Week 7 工作与技能类应用文写作&爱心类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week7 工作与技能类应用文写作&爱心慈善类读后续写 Monday 如何写好工作与技能类应用文写作 典题示例 假定你是李华,你从网上得知某英语报社要在你所在的城市招募一名中学生记者。请你结合自已的情况,用英 语写封求职信,内容主要包括:1.写信目的;2.个人情况;3.致谢并表达希望 注意1.词数80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam. Yours. Li Hua 思路点拨 OStep One 审题谋篇 时态 体裁 应用文 一般现在时为主 主题 求职信 人称 第一人称为主 结构 第一段:开门见山,说明写信目的;第二段:介绍个人情况,申请优势;第三段:期盼回复 OStep Two 词汇运用 1.申请 apply for 7.对(某人)进行面试(或面谈);接受面试;(媒体)采 2.有把握的;自信的;有信心的confident 访,访问 interview 3.书法;书写;笔迹handwriting 8.外向的;爱交际的;友好的outgoing 4.优势head start 9.获得:购得 acquire 5. 精通于 be good at 10.(求职用的)履历;简历 resume 6.有利的:有裨益的;有用的 beneficial 11.把....考虑进去;考虑到;顾及 take...into consideration 。Step Three 句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我写信是想申请当记者。 I'm writing to apply to be the reporter. (2)我完全相信我是这个职位的合适人选。 I am fully confident that I'm the right person for the position. (3)首先,我能说流利的英语且书写漂亮。 First, I can speak English fluently and handwriting is beautiful. (4)这些都是我的优势 These are my head starts. (5)更重要的是,我擅长拍照和熟练使用电脑。 What's more. I'm good at taking photos and skilled at computers. (6)我相信这些对面试工作是有益的 I'm sure these are beneficial to the interviewing work. (7)作为一个外向的男孩,我积极参加各种活动并获得奖项。 As an outgoing boy. I take an active part in all kinds of activities and acquire awards. (8)我喜欢表达自己。 I love to express myself. Week7 工作与技能类应用文写作&爱心慈善类读后续写 (9)我也是一个好的倾听者。 I'm a good listener as well. (10)我真诚地希望我的简历能得到考虑。 I sincerely hope that my resume will be taken into consideration. (11)我在期待您的早日回复。 I am looking forward to your early reply. 2.句式升级 (1)用because引导原因状语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 I'm writing to apply to be the reporter because I am fully confident that I'm the right person for the position. (2)用which引导非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。 First, I can speak English fluently and handwriting is beautiful, which are my head starts. (3)用which引导非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 What's more, I'm good at taking photos and skiled at computers, which I'm sure are beneficial to the interviewing work. (4)用not only...but also句式合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 I not only love to express myself, but also I'm a good listener as well. (5)用省略主语和谓语的形式升级上题中的句子(11)。 Looking forward to your early reply. OStep Four 连句成篇 [范文] Dear Sir or Madam. fm writing to apply to be the reporter because I om fully confident that I'm the right person for the position. First, I con speak English fluentlu and handwriting is beautiful, which are mu heod starts. Whot's more. fm good at taking photos and skilled at computers, which f'm sure are beneficial to the interviewing work. As on outgoing bog. 1 take an active part in all kinds of activities and acquire awards. 1 not only love to express muself, but also /'m o qood listener as well I sincerelu hope that mu resume will be taken into consideration. Looking forward to gour early replu. Yours. Li Hua Tuesday 工作与技能类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1常用词汇及话题句式 {常用词汇 apply for 申请 head start 优势 be goodat 擅长于 take into consideration 考虑 resume简历 motivation动力 fulfill满足 opportunity机会 secretary 秘书 employ雇用 employer雇主 employee 雇员 hire雇用 fire解雇 staff全体人员 company公司 labour 劳动 physical labour 体力劳动 mental work 脑力劳动 volunteer志愿者 dream of 梦想;渴望 graduate from毕业于 documentary纪实节目,纪录片 challenge挑战:向......挑战 challenging富有挑战性的,挑逗的 application申请,申请表 a letter of application求职信 corporation法人,企业 interview会见,面谈,面试,采访 interviewer访问者;面试官 interviewee 被接见者,参加面试者 out of work=out of a job 失业 ideal adj.理想的;不实际的 day and night/night and day 日日夜夜地 make a self-introduction做自我简介 启航语】 高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 话题句式 2. First, I can speak English fluently and handwriting is beautiful,which are my head starts. 首先,我能说流利的 引出话题 先声夺人 英语,书写漂亮,这是我的优势。 1. I'm writing to apply to be the reporter because I am fully 3. Since she graduated in 1995. she has been devoting all her confident that I'm the right person for the position. 我写这 time to researching into the development of the China 封信是为了申请记者一职,因为我完全相信我是这个 high-speed railway.自1995年毕业以来,她一直致力于 职位的合适人选。 研究中国高速铁路的发展。 2. I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an 首尾结合 余音回味 English secretary. I'm really interested in the position and 1. I sincerely hope that my application will be taken into would like to apply for it. 我从报纸上得知贵公司需要 consideration.我真诚地希望我的申请能被考虑。 一名英语秘书。我对这个职位很感兴趣,想中请这个 2. Not only has it allowed me to see the world from a 职位。 different perspective but also I have gained a sense of 3. This summer. I decided to learn photography and it turned accomplishment.它不仅让我从不同的角度看世界,也让 out to be an amazing journey.今年夏天,我决定学习摄 我获得了成就感 影,这是一段奇妙之旅。 3. From her, I realize that we should keep on trying until we 主题部分 娓娓道来 realizeourdreams.从她身上,我意识到我们应该继续努 1. Like many people nowadays, I want to become a medical 力,直到实现我们的梦想 doctor.像现在许多人一样,我想成为一名医生。 晨诵2背满分模 Dear Sir or Madam. I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I'm really interested in the position and would like to apply for it. 模板中黑体字部分是描写 I'm 24 years old and will graduate from the school this July. My handwriting is 工作与技能时可以通用的部分, excellent and I'm good at English, especially spoken English which are my head 其他部分可以根据写作要求灵 starts. Also I'm proficiency in computer operation. Being an active. young 活处理。 person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides. I'm easy to get along with 第一、二段往往是一般现在 and like to make friends 时,第三段有时可用一般将 I'd appreciate it if you could take my resume into consideration, I'm 来时。 looking forward to your reply. 文章人称以第一人称为主。 Sincerely yours. Li Hua Wednesday 工作与技能类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1工作与技能 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述在暑假所学到的一项新技能的经历及从中获得的体验和感受 注意1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 [范文] This summer. I decided to learn photographu and it turned out to be an amazing journeu Starting bu researching different cameras and techniques, I enrolled in an online course to learn the basics of composition and liahting. lt was challenaing at first, but with practice and determination. I qrodugllu improved. During the learning process, I encountered diffculties like understanding manugl settings and capturing the perfect shot. However, I didn't qive up and sought quidance from experienced photographers. Learning photographg has been an enriching experience. Not only has it allowed me to see the world from o different perspective but glso I hove gained a sense of accomplishment Week7 工作与技能类应用文写作&爱心慈善类读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇:①enrollv.登记:使加入②challengingadj.富于挑战性的 ③determinationn.决心,坚定 ④encounter v.遭遇;偶遇 perspective n.(观察问题的)视角 accomplishment n.成就,成绩 高分句型:(句型1)Starting by researching different cameras and techniques, I enrolled in an online course to learn the basics of composition and lighting.(运用了现在分词作状语) (句型 2) Not only has it allowed me to see the world from a different perspective but also I have gained a sense of accomplishment.(运用了not only...but also句式,allow sb. to do sth.结构) 跟踪训练2工作与技能 你校英文报将以“我梦想的工作”为题举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.你梦想得到的一 份工作及原因;2.你为之而做的准备 注意1.词数80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 My Dream Job [范文] My Dream Job Having a gogl or aim in life is especially important, for it gives our life a purpose and direction. Like manu people nowadaus, I want to become a medical doctor. The most important motivation to choose this profession is to help humanitu and fulfill the ever-growing need for doctors in our communitu. There is no denuing that it is one of the noblest jobs in the world Mu mother and teachers alwaus teach me that onlu with passion and hard work can a qoal be achieved Knowing that becoming a doctor is not eosu. I am studuing hard to achieve this life gogl. In addition, I alwous read manu medical journals and wotch relevant documentaries to familiarize muself with medical knowledge and proctice to be informed 高分亮点 ②noble adi.高尚的 ③fulfillv. 满足 ④humanityn. 人类(总称) 高分词汇:①motivationn.动力 documentaryn.纪实节目,纪录片familiarize v.使了解,使熟悉 高分句型:(句型1)Having a goal or aim in life is especially important, for it gives our life a purpose and direction.(运 用了动名词形式作主语、从属连词for引导的原因状语从句) (句型 2)My mother and teachers always teach me that only with passion and hard work can a goal be achieved.(运用了 连接词that引导的名词性从句作teach的宾语、“only+状语”置于句首引起部分倒装) (句型3) Knowing that becoming a doctor is not easy, I am studying hard to achieve this life goal.(运用了现在分词形 式作状语、连接词that引导名词性从句作Knowing的宾语) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能 如何进行应用文衔接 衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的 2.表示时间顺序的过渡性词语 最常用手段。在句与句之间,段与段之间恰当地使用一 firstly. first of all. then. later, in the end. finally, at 些承上启下的衔接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶 last, after that, afterwards, since then, meanwhile 段应该掌握的衔接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下 1.表示起始关系的过渡性词语 ①Using baskets and ladders. we first picked the ones that above all, to begin/start with, recently, nowadays, were most beautiful in colour, then those that were ripe according to, with the development of...等。 and sof.我们先用篮子和梯子挑选颜色最漂亮的,然后 To begin with. the final exam of this term is around the 再挑选成熟柔软的。 corner,so I ambusy preparing for it. 首先,本学期的期 ②At last. all the runners managed to arrive the finish 末考试就要到了,因此我正忙着准备考试 line. receiving cheers from all the directions. 最后,所有 唐语 高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 赛跑者都成功到达了终点线,他们收到了来自四面八 Besides, my related knowledge will help the audience 方的欢呼声。 learm more about the uniaue Chinese art form. 此外,我的 ③After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can 相关知识能帮助观众更好地了解这种独特的中国艺术 stayforaweek.过后,你可以去上海,你可以在那里待 一周。 形式。 3.表示并列关系的过渡性词语 7.表示列举事实的过渡性词语 and, or, as well as, not only... but also..., either... such as, for example/instance, take... for example, that is or....neither...nor..., not...but...等。 to say, as follows, in other words 等。 She finally earned respect of them. which eventually made In my free time. I'll continue to take regular exercise her become confident as well as well-behaved. 她最后赢 such as swimming,running and various ball games. 在我 得了他们的尊重,这让她最终变得自信,表现也不错。 4.表示转折关系的过渡性词语 的业余时间,我将继续做常规训练,诸如游冰、跑步和 but. yet. however, while, otherwise, on the contrary. 各种各样的球类活动。 in spite of, regardless of 等。 8.表示观点的过渡性词语 However, the film market may witness a slowdown in the in my opinion, in my view. from my point of view, as near future.然而,电影市场在不久的将来或许会有所 far as I am concerned, as for me, personally 等。 下滑。 5.表示因果关系的过渡性词语 ①As for me, my father is the person I respect most. 对于 because. as. since. for. thanks to. due to, as a result of. 我来说,我的爸爸是我最尊敬的人 so, therefore, as a result/consequence 等。 ②In my opinion, we can share information with each ①So would you please spare some time to review the other to make a better understanding.按照我的观点,我 draft script attached to this email and make necessary 们能够互相共享信息,以便更好地相互理解。 changes?因此,您能抽出一些时间来审阅这封邮件所 9.表示总结的过渡性词语 附的草稿剧本,并进行必要的修改吗? ②Therefore, we must make enough preparations before in short, in brief, in conclusion. in a/one word. to sum the match.因此,我们在比赛前要做好充足的准备。 up, all in all, on the whole, in general, generally 6.表示递进关系的过渡性词语 speaking等。 besides, in addition, what's more, furthermore, In conclusion, more and more people fall in love with moreover, what's worse, still less, to make matters Chinese language andculture.综上所述,越来越多的人 worse. worse still. on the one hand... on the otber hand.... for one thing... for another...等。 喜爱中国的语言和文化 Friday 读后续写示例指导7 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Tim and his wife went shopping for some supplies during last month's deadly storm in Texas Tim immediately regretted the trip when he saw the line of people outside, waiting to enter the Leander H-E-B Plus But the couple wanted to be prepared in case conditions worsened. They had shopped for about fifteen minutes before the store suddenly lost power and light went out. Customers continued shopping until a store manager asked them to head to the checkout counter. Tim and his wife joined what he thought to be a few hundred people in a long check-out line. When the couple arrived at the checkout counter, the cashier let them through saying there wasn't time to bag anything. Tim thought the store would collect his information for payment later. Yet when he and his wife asked about paying, the cashier said."Just go ahead and be safe driving home.' "I saw all these people going out with carts and it kind of surprised us. Wow! They are letting everybody leave with free groceries," Tim said. Touched by the unexpected act of kindness they experienced. many customers decided to pay it forward as they left the store. Out in the parking lot, complete strangers helped each other to put unbagged groceries into cars "This older woman couldn't get her car moving because of the ice." Tim said."She looked worried, so I knocked on her window and three or four of us actually pushed her and got her moving. On the ride home, the couple thought about their experience and were deeply moved. Week7 工作与技能类应用文写作&爱心慈善类读后续写 To show their thanks. they planned to give what they would have spent on groceries to an H-E-B supported charity "I think everybody thought it was a nice act for a company," he said. "And it makes you want to help other people too.” 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Hearing his words. his wife nodded firmly. After doing everything they could do, they drove home merrily. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Tim夫妇二人在风暴期间前往H-E-B购物时,得到了H-E-B免单的优惠,夫妇二 人决定将这份爱心传递下去。 审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文,属于”人与社会”中的“公益事业与志愿服务”,写作要用一般过去时,人 称以第三人称为主。 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1. Tim and his wife went shopping for some 1.Tim和他的妻子在上个月得克萨斯州致 supplies during last month's deadly storm in 点题 Texas. 命的风暴中去采购一些物资。 阅读任务 2.当Tim看到外面排着长队等着进人 (事件) 2. Tim immediately regretted the trip when he saw the line of people outside, waiting to enter Leander H-E-BPlus时,他立刻后悔了这次出 行。 the Leander H-E-B Plus. 1. They had shopped for about fifteen minutes before the store suddenly lost power and light went out. 1.他们买了大约15分钟的东西,商店突然 2. Yet when he and his wife asked about 停电了。 paying. the cashier said. "Just go ahead and 2.然而,当他和他的妻子问付款的问题时 进程 he safe driving home." 收银员说:“请往前走,开车回家时要安全。 (发展) 3. Out in the parking lot. complete strangers 3.在停车场外,完全陌生的人互相帮助,把 helped each other to put unbagged groceries 没有包装的杂货放进车里。 into cars. 4.为了表达他们的感谢,他们计划把原本花 4. To show their thanks, they planned to give 在杂货上的钱捐给H-E-B支持的慈善机构 what they would have spent on groceries to an H-E-B supported charity. 阅读任务 When the couple arrived at the checkout 冲突 counter, the cashier let them through saying 当这对夫妇到达收银台时,收银员让他们过 (矛盾点) there wasn't time to bag anything. 去了,说没有时间装东西。 1. Touched by the unexpected act of kindness 1.许多顾客被他们所经历的意想不到的善 they experienced, many customers decided to 评议 意行为所感动,他们决定在离开商店时把它 pay it forward as they left the store. (议论) 传递出去。 2. On the ride home. the couple thought about 2.在回家的路上,这对夫妇回想起他们的经 their experience and were deeply moved. 历,深受感动。 结局1(第1段): 结局 Tim夫妇二人是如何将爱心传递下去的 (结果) 结局2(第2段): 两个人做完善事后的感受。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索:妻子赞同--前往H-E-B慈善机构--负责人接待--提出捐款--夫妇二人感悟--将善意传递给 儿子 高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 根据以上提示整理出答案: 高效临奉衡水体 争抢满分作文 Hearing his words. his wife nodded firmlu. With her permission Tim drove his car to the negrest H-E-B supported charitu in the hooe of helping more oeople About half an hour later theu arrived at the destingtion On parking their car theu couldn't wait to find the person in charae, a handsome uoung man big smile on his face Theu said theu would dongte some moneu to show their love to the people in need " Thank uou for uour generositu and kindness What uou aive will helo 5 students whose families are too poor to pau for their lunch" said the uoung man. After doing everuthing theu could do, they drove home merrilu. "What do uou think of this trip?" gsked Tim "And do uou wgnt to do more besides todau?" His wife thought hiahlu of his behavior and suoaested aoing to the charitu wheneyer theu were free Not onlu did theu both promise to do whateyer theu could to qive a hand to more people, but also theu would tell their son the whole storu and pass down this little kindness. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One day my grandfather gave me a gift-a piggy bank. It had an opening through which one could put money in, but the opening was not big enough to reach in and get the money out. The only way to get at the money was to break the piggy bank open. My grandfather explained that was the whole idea: the piggy bank would help save my money so that, at the end of the year, I might have enough for that bike I dreamt about. He asked if I would put some of the money he gave me into the piggy bank. I agreed immediately and promised that I wouldn't break it open until I could afford my dream bike. Whenever he gave me a little bit of money, he would say,“This is for spending. But you can save some and put it in the piggy bank if you want to save it up." When he gave me larger amounts, it was clearly for saving in the piggy bank. For some time, this worked fine. I loved shaking the piggy bank and hearing the sound of the coins. As it became heavier I grew more excited, dreaming about buying my new bike, and all the adventures I could have on it. Whenever I wanted to take some money from the piggy bank to buy delicious ice-creams or beautiful pens, I would imagine riding my bike on the street, and thinking of that, my thoughts about ice-creams or pens went away. So for almost six months, I only put money into the piggy bank without taking any out. I thought I wouldn't break my piggy bank for anything. But one day something unexpected happened. I saw a piece of news on the television that a serious earthquake had happened in a nearby province. As many houses were destroyed, a lot of children became homeless. Seeing their shabby clothes and crying faces. I was sleepless that night. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 I knew I should do something. My grandfather was surprised by my behavior. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了爷爷送“我”一个存钱罐,“我”努力存钱,想要买自已心仪的自行车。 当看到临近省份发生了地震的电视新闻后,“我”决定把钱捐给地震灾区的孩子们。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“我知道我应该做点什么。”可知,第一段可描写作者的最终决定-打破存钱罐 把钱捐给地震灾区的孩子们。②由第二段首句内容“爷爷对我的行为感到惊讶。”可知,第二段可描写爷爷了解了事 情的经过后所做出的决定。 [范文] I knew I should do something. I went to mu piggu bonk and wos obout to break it and withdraw moneu when mg mind come back to the bike I wanted to bug. and I hesitated. Thinking of the look in the eues of the Week7 工作与技能类应用文写作&爱心慈善类读后续写 children hoping for help in the earthquake, I qrabbed the piaqu bank and threw it to the qround. Suddenlu. the coins rolled all over the floor. "Yes, those children need help and need the moneu more," I said to muself. My grandfather was surprised by my behavior. When he reglized what hod happened. he fondly touched mu heod and said."Good bou. uou did the right thing. Grandpo is proud of you." He continued. "My dear grandson. ou deserve that bicucle. As a bonus, let's buu that bike together now. Then. go for a spring outing bu bike.""Thank ou, Grandpg." I was overwhelmed with happiness. 一高分亮点 高分词汇:①withdraw提,取(银行账户中的款)②hesitate v.犹豫,不愿意 ③grabv.撰取,抓住④deserve v.值 得,应受 overwhelmv.使大吃一惊;压跨 高分句型:(句型1) I went to my piggy bank and was about to break it and withdraw money when my mind came back to the bike I wanted to buy,and I hesitated.(运用了省略了that的定语从句) (句型 2) When he realized what had happened, he fondly touched my head and said, "Good boy, you did the righ thing.Grandpa is proudof you.”(运用了what引导的宾语从句) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节应用文写作 假定你是李华,请根据下列表格中的内容提示,为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文,介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科 学家。 出生年份 姓名 梁建英 1972年 职务 高铁设计师 (1)1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作; 主要经历 (2)研制出时速300~350千米的高速动车组; (3)2015年获奖 注意1.词数80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇 高速动车组high-speed EMU [范文] Liang Jianuing. generol designer of the Ching high-speed EMU, wos born in 1972 Since she gradugted in 1995,she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the Ching hiah-speed roilwau. Afterwards. she invented the 3oo~ 35Okm/h high-speed EMU, making it more convenient for us to qet around quicklu. it is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that Ching is plouing a leading role in high-speed railwaus all over the world. As a consequence, she wos awarded in 2015. However.she never shows anu signs of pride Liang Jianuing hos set a good example for us. From her. I realize that we should keep on truing until we realize our dreams. 高分亮点 高分词汇:①designer n.设计师,设计者 ②inventv.发明 ③convenient adj.方便的,便利的 ④contributionn.贡 献,促成作用 play a leading role起带头作用 set a good example 树立好榜样 高分句型:(句型 1) Since she graduated in 1995, she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high-speed railway.(运用了since 引导的时间状语从句) (句型 2) It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high-speed railways all over the world.(运用了 It is... that...强调句型) (句型3)From her, I realize that we should keep on trying until we realize our dreams.(运用了 that 引导的宾语从句; until引导的时间状语从句) 高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 第二节读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 From the first day he entered my classroom. Willard P. Frank existed in his own world, shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were met with complete indifference. I could see that his classmates fared no better. Willard was strictly a loner who seemed to have no desire or need to break his silence. Shortly after the Thanksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection of money for the less fortunate people in our school district. “Christmas is a season of giving." I told my students."There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season. By contributing to our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for these needy people. We will start the collection tomorrow." When I called for the contributions the next day, I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten except for Willard P Frank. The boy dug deep into his pants pockets as he walked slowly to my desk. Carefully, he dropped two quarters into the small container. "I don't need milk for lunch." he mumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then he turned and walked back to his desk. That night. after school. I took our few contributions to the school principal. I couldn't help sharing the incident that had taken place. "I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world around him," I told the principal. "Yes." he nodded."And we might do wellto have him share a bit of his world with us. I just received a list of the poor families in our school who most need help through the Christmas collection. Here. take a look at it." As I gazed down to read. I diseovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on the list. Seeing this,I decided to do something for him. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willard's family. The next day, I had a special class for Willard. [语篇解读] 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了沉默寡言的Willard同学,在其他同学都忘记带要捐赠的东西时,毅然 决然捐出了自己的牛奶费用。作者随后在贫困生名单中发现Willard赫然在列,所以决定帮助Willard。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“星期天,我前往Willard家进行家访。”可知,第一段可围绕着Willard家有多么贫 困展开描写。②由第二段首句内容“第二天,我决定为Willard上一堂特别的课。”可知,这一段可描写通过这堂课对 Willard的奉献精神进行赞扬,以及这堂课所带来的结果。 [范文] On that Sunday, I paid a visit to willard's family, On entering his house, I wos surprised to find a barely emptu room with a broken bed and a dirtu sofa. willard told me his mother died and that his fother wos missing leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters, Willord mumbled,"! just want to help others by contributing mg milk moneu." I couldn't help bursting into tears, thinking I should help him break his silence. The next day. I had a special class for Willard. I shared his storu with the whole closs and said. "Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should soy thanks to Willard,' you are great!'" After a silence, all the students clapped, saging"Willard. uou are great!" and theg walked to him and hugged him tightlu. A friendl relationship wos built and Willard's silence was broken bu o smile on his foce 高分亮点 1 ③mumble v.含糊地说,咕咳 ②donate v.捐赠 高分词汇:①burst into tears哭泣 ④on behalf of 代表 tightly adv.紧紧地,牢固地 高分句型:(句型1) When asked why he had given the two quarters, Willard mumbled, “I just want to help others by contributing mymilkmoney.”(运用了why引导的宾语从句) (句型2)I couldn't help bursting into tears, thinking I should help him break his silence.(运用了现在分词作状语)