第一，二段往往是一般现在 my study.What's more.I spend more time playing outdoors with my friends. 时，第三段有时可用一般将 In my opinion.you should limit the time you spend on your cellphone.And 来时。 it is suggested that you should develop an interest in other things,such as 文章人称以第一人称为主。 reading and running. Wednesday 网络手机类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆网络手机 在你校网络安全月即将到来之际，校英文报正在征集相关稿件。请你就网络安全话题投稿，具体内容包括：1.网 络安全的重要性：2.安全上网的具体建议：3.号召大家重视网络安全。 注意1，词数80个左右：2.题目已给出，不计人总词数。 Staying Safe on the Internet [范文] Staying Safe on the Internet With the Internet around us,we can get in touch with each other much easier.However,it has brought to us dangers as well.So it is very important to stay safe on the Internet.Here are some tips I'd like to share. First,make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled,which will guard against your personal information from being stolen.Then,avoid questionable websites.In this way you can keep away from information that makes you uncomfortoble. Online safety has become a matter of great concern.Let's think before click. 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇：①get in touch with与…取得联系②ipn.建议 ③privacy m.隐私，秘密 ④personal information个 人身份信息⑤questionable website可疑网站⑥click n.&v.(用鼠标)点击 高分句型：（句型I)So it is very important to stay safe on the Internet..(运用了il作形式主语，不定式短语作真正的主 语) (2)First,make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled,which will guard against your personal information from being stolen..(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 跟踪训练2◆网络手机 假定你是李华，上周，你从一家网络旗舰店购买了一部手机，收到手机后发现了一些问题。请你给该旗舰店的客 服中心写一份投诉信，内容包括：1.描述手机的相关问题：2.你期待的处理方法。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [范文] Dear Sir/Madam, Concerning the problems with the mobile phone that I bought from your online store last week,I'm writing with disappointment to express my complaint. You claimed that I'd get the gray color with shining screen within a week.However,three weeks had passed and I received the phone with wrong color at length.Furthermore,it was so poorly packed that the screen got broken.What's worse,I didn't receive the exact size I had ordered. Can you change it for a new one or offer me a full refund?A response at your earliest convenience will be highly appreciated. Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①online store在线商店②disappointmentn.失望，沮丧③complaint m.抱怨，投诉④claimv.声称，断 言⑤furthermore ad.此外，而且⑥refund n.退款，偿还金额 高分句型：（句型I)Concerning the problems with the mobile phone that I bought from your online store last week,Tm writing with disappointment to express my complaint..(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) (句型2)Whar's worse,I didn't receive the exact size I had ordered.(运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句，省略 了that/which) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能9 如何在应用文中使用非谓语动词 众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散：而文章中过多地出 现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼， 而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。 一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句 写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换，使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用以下 三步 第一步：写出两个简单句。 DConsequently.some viewers began to turn away from cinemas. 2It led to a slower growth. 第二步：让句①作主句，用非谓语动词改写句②。 第三步：让句②作结果状语，由于其动词lead to与主语it之间为主谓关系，故用现在分词短语作结果状语。 Consequently.some viewers began to turn away from cinemas,leading to a slower growth. 80 Week9网络手机类应用文写作&家庭亲情类读后续写 1:I hear that you are recruiting some volunteers to welcome the coming foreign students.I am gladly writing to apply for this job. -Hearing that you are recruiting some volunteers to welcome the coming foreign students,I am gladly writing to apply for this job. 2:Then there will be various fantastic performances and they will be played by talented students. -Then there will be various fantastie performances to be played by talented students. 二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句 用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非 谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可，所以只需以下两步。 第一步：写出一个复合句。 Since you have realised that your time is limited,you'll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation. 第二步：把since引导的原因状语从句转换为非谓语动词，you与realise之间为主谓关系，且表示完成，故用现在 分词的完成时作状语。 Having realised that your time is limited,you'll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation. 1:If it is carried out continuously,it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. -Carried out continuously,it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. 2:As I have been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age,I can communicate freely with others in English. -.Having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age,I can communicate freely with others in English. 三、写作中非谓语动词的常用句型 I.remain to be done有待于被. Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work.我们的教有工作中还有许多 问题要解决，还有许多事情要去做。 2.when/while/once/unless/although...+doing/done When faced with the difficulties and failures,I must overcome them,面对困难和失败时，我必须战胜它们。 When searching for some information,we can operate by touching the screen.当查找一些信息时，我们可以通过触摸 屏幕来操作。 3.compared with/to..与…比较 Compared with the escaped driver,I am proud of what I did.与逃逸的司机相比，我为自己所做之事感到自豪。 4.be said/.reported/considered...todo..据说/报道/认为… A bus full of passengers was reported to have gone out of control on a highway south of the city.据报道一辆满载乘客 的公共汽车在城南的一条公路上失去了控制。 5.with+宾语+宾语补足语 Every runner tried their best to finish the task,with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement..每位赛跑者都尽最大努力来完成此次任务，他们的同班同学在途中给他们提供必要的帮助和 鼓励。 In the picture,a boy in worn clothes sits beside a wooden table with a pile of bamboo books on it.在画中，一个穿着a破 旧衣服的男孩坐在木桌旁边，桌上有一堆竹简。 Friday 读后续写示例指导9 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My parents worked very hard at ensuring that everything seemed pleasant and carefree for me.I had a very peaceful childhood and I mostly ignored the fact that my elder sister was different. It was only at the age of ten that I started to notice the differences and became conscious of my social life and self- image that I had carefully developed.My sister,on the other hand,was socially awkward,as she had "Asperger Syndrome".She couldn't look at people in the eye.She would repeat the words she had just said under her breath.She. however,was academically (capable.and therefore we attended the same primary school.Despite this.I never admitted in public that she was my sister.However,one incident changed how I viewed her. Before graduation,my sister and her classmates had to put on performances,whether in a group or individually.Due to her inability to work with others,my sister was the only one left to perform alone."I'll sing,"my sister told my parents confidently.Hearing that,I was completely shocked.How could my sister,who terribly feared social activities.sing in front 81 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 of the school?I knew very well that she would embarrass herself and me as well."No!"I shouted.My parents shot me a look.That was when I knew my sister was sure to perform and I was going to be part of the audience watching her. The day came.I sat in the hall,sweat on my forehead,waiting for the performances to start.The pupils went on and off stage group after group.Finally it was my sister's turn.The curtains parted and there appeared my sister.She blinked her eyes a couple of times before she opened her mouth.It took about a whole minute for her to stammer()her name and by that time,murmurs (were heard in the audience. "Why is she taking so long?"people around me asked.I felt myself on pins and needles,wishing I were somewhere else 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Finally,my sister was ready to sing. I began to feel ashamed of doubting my sister's abilities. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了姐姐患有“阿斯伯格综合征”，社交能力很差，她不敢直视别人的眼晴。然而，地 的学习能力很强，作者和姐姐在同一所学校。但是作者从未公开承认她是自己姐姐。在毕业之前，姐姐和她的同学 们不得不进行表演。由于无法与他人合作，姐姐成了唯一一个独自表演的人。作者认为这会让她和自已都感到尴 尬。但是姐姐坚持表演。到了表演这一天，该姐姐上场了，但是作者感到如坐针毡。 审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”中的“个人、家庭，积极的生活态度”，写作要用一般过 去时，人称以第三人称为主。 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1.I had a very peaceful childhood and I mostly 点题 ignored the fact that my elder sister was 1.我有一个非常平静的章年，我几乎忽略了 我姐姐与众不同的事实。 阅读任务 different. (事件) 2.另一方面，我姐姐在社交方面很笨拙，因 2.My sister,on the other hand,was socially awkward,as she had "Asperger Syndrome" 为她患有“阿斯伯格综合征”。 1.Before graduation.my sister and her classmates 1.毕业前，我姐姐和她的同学们必须进行 had to put on performances. 表演。 2.That was when I knew my sister was sure to 进程 2.那时我知道我姐姐肯定会表演，而我将成 perform and I was going to be part of the (发展) audience watching her. 为观看她表演的观众之一。 3.这一天终于来了。 3.The day came. 4.她花了大约整整一分钟才结结巴巴地说 4.It took about a whole minute for her to stammer(结巴)her name.. 出自己的名字。 阅读任务 冲突 Despite this.I never admitted in public that 尽管如此，我从未在公开场合承认她是我的 (矛盾点) she was my sister. 姐姐。 1.I knew very well that she would embarrass 评议 1.我很清楚她会让我和她自己难堪。 herself and me as well. (议论) 2.I felt myself on pins and needles,wishing I 2.我感到如坐针毡，真希望我是在别的 地方。 were somewhere else. 结局 结局1（第1段）： 姐姐唱得很好，作者感到惊讶。 (结果) 结局2（第2段）： 作者向姐姐道歉，姐姐原谅了作者。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：唱歌 作者惊讶—感到羞愧 道款 一原谅 82 Week9网络手机类应用文写作&家庭亲情类读后续写 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 Finally,my sister was ready to sing.L lowered my head and covered my face with mu hands.preparing muself for the worst.She opened her mouth.and I was stunned- she sang effortlesslu and pleasantlu.Her voice rang through the hall beautiful in its power I took a deep breath.sat straight and watched in wonder.Totallu immersed in her song.my sister looked exactly like an angel standing on the stage.How could I not know that my sister could sing so well?As I listened to her song.my heart gave way. I began to feel ashamed of doubting my sister's abilities.Lhad been wrong.Guilt and shame filled my heart.Although she knew that i was embarrassed by her and was unwilling to watch her performance.she never minded.I stood up and went backstage to wait for her.The moment she got off stage,i warmly hugged her and apologized for my previous wrong attitude towards her She smiled sweetly and forgave me gracefully.sauing that she had never taken anuthing that I had done to heart.It was then that I resolved to love my sister unconditionally Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Tom was working in a big company.He had been on the road visiting people for more than a month without going home.He couldn't wait to get back to see his wife and children.It was coming up on Mother's Day,and he usually tried to make it "back home",but this year he was just too busy and too tired.The day when he was driving in a small town,he saw a flower shop.He said to himself,"I know what I will do.I'll send my mother some roses. He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a young man talking to the girl in it."How many roses can I get for five dollars.Ms.?"the boy asked.The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive.Maybe the young man would be happy with something else. "No.I have to have roses,"he said."My mom was badly sick last year and I didn't get to spend much time with her. I want to get her something special.It has to be red roses,because those are her favorite."He was stubborn. The girl in the shop looked up at Tom and was just shaking her head.Something inside Tom was touched by the boy's voice.He wanted to get those roses so badly.Tom had been blessed with his business,and he looked at the girl and silently said that he would pay for the boy's roses. The girl looked at the young man and said."OK,I will give you a dozen red roses for your dollars."The young man almost jumped into the air.He took the flowers and ran out of the store.It was worth more than fifty dollars just to see that kind of excitement. Tom ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have them delivered (to his mother.After that,with relief (松了一口气)he drove down the road..Not long after his driving,he saw the boy walking to a graveyard(s墓地). 注意1，续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Tom stopped his car and followed the young man. Tom went into the car in tears. [语篇解读]文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了T0m在母亲节前夕去花店买花时看到一个小男孩为妈妈买红玫瑰，因 为小男孩的钱不够，所以售货员没有办法卖给他。听了小男孩说要送花给自己生了重病的妈妈，T0m很感动，决定帮 小男孩支付费用。在Tom买完花后不久，他看到小男孩拿着红玫瑰去了墓地。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“汤姆停下车，跟着那个小男孩。”可知，第一段可描写Tom在基地的所见所闻。 ②由第二段首句内容“汤姆泪流满面地回到车里。”可知，第二段可描写Tom想到了自己母亲，受到小男孩的影响，他 决定亲自回去看望妈妈，而不是订一束花。 83 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文] Tom stopped his car and followed the young man.The young man went up to a small monument and knelt down.He carefully put the flowers before it and began to sob,"Dear Mom,I love you.But how I regret that I didn't tell it to you when you were with me.I knew you loved roses,but why didn't I send the flowers to you when I could still see you and talk with you?Now,you have gone to another world.How I regret that I didn't tell you I love you so much!" Tom went into the car in tears.His mother's home wasn't far from here,but he hadn't seen her for so long a time.He didn't have a talk with her or say how much he loved her for so long a time.He turned the car and drove towards the flower shop quickly.When he arrived,he asked the girl to give back the flowers because he wanted to send them personally to his mom. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①kneel down跪下②sob,.啜泣，抽噎③regret v,懊悔，惋惜④personally adv.就个人而言：亲自地 高分句型：（句型I)But how I regret that I didn't tell it to you when you were with me..(运用了that引导的宾语从句： when引导的时间状语从句) (2)When he arrived,he asked the girl to give back the flowers because he wanted to send them personally to his mom.(运用了由when引导的时间状语从句：because引导的原因状语从句) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael不久后将来中国交流学习，写信向你询问在中国常用的手机应用(APP)。 请你给他回信，推荐一款适合Michael使用的APp。内容包括：l.简单介绍该APP:2.推荐理由。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3.文中不能透露个人真实信息。 Dear Michael, Yours, Li Hua [范文] Dear Michael, I'm more than delighted to know that you are coming to China for exchange study.To help you prepare for your stay here,I'm writing this letter to recommend a useful application to you. WeChat is one of the most popular apps in China and has become part of Chinese people's life.Designed by tech giant Tencent,the app is an instant messaging platform which allows you to communicate with people for free.In addition,it provides digital payment service,making it possible for you to pay in stores,transfer money to other users,and pay for public transport conveniently.As the "app for everything".I believe it will make your life here much easier. I sincerely hope my recommendation will be of some help and that you will have an unforgettable time and studying in China. Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①application n.应用②design v.设计③platform m.平台④digital payment数字支付 (5transfer money转账⑥recommendation n.提议：推荐 高分句型：（句型I)Designed by tech giant Tencent,the app is an instant messaging platform which allows you to communicate with people for free,(运用了过去分词作状语和which引导的限制性定语从句) (2)I sincerely hope my recommendation will be of some help and that you will have an unforgettable time staying and studying in China.[运用了（省略）that引导的宾语从句，并且构成并列结构] 84 Week9网络手机类应用文写作&家庭亲情类读后续写 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 Mary sat down heavily on the sofa.feeling a bit down.Father's Day was drawing near,yet she didn't have a gift for her dad."How can I possibly get a gift if I don't have any money?"she wondered. Noticing the newspaper on the couch,Mary reached for it.A big advertisement on the front page caught her attention. The local store was hosting a contest."Share with us why your dad is special and win a $100 gift card for him,"the advertisement said."This is fantastic!"Mary thought with excitement.She hurried to her room with the newspaper in hand. She picked up a pencil and a piece of paper.sat down.and began writing. "My dad is really amazing.He works tirelessly to support our family and never complains.He always has time to listen to me and gives the best advice.He teaches me valuable life lessons and supports my dreams.Whenever I feel down,he lifts my spirits with his humor and love.And although he is tough on the outside.he has a heart of gold." Mary felt satisfied with her heartfelt words.She carefully copied them,caught an envelope and a stamp from her bedside,and rushed to the mailbox with her entry."Dad will be overjoyed with a gift card,"she thought optimistically. Days turned into weeks as Mary eagerly checked the mailbox each day,hoping for news about the contest.However. as Father's Day was just around the corner,she still hadn't received any response. "What should I do now?"she wondered,feeling disappointed.She had no gift and no money and time was running out.But Mary was determined to show her love and appreciation.She had to come up with a plan.Mary closed her eyes and took a deep breath,searching for a solution. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 All of a sudden,she knew what to do. On the morning of Father's Day.Mary gave the letter to her father. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲迷了My正在为父亲节的礼物伤脑筋的时侯看到了一则广告，广告上说可 以分享父亲的独特之处并赢得一张IO0美元的礼品卡。My非常用心地描述了自己的爸爸，并将信寄出。可是等了 很久，直到父亲节临近都毫无音信。父亲节到了，My为父亲写了一封感人的信作为礼物。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“突然间，她知道该怎么做了。”以及第二段首句内容“在父亲节的早晨，My把信 交给了她父亲。”可知，第一段可描写May为父亲写了一封信。②由第二段首句内容“在父亲节的早晨，May把信交 给了她父亲。”可知，第二段可描写My所写的信让自己的父亲非常感动。 [范文] All of a sudden,she knew what to do.She searched through her drawers and luckily found a delicate piece of paper.Sitting up straight,she began writing a letter with her best and neatest handwriting as a special Father's Day gift,which started with the words,"Dear Dad,I'm writing this to let you know that you are the best father in the world."Filled with love,Mary completed the letter and carefully placed it inside an envelope,a wide smile lighting up her face. On the morning of Father's Day.Mary gave the letter to her father.After reading it,he embraced Mary tightly with tears welling up."Thank you,my dear!"he said.Resting against her dad's shoulder,Mary slowly explained why she had chosen to write a letter as a gift.Upon hearing her heartfelt explanation,her dad gently touched her head and said,"To me,your letter means more than a thousand gift cards."They hugged again with joy.It served as a beautiful reminder that sometimes the most precious gifts come from the heart and don't require money or material possessions.Expressing love to those we cherish is priceless. 高分亮点一 高分词汇：①straight adj.直的，笔直的②neat adj.整齐的：爱整洁的③light up点亮④embrace v.拥抱：欣然接 受⑤hearfelt adj.由衷的，诚挚的⑥cherish v.珍视，珍爱 高分句型：（句型I)Resting against her dad's shoulder,Mary slowly explained why she had chosen to write a letter as a gin.(运用了why引导的宾语从句) (2)It served as a beautiful reminder that sometimes the most precious gifts come from the heart and don't require money or material possessions,(运用了由that引导的同位语从句) 85