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Week 8 科学技术类应用文写作&童年生活类读后续写 Monday 如何写好科学技术类应用文写作 典题示例 假定你是育才中学的学生李华，你校将于下周举办主题为“Science and human life"的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇 演讲稿参赛。内容包括：1.科学进步与发展如何造福人类：2.科学进步与发展存在的隐忠；3.如何看待科学与人类之 间的关系。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Science and human life 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 演讲稿 时态 以一般现在时为主 话题 科学与人类生活 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题：第二段：科技的优点与缺点：第三段：我的看法 OStep Two 词汇运用 I.表达express 6.洗衣机washing machine 2.(人，闭体、国家等相互间的)关系relationship 7.科技science and technology 3.生话舒适live comfortably and convenient山y 8.分数：一小部分fraction 4.空调air conditioner 9.突破，重大进展breakthrough 5.冰箱fridge 10.环境污染environmental pollution OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)表达我对科学与人类生活关系的看法是我的荣幸。 To express my opinion on the relationship between science and human life is a great honor for me. (2)多亏了科技，我们现在住在舒适和方便的房子里。 Thanks to technology.we now live comfortably and conveniently in houses. (3)在这些房子配备空调、冰箱，洗衣机等。 The houses are furnished with air conditioners,fridges,washing machines and so on. (4)科学技术发展很快。 Science and technology is developed quickly. (5)此外，我们可以在不到一秒的时间里乘坐飞机和汽车走很远的距离。 Besides,we can travel long distances in the fraction of a second on planes and in cars. (6)然而，由于医学领域的突破，人们现在比过去活得更长了。 However,because of the breakthroughs in the field of medicine,people are now living much longer than they used to. (7)因此，人口不断增加。 As a result,the population is increasing. (8)这导致了许多问题，如环境污染 This leads to lots of problems,such as environmental pollution. 6 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 (9)因此，我们要正确地利用科学技术。 Therefore,we use science and technology in a proper way. (10)它们可能会给我们带来更多的好处。 They may bring us even more benefits. 2.句式升级 (1)用it作形式主语升级句子(1)。 It is a great honor for me to express my opinion on the relationship between science and human life. (2)用which引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(2)和句子(3)。 Thanks to technology,we now live comfortably and conveniently in houses which are furnished with air conditioners,fridges.washing machines and so on. (3)用because引导的原因状语从句合并上题中的句子(4)和句子(5)。 Besides,because science and technology is developed quickly,we can travel long distances in the fraction of a second on planes and in cars. (4)用现在分词作结果状语合并上题中的句子(7)和句子(8)。 As a result.the population is increasing.leading to lots of problems.such as environmental pollution. (5)用as long as引导的条件状语从句合并上题中的句子(9)和句子(10)。 Therefore,as long as we use science and technology in a proper way.they may bring us even more benefits. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Science and human life Dear teachers and classmates, It is a great honor for me to express my opinion on the relationship between science and humon life. Thanks to technology,we now live comfortably and conveniently in houses which are furnished with air conditioners,fridges,washing machines and so on.Besides,because science and technology is developed quickly.we can travel long distances in the fraction of a second on planes and in cars.However,because of the breakthroughs in the field of medicine,people are now living much longer than they used to.As a result,the population is increasing.leading to lots of problems,such as environmental pollution. Therefore,as long as we use science and technology in a proper way.they may bring us even more benefits. Tuesday 科学技术类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 science and technology科技 influence影响 reveal揭示，展示 technological advance技术进步 working efficiency工作效率 dramatically剧烈地，明显地 patriotic爱国的，有爱国心的 scientific科学的 succeed in在某方面成功 stick to坚持 trial试验；试用 be on trial在试验中：经实验后 popular science科普 robot机器人 artificial intelligence人工智能 create创造，创作，造成 creative有创造力的 advanced先进的：高级的 model模范：模型 make progress取得进步 button按钮 benefit from得益于，从…获益 Science&Technology Festival科技节 do research on sth.从事于…研究 carry out a research into对…进行研究 change one'sife改变人们的生活 improve the quality of life for humans提高人类的生活质量 carry out a research in the hope of curing the illnesses为治疗疾病而进行一项研究 68 Week8科学技术类应用文写作&童年生活类读后续写 ef伍ciency of paper--scoring.我们的老师不仅可以使用多 话题句式 媒体设备使他们的课堂更加生动，而且他们还可以在 引出话题先声夺人 电脑上阅卷，这大大提高了阅卷的效率。 1.It is a great honor for me to express my opinion on the 3.The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen,who is the relationship between science and human life.我很荣幸能就 most outstanding representative figure of the aerospace 科学与人类生活的关系发表自己的看法。 eld.我最墩佩的科学家是钱学森，他是航天领域最杰 2.Science and technology have been deeply influencing both 出的代表人物。 our life and study.科学技术已经深深地影响着我们的 首尾结合余音回味 生活和学习。 1.Therefore,as long as we use science and technology in a 3.When we talk about the scientific spirit,there are many proper way,they may bring us even more benefits.因此， aspects we should evaluate.当我们谈论科学精神时，有 只要我们以正确的方式使用科学技术，它们可能会给 很多方面我们应该评估。 我们带来更多的好处。 主题部分妮娓道来 2.In a word,it is the development of science and technology 1.Thanks to technology,we now live comfortably and that makes such a comfortable and convenient life conveniently in houses furnished with air conditioners, available to us.总之，正是科学技术的发展，才使我们有 fridges,washing machines and so on.多亏了科技，我们 了舒适方便的生活。 现在的生活舒适方便，房子里有空调，冰箱、洗衣机等。3.In conclusion,patriotism is what inspires scientists to 2.Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to devote themselves to scientific career.总之，爱国主义是 make their classes more lively,but also they can mark 激励科学家献身于科学事业的动力。 papers on the computer,which greatly improves the 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Science and technology have been deeply influencing both our life and study. Take our school for example.Now there are several HD-cameras monitoring the 模板中黑体字部分是描写 whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying.Not only can our teachers 科学技术类应用文时可以通用 use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively.but also they can 的部分，其他部分可以根据写作 mark papers on the computer,which greatly improves the efficiency of paper- 要求灵活处理。 scoring.Additionally,in our daily life we can do many things conveniently. 因为是说明文体，故主体部 such as paying by Alipay,getting food by card.going to school by shared bike 分往往是一般现在时。 and so on. 文章人称以第三人称为主。 In a word,it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us. Wednesday 科学技术类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆科学技术 假如你是某国际学校学生李华，你校校报正在为12月即将举办的科技节征集英文口号，要求主题积极向上，不超 过10个英文单词。请你根据该要求投稿，内容包括：1.介绍你的口号：2预祝活动成功。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear editor, Yours. Li Hua 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 [范文] Dear editor, Knowing that our school newspaper is collecting English slogans for the Science Technology Festival to be held in December,I'm writing to recommend mine,which I believe can fully reveal the theme. "Science and technology brightens our life"is the one I choose since technological advances have brought us tremendous benefits.For instance,we're now living comfortably and conveniently in houses equipped with various intelligent home appliances.Besides,our working efficiency has been dramatically increased with the help of the Internet. I would appreciate it if you can take my slogan into account.Wish this festival a huge success! Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①slogan m.口号，标语②Science&Technology Festival科技节③reveal v.揭示，展示④technological advance技术进步⑤working efficiency工作效率⑥dramatically ad.剧烈地，明显地 高分句型：（句型1）Knowing that our school newspaper is collecting English slogans for the Science&Technology Festival to be held in December,I'm writing to recommend mine,which I believe can fully reveal the theme. which引导的非限制性定语从句和hat引导的宾语从句) (2)"Science and technology brightens our life"is the one I choose since technological advances have brought us tremendous benefits.(运用了省略hat的限制性定语从句，和since引导的原因状语从句) 跟踪训练2◆科学技术 你校英文报正在征集主题为“Scientific Spirit'”的稿件，请你选取科学家必备精神的一个方面，并结合某一个科学 家的具体事例写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1，科学精神：2.举例说明：3.你的感悟。 注意1.词数80个左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Scientific Spirit [范文] Scientific Spirit When we talk about the scientific spirit,there are many aspects we should evaluate. Personally.the most important spirit is being patriotic.Patriotism is the most natural feeling for a citizen. Qian Xuesen,for example,left America and returned to China when his country needed him.He helped develop the Chinese aerospace program and make extraordinary contributions.It was actually his potriotism that made him give up the good conditions abroad and return to his motherland. In conclusion,patriotism is what inspires scientists to devote themselves to scientific career. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①evaluate v.评价，评估②patriotic ad.爱国的，有爱国心的 高分句型：（句型I)When we talk about the scientific spirit,there are many aspects we should evaluate.(运用了when 引导的时间状语从句) 2)It was actually his patriotism that made him give up the good conditions abroad and return to his motherland. (运用了强调句) 70 Week8科学技术类应用文写作&童年生活类读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能8 续写中肢体活动的描写 读后续写的写作过程中，成功的动作描写，可以交代人物的身份、地位，可以反映人物心理活动的进程，可以表现 人物的性格特征 相反，空洞，笼统的描写会使内容缺乏生动性，使人物形象不丰满。人物的动作或简单，或复杂，都不是一下子就 能完成的，细心观察都能捕捉到最能体现人物特征的慢镜头。 1.动作精准化 Part1细致描写 怎样使用精准化动作类词汇对动作进行细致描写呢？其实很简单，用一系列小动作而不用大动作，或者用含义比 较明确的动词，而不用抽象或虚化的动词来描述，可以使描写更加具体生动。试比较下面两句： ①The little boy said sorry to his mother.小男孩对他妈妈说对不起。 ②The little boy hung his head and mumbled an apology to his mother.小男孩垂着头，咕k着向他母亲道歉。 我们来具体分析一下：第一句中“said sorry to”不带任何感情色彩，而第二句中使用了具体化的表示“说”的动词 mumbled(咕哝)，从而使一个不愿意道歉又不得不道歉的小男孩的形象栩栩如生地浮现在读者脑海中。 Part2添加适当的修饰成分 除了精准选用表示动作的词语，而且要给动词加上适当的修饰成分。适当的修饰语能细致地表达出动作的时间、 幅度、速度，力度等，使人物形象更具活力，能更好地表现人物的鲜明个性与思想境界。动作描写中最常见的修饰 成分就是状语，如副词、介词短语(wih+情感名词，wth+身体部位，in+名词)等。 例如，在体现动作的迅速和短暂时，我们可以添加以下修饰语：suddenly、immediately、instantly、without pausing、 rapidly,swiftly、without delay等a 比如下面两句： ①The wolf also noticed them and turned its head back,shouting at Paul and Becky.狼也注意到他们，回头朝Paul和 Becky大声大叫。 2At the same time,the wolf also noticed them and fiercely turned its head back,shouting loudly at Paul and Becky.j 此同时，狼也注意到了他们，恶狠狠地转过头，对Paul和Becky大声大叫。 我们来具体分析一下：第二句中加上了at the same time与此同时/fiercely激烈地/loudly大声地这三个副词，把这 两个人遇到狼这个危险情况生动地表达了出来 Part3精彩段落赏析 Claire fell off a ladder and even though Tony was in the next room,he managed to catch her in time.He held her firmly in his arms and she felt the warmth of his body.She screamed,pushed him away and ran to her room.她从梯子上掉了 下来，尽管Toy在隔壁房间，他还是及时把她接住了。他紧紧地把她抱在怀里，她感到了他身体的温暖。她尖叫 起来，推开他，然后跑回自己的房间。 当Claire从梯子上掉下来Tony设法接住她时，描写了Claire的一系列动作，screamed,pushed him away和ran to her room,这一动作过程就把Claire的惊吓、羞愧和不知所措表现得淋漓尽致。 2.动作过程化 例I:他上了车。He got into a taxi. 【句型升级】 He stopped the taxi,jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver,.“Go to the police station,please."他拦下了车，拿 着箱子跳进了车里，然后对司机说，“请到警察局去。” 其实，这句话只是描写了“上车”的动作，然而通过拆解，细致地展现了一个动作下的组成部分。其本质是避免简单 粗暴地使用一个动词概括整个动作，而是用2~3个动词组合进行描述。用一个公式进行总结以上例句，如下：上车 =拦车+上车+告诉目的地 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 例2：她兴奋地下车。She would get off the car excitedly, 【句型升级】 She would get off'the car excitedly,laughing and dancing around.她兴奋地下车，又笑又跳 这句讲的是一个比较粗线条的妈妈，动作描写完整地描述了这位妈妈下车时及下车后的表现，即：下车=下车+笑 +跳 在读后续写的训练过程中，需要我们仔细观察，结合一点点的语文功底，并进行合理联想，并多多积累动词。 3.高级语法动作表达 例1：“老人静坐” 老人静坐=坐在夕阳下+看报纸+所广插（现在分词作伴随状语doing and doing) The old man sat under the sunset,reading the newspaper and listening to the radio. 例2：“没有买到票” 想一想：“买票”这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？ 没有买到票=排了很久队+被告知票卖完了 Having queued for 3 hours,he was told that the tickets had been sold out.(Having done) 例3：“孩子们哭了” 想一想：“哭”这个动作前面或后面会有哪些动作？或者什么原因让孩子哭 感动哭了=被感动+哭了 Deeply moved by the story,the children began to cry.(-ed过去分词凸显被动) Friday 读后续写示例指导8 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It took place in a teacher's family.One day.Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school,when he threw the ball at a vase(花瓶)一his mother's favourite possession.To cover his terrible action,the terrified boy glued(用胶水 )the pieces together and put the vase back to its place. The mother noticed the cracks (that evening.To her surprise,the repair work was actually very good.At dinner time,she asked her boy if he broke the vase.Fearing punishment,the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbour's cat jumped in from the window and he couldn't drive it away.It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf.His mother was quite clear that her son was lying,for all the windows were closed before she left for work each moring and opened after she retured.However,Ben's mother realized she shouldn't just simply blame and punish her son for lying.She came up with another idea. Before going to bed,the boy found a note from his mother in his room,asking him to go to the living room at once. As he had already lied.he was determined to deny (everything to the end.no matter how angry his mum became. In the living room,calmly bathed in the light,his mother's face showed no sign of anger.Instead,she took a chocolate box out of a drawer and gave him one. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The mother said."This chocolate is a reward (for your imagination:a window-opening cat!" Now with some chocolates in hand.the boy's bad attitude (disappeared. 语篇解读 本文为记叙文，讲述了Bn不小心打碎花瓶，并对妈妈说谎是猫打碎的，妈妈并设有责备他，拿出巧克力诱导他 做一个诚实的人，Bn最后说出了真相，得到了妈妈的奖励的故事。 「审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”中的“优秀品行，正确的人生态度，公民义务与社会责 任”，写作要用一般过去时，人称以第三人称为主。 Week8科学技术类应用文写作&童年生活类读后续写 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1.Ben was playing basketball in the living 1.Ben放学后在客厅打篮球，突然他把球扔到 room after school,when he threw the ball at 点题 一个花瓶上。 a vase. (事件) 2.这个吓环了的男孩把花瓶的碎片粘在一起， 2.The terrified boy glued the pieces together 然后把花瓶放回原处。 and put the vase back to its place. I.The mother noticed the cracks(裂纹)that 阅读任务 evening. 1.那天晚上，母亲注意到了裂缝。 2.His mother was quite clear that her son 2.他的母亲很清楚儿子在说谎。 进程 was lying. 3.Ben的母亲意识到，她不应该仅仅因为儿子 (发展) 3.Ben's mother realized she shouldn't just 撒谎而责备和惩罚他。 simply blame and punish her son for lying. 4.相反，她从抽屉里拿出一个巧克力盒，给了 4.Instead,she took a chocolate box out of a 他一个。 drawer and gave him one. The boy found a note from his mother in his 冲突 男孩在他的房间里发现了他妈妈的一张纸条， room.asking him to go to the living room (矛盾点) 让他马上去客厅。 at once. 评议 Ben was determined to deny(否认)everything Bn决定不管妈妈有多生气，都要把一切否认 (议论)》 to the end,no matter how angry his mum 到底。 阅读任务 became. 主人公的母亲通过奖励他巧克力来表扬他在这件事情中的一些值得 结局1（第1段）： 结局 肯定的做法，同时也是慢慢诱导主人公意识到自己的错误。 (结果) 主人公渐渐认识到自己撒谎是不对的，进而向他的母亲坦白事情的 结局2（第2段）： 真相。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：母亲奖励巧克力—肯定主人公的一些表现一 主人公认识到错误一态度缓和一坦白事实—得到 原谅 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 The mother said,"This chocolate is a reward (for your imagination:a window-opening cat!"Hearing her sincere appreciation.Ben flushed and lowered his head and muttered a thank-you Surprisingly.his mother took another chocolate and pressed it into his hand.This one is for the delicate repair work uou did to the broken vase.she also added that she was moved by how much the boy cherished the family possessions.At these hearty remarks.Ben felt a flow of shame through his veins.and had to duck his head even lower.The mother then calmly encouraged Ben to reward himself more chocolate for any other merits he had displayed in this event.He did as was told to.confessing that he was calm when facing the accident. Now with some chocolates in hand,the boy's bad attitude (disappeared His palm and forehead sweating.nervousness welled up inside him.After what seemed 73 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 a long time he looked up at his mother.admitted that it was not the cat but he that had broken the vase accidentally and asked for punishment."L am sorry i lied to you. Mum.Please take back the chocolate."Feeling so ashamed.Ben couldn't hold back his tears.He opened his palm wide.readu to return the chocolate To his surprise.however. his mother placed the whole bag of chocolate in his hand.smiling Honesty deserves the best reward,my dear." Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Hey,Remember When? When I look back on my childhood,I will always remember the memories I have had with my cousins.There are five of us,including my brother Jack,my cousins Marleigh,Weston and Michael.and myself that are particularly close.Every summer,since I was six or seven,I have spent time with them.Every summer.I bring home unforgettable memories that I know I will keep forever. Each time I see my cousins,we play a game called,"Hey,remember,when...,"and we remember all the crazy things we've done in the past. "Hey,remember when Jack ordered room service at the Disneyland Hotel right when we were about to leave?Aunt Pam got so mad that Jack had to pay for it,and we didn't even get to eat the food!"Yeah,that was funny."Remember when we were at The Good Guys,and Weston decided to test the video camera that showed up on the big screens in the store by putting the camera down his pants ()That totally got the attention of everyone in the store!" "Remember when...?"And it goes on like this for hours. One summer the five of us were on holiday in Palm Springs.During the day it was 115 degrees outside,we would go to the coolest place around:the air-conditioned mall. One day at the mall we went into a shop that sold pillows and Michael had a good idea.He decided it would be fun if we buried him under all those beautiful new pillows.So,of course,we did.In less than two minutes,all of the pillows were off the shelves and on top of Michael and he was no longer in sight. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 We were all enjoying ourselves when we spotted a fat saleswoman coming our way. Michael,realizing his mistake,started running to join us. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲迷了作者和几个表兄弟童年总在一起玩要，留下了很多值得回忆的瞬间。 有一次他们在商场玩要，因为一时贪玩，将商场的枕头弄得一团槽，他们的行为引起了销售员的抱怨，但销售员也耐 心教导其中一人。最终作者和表兄弟们意识到自己的错误，为了弥补错误，他们帮忙整理枕头。 [段落续写]①由第一段句首内容“正当我们玩得很开心的时候，一个胖的女售货员向我们走来。”可知，第一段描述 我们的行为引起售货员的不满，但售货员仍然谢心教导的过程。②由第二段句首内容“Michael意识到了自己的错 误，开始跑向我们”可知，第二段描述我们意识到自己的错误，为了弥补错误，我们回到商场帮忙整理枕头。 [范文] We were all enjoying ourselves when we spotted a fat saleswoman coming our way.She looked angry because we made a mess of these pillows.When she came up to us,she asked angrily."What are you doing?You'd better get out of here as soon as possible."Hearing her complaint,we immediately stopped fighting and left quickly. In the end,the saleswoman helped Michael to his feet and told him that what we were doing was wrong and we should not do it again. Week8科学技术类应用文写作&童年生活类读后续写 Michael,realizing his mistake,started running to join us.Michael told us that he had sincerely made on apology to the saleswoman and received her forgiveness.In order to make up for the mistake we made,we all decided to go back to the store and help sort out the pillows.In a short while,we finished the task.Although we felt a little tired,we still felt happy and realized that this experience would definitely be a part of "Hey. Remember When?" 高分亮点 高分词汇：①mess n.肮脏，杂乱②complaintm.抱怨，不满③make an apology道款④forgiveness n.宽恕：宽仁 之心⑤definitely adv.肯定地，当然 高分句型：（句型I)She looked angry because we made a mess of these pillows.(运用了because引导的原因状语从 句) (句型2)Hearing her complaint,we immediately stopped fighting and left quickly.(运用了现在分词作状语) (3)Although we felt a little tired,we still felt happy and realized that this experience would definitely be a part of “Hey,Remember When?”(运用了although引导的让步扶语从句，that引导的宾语从句) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jf得知你参加了你校学生会主办的“我最敬佩的科学家”故事分享会，写信询问 有关情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.感谢关注：2.你的分享：3.你的感想。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jeff. Yours, Li Hua [范文] Dear Jeff, I'm glad to know that you are interested in the story-sharing meeting with the theme of "my most admired scientist"held by the Students Union of our school.Thank you for your attention.I would like to tell you some details about it. In the activity,we all enthusiastically introduced the scientists we admire most,such as Newton,Einstein, Chen Jingrun,etc.The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen,who is the most outstanding representative figure of the aerospace field.What I admire him most is that he overcame numerous obstacles to return to his motherland and participated in the construction of new China. We are all deeply inspired by these scientists and determined to become the pillars of our motherland. Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①enthusiastically ad.热心地，满腔热情地②admire.饮佩，仰幕③outstanding ad.杰出的 ④representative adj.典型的，有代表性的⑤aerospace field航天工业⑥obstacle.障碍⑦overcome.克服，解 决⑧pillar.栋梁 高分句型：（句型I)The scientist I admire most is Qian Xuesen,who is the most outstanding representative figure of the aerospace field.(运用了两个定语从句) (2)What I admire him most is that he overcame numerous obstacles to return to his motherland and participated in the construction of new China.(运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句) 3)I'm glad to know that you are interested in the story-sharing meeting with the theme of "my most admired scientist”held by the students union of our school.(运用了宾语从句和过去分词作后置定语) 75 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was in second grade,I did something that really taught me a lesson.After finishing my homework on a sunny weekend,I was thinking about what to do for fun.Then my best friend,Eric,called me and asked me to go for a bike ride in a park near our school.I readily agreed. I got on my bike and couldn't wait to fly to the park.As soon as I entered the park.I saw Eric,who was reading a book on a stone bench.How could this fellow be so quiet today?What a rare thing!I shouted to him,"Eric,I'm coming!" But Eric remained the same.This guy became crazy about reading.What book interested him so much? It was not until I patted him on the shoulder that he looked up.Eric quickly put his book on the bench.smiled at me and said,"I'm so sorry!Now let's start riding!"Then we rode our bikes freely in the vast park.After a while,we went on our own routes to enjoy the fun.Suddenly,I found myself riding to the stone bench where Eric had just sat,and I noticed the book again.It raised my curiosity greatly.I thought to myself."What kind of book could it be that made him so captivated )?I stopped and bent down to pick up the book.Wow!A Litle Story.a Big Lesson.This was the book of my dreams!Suddenly,an idea came to my mind:Take the book away secretly! I looked around,but there was no sign of Eric,so I put the book into my jacket,looked for Eric and deliberately rode my bike past him in the park.I told him that there was something urgent going on at home,so I had to leave first.Eric smiled and said goodbye to me.Then I hurried home on my bike.When I passed the living room,my mother saw me and asked,"What's that bilge (in your jacket?""Oh,nothing...,"I replied.Then I slipped into my room and opened the book. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Suddenly,my mother came in. Finally,I told my mother exactly what had happened. [语篇解读]文章讲述作者在和朋友Eic一起游公园的时候看到Eic拿着自己一直想拥有的一本书，因为喜欢，他 决定不告诉朋友偷偷带走，于是伦找了个借口就离开了，回到家，妈妈看到作者鼓起的衣服，间是什么，他糖塞了一句 就走进卧室去看书了。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“突然，我的妈妈走了进来。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈发现作者的异常之后进来了 解情况的过程。②由第二段首句内容“最终我告诉了妈妈发生的事。”可知，第二段可描写作者和妈妈坦白之后，妈妈 对作者的教育和开导。 [范文] Suddenly,my mother came in.She stood in front of me and stared at me calmly.The more silent she was, the more frightened I became.After a few minutes,my mother finally spoke up."Tell me where you got this book.""I borrowed it from one of my friends.No,from the school library."I said.My mother touched my head and said,"Just tell me the truth.Your eyes have told me your secret." Finally.I told my mother exactly what had happened."It is a good habit to read books,but you have made a big mistake.There is no excuse for you to take other people's books without their permission.Come on!Return the book to Eric and apologize to him!"On hearing these words,I was really ashamed of what I had done.I said nothing.closed the book.ran out of the house,got on my bike and sped off to the park. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①stare at盯着②apologize to sb.向某人道歉③frightened ad.害怕的④ashamed adj..羞耻的 ⑤calmly ad.冷静地，平静地⑥permission,同意，许可 高分句型：（句型I)Tell me where you got this book.(由where引导的宾语从句作Tell的实语） (句型2)On hearing these words,I was really ashamed of what I had done.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 76