Week 4 环保类应用文写作&优秀品行类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高一英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week4环保类应用文写作&优秀品行类读后续写 Monday 如何写好环保类应用文写作 典题示例 假设你是李华。你的英国好友Jm正在策划一次以“绿色桂林”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。 请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1.活动形式；2.活动内容。 注意1.词数80个左右：2，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Jim. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时为主 话题 环保建议 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：引出话题，说明写信目的：第二段：提出具体建议并说明理由：第三段：希望对方接受建议 Step Two 词汇运用 1.计划plan 6.执行：实施carry out 2.活动activity 7.参加，参与participate 3.主题theme 8.参与，涉及get involved in 4.提供offer 9.垃圾分类garbage classification 5.建议suggestion 10.有希望地，有前途地hopefully OStep Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)听说你们正在策划一个以“绿色桂林”为主题的社团活动，需要我的帮助。 I hear that you are planning a club activity with the theme of"Green Guilin"and need my help. (2)我写信是想向你提出我的建议。 I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (3)我认为你可以用互动和体验的方式来开展这个活动。 I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner. (4)这意味者学生可以通过自己参与不同的活动，更好地了解“绿色桂林”。 This means students can participate and have a better understanding of "Green Guilin"through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (5)你可以在现场展示垃圾分类，植树，宜传共享经济。 You can showcase garbage classification on site.plant trees and publicize sharing economy. (6)这一切都符合“绿色桂林”的主题。 This will all fit in with the theme of"Green Guilin". (7)希望你能从我的建议中得到一些启发。 I hope you can get some inspiration from my suggestions. (8)祝你成功。 I wish you will have a success. Week4环保类应用文写作&优秀品行类读后续写 2.句式升级 (1)用现在分词作状语合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of"Green Guilin"and need my help,I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (2)用非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。 I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner.which means students can participate and have a better understanding of"Green Guilin"through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (3)用非限制性定语从句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 You can showease garbage classification on site.plant trees and publicize sharing economy.which will all fit in with the theme of“Green Guilin”. (4)用副词位于句首升级句子(7)。 Hopefully,you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. (5)把句子(8)升级为折使句 Wish you success. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Jim. Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of "Green Guilin"and need my help,I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner,which means students can participate and have a better understanding of"Green Guilin"through getting involved in different activities by themselves.You can showcase garbage classification on site,plant trees and publicize sharing economy,which will all fit in with the theme of"Green Guilin". Hopefully,you will get some inspiration from my suggestions.Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua Tuesday 环保类应用文写作满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 play a part in在…起作用 unfortunately不幸地，遗憾地 all in all总之 take the responsibility负起责任 environmental与环境有关的 harmoniously和谐地 put forward提出 environment自然环境，生态环境 spare no effort不遗余力，尽一切努力 initially开始，最初 individual个人，个体 transportation运输，运送 delighted高兴的 on behalf of代表 sincere衷心的，城挚的 awareness认识，意识 advocate拥护，提得 manufacture(用机器大量)生产，制造 recycle回收利用，再利用 take action采取行动 participation参加，参与 pick up检起，拾起 neighbourhood社区，四邻 sort out把…分类，整理 2.I am honored to deliver a speech whose topic is "clear 话题句式 waters and green mountains are as valuable as mountains 引出话题先声夺人 of gold and silver'".我很荣幸能发表主题为“绿水青山， 1.I'm very glad to give a speech today whose topic is 金山银山”的演讲。 Protect Wild Animals.我很高兴今天能做一个演讲，主3.I am here to call on everyone to reduce the use of plastic, 题是保护野生动物。 我在这里呼吁大家减少塑料的使用。 启航演语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 主题部分娓娓道来 :6.Second.we should raise our awareness of environmental 1.As we all know,animals also play a part in keeping the protection.其次，我们应该提高我们的环保意识。 balance of nature.我们都知道.动物在保持自然平衡方 7.To harm animals is【o harm ourselves.伤害动物就是伤害 面也起着作用。 我们自己。 2.So it is urgent to take some measures to protect them. 首尾结合余音回味 此，迫切需要采取一些措施来保护它们。 1.All in all,let's take the responsibility and do what we can 3.Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.保护环 to protect them.总之，i让我们承担起责任，尽我们所能 境就是保护我们自己。 保护它们。 4.Thus,we should spare no effort to protect it before it gets 2.I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily oo late.因此，我们应该不遗余力地保护它，以免为时过 together with animals..我希望在未来，我们可以与动物 晚。 和谐快乐地生活在一起。 5.Initially.the government is supposed to make strict laws 3.All in all,we can never emphasize the importance of o punish those destroying the environment..首先，政府应 protecting the environment too much.总之，我们再怎么 该制定严格的法律来惩罚那些破坏环境的人。 强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Good morning,everyone! I'm very glad to give a speech today whose topic is Protect Wild Animals. 模板中黑体字部分是描写 环保类应用文时可以通用的部 As we all know.animals also play a part in keeping the balance of nature. 分，其他部分可以根据写作要求 Unfortunately they are being over-hunted,and some of them are dying out.So it is 灵活处理。 urgent to take some measures to protect them.First,we must build nature 第一、二，三段以一殷现在 reserves.Second,we should raise our awareness of environmental protection.To 时为主。 harm animals is to harm ourselves. 文章人称第一、三段以第一 All in all,let's take the responsibility and do what we can to protect them. I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily together with 人称为主；第二段以第三人称 为主。 animals.Thank you all listening to me! Wednesday 环保类应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆环保 上周末，你和班级同学去红星社区参加了一次检垃圾志愿活动，受到了社区居民的欢迎。请你为学校英文报写 一篇短文，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.时间、地点：2.劳动过程：3.个人感受。 注意1.词数80个左右：2.题日已为你写好。 参考词汇红星社区Hongxing Community My Weekend [范文] My Weekend This weekend witnessed our active participation in the community service. As scheduled,we gathered at the school gate at 8 a.m.on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community.where we were to pick up litter.Upon arrival,we were divided into small groups and each was responsible for a separate area.Wearing all necessary items,including protective gloves and masks, we began to collect the visible litter.Although hot and tired,seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean,we were more than delighted. The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste.It was a rewarding day. 32 Week4环保类应用文写作&优秀品行类读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇：①witness.目击；见证，经历（事件，变化等）②participationm.参加，参与③pick up捻起，拾起 ④arrival n.到达，到来⑤neighbourhood n.社区，四邻⑥sort out把…分类，整理 高分句型：（句型I)As scheduled,we gathered at the school gate at8a.m.on Sunday morning and then marched to the Hongxing Community,where we were to pick up litter.(句中where引导定语从句) 2)Wearing all necessary items,including protective gloves and masks,we began to collect the visible litter. 分词作秋语) (3)The activity was greatly praised by the community and we also learnt how to sort out different types of waste (句中使用一般过去时的被动语态) 跟踪训练2◆环保 2024年6月5日是第51个世界环境日(World Environment Day),口号是“减塑捡塑”(Beat P叫astic Pollution),请 以学生会的名义写一封倡议书，鼓励大家减少使用塑料制品和保护环境。内容包括：1.倡议的目的：2，塑料污染的现 状：3.减塑的方法。 注意1.词数80个左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Dear fellow students, Students'Union [范文] Dear fellow students. The 51st World Environment Day urges the world to beat plastic pollution which is a challenging environmental issue.I am here to call on everyone to reduce the use of plastic. Millions of tons of plastic products are monufactured and disposed annually.with only a small quantity recycled.Worse still,plastic ends up in rivers and oceans and enters human body through water and food, damaging our health.Moreover,it is suggested that we avoid buying products with plastic packaging.And it is high time that we recycled these products instead of throwing them away. Let's take action to rid the world of plastic and improve our environment. Students'Union 高分亮点 高分词汇：①issue n.议题，争论点②environmental ad.自然环境的，生态环境的③manufacture v.(用机器大量) 生产，制造④disposed adj.有…倾向的：打算做的⑤recycle.回收利用，再利用⑥take action采取行动 高分句型：（句型I)The51 st World Environment Day urges the world to beat plastic pollution which is a challenging environmental issue,.(运用了which引导的定语从句) (句型2)Moreover,it is suggested that we avoid buying products with plastic packaging.(运用了虚拟语气，it为形式主 语，hat引导主语从句) (句型3)And it is high time that we recycled these products instead of throwing them away.(运用了虚拟语气和动名词 作宾语) Thursday 新作文基本功提高微技能4 如何精细打磨续写语言 构思好续写情节以后，下一步就是进行续写。在阅！一、5大升级路径，词汇亮人一眼 卷时，阅卷老师首要关注的是续写的语言，因此续写语言 升级路径1：笼统词→具体词 的高低与否直接决定着续写的成功与否。首先要规避常 (DBecause of her hatred,she looked at him. 见错误，确保拿到及格分，再次要尽力提升写作的语言。 -Because of her hatred,she glared at him. 努力达到最高档。 启航演语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 2 They walked onwards with exhausted bodies through the -Seeing no one noticing us,I put the Christmas present desert. down and left. -They trudged onwards with exhausted bodies through 抢分句式2：主+谓.·，doing., the desert. doing作伴随状语，与句子的谓语动词同时发生，逻 升级路径2：简单词◆高级词 辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系。 DThe advice the old man gave Tom was very important. D"Here,"he said.At the same time he handed the coins to -.The advice the old man gave Tom was very the gatekeeper. significant/vital/critical. -"Here,"he said,handing the coins to the gatekeeper. 2I should be free any time after school next week. 2 For a few moments I just stood there.I held that ten-dollar -I should be available any time after school next week bill and I wondered what to buy and who to buy it for. 升级路径3：单词◆短语 -For a few moments I just stood there,holding that ten- DHearing the bad news,the boy cried sadly. dollar bill and wondering what to buy and who to buy -Hearing the bad news,the boy burst into tears sadly. it for. 2After a day's work,we all tired. 抢分句式3：with的复合结构 -+After a day's work.we all worn out 逻辑主语与doig构成主动关系，或者逻辑主语与 升级路径4：运用有表现力的副词 done构成被动关系构成独立主格，有时前面有介词with, 恰当地使用富有表现力的刷词，能够使文章更加丰 在句中常作状语。 富多姿，描写得更为准确，文章更有生机。使用这些副词 DHe stood there and tears of gratitude were welling up in 时，要注意把握这些词汇的确切内涵，并且符合故事发展 his eyes. 的内在逻辑。 -He stood there,with tears of gratitude welling up in DThe day was bitterly cold;the moon was shining brightly his eyes. in the sky. 2 Her father was lying on his back,and his dog was trapped 2 Having no choice,I slowly raised the book,hoping to under the truck. hide myself. -Her father was lying on his back.with his dog trapped 3I was quietly,joyfully and patiently watching as the sun under the truck. painted a brand-new day. 抢分句式4：表情感类的形容词，主+谓..或主+谓.·，表 ④On our way back home,my father held me tightly,情感类的形容词 wearing a big frown. 情感类的形容词在句中作状语，说明主语的情感状 升级路径5：运用有表现力的介词短语 态，可以转化为表情感类的形容词，主+谓.·。有时可以 介词wth或in后加表示情绪、个性等的名词，经常可放在句后：主+谓.，表情感类的形容词。 以与相应的副词互换，恰当地使用此结构可以增加表达 TShe was eager and excited,and she waved her hands, 的多样性。 trying to attract others'attention. She gazed at him,glowing happily -Eager and excited,she waved her hands,trying to -She gazed at him,glowing with happiness attract others'attention 2 Like a lamp,the moon shone from above.The stars 2 To Annie's delight,surrounded by his classmates,Mark twinkled their eyes curiously. seemed like a rock star,and he was cheerful and proud. -Like a lamp,the moon shone from above.The stars -To Annie's delight,surrounded by his classmates,Mark twinkled their eyes with curiosity seemed like a rock star,cheerful and proud 二，8大抢分句式，档次瞬时提升 抢分句式5：方式副词，主+谓.，， 抢分句式1：Doing..…,主+谓… 方式副词在句中作状语，修饰谓语动词，一股放在园 dog作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主语后，但有时根据需要可以放在句首，有时放在实义动 动关系；有时可以在doing前加before,afer,while等。 词前。 DHe was trembling in a blanket and he said,"I'm cold. (DIt was fortunate that the cat was still alive,though badly →Trembling in a blanket,he said,“I'm cold." injured. I sat back in an easy chair and fell asleep. -.Fortunately,the cat was still alive,though badly -Sitting back in an easy chair,I fell asleep. injured. 3When I saw no one noticing us,I put the Christmas 2Gently,she picked up the first baby.ran back outside present down and left. and laid it on the sidewalk. 34 Week4环保类应用文写作&优秀品行类读后续写 抢分句式6：全部倒装：地点状语或表示运动方向的副词+ He knew what had happened then. 谓(i,)+主(n,) -It was then that he knew what had happened. 该句型是一个全部倒装句，主语必须是名词，谓语动 -Only then did he know what had happened. 词为不及物动词，常见的表运动方向的副词有：n,out, -Not until then did he know what had happened. off,away,up.down,outside.inside 抢分句式8：非限制性定语从句：…，whih.· DAn old woman sat ahead. We'll also spend some fun time together,singing. -Ahead sat an old woman. dancing and playing games.We hope it will make them 2The crowd went away one by one. Away went the crowd one by one. happy. 抢分句式7：强调句型：twas+被强调成分+that+(主语) -We'll also spend some fun time together,singing, +谓语.… dancing and playing games,which we hope will make 除了强调句型，在突出某一成分时，还可以用部分倒 them happy. 装句型。 Friday 读后续写示例指导4 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Eight-year-old Kayzen Hunter visits Waffle House every weekend to have breakfast with his family.They always choose to sit in Devonte Gardner's section,because they get the best care from their favorite waiter. The family instantly felt close to Gardner,who would greet Kayzen with a high-five every time they entered the restaurant.Kayzen never needed to say his order again,because Gardner already knew it by heart.The family really believes he's the nicest person ever,which is why they were eager to help him when they leamed his story. One day,while dining at the restaurant with his grandfather John Donofrio,Kayzen discovered that behind Gardner's kindness and warmth were a lot of personal struggles.At the time.Gardner asked the pair if they knew where he could buy an affordable car to use to get to work.It tumed out the waiter had been walking a long distance to and from work every day.He and his family,consisting of a wife and two young daughters,were living in a motel (room after their apartment became unsuitable to live in.They had been living in a motel for months. Kayzen couldn't erase his friend's story from his mind,so he immediately told his mom about it when he got home. "We have to start a GoFundMe page and help Gardner get a car!"he kept saying.He didn't give up the idea until his mom Vittoria gave in.Their goal was to get s5,000 in donations so Gardner could purchase a car.Vittoria and her husband were eager to help their son achieve the goal.especially since they had the same experience years ago.It took a long time to rebuild their lives,but they were able to bounce back.Now,they wanted to help Devonte do the same. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 A local news station picked up the story,and before they knew it,more donations began pouring in. Upon discovering what Kayzen had done,Gardner wept. 语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了8岁的Kayzen Hunter得知自己喜欢的服务员Gardner逼到困难后，决定通过筹款 的方式帮助他。 「审题要素 本文要求是续写短文。这是一篇记叙文，属于“人与自我”中的“优秀品行，正确的人生态度，公民义务与社会责 任”，写作要用一般过去时，人称以第三人称为主。 35 启航英语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 “五维立意”写作法结构图 维度 原文 文意 1.Eight-year-old Kayzen Hunter visits Waffle L.8岁的Kayzen Hunter每个周末都会去华夫 House every weekend to have breakfast with 饼屋和他的家人一起吃早餐。 his family. 2.他们总是选择坐在Devonte Gardner的专区，因 点题 2.They always choose to sit in Devonte 为他们从他们最喜欢的服务员那里得到了最好的 阅读任务 Gardner's section,because they get the best (事件) 照顾。 care from their favorite waiter. 3.他的家人真的相信他是有史以来最好的人， 3.The family really believes he's the nicest 这就是为什么当他们知道他的故事时，他们渴 person ever,which is why they were eager 望帮助他。 to help him when they learned his story. 1.Kayzen discovered that behind Gardner's kindness and warmth were a lot of personal L.Kayzen发现，在Gardner的善良和温暖背后， struggles. 有很多个人的拼搏。 2.At the time,Gardner asked the pair if2.当时，Gardner问他们是否知道在哪里可以 进程 they knew where he could buy an affordable 买到一辆经济实惠的车来上班。 (发展) car to use to get to work. 3.“我们必须在GoFundMe上建立一个页面， 3."We have to start a GoFundMe page and 帮助Gardner买一辆车！”他不停地说。 help Gardner get a car!"he kept saying. 4.他们的目标是得到5000美元的捐款，这样 阅读任务 4.Their goal was to get s 5.000 in Gardner就可以买一辆车了。 donations so Gardner could purchase a car. 冲突 It turned out the waiter had been walking a 原来这个服务员每天上下班都要走很长的路。 (矛盾点) long distance to and from work every day. 评议 It took a long time to rebuild their lives,but 重建他们的生活花了很长时间，但他们能够重 (议论) they were able to bounce back. 新振作起来 结局 结局1（第1段）： 捐款获得成功。 (结果) 结局2（第2段）： Gardner买上了车，并决定帮助别人。 写作任务 回应 生成答案 续写线索：同情并为Gardner筹款一大家纷纷捐款一拜访Gardner-一 Gardner非常感激一将爱传递下去 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 A local news station picked up the story,and before they knew it,more donations began pouring in.Soon.they achieved their goal.$5000 and the number kept increasing. They now had over 100.000 in donations for Gardner and his family.The money was more than enough for a car.and would enable gardner and his family to move out of the motel and live in a more comfortable space for over a year.Soon.they thought it was time to let gardner know what theu had done for him.so theu visited gardner and his family on a sunny day Upon discovering what Kayzen had done,Gardner wept.He expressed his thankfulness to all the people who had helped him and his familu.now theu had over 36 Week4环保类应用文写作&优秀品行类读后续写 $100000 in donations to help them bounce back.After renting a simple apartment and purchasing a car.Gardner went to work at ease and lived comfortably with his family.After he was no longer worried about his life.he thought he should pass this act of kindness on.so he aave the extra moneu to these who were in need like him.and he hoped someone would continue this great circle. Saturday 读后续写话题训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I left the office for a news assignment that early summer evening.I had absolutely no idea what life held in store for me. As a young photographer,I was on my way back from a photo shoot.I had shot rolls of films featuring beautiful scenery and scenes of daily life in the countryside.What a fulfilling day!Now what I needed was a hot bath and a good rest.I couldn't wait to return home.On the country road,with my camera bag containing my equipment and a phonebook on my back,I rode my motorbike so merrily that all the tiredness disappeared instantly.Suddenly,a big rock hit me from nowhere.All I knew was that I was no longer on my motorbike. I was thrown away from my bike and hit the road.Before I lost consciousness,I saw all my things were scattered )my helmet (lying at a distance.Hours,maybe days later,I opened my eyes.I realized I was on a hospital bed and later learnt that I had been shifted to the ward after 7 days in the ICU.The crash was so severe that my head had been injured seriously,leading to other terrible conditions.Although I survived,there were a series of surgeries needed before I could fully recover-a reconstruction of the knees,my broken right wrist to be fixed and an operation on my nose. I had no relatives in Delhi as I lived alone.After my accident,some warm-hearted strangers donated blood and resources to help me survive,which made me really touched.But every time I tried to piece together that horrible Tuesday, I felt like there remained some missing puzzles.Who discovered and saved me?How was I sent to the hospital?Where can I find my hero?Such questions bothered me until one day Amy,who was the first to leam of my accident came to see me when visits were allowed. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 In the ward,she told me what happened. I dialed the couple's number immediately,hoping to thank them in person. [语篇解读]本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者在德里拍摄完照片回家的路上遭逼意外，幸好得到一对夫妇和陌 生人们的及时救助以及作者为德里人民的善良所感动的故事。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“在病房里，她告诉我发生的事情。”可知，第一段可描写作者从Amy口中得知自 己被救助的经过。②由第二段首句内容“我立刻拨通了这对夫妇的电话，希望当面感谢他们。”可知，第二段可描写作 者对救助他的夫妇进行感谢并为德里人民的善良感动。 [范文] In the ward,she told me what happened.A couple were driving by when spotting me lying on the country road unconscious,covered in blood.Without hesitation,they called an ambulance at once and accompanied me all the way to the hospital.They also managed to get in touch with Amy whose number was on the top of my 启航演语1高一英语应用文写作+读后续写 phonebook.Seeing Amy arrived,the couple left before further communication.The questions weighing on my mind were answered.Then Amy showed me their number. I dialed the couple's number immediately,hoping to thank them in person.They arrived soon.Before I could utter any words of gratitude,they handed me some photos."We found a roll of film at the scene and had it developed for you."In tears.I thanked them for everything they'd done.They patted my back,saying it was the least they could do when a life had to be saved.That Tuesday became a dateline of my life and I fully felt the kindness of Delhi. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①unconscious a.不省人事的；无意识的②without hesitation毫不迟疑③get in touch with与…联 系：和接触④communication m,表达，交际⑤utterv,说：出声 高分句型：（句型I)They also managed to get in touch with Amy whose number was on the top of my phonebook.,(由关 系代词whos沁引导的限制性定语从句) (句型2)The questions weighing on my mind were answered.(现在分词短语作后置定语) Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假如你是李华，你于本周日下午参加了你校学生会组织的去动物救助中心的志愿者活动。请你写一篇英文日 记，以便在英语课上和同学们分享。内容包括：1.参加活动的时间、地点和主要经过：2.参加这项活动的感受。 注意1.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇动物救助中心Animal Rescue Center流浪的stray Sunday.10 October Sunny Today I took part in a [范文] Sunday.10 October Sunny Today I took part in a volunteer activity which was organised by the Students'Union of our school. My classmates and I took a bus to the Animal Reserve Center in our city,where some stray dogs are kept. As soon as we arrived,the workers told us how these animals were collected and what they did to help them. Then we were divided into small groups and helped them clean the cages.We were given some food to feed these animals. I learned a lot from this activity.Animals need our care and attention,so we should devote our time to taking care of them. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①volunteer activity志愿活动②take part in参加③be divided into被分剂成④attention m,照料 ⑤devote.献身，致力⑥take care of照料，照顾 高分句型：（句型1）Today I took part in a volunteer activity which was organised by the Students'Union of our school. (运用了关系代词which引导的定语从句) (2)As soon as we arrived,the workers told us how these animals were collected and what they did to help them. (运用了as soon as引导的时间状语从句：运用了how引导的宾语从句：what引导的宾语从句) 38 Week4环保类应用文写作&优秀品行类读后续写 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Bryan Anderson was driving his Pontiac to work.He saw an old lady stopping at the side of the road.She looked worried.Bryan knew immediately that she needed help.So he stopped near her expensive car and got out. Bryan smiled,as he was approaching the old lady.But she still looked worried.Nobody had stopped to help her for hours.Moreover.he didn't look safe,as his appearance was so poor and shabby.He could see how frightened she was.So he tried to calm her:"Don't worry.I'm here to help you.My name is Bryan Anderson. The tire (was flat.He had to crawl under the car to change the tire.He got dirty and had his hands hurt.When the work was done,the old lady asked how much she owed him for his help.Bryan just smiled and said:"If you really want to pay me back.the next time you see someone who needs help.give that person the needed assistance.Just think of me!" In the same evening,the lady had her meal in a small cafe.The place looked a little dirty.Then she saw a waitress. nearly eight months with a baby,wiping her wet hair with a towel.The waitress had a sweet friendly smile,though she had worked hard the whole day.The old lady thought of Bryan.She knew what she could do to help her. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 She finished her meal and paid with a one-hundred-dollar bill. That night the waitress came home earlier. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Byn帮助一位女士更换了轮胎，但他不求回报，只是希望女士将爱传 递下去，女士走后去餐馆吃饭，于是选择帮助了服务员，结采女服务员的丈夫就是Byn。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“这位女士吃完饭后，用一张一百美元的钞票付了账。”可知，第一段可描写女士用 她的方式把爱传递给了孕妇服务员。②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，女服务员提前回家了。”可知，第二段可描写服 务员回家后告诉家人所发生的事，可以设想一下戏刷性的结局，比如女服务员的丈夫就是Bry。 [范文] She finished her meal and paid with a one-hundred-dollar bill.The waitress quickly went to get change for her hundred-dollar bill,but the old lady had driven off.She was gone by the time the waitress came back.The waitress wondered where the lady could be.Then she noticed something written on a napkin.There were tears in her eyes when she read what the lady wrote "You don't owe me anything.I hove been there too. Somebody.once helped me out the way I'm helping you.If you really want to pay me back,here is what you do does not let this chain of love end with you."Under the napkin were four more hundred-dollar bills. That night the waitress came home earlier.She was thinking about the money and what the lady had written. She was wondering how the lady knew she and her husband were in need.With the baby to be born next month,life was going to be hard.She knew how worried her husband was,and now everything is going to be all right.Knowing what had happened,her husband,Bryan,shed tears of joy and gratitude. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①pay back还钱②gratitudem,感谢③napkin n,餐巾纸④wonder v.想知道，好奇⑤shed v,使落下 高分句型：（句型I)If you really want to pay me back,here is what you do does not let this chain of love end with you. (运用了f引导的条件状语从句) (句型2)The waitress wondered where the lady could be,(运用了where引l导宾语从句)】 39