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Week 5 旅游交通类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 Monday 如何写好旅游交通类应用文写作 典题示例 假设你是李华，你的外教Chs想在著假期间来中国旅游，发邮件请你推荐旅游线路。请给他回封邮件，内容包 括：1.推荐线路：2.推荐理由（历史、文化等角度）：3.表达祝愿。 注意1.词数80个左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 思路点拨 Step One审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 ~般现在时 话题 旅游路线推荐 人称 以第三人称为主 结构 第一段：写信目的：第二段：推荐理由；第三段：送上祝愿 OStep Two词汇运用 1.访间pay a visit 7.文化遗产cultural heritage 2.乐意的willing 8.代表represent 3.理想的ideal 9.智慧，才智wisdom 4.旅游路线travel route I0.体验，经历experience 5.推荐recommend 11.奇遇：冒险的刺激adventure 6.遗产legacy Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我知道你今年暑假要来中国旅游。 I know that you are to pay a visit to China this summer vacation. (2)我非常愿意建议一条理想的旅行路线。 I'm more than willing to suggest an ideal travel route. (3)我强烈建议你考虑沿丝绸之路的中国段旅行。 I strongly recommend that you consider travelling along the Chinese section of Silk Road. (4)它有着数百年的历史。 It has a history of centuries. (5)今天，丝绸之路的遗产仍然可以在沿途城市的文化遗产、艺术和建筑中看到。 Today the legacy of the Silk Road can still be seen in the cultural heritage,art,and architecture of the cities along the way. (6)你可以在敦煌欣赏美丽的壁画。 You can appreciate beautiful wall paintings in DunHuang. (7)这些壁画代表了中国传统文化和古人的智慧。 The wall paintings represent traditional Chinese culture and the wisdom of ancient people. (8)此外，如果你想在沙漠中体验冒险，骑骆驼绝对是最好的选择。 Besides,if you want to experience an adventure in the desert,riding a camel will definitely be the best choice. (9)我真诚地希望你能充分享受你的旅程。 I sincerely hope that you can enjoy your journey to the fullest. 0 Week5旅游交通类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 (10)我一直期待你的回复 I am looking forward to your reply. 2.句式升级 (1)用现在分问作原因状语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 Knowing that you are to pay a visit to China this summer vacation,I'm more than willing to suggest an ideal travel route. (2)用t作形式主语升级上题中的句子(3)。 It is strongly recommended that you consider travelling along the Chinese section of Silk Road. (3)用hough引导的让步状语从句合并上题中的句子(4)和句子(5)。 Although it has a history of centuries.today the legacy of the Silk Road can still be seen in the cultural heritage. art,and architecture of the cities along the way. (4)用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(6)和句子(7)。 You can appreciate beautiful wall paintings in DunHuang.which represent traditional Chinese culture and the wisdom of ancient people. (5)用省略主语和谓语的省略形式升级句子(10)。 Looking forward to your reply. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Chris, Knowing that you are to pay a visit to China this summer vacation,I'm more than willing to suggest an ideal trovel route. It is strongly recommended that you consider travelling along the Chinese section of Silk Road.Although it has a history of centuries,today the legacy of the Silk Road can still be seen in the cultural heritage,art,and architecture of the cities along the way.You can appreciate beautiful wall paintings in DunHuang.which represent traditional Chinese culture and the wisdom of ancient people.Besides,if you want to experience an adventure in the desert,riding a camel will definitely be the best choice. I sincerely hope that you can enjoy your journey to the fullest.Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely. Li Hua Tuesday 旅游交通类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 travel agency旅行社 tourist attraction旅游景点 places of interest名胜古迹 scenic spots景点 national park国家公园 DIY tour自助游 space tourism太空旅游 group/.organized tour团体游 a self-driven trip自驾游 recommend推荐 transportation运输：交通工具 recommendation推荐：建议 organize组织，筹备 suburb城郊，近郊 picnic野餐，野餐活动 helmet头盔，安全帽 see sb.off送行 walk/on foot走路，步行 ride a bike/by bike骑自行车 drive a car/bycr开小轿车 take a bus/,by bus乘公共汽车 safety first安全第-一 traffic light交通灯，红绿灯 traffic jam交通堵塞 raffic accident交通事故 architecture建筑式样：建筑风格 impressive给人印象深刻的，令人钦佩的 be on holiday/a visit度假/旅行 take a taxi/by taxi乘出租车，打的 by boat/ship/water/sea坐船/走水路 transfer(在旅途中)转乘，换乘 traffic rules/regulations交通规则 explore a forest/a desert/another planet森林/沙漠探险；外是球探险 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 :2.After arriving there,we will rent road bikes and begin our 话题句式 cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route.到达那里后， 引出话题先声夺人 我们将租一辆公路自行车，开始沿着10公里长的路线 1.Among all the tourist attractions deserving a visit,I would 骑行 like to recommend the Palace Museum.在所有值得一游 3.As for the transportation,taking the subway will be a wise 的旅游景点中，我想推荐故宫。 choice considering the heavy traffic.至于交通，考虑到交通 2.Delighted to hear that you are coming to Beijing,I am writing to extend my warmest welcome..很高兴听到你要 拥挤，乘坐地铁将是一个明智的选择。 来北京，我写信向你表示最热烈的欢迎 4.Our first stop is Jinggangshan,located in Center China. 3.Spring has come and our school is going to organize a 们的第一站是位于中国中部的井冈山。 cycling activity themed "Greet Spring,Embrace Nature" 首尾结合余音回味 on April 10th.I am writing to invite you to join us. 1.It's a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the 来了，我们学校将于4月10日组织一次以“寻找春天， beautiful view in the countryside,这是一个锻炼身体和 拥抱自然”为主题的自行车活动。我写信是想邀请你 欣赏乡村美景的好机会。 加入我们 2.The impressive Red Journey has left us in thought..红色之 主题部分娓妮道来 旅令人印象深刻，发人深省。 1.Nowadays,with the number of cars increasing,air 3.Wish you a good trip in Beijing祝你北京之行愉快。 pollution and traffic jam are becoming serious,about 4.I sincerely hope that you can enjoy your journey to the which we have to raise awareness.如今，随着汽车数量 fullest.我真减地希望你能充分享受你的旅程。 的增加，空气污染和交通堵塞变得越来越严重，我们必 须对此提高认识。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear John, Delighted to hear that you are coming to Beijing,I am writing to extend my warmest welcome.Among all the tourist attractions deserving a visit,I would like 模板中黑体字部分是描 to recommend the Palace Museum. 写旅游交通类应用文时可以 Established during the Ming Dynasty,the Palace Museum has witnessed the 通用的部分，其他部分可以根 development of China,offering you a deeper insight into Chinese culture.Moreover. 据写作要求灵活处理。 you can admire grand architectures and valuable treasures there.As for the transportation 由于是旅游推荐，因此时 taking the subway will be a wise choice considering the heavy traffic. 态往往是一般现在时。 Hope my recommendation will be of benefit to you.Wish you a good trip in 文章人称以第三人称和 Beijing. 第一人称为主。 Yours, Li Hua Wednesday 旅游交通类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆旅游交通 你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“Green Travel'”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿。内容包括：l.汽车带来问题 (如空气污染、交通堵塞等)：2.解决办法（如骑自行车等）。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.开头已给出，不计入总词数：3.请按如下格式作答 Dear friends. 名 Week5旅游交通类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 [范文] Dear friends. I feel honored to deliver a speech here.My topic today is "Green Travel". Nowadays,with the number of cars increasing,air pollution and traffic jam are becoming serious,about which we have to raise awareness.It is high time that we took action from now on.Riding a bike is one of the solutions,whose advantages are obvious.Not only can it save a lot of energy,which is beneficial to our environment,but also our health will improve by cycling.Since we have only one earth,let's do what we can before it is too late! That's all.Thank you for your listening. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①honored adj.荣幸的②beneficial adj.有益的③deliver a speech发表演讲④traffic jam交通堵塞 ⑤awareness m.认识，意识⑥advantage m.有利条件，优势 高分句型：（句型I)Nowadays,with the number of cars increasing,.air pollution and traffic jam are becoming serious, about which we have to raise awareness..(运用了with的复合结构和介词“about-+关系代词which”引导的非限制性定 语从句) (句型2)Since we have only one earth,let's do what we can before it is too late！(运月了since引l导的原因状语从句， what引导的宾语从句和before引导的时间状语从句) 跟踪训练2◆旅游交通 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你们学校下个月将要举办主题为“寻找春天，拥抱自然”的踏青骑行活动，请 给你校的交换生m写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：1.活动安排；2.准备事项。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Jim. Yours, Li Hua [范文] Dear Jim, Spring has come and our school is going to organize a cycling activity themed "Greet Spring,Embrace Nature"on April 10th.I am writing to invite you to join us. At 8:00 a.m we will gather at the school gate and then go to the famous cycling park in the suburbs. After arriving there,we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the 10-kilometer-long route.After that, we will have a picnic.It's a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside. Don't forget to wear your helmet and protective gloves if you come.You'd better bring your lunch pack with you. If you are interested in it,just let me know. Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①organize.组织，筹备②heme,.(休闲场所、活动)以…主题③suburb m.城郊，近郊④picnic i.野餐，野餐活动⑤helmet n.头盔，安全帽⑥protective adj.保护的，防护的 高分句型：（句型I)After arriving there,we will rent road bikes and begin our cycling along the I0-kilometer-long route.(动名词作宾语) (句型2)t's a good chance to get some exercise and enjoy the beautiful view in the countryside.(it作形式主语) 言皖英语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能5 如何增加应用文细节内容 在试题“注意”中有明确规定：1.词数80左右：2.可 I need a good rest.I'll do some reading. 以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数，又 I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the 指出了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加细节”。适当添加 hard work of all these years.I'll do some reading for 细节的方法具体如下： fun,as well as for knowledge. 1,列举具体的实例进行补充说明 ②在义卖中筹到的钱将送给急需的人 ①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。 The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to I'll spend some time staying with my parents. those in great need. -I'll spend some time staying with my parents, -The money collected in the charity sale will be sent chatting with them and doing some housework. to those in great need.This will not only help them ②我发现了一些不良行为。 through difficulties,but also give them warmth and I found some bad behaviour. happiness. -I found some bad behaviour.Some people scribbled 3演讲时要面带微笑：要讲慢些，讲清楚 on the wall:some played on the lawn and some You should wear a smile on your face when you speak. threw rubbish everywhere. Besides,remember to speak slowly and clearly. ③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育 -You should wear a smile on your face when you 运动。 speak.which will make you relaxed.Besides. I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can much. leave a good impression on the audience and judges. 一→I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports4.结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评价、愿望、倡议等 very much.Whenever I have time,I'll go hiking or (DAlthough I was very tired this summer holiday,I felt mountain climbing with my classmates. very happy for what I did.(个人感受) 2.增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 尽管我这个暑假很累，但是我为我所做的感到高兴。 ①我有时去村西的小河游泳。 2I think such activities are necessary and meaningful. I went swimming in the river in the west of the village 价) now and then. 我认为这样的活动很有必要也很有意义。 -Weather permitting.I went swimming in the river 3I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and in the west of the village now and then,in which the that you can enjoy your new school life.(愿望) water was very clear. 我衷心希望我的建议能够对你有所帮助，你能够享 ②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。 受你在新学校的生活。 After a week's trip.he returned home. As a student,it's our duty to protect our school -After a week's trip,he returned home,tired but environment and make it clean.(倡议) happy. 作为一名学生，保护我们校园的环境并使之干净是 3.增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容 我们的职责。 ①我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。 Friday 读后续写示例指导5 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Emily finished playing the music,and then bowed to the animal toys on her bed."There.three times in a row with no mistakes,"she said."I just hope I can play it that well at the concert."In just an hour she would be playing her first solo, and the thought was giving her butterflies. "You're lucky you don't have to play by yourself in front of everybody."she said,smoothing the fur of Lea,and gazed down at the smiling face of Zoey,the Zebra.Emily scolded,"You're a big help.How can you be so happy at a time like this?" She looked around the room at the bear.lion,monkey,and other animal toys that lined her bed and shelves."I wish you could all come with me,"she sighed.She gave them one last glance and went to join her parents in the car. Week5旅游交通类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 "Do I have to play in the concert?"asked Emily as she climbed into the back seat."Is my favorite first-grader getting nervous?"her dad asked,smiling.Emily didn't answer.She was trying to picture what it would be like to play in front of all those people."You'll do fine,honey,"he added."The first time is always the hardest." When they arrived at the concert hall.Emily handed her violin to her teacher.Mrs.Allen.for tuning and tiptoed over to where the curtains parted.Looking out,she could see that all the seats were filled,with many more people standing in back. Nervously she took her violin and sat with the other students onstage.She held her breath as the curtains started to open and Mrs.Allen picked up the microphone to begin the program.One by one the students played their pieces.Finally,Emily heard her name announced.Her heart pounded as she walked toward the front of the stage. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 She put her violin under her chin,but she couldn't remember even her first note. As she played,the"animals"audience seemed to be changing back into people. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲迷了主人公Eily将要在舞台上演奏地的小提琴独奏曲，地为此感到特别紧张。上台 后地紧张到快忘了如何去弹奏她的曲目，幸好她及时地调整了过来，并为现场的观众献上精彩的表演。 审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”中的“乐于学习，善于学习，终身学习”，写作要用一般 过去时，人称以第三人称为主。 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1.Emily finished playing the music,and l.Emily演奏完音乐，然后向床上的动物玩具 点题 then bowed to the animal toys on her bed. 鞠了一躬 (事件)》 2.In just an hour she would be playing her 2.再过一个小时，她就要演奏她的第一次独奏 first solo,and the thought was giving her 了，这个想法使她紧张不安。 butterflies. 1.She gave them one last glance and went to join her parents in the car. 1.她最后看了它们一眼，就和父母一起上 2."Is my favorite first-grader getting 车了。 nervous?"her dad asked,smiling. 2.“我最喜欢的一年级学生紧张了吗？”她爸爸 进程 3.When they arrived at the concert hall, 笑着问。 (发展) 3.当他们到达音乐厅时，Emily把她的小提琴 Emily handed her violin to her teacher. 交给她的老师Mrs.Allen调音a 阅读任务 Mrs.Allen,for tuning. 4.Nervously she took her violin and sat with 4.她紧张地拿起小提琴，和其他学生一起坐在 the other students onstage. 台上。 5.最后.Eniy听到有人叫她的名字。 5.Finally,Emily heard her name announced. 冲突 Her heart pounded as she walked toward the (矛盾点) 她走向台前时，心怦怦直跳。 front of the stage. 评议 "There,three times in a row with no mistakes,”she said.“I just hope I can play “就这样，连续三次没有失误，”她说，“我只希 (议论)】 it that well at the concert." 望我能在音乐会上弹得那么好。” 结局 结局1（第1段）： Emily如何去调整她的情绪。 (结果) 结局2（第2段）： Eily把现场观众设想成动物后，她不再那么紧张，尽情表演，获得大 家的认可。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 45 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 续写线索：即将演奏—紧张—调整—一重拾信心—尽情表演—一掌声雷动—一感悟 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临莘衡水体争抢满分作文 She put her violin under her chin,but she couldn't remember even her first note. With a flush of sadness.she couldn't hold back her tears welling up in her eyes.She shut her eues.hoping to blink the tears away.When she opened them again,everuthing seemed misty.To her surprise.it looked as if all the people in the hall had changed into her doll animals,and she even saw her smiling Zoey the Zebra standing at the back.It was almost like being at home with her lovely friends More relaxed.she picked up her confidence and remembered her piece. As she played,the "animals"audience seemed to be changing back into people.But Emily was no longer nervous because all the audience looked friendly now.she also found her parents'smiling eyes focused on her.telling her "uou're alwaus the best" The audience lost themselves in her music.Finallu.she plaued the last note.put her violin under her arm and took a big bow.The music lingered in the air after the performance.while the entire audience broke into loud applause.she made it!she had played her first solol Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ballet was a way of life in Kelly's family.Her elder sister Serena was now dancing at a top college.Though Kelly's mom always wanted her to follow in her sister's footsteps and Kelly herself was good at ballet,her love for ballet had faded years before,and she was eager for a new challenge. One day at school,as Kelly left the dance studio,she walked past the gym,fascinated by boxers (training inside the boxing ring.She was deeply impressed by how hard they hit and how fast they moved.In fact,she'd long been attracted to boxing. She pulled a piece of paper from her backpack.On the familiar Oakwood High School Club Sign-up Sheet was the phrase:BOXING CLUB TRYOUT ()That was what Kelly really wanted to do.She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet.Tired of trying to keep up with her sister.Kelly was ready to carve her own path。 The next day.she gathered her courage and told Serena about her new passion.At first,Serena didn't understand and thought she was just joking.But when she saw Kelly was serious,she replied,"You know Mom wants you to be a ballet dancer,right?Besides,boxing is only for boys,and you're so good at ballet.Lean into your strength.Kelly." "But this is where I want to put my strength,"Kelly insisted,"and what exactly does'only for boys'mean,anyway? Boxing is a sport for everyone!" Gradually,touched by her determination and passion,Serena began to understand and support her.Kelly could feel it. Her sister was going to respect her decision,no matter what.But that was nothing compared to the preparations for the tryout.where she was required to show her footwork and punching ()abilities with other candidates.Boxing didn't come natural to Kelly,but she had made up her mind to stick with her choice. 注意L.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Then Kelly began her training for the tryout,keeping it a secret from her mom. The following Monday,results of the boxing tryout were posted 46 Week5旅游交通类应用文写作&挑战自我类读后续写 [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ky从热爱芭蓄到喜欢拳击的转变。渐渐地被她的决心和热情所感 动的姐姐Serena也开始理解和支持烛。在预选赛中，她被要求与其他侯选人展示自己的步法和出拳能力。拳击对 Klly来说并不是天生的，但她已经下定决心坚持自己的选择。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“然后Ky开始了她的选拔赛训练，并对她的妈妈保密。”可知，第一段可描写 Ky开始拳击训练，并吃了很多苦，但没有放弃。②由第二段首句内容“接下来的星期一，拳击选拔赛的结果公布 了。”可知，第二段可描写Klly通过了选拔赛，同时得到了妈妈的支持。 [范文] Then Kelly began her training for the tryout,keeping it a secret from her mom.Ballet was the Kelly way of life,so only her sister knew about boxing,and her mother would have stopped it.Because boxing didn't come naturally to Kelly.she just came to love it,so she often got knocked down during training and suffered.Now that you've made a choice,you can't give up.She has an unyielding spirit and must participate in the qualifiers. The following Monday,results of the boxing tryout were posted.Kelly was afraid to look at the published list for fear of losing out.Then a woman tapped her on the shoulder and told her she had been chosen.The voice sounded familiar to her.It was her mother.Her sister stood by smiling.Before she knew it,her mother told her she had known she had been boxing.Her mother very much support her.Now through the qualifiers,the family happily went home to celebrate.This really echoes the saying."Interest is the best teacher". 高分亮点 高分词汇：①naturally ad,自然地，天然地②suffer,受苦：忍受③give up放弃：投降④participate in参加：参 与⑤qualifier n.合格者，已取得资格的人 高分句型：（句型1）Because boxing didn't come naturally to Kelly,she just came to love it,so she often got knocked down during training and suffered.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句：so引导的结果状语从句) (句型2)Before she knew it,.her mother told her she had known she had been boxing..(运用了before引导的时间扶语 从句；省略了that的宾语从句) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 上周你校组织了一次红色之旅，请根据下面提示写一篇周记。内容包括：1，交通方式：2.路线：井冈山→延安：3， 感受。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [范文] Lost week,we had a Red Journey organized by our school. Taking the high-speed train gave us a chance to witness the sharp development of our country.Our first stop is Jinggangshan,located in Center China.And our second stay is Yan'an,a most glorious tourist destination.Every visitor has the same burning desire to figure out how people then stood up bravely and gracefully in such a hard situation. The impressive Red Journey has left us in thought.We are deeply convinced that our country will become stronger and stronger. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①organize v.组织②witnessv.月睹：见证③tourist destination旅游胜地④figure out弄清楚⑤ impressive adj.给人印象深刻的，令人软佩的⑥convince,.使确信，使信服 高分句型：（句型l)Every visitor has the same burning desire to figure out how people then stood up bravely and gracefully in such a hard situation.(运用了how引导的宾语从句） (句型2)We are deeply convinced that our country will become stronger and stronger..(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 启航碳语I高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Chris and Paul were good friends and on the same school basketball team.The Lions.They loved basketball very much and were both huge fans of the NBA.After school,when they weren't playing on the court which was next to their building,they were watching a basketball game on TV.Chris's favourite player was LeBron James.Paul's favourite player was Tyrone Bogues,although they actually agreed that they were both champions. Bogues was only 1.6 metres tall,which made him the shortest player ever in the NBA.Guess what?Paul was only 1.6 metres tall,too!Paul knew that being shorter than other players meant that he had to practise more.He did not miss a single practice and participated in every training.During all those hours of doing jump shots on his own.he used Bogues as his inspiration.Paul once said firmly,"If Bogues could make it,why not me?" Their coach was not so sure.Paul had to try out many times just for making the team.He was still usually on the bench,being just a replacement.which was really tough on him.Everyone knew Paul had real skills,and was someone who worked really hard and had a strong desire to play for the team.Chris always comforted him and encouraged him,telling him not to give up.However,Paul didn't get a chance. This week,The Lions were playing against their main competitors.The Bears,a team whose record this season had been perfect.They hadn't lost a single game.It would be a tough one. Everyone of The Lions played to the best of their abilities.Suddenly,a player and Chris crashed into each other.Pain raced through Chirs's body.His knee hurt badly.The team gathered around,looking worried.The last quarter was about to begin.and The Lions was behind by 10 points. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答 "You can't play anymore,"the doctor said,putting an ice pack on Chris's knee. The coach agreed,"Paul,it's your time to shine." [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Chis和Paul这对好朋友都是篮球队队员，但是由于Pul不够高，他只 能作为替补队员，在一次比赛中Chis受伤无法继续比赛，在队友们的推荐下Paul上场展现了自己的实力，最终帮助 球队赢得比赛的故事。 [段落续写]①油第一段首句内容“·你不能再比赛了，'医生说，并把冰袋放在Chs的膝盖上。”可知，第一段可描 写Chis不能比赛，大家推荐Paul上场。②由第二段首句内容“教练表示同意，·Paul,是让你发光的时候了。’"可知， 第二段可描写Paul在赛场上发挥出色，帮助球队反败为胜。 [范文] "You can't play anymore,"the doctor said.putting an ice pack on Chris's knee.The coach was very sad and told Chris that there were no more players.Then someone recommended Paul,but he said Paul couldn't play. Meanwhile,another player also suggested letting Paul have a try.Then,Paul asked the coach to let him try and promised that he wouldn't let him down. The coach agreed,"Paul,it's your time to shine.Paul jumped up and rushed onto the court.And clearly,all the extra hours that he'd spent procticing olone paid off.The other team couldn't keep up with his energy and speed.He made shot after shot,and the crowd couldn't stop clapping and cheering.When the game ended,his team had won by two points.The coach was surprised at Paul's performance.He smiled at Paul and said he'd earned his place on the team. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①recommend建议②clap v.鼓掌③court n,球场④keep up with跟上，紧跟⑤cheer v.欢呼，喝 彩⑥performance.表现 高分句型：（句型I)The coach was very sad and told Chris that there were no more players,.(由从属连词hat引导的宾 语从句作told的宾语) (句型2)And clearly,all the extra hours that he'd spent practicing alone paid off.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句) 48