Week 17 验收精练（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 17 验收精练 Monday 应用文写作训练A+B A 假定你是李华。本周五你们班将举行一次主题为My Future Career的班会。请你就此写一篇发言稿，内容包括： 1.你未来想从事的职业：2选择从事此职业的原因：3.你为此做出的努力。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Future Career [范文] My Future Career Hello,classmates!I'm glad to share my future career with you.My dream is to be a lawyer. When I was in primary school,I had strong expression skills and often participated in some debates,which gave me the idea of being a lowyer.With my in-depth understanding of the lawyer profession,its maintenance of low justice and social fairness makes me strengthen my faith. To attain my goal,I often read Law Weekly to learn some knowledge about law.I firmly believe that one day I will become an excellent lawyer. 一 高分亮点 高分词汇：①primary school小学②participate in参加③debate m.讨论，辩论④in-depth a.彻底的，深入的 ⑤profession m.(尤指需要长期训练和正规资格的)职业⑥maintenance m.维护，保养：保持⑦fairness n.公平， 公正 高分句型：（句型I)When I was in primary school,.I had strong expression skills and often participated in some debates, which gave me the idea of being a lawyer.(运用了which引导的非猥制性定语从句) (句型2)To attain my goal,I often read Law Weekly to learn some knowledge about law.(运用了不定式作目的 状语) B 假定你叫李华，是一名高三学生。你所在班级最近举办了一次义卖活动，募集的善款将捐赠给学校助学基金。 请你给曾在你班学习的英国交换生Jas写一封邮件介绍该活动，内容包括：1.活动日的和情况：2.你对本活动的 看法。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇义卖charity bazaar助学基金grant fund Dear James, Yours. Li Hua [范文] Dear James, Knowing that you are interested in the charity bazaar held by our class,I am more than delighted to write more details to you about the activity. In order to organize it successfully,we made full preparations.Before the sale,we collected and classified a lot of used books and second-hand goods which were still in good condition.When the day came,students 184 Week17验收精练 and teachers all came and took an active part in it.At the end of the activity,we raised 5,000 yuan in total, which we will donate to the grant fund of our school. It is such a meaningful activity that we all hope to take part in the next charity bazaar.Hope you can join us next time. Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①delighted a,高兴的②successfully ad,成功地：顺利地③make full preparation做全面的准备 ④classify,把…分类，把…分级⑤in total总共，总计⑥meaningful ad山.有意义的，重要的⑦take an active part in积极参与某事 高分句型：（句型I)Before the sale,we collected and classified a lot of used books,second-hand goods which were still in good condition.(运用了which引导的定语从句) (句型2)When the day came,students and teachers all came and took an active part in it.(运用了when引导的时间状 语从句) Tuesday 读后续写训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a mid-September afternoon,Sista and Rafi were racing each other on the mountainside.The girls laughed wildly and stopped for a rest in the shade of a tree. "Now,I'm hungry,"Sista said."Yeah.I could really go for a jobo.I love the sweet-and-sour taste!"Rafi said. licking her lips."I know where there's a great jobo tree,"Sista said."It belongs to that lady who lives in the little house by the hill.I heard she's severe,but sometimes she gives fruit in return for an errand()."They decided to give it a shot. Rafi's heart pounded as Sista knocked on the door.An elderly woman answered."Yes?"the lady asked,squinting 着眼看)at the girls.Rafi gasped,unable to speak.“We heard.,."said Sista,her voice shaky,“that you give jobos in payment for running an errand."The lady raised one eyebrow."Ah,yes.Payment."She clicked her tongue."Nothing is free,eh?" The lady led the girls into the kitchen,where the smell of warm bread filled the air.She grabbed two baskets.one large and one small,"Go fill these with jobos.Come right back. The girls raced up the hill to the tree and picked the ripest jobos.The moment they returned to the house,the lady handed them a bag filled with warm bread."Take this bag and the large basket of jobos to the Gomez family.Do you know them?"The girls nodded."Good.And ask them for the payment.Mrs.Gomez will place it in a large envelope,"the lady added,warning that if they returned without the envelope of payment,they wouldn't get the jobos. Wrestling with the heavy bag and basket along the way,the girls finally arrived at the Gomez house,sweating.Mrs. Gomez answered the door.Walking inside,Rafi saw colorful drawings lying everywhere.The three little Gomez kids were still busy with more pictures,pure smiles on their cute faces."This is from the lady with the jobo tree,"Sista held up the food.Mrs.Gomez cried,"Thank you.My husband is still sick in bed.Times are hard." 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 "But she said to ask you for the payment too,"Rafi said with her eyes dropped. Back at the farmhouse,the girls handed the lady the large sealed envelope. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Sist阳和Raf听想吃黄酸枣，始们听说小山旁边小房子里的那位女士会给 黄酸枣作为差事的报酬，但是那位女士很严厉，她们最终决定去试试。那位女士让她们去给G0z家送黄酸枣和面 包，并要求地们向Gomez太太要报酬。她们大汗淋漓地把东西送到了，结果Gomz太太却告诉地们地家过得很 艰难。 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“·但她说也要你付钱，'Ra6说着垂下了眼睛。”可知，第一段可描写Sista和Ra 还是向Gomez太太要了报酬，Gomez太太给了她们一个塞满了东西的信封。②由第二段首句内容“回到农舍.姑娘们 把密封的大信封递给了老太太。”可知，第二段可描写姑娘们看到信封里的画，明白了那位女士帮助了Gom2太太一 家，并且她们也得到了黄酸枣，非常开心。 [范文] "But she said to ask you for the payment too,"Rafi said with her eyes dropped."Oh yes,the payment,"Mrs. Gomez said."The payment!"chanted the children,clapping their hands.Sista and Rafi exchanged glances in confusion,not knowing why they were excited rather than worried.Mrs.Gomez then handed Sista a large sealed envelope which was stuffed full."The payment,"Mrs.Gomez beamed and thanked the girls for their delivery service.On the way back,Rafis said,"I wonder how they can afford to pay so much for that food."" know,"Sista agreed."It looks like a lot of money." Back at the farmhouse,the girls handed the lady the large sealed envelope.She immediately pulled the contents out.Inside were colorful drawings from the little children!Mystery solved,those lovely drawings turned out to be the Gomez family's payment.As they helped the lady tape the pictures to the wall,Rafi and Sista broke out in smiles.Just then,Rafi's stomach growled."Here's your payment,"the lady smiled,handing the basket of jobos to the girls.“Thank you,”they said.“Anytime,.”said the lady.“Come again,girls."On their way home, Rafi and Sista enjoyed their treat.The juice that ran down their arms was as sweet and warm as the feeling they had inside. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①chant.反复唱，反复呼喊②sealed adj.封闭的，密封的③delivery n.递送，投递④growl v.低沉吼 叫，（事物）发轰隆声⑤envelope m.信封 高分句型：（句型I)Sista and Rafi exchanged glances in confusion,not knowing why they were excited rather than worried,.(运用了why引导的宾语从句作know的宾语) (句型2)Mrs.Gomez then handed Sista a large sealed envelope which was stuffed full..(运用了which引导的限制性定 语从句) (句型3)I wonder how they can afford to pay so much for that food.(运用了how引导的宾语从句) Wednesday 应用文写作训练A+B A 假定你是某国际学校“跨文化论坛”的主持人李华，本期节目邀请了中国书法家Mr.Wng给学生做讲座，请你用 英语写一段节目开场白。内容包括：1.表示欢迎：2.专家介绍：3.节目简介。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 参考词汇书法家calligrapher [范文] Hello everyone.I'm Li Hua.the host of the Cross-Cultural Forum.Welcome to our school! Today I'm more than honored to hove Mr.Wang here to give a lecture on Chinese calligraphy.As one of the most famous calligraphers in Chinese calligraphy.Mr.Wang has been committed to the study of Chinese calligraphy,creating his own research system.Since its establishment in our school in 2012."Cross-Cultural Forum"has always adhered to the purpose of building a cultural platform and promoting cultural exchange, which has raised students'cross-cultural awareness and cultivated their cooperative learning ability. Now let's follow Mr.Wang and immerse ourselves in the splendour of Chinese calligraphy. 86 Week17验收精练 高分亮点 高分词汇：①commit.(使)承诺，承担义务②establishment m.建立，设立③adhere v.秉持，遵循④cultivate. 栽培，培育⑤cooperativead山.合作的，协作的 高分句型：（句型I)As one of the most famous calligraphers in Chinese calligraphy,Mr.Wang has been committed to the study of Chinese calligraphy,creating his own research system.(运用了现在分坷短语作状语) 2)Since its establishment in our school in 2012."Cross-Cultural Forum"has always adhered to the purpose of building a cultural platform and promoting cultural exchange.which has raised students'cross-cultural awareness and cultivated their cooperative learning ability.(运用了which引导的非很制性定语从句) B 假定你是李华，你校于5月4日举办了英语戏剧表演比赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1，比赛目的： 2.表演内容：3.活动反响。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 An English Drama Competition [范文] An English Drama Competition An English drama competition was successfully held in our school hall on May 4th. Aimed at encouraging English learning and application,the competition covered varieties of forms,ranging from new plays to classics or adapted ones.Great numbers of students took a keen interest and got actively involved in it.Not only did it offer a platform to show our talents,but got us immersed in the charm of English drama. It's hoped that such activities will be held more often in the future. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①drama competition话剧竞赛②application m.中请③get actively involved in积极参与④platform n.平台⑤immerse v.使沉浸（于），使深陷（于） 高分句型：（句型1）Not only did it offer a platform to show our talents,but got us immersed in the charm of English drama.(运用了not only..but句型的倒装结构) (句型2)t's hoped that such activities will be held more often in the future..(运用了that引导的主语从句，It作形式 主语) Thursday 读后续写训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Being without work can be scary and overwhelming.especially when you have a family to support. Patrick Hoagland is a 30-year-old dad of one who was suddenly laid off from his job at a metal recycling company.He was desperate to find another job-which isn't very easy in the current economy.However,as a father,he couldn't afford to be without work. "I definitely had fear,"Hoagland admitted."My wife and I,we don't make a whole lot of money individually.Once I lost my job.everything fell on her shoulders."So a month after being laid off,he decided to stand on a busy roadside of a Phoenix highway and simply hand out copies of his resume! Before figuring out his unconventional strategy,Patrick had tried to apply to many jobs,both online and in person.The lack of response eventually led to his idea."I wasn't getting any responses,"he said."I was getting frustrated.It popped into my head to stand in a corner and hold a sign and hand out resumes.At first I laughed about it...but I kept thinking about it.I figured,why not?!There are millions of people in Phoenix driving around;someone might give me a job offer." For three days,for a few hours each day,Patrick handed his resume out to strangers.He also held a sign which read "Please take a resume.Laid-off.Looking for a job." 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 During one of these sessions,a woman named Melissa DiGianfilippo,owner of Serendipity Consulting,passed by.She was driving down Camelback Rd in Phoenix near her office and saw this guy on the side of the road with a smile in 110- degree heat,with a sign asking people to take his resume.She was impressed with Patrick because it was 110 F outside and what she saw was really unexpected. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Melissa noticed how much creativity this move took,so she grabbed a copy of his resume and decided to post it on social media. Patrick is thankful to everyone who has helped him get his dream job. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线案展开，讲述了一位有一个孩子的30岁的父亲Patrick,却突然从一家金属回收公司下 岗了。他不顾一切地想再找一份工作，而在目前的经济形势下，这并不容易。然而，作为一个父亲，他不能没有工作。 最终一家公司的老板Melissa看到了他在路边求职，帮助了他，让他找到了一份工作。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“Mssa注意到这举动非常有创意，所以她拿了一份他的简历，并决定将其发布 在社交媒体上。”可知，第一段可描写Melissa给予Patrick帮助，帮他找到了理想的工作。②由第二段首句内容 Patrick感谢所有帮助他找到理想工作的人。”可知，第二段可描写Patrick对找到工作后的反应以及感悟。 [范文] Melissa noticed how much creativity this move took,so she grabbed a copy of his resume and decided to post it on social media.It worked.People were impressed with this willingness and determination to stand in the heat.The job offers began to fly in by hundreds,and Patrick eventually found a position at a waste collecting company as an assistant manager.It wasn't just any job,but the one he had actually hoped for. Patrick is thankful to everyone who has helped him get his dream job."I had a lot of people who sent messages that weren't necessarily job offers but were good wishes saying,'Good luck with your application.'It was nice to see that,"Patrick said.Patrick and Melissa DiGianfilippo have kept in touch ever since."She didn't need to help me,but she did and it has changed my life.I am so grateful to her,"Patrick added.While as human beings we cannot choose what happens to us,we can certainly control how we react to it.And that can make all the difference. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①willingness n.乐意.意愿②determination n.决心，坚定3 necessarily adv,必定，必然：必要地 ④keep in touch保持联系⑤grateful a山.感谢的，感激的 高分句型：（句型I)While as human beings we cannot control what happens to us,we can certainly choose how we react toit.(运用了what和how引导的宾语从句) (2)I had a lot of people who sent messages that weren't necessarily job offers but were good wishes saying,"Good luck with your application."(运用了who引导的定语从句) Friday 应用文写作训练A+B A 你校英语社团的微信公众号正在开展“中国象征”主题征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你心目中 的中国象征：2.简要介绍：3.说明理由。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 A Symbol of China 188 Week17验收精练 [范文] A Symbol of China As we all know,there are many traditional festivals in China.Whenever people mention them,they will think of China.Those are called Chinese symbols. As for me,the Mid-Autumn Festival is the most distinctive symbol of China.The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar,when all the family members will come home for the festival,enjoying the mooncakes and appreciating the beautiful moon.As one of the most representative Chinese festivals.it has been enjoying great popularity.which shows that Chinese people extremely value family union.That is why the Mid-Autumn Festival is regarded as a symbol of China. The Mid-Autumn Festival,a symbol of China,is always my favorite holiday. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①raditional festival传统节日②distinctive a.独特的，与众不同的③lunar calendar阴历④representative ad.典型的，有代表性的⑤be regarded as被视为 高分句型：（句型I)Whenever people mention them,they will think of China.(运用了whenever引导的时间状语 从句) (2)The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar,when all the family members will come home for the festival,enjoying the mooncakes and appreciating the beautiful moon. when引导的非限制性定语从句) B 假定你是李华，你校将创协中文歌曲训练营。你想邀请交换生Heny一起参加。请给Henry写封邮件，内容包 括：1，介绍该训练营的相关内容：2.说明参加该训练营的好处。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Henry, Yours, Li Hua [范文] Dear Henry, So thrilled am I to share with you that our school will launch a Chinese song training camp soon and I would like to invite you to join us. During the two-week training.professional teachers will not only teach the basic principles and techniques of singing Chinese songs,but also guide us to practice singing Chinese songs.I firmly believe that it will not only help you improve your spoken Chinese but also let you make some Chinese friends.It's a great way to have a good knowledge of Chinese language.Therefore I sincerely hope you could sign up too.as it will be a great way for us to bond and enjoy beautiful Chinese songs together. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①thrilled ad.非常兴奋，极为激动2 share with与…分享③professional adj.职业的，专业的 ④principlen.基本法则⑤bond.(使)建立亲密关系：与…黏合（或连接） 高分句型：（句型I)I firmly believe that it will not only help you to improve spoken Chinese but also let you make a number of Chinese friends,.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及not only,.but also句型） (2)Therefore I sincerely hope you could sign up too.as it will be a great way for us to bond and enjoy beautiful Chinese songs together..(运用了as引导的原因状语从句) 89 启航英语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 Saturday 读后续写训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ahmad sat at a table in the school cafeteria.The election for fifth-grade class president was only about two weeks away,and Ahmad knew it was time to begin seriously campaigning. "I think you need a catchy slogan."said his friend,twirling(a pencil as he thought."How about Authentic and Approachable:Always Ahmad?"Ahmad beamed."It's got a nice ring to it." "You need something that people will remember.They won't forget that Olivia was the fourth-grade president last year and they'll like the fact that she has experience."his friend added.Ahmad nodded,grinning."I know,but I think I can bring some fresh ideas.Do you know Olivia's plans for the campaign?" Olivia,meanwhile,sat at her kitchen table with her twin sister.They were eating cupcakes while discussing what to put on the signs they planned to make.At the center of the table were poster boards in bright colors,markers,pens,colored pencils,and crayons. "Where should we start?"asked her sister,brushing the cream from her hands."What do you want people to know about you?"Olivia raised her head and thought for a moment."I want them to know I'm a hard worker,"she said,eyes bright and alert."I have experience as class president.I also have a lot of ideas of making this a great school year." "Experience is truly important,"commented her sister."Dad once told me he would vote for someone who had proven to be the kind of leader he was looking for in his company." An enormous grin spread across Olivia's face."What about Olivia for President-All Original,All Experience," suggested her sister."Oh,or Olivia for President,Opportunity for All?""I like both of those,"exclaimed Olivia."The first one reminds the voters of my experience.The second one lets them know I will listen to their ideas and work for and with them."Her words fell as she took out a fat red marker and began the first poster. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Two weeks later on the election,Ms.Pond announced,"Now,we have two candidates with same votes. Ahmad went to the front of the room to begin his speech after Olivia. [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ahmad和Olivia都精心准备竞选学生干部，在两人选票相同的情况下 如何决定最终结果的故事。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“选举两周后，Pod宜布：'现在，我们有了两个得票率相同的候选人。'”可知，第 一段可描写选票相同以后的后续情况。②由第二段首句内容“在Olivia之后，Ahmad走到房间前面开始演讲。”可知， 第二段可描写Ahmad的演讲内容和故事最后的结果。 [范文] Two weeks later on the election,Ms.Pond announced,"Now,we have two candidates with same votes.""Now that the two candidates are tied on the ballot,let's have a further campaign,"She added Olivia went on stage first to give a speech,but surprisingly she was in a wheelchair."Because of my injury.I have decided to withdraw from the campaign,"she said."Why is this happening?"Ms.Pond asked.The classmate who pushed the wheelchair beside her said,"She can't walk because she hurt her foot when she saved a classmate.She needs to rest for a period of time to recover."All the people present applauded the former helpful fourth-grade president,including Ahmad. Ahmad went to the front of the room to begin his speech after Olivia."Olivia is a great class president,"Ahmad said tearfully."Her behavior deeply touched our hearts.Each of us should learn from her noble spirit of sacrificing herself to save others.I want to learn from the best.I suggest that Olivia stay on as fifth-grade president when she gets well again.I'd be happy to be her assistant,if she doesn't mind."It was a thunderous ovation,and both deserved it.The two embraced and smiled in a warm round of applause. 190 Week17验收精练 高分亮点 高分词汇：①give a speech发表演讲②surprisingly ad.惊人地，出人意料地③withdraw.退出④stay on继续 保持⑤thunderous adj,雷鸣般的，声音很大的 高分句型：（句型I)The classmate who pushed the wheelchair beside her said,“She is trying to save a classmate,so she can't walk because of her foot injury.She needs to rest for a period of time to recover,"(运用了who引导的眼制性定 语从句) (句型2)I suggest that Olivia stay on as fifth-grade president when she gets well again.(运用了虚拟语气和that引导的 宾语从句) Sunday 应用文写作+读后续写训练 第一节◆应用文写作 你校在五月份举行读书节活动。请你写一篇以“My Best Friend-一Books”为题的英语短文，在学校英语角与同学 分享。内容包括：1.一次阅读经历：2.读书的收获或感悟。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Best Friend-Books [范文] My Best Friend-Books I will never forget the experience that made me fall in love with books. One day.I.aged 7 at the time,was left alone at home.Feeling lonely and deserted,I cried helplessly.I reached out for a picture book my mother had just bought for me.Surprisingly,when I turned the pages,I was so absorbed in the colorful pictures and the interesting story that I absolutely forgot my loneliness.Since then, books have become my best friends. Books offer me comfort and peace.Moreover,they give me wisdom and open up a whole new world to me. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①fall in love with爱上②deserted adj.被遗弃的，被抛弃的③helplessly ad.无助地：无法控制地 ④be absorbed in全神贯注于absolutely ad,绝对地，完全地 高分句型：（句型I)Feeling lonely and deserted.I cried helplessly,(运用了现在分词作状语） (2)Surprisingly.when I turned the pages.I was so absorbed in the colorful pictures and the interesting story that I absolutely forgot my loneliness.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句以及so.,-that.,·句型) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 To celebrate International Firefighters'Day.a town's special school for orphans held a special meeting and greeted the local fire department.That year,the firemen had stopped a forest fire before it could reach houses and buildings.The local newspaper celebrated their feat()with a front-page story. The town's firefighters came to the school dressed in uniform and answered all the kids'questions.Captain Joshua was the department leader and explained each team member's role. After the demonstration,the kids presented the firemen with drawings they had made in class.All of the pictures were inspired by the firemen's heroics. A young boy named David approached Joshua with his drawing.Joshua noticed that the young boy had a birthmark in the same spot as his burn mark. 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 "Nice drawing,little man.Hey,I guess we're kind of the same,"Joshua told him while pointing at his burn mark. David blushed and smiled.The young boy had another request for Joshua but was too shy to ask at first.David turned to his teacher,Mrs.Humphries,for approval,and she gave him a thumbs-up. "Would it be all right if I came to the fire station to see all the equipment and look at the trucks?"David asked timidly.The young boy explained that he dreamed of one day becoming a fireman,which is why he wanted to learn as much as possible. Captain Joshua told David he would be happy to give the tour,but only if Mrs Humphries agreed."I'd be happy to accompany you and David on a tour of the station,but there is something you should know."Mrs.Humphries told the captain. While watching the young boy playing with his friends,the teacher took a deep breath before saying,"The reason why he's so obsessed (with firemen is that he lost his parents in a fire."Captain Joshua decided that the trip would be beneficial for David and agreed to the tour. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 That Saturday morning.Joshua.Mrs.Humphries,and David visited the fire department. 22 years later,retired Joshua was at home when a fire broke out in his basement. [语篇解读]本文以故事的发晨顺序为线索展开，讲述了为了庆祝国际消防员日，一个小镇的孤儿学校举行了一场 特别的会议，在会议上，队长Joshua认识了一名叫David的小男孩儿，并答应他带他去消防站参观，后来了解到，David 的父母在一次火灾中丧生。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“那个星期六早上，Joshua,Mrs.Humphries和David访问了消防部门。"可知，第一 段可描写队长Joshua带着David参观消防站的情景以及David参观后的感受。②由第二段首句内容"22年后，退休 的Joshua在家时，他的地下室发生了火灾。”可知，第二段可描写火灾发生后消防员救火的情况，此处应该讲述David 成为一名消防员并参与救援。 [范文] That Saturday morning,Joshua.Mrs.Humphries,and David visited the fire department.Joshua introduced David to his teammates and took him for a ride around town in one of the trucks.David was impressed with what he saw.The boy was smiling from ear to ear.David thanked Joshua for showing him around the fire department. He also said that he would become an excellent firefighter when he grew up.Joshua gave an impressed nod of approval to David and said goodbye to them for the day. 22 years later,retired Joshua was at home when a fire broke out in his basement.Joshua and his wife were left trapped in the fire.They called 911 and within ten minutes,firefighters arrived.Firemen carried Joshua and his wife out of the burning house.They laid them down to receive medical attention.But before one of the firemen left them,Joshua grabbed his shoulder."David,is that you?"he asked.Noticing the scar above Joshua's eye, David recognized Joshua as well.Just as David had promised all those years before,he had fulfilled his dream of becoming a firefighter and saving lives. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①trap.困住②grab.抓住③smile from ear to ear开心，笑得合不拢嘴④approvalm.称许，赞成 ⑤fuG.履行：实现 高分句型：（句型I)He also said that he would become an excellent firefighter when he grew up.(运用了that引导的宾 语从句和when引导的时间状语从句) (句型2)Noticing the scar above Joshua'seye,David recognized Joshua as well.(运用了现在分词作扶语)】 192