Week 11 道请信&优秀品行类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 11 邀请信&优秀品行类读后续写 Monday 如何写好邀请信 邀请信分为两种：一种属于个人信函，例如，邀请某人共 表明写作意图，向某人发出邀请 进晚餐、参加宴会、观看电影，出席典礼等。另一种邀请信则 属于事务信函，一般是邀请参加会议，学术活动，等等。在写 请信 说明邀请的具体原因和邀请的内容 作时，语气要热情真挚，不要强人所难。 期待对方接受邀请，并表示感谢 典题示例 (2022·新高考I卷)假定你是校广插站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请 她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍：2.访谈的时间和话题。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Caroline Yours sincerely, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋篇 体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时 主题 邀请访谈 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：写信目的 第二段：访谈内容 第三段：期待参与 OStep Two 词汇运用 1.主管：掌管in charge of 6.安排，计划schedule 2.广播电台broadcasting station 7.表达，交际communication 3.设计，构思design 8.有空闲的，可获得的available 4.采访interview 9.参加，参与participation 5.积极乐观的：建设性的positive Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (I)我是李华，负责我们学校广播电台的英语节目Talk and Talk。 I am Li Hua in charge of the English program Talk and Talk at our school broadcasting station. (2)我写信是为了邀请你参加我们的节目。 I'm writing to invite you to attend our program. (3)Talk and Talk是一个节目。 Talk and Talk is a program. (4)它旨在采访一些人谈论一切积极的事情，包括生活、工作，学习等。 It is designed to interview some people to talk about everything positive covering life,work,study and so on. (5)你的采访安排在周日上午9点。 The interview with you is scheduled at 9 on Sunday morning. Week11邀请信&优秀品行类读后续写 (6)你应该谈谈如何用英语提高中国学生的沟通技巧。 You are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students'communication skills in English. (7)你能告诉我你那时有空吗？ Would you tell me if you are available then? (8)如果你没有时间，我们可以另外安排时间。 If you are not available,we can arrange another time. (9)我一直期待你的参与。 I am looking forward to your participation. 2.句式升级 (1)用定语从句合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4) Talk and Talk is a program which is designed to interview some people to talk about everything positive covering life,work,study and so on. (2)用and引导的并列句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 The interview with you is scheduled at 9 on Sunday morning and you are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students'communication skills in English. (3)用条件状语从句的省略形式升级上题中的句子(8)。 If not,we can arrange another time. (4)用省略主语和系动词的形式升级上题中的句子(9)。 Looking forward to your participation. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Caroline, I am Li Hua in charge of the English program Talk and Talk at our school broadcasting station.I'm writing to invite you to attend our program. Talk and Talk is o program which is designed to interview some people to talk about everything positive covering life,work,study and so on.The interview with you is scheduled at 9 on Sunday morning and you are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students'communication skills in English.Would you tell me if you are available then?If not,we can arrange another time. Looking forward to your participation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Tuesday 满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 improve提高 awareness意识；了解：觉察 host主办 heme主题，中心思想 opportunity机会；时机 sign up报名 charity慈善机构 stadium体育场，运动场 variety多样化，变化 benefit好处，益处 responsibility责任，负责 delighted高兴的 sincerely由衷地，真诚地 set aside留出 take place举行 performance表演，演出 invitation邀请 rply回答，答复 exhibition展览，展出 detailed详尽的，详细的 information消息，资料 feature以…为特色 brilliant巧妙的，使人印象深的 be enthusiastic about x对热心的 cang from范围从…到 13 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 6.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the dance 话题句式 feast..我真诚地希望你能留出一些时间来参加舞蹈 1.I have learned that you are enthusiastic about charity 盛宴。 activities.so I'm writing to invite you to join us in a7.It will be held at the school stadium at 8:00 a.m.on charity sale.我知道你对慈善活动很有热情，所以我写 May9h,2024,which may last4 hours..它将于2024年 信是为了邀请你加人我们的慈善销售。 5月9日上午8点在学校体育馆举行，可能持续4个 2.I'm writing to invite you to attend a photography 小时。 exhibition held in our school,whose theme is 8.The dance show will take place in the school hall from 6 “Impressive changes around me”.我写信是为了邀请你 p.m.to8p.m.of January2L.舞蹈表演将于1月21日 参加在我们学校举办的摄影展，主题是“我身边令人印 下午6点至8点在学校礼堂举行。 象深刻的变化”。 9.The exhibition will last for about three hours in the school 3.Here is some detailed information.这里是一些详细的 hall on Feb.15h.展览将于2月15日在学校大厅举行， 信息。 持续约三个小时。 4.In order to improve teenagers'awareness of environment 10.Volunteers are needed.Would you like to join us? protection,the Students'Union will host a practical 志愿者。你想加入我们吗？ activity themed“Promoting Ecotourism".为了提高青少ll.lfso,you can sign up on our school website or call at 年的环保意识，学生会将举办一场以“促进生态旅游”为主 8233686.如果有的话，你可以在我们学校的网站上报 题的实践活动。 名，或者拨打8233686。 5.I'm delighted to tell you that there will be a Chinese folk 12.I'd appreciate it if you could take part in the charity sale. dance show held by our school..我很高兴地告诉你，我们 如果你能参加慈善义卖，我将不胜感激。 学校将举办一场中国民间舞蹈表演。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Jack, In order to spread Chinese food culture,my city is going to host the First International Chinese Food Festival in two weeks.I'm writing to invite you to 模板中黑体字部分是写邀 attend it with me. 请信时可以通用的部分，其他部 It is to take place in the City Square from 14 to 16 in October.Some chefs 分可以根据写作要求灵活处理。 will demonstrate key Chinese cooking skills with a wide variety of Chinese food raw 三段都以一般将来时为主， materials on display and visitors are welcome to taste them for free.I think it is a 其次是一般现在时。 good chance for you to experience Chinese culture.Since the City Square is located 第一段以第三人称和第一人称 downtown.we can get there by bus or underground. 为主：第二段以第三人称为主：第三 If you are interested,please let me know.Looking forward to your reply. 段以第二人称为主。 Yours ever, Li Hua Wednesday 应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆邀请信 假定你是李华，你校将于2024年5月9日在学校体育场组织一次慈善义卖活动。请根据以下要点给你校外籍教 师Mr.Joh写一封信，邀请他一起参加。内容包括：l.活动介绍（时间、地点，物品等）：2.活动意义：3.盼回复参与。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数：3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇义卖活动charity sale体育场stadium Dear Mr.John. How is everything going? Yours. Li Hua 114 Week11邀请信&优秀品行类读后续写 [范文] Dear Mr.John, How is everything going?I have learned that you are enthusiastic about charity activities,so I'm writing to invite you to join us in a charity sale. It will be held at the school stadium at 8:00 a.m.on May 9th,2024.which may last 4 hours.A variety of items are welcomed,ranging from books,earphones,handcrafts to homemade cakes.This activity can bring about various benefits.Not only can it improve our sense of responsibility.but it can also develop our ability to design and organize activities. I'd appreciate it if you could take part in the charity sale.Looking forward to your early reply! Yours. Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①be enthusiastic about对…热心的②charity n.慈善机构③stadium n.体育场，运动场④variety n. 多样化，变化⑤rang from范围从…到.⑥benefit n.好处，益处⑦responsibilityn.责任，负责 高分句型：（句型I)It will be held at the school stadium at8:00a.m.on May9th,2024,which may last4 hours..(运 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) (2)Not only can it improve our sense of responsibility,but it can also develop our ability to design and organize activities.(运用了not only.,but also.·,结构) 跟踪训练2◆邀请信 假定你是李华，想邀请你的外国朋友Eric观看你校的中国民族舞(Chinese folk dance)的表演。请给他写封电子 邮件，内容包括：1，表演的时间、地点：2.表演的内容。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [范文] Dear Eric, How is everything going?I'm delighted to tell you that there will be a Chinese folk dance show held by our school.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the dance feast. The dance show will take place in the school hall from 6 p.m.to 8 p.m.on January 21.Not only will you enjoy students'traditional Chinese folk dance,but you will also have the chance to admire some famous dancers'performance.Besides,there will be a lot of interesting activities,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese folk dance. I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①delighted adj.高兴的②sincerely ad血.由表地，真诚地③set aside留出④take place举行 ⑤performance n.表演，演出⑥invitation.邀请⑦reply n.回答，答复 高分句型：（句型I)I'm delighted to tell you that there will be a Chinese folk dance show held by our school.(运用了 that引导的宾语从句) (2)Besides,there will be a lot of interesting activities,from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese folk dance.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句) 115 启航英语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 Thursday 读后续写写作技巧11 两“情”相悦高度融合 我们都知道，读后续写的原文都是引人入胜的好故事，或助人或趣事或遇险，联宕起伏，但都离不开情节线 和情感线这两条线。而故事的发展、情节的推动都与这两条线息息相关，续写部分的情节线和情感线的发展应 和原文的两条线一致，达到两“情”相悦。比如，下面这个续写部分的情节线应围绕梅瑞狄斯太太和绝的三个孩 子帮助贫困家庭的伯纳德赚钱的敌事展开，而情感线体现的应以“共情”和“高兴”为主。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems.and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them. One moring,she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested her very much. "I wish you could see him,"she said to her own children,John.Harry and Clara."He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I don't see what he can do."After their mother left the room.the children sat thinking about Bernard."I wish we could help him to earn money,"said Clara."His family is suffering so much." "So do I,"said Harry."We really should do something to assist them." For some moments.John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,"I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish." The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one."I tell you what we can do,."said John.“You know that big box of comn Uncle John sent us？Well,we can make popcorn(操米花)，and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it round to the houses and sell it." 注意1，续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 When Mrs.Meredith heard of John's idea,she thought it was a good one,too. With everything ready,Berard started out on his new business. 「亮点再练 ①challenge m.挑战.挑战②thoughtful ac.考虑周到的：沉思的③take care of照顾， 词汇积累 照料④assist.帮助，协助⑤solution n.(问题、闲难等的)解决办法 She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. 长难句 分析 分析：本句是筒单句。本句运用了spend time doing sth.结构 翻译：地花了很多时间去看望穷人 1.It's more likely that none of us start a conversation because it's awkward and challenging (challenge). 跟踪练习 2.The goverment expressed hope that all the sides will work toward a political solution (solve). 3.I spent so much time chatting with my friends or checking the comments that I stayed up late and left homework unfinished nearly every day..我花了太多的时间和我的朋友聊天或查看评论，以至于 我几平每天都熬夜，没有完成家庭作业。 116 Week11邀请信&优秀品行类读后续写 写作步骤 。第一步把握原文大意明主旨和两线 文本 大意 在社会经济萧条的环境下，梅瑞狄斯太太和她的三个孩子帮助贫困家庭的伯纳德嫌钱的故事。 原文 情节线：梅瑞狄斯太太乐于助人一孩子们听了伯纳德一家的情况一→约翰想到了“爆米花计划 两情线 情感线：caring,willing,helpful-→sympathetic and eager-→upset-→excited 叙事意图 通过叙述一个助人为乐的故事表达人与人之间的爱、互帮互助和善行。 口第二步据两首句信息确定续写方向 1.两段首句定一框 由首句关键信息“a good one”及第二段首句关键信息“everything ready"可知，本段可叙述“爆米花计划"的准备过 程：告知伯纳德该计划：伯纳德一家对该计划的反应： 2.二框二首正能量 由首句关键信息“everything ready'"和“started out on his new business'”可知，本段发展方向应该是伯纳德开始卖爆米 花计划，一方面是特别顺利，一方面是开始不顺利，但在孩子们的帮助下克服了困难：由正能量结尾可知，最终爆米 花都卖出去了，伯纳德赚到钱补贴家用。 Q第三步原续两“情”相悦合理添加细节 原文 Para.I Para.2 4.John had a good idea fescited) 7.:informed the family of the 11.:took home some money by 3.sat thinking how :plan (excited,thankful) selling popcorn (grateful) to help (upset) 6.:prepared everything and 10.people were willing to buy ,上.earn about the made popcorns (eger) popcorn (thankful) Mrs.Meredith (sympatheti) Mrs.Meredith approved 9.went to sell popcor (happy) lMrs.Meredith乐于助八 8.started out on his new business (sympathetic..caring） of the idea (happy) Beginning Ending →情节 1.两“情”相悦 续写部分情节线体现的是：梅瑞狄斯太太乐于助人，伯纳德需要帮助一如何助人一双方得偿所愿：情感线的走向应 该是激动和感激(excited and grateful)。 2.添加细节 (1)动作细节：绩写第一段添加孩子取出叔叔送的玉米，准备纸袋的动作细节，呼应原文伏笔。 (2)情感细节：刻画伯纳德一一家的激动、感激的情感时，尾句可描写伯纳德的心理活动，升华主旨。 Q第四步沿原语言特点完美连贯表达 原文利用简单句、并列句、非谓语动词和主从复合句，描写动作，对话和社会环境，故续写部分可沿用原文特点。 可利用after that,.later,on returning,although等恰当过渡衔接。 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 When Mrs.Meredith heard of John's idea,she thought it was a good one,too.She nodded with a smile and encouraged the children."Let's get started!"Immediately. Clara volunteered to get the box of corn and began to make popcorn.Meanwhile.lohn went to purchase some paper bags and put all the popcorn in place After that.Mrs. Meredith with her children,poid another visit to the family to tell them about the popcorn plan.Seeing the popcorn arranged in a basket they were overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Although things were tight for everubody.Bernard's business worked out amazingly well Carruing the basket he went door to door to sell the popcorn.Surprised to see such a poorly- dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors,people would buy one pack or two.on returning,he thanked the Meredith family with watery eues.Later every week Bernard could make some money by selling popcorn.It is love that makes the world go around. and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. Friday 读后续写话题跟踪训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The automobile industry is spending billions on self-driving cars,just so we can sit in the back seat like some high- powered corporate executive().But what if we quite like driving? On holiday a few years ago,I spent hours being transported on trains,buses and planes.Then,finally,came the section of the holiday during which I hired a set of wheels. After decades of marriage,it was not often that you received real praise from your partner,but on the highways of Crete compliments came with every successful action."Oh,well done!"said Jocasta,her voice full of admiration,as I navigated a roundabout(环岛）without killing us both. Into the roundabout I went,slowing down as we entered,then speeding up as we returned to the straight.Really,it was like driving in a Fl race. We turned right.then right again.following the GPS navigation system,and found ourselves in a small Cretan town. I spoke strictly to the GPS:"We don't want to be here;we want the highway. It instructed me to turn right once more.With every turn the street narrowed.It was like being in a magical shrinking room. We retracted (the side mirrors.We took another turn.The new road was even narrower,and the walls so close; you felt compelled to hold your breath. Another car appeared coming towards us from the opposite direction.The driver gestured,telling me I would have to make way.But how?I didn't have the nerve to back up along the impossibly narrow road. There was a narrow garage opening to one side,a small side street to the other.If I could squeeze the car forward into the garage,I could then back into the side street,allowing the other ear to pass. Locals arrived,standing on various sides of the vehicle,helpfully indicating that I had a centimetre to spare here a millimetre there.There were brick walls on both sides of the car.There was zero chance that I wouldn't damage the vehicle. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 A local stood at the back of the vehicle,waving me on. The other car passed. 亮点再练 词汇积累 ①corporate adj.公司的：法人的②marriag心m.结婚，婚姻③admiration n.钦佩，赞关 ④strictly adv.严格地，严厉地⑤direction n.方向，方位 If I could squeeze the car forward into the garage,I could then back into the side street,allowing the other car to pass. 长难句 分析：本句是复合句。主句为I could then back into the side street:If I could squeeze the car 分析 forward into the garage为条件状语从句；allowing the other car to pass为现在分词作结果 状语 翻译：如果我能把车往前挤进车库，我就能把车倒进小街，让另一辆车通过 18 Week11邀请信&优秀品行类读后续写 (续表) 1.The couple laughed off rumours that their marriage (marry)was in trouble 2.The President told the reporters his remarks were strictly (strict)off the record. 跟踪练习 3.Undoubtedly,with smartphone ownership among students increasing sharply,the smartphones have transformed the way we communicate,making it easier to spread information_.毫无疑间，随若学生 智能手机拥有量的急剧增加，智能手机改变了我们的交流方式，使信息传播变得更加容易 [语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者喜欢驾驶汽车，某天作者在开车的时侯遇到了另一辆车从相反方 向驶来，司机做了个手势，告诉作者必须让路。最终在作者的操作下，成功给对方让了路。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容”一个当地人站在车的后面，挥手让我继续。”可知，第一段可描写作者倒车的经 过。②由第二段首句内容“另一辆车过去了。”可知，第二段可描写司机对作者倒车的反应以及作者的感悟。 [范文] A local stood at the back of the vehicle,waving me on.He was making vigorous "this way,this way" movements with his arms.In an act of blind trust,I followed his instructions,creeping backwards and forwards. The car wriggled deep into the garage one centimeter at a time.Through countless adjustments,finally,the car lay straight in the garage!Then with the instructions of all the locals,turning my head left and right looking back hundreds of times,I backed it into the side street. The other car passed.The driver gave me a grateful wave.In relief,I waved back to her.finding my hands trembling.Tired out and all sweaty,I lay back on the seat,breathed in and out to steady my nerves for a while, then reluctantly sat straight.Jocasta swiveled towards me."You're my hero,"she squeezed my hand as she said.We set off again.I accelerated towards the highway.Who would swap all this for a self-drive car? 高分亮点 高分词汇：①instruction n,指示：用法说明②adjustment n.调整，调节：转变③in relief如释重负：松了口气 ④sweaty adj.浑身出汗的：汗臭的⑤breathe in吸进⑥set off出发 高分句型：（句型1）n an act of blind trust,I followed his instructions,creeping backwards and forwards..(运用现在分 词作伴随状语) 2)Tired out and all sweaty,I lay back on the seat,breathed in and out to steady my nerves for a while,then reluctant山y sat straight.(运用了形容词作伴随状语；不定式作目的状语) Saturday 写作基本功讲练结合 用好亮点词汇提高写作档次讲练结合 一篇高考作文在阅卷时往往在」分钟内就被判定优： -I am more than delighted to know you are interested in 劣，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老 Tang poems. 师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众 A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks 不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会 and our team will take part. 吝啬！ -A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks 一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法 and our team will participate. 1.“语”众不同，避免人云亦云 2.更新换代，避免重复 写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多 达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。 样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同，表达方式迥 The students chosen from every class took part in the competition. 异，也是高级用法。 There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as -.The students selected from every class took part in the competition. different kinds of animals. 2Obviously,blindly following others'advice will affect -There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a our own judgment. variety of animals. -Apparently,blindly following others'advice will affect 2The team will hold many activities,some of which will our own judgment. appeal to you,including many matches. 3I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang -The team will hold a range of activities,some of poems. which will appeal to you,including many matches. 19 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 3.单词与短语巧妙互用 (续表) 一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些 连 therefore 单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以 “一词传神”。 and as well as DQuite a few things caused the traffic problem. DWe'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship -Quite a few things gave rise to the traffic problem. between us. 2We can look at this problem in many ways. -We'll try our best to promote the traditional friendship We can view this problem in many ways.(view look between us. at更有内涌) 2Finally,your child will leave home to lead her own life 4.用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇 as a fully independent adult. DSecond.I am trying my best to get the important -Eventually,your child will leave home to lead her own knowledge and skills concerning my position. life as a fully independent adult. Second,I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position. 跟踪练习 2In my opinion,Internet voting has begun to show its 【,请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中加黑体的部分 negative effects on people and society. 1.As high school students.we should be neatly dressed -In my opinion,Internet voting has begun to show its when at school. negative impacts on people and society are supposed to 二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇 2.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more 普通词汇 亮点词汇 difficult courses. challenging chance opportunity 3.I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions. choice alternative take my suggestions into account 4.Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used idea opinion materials. people individuals came up with 5.We should try to improve ourselves through learning and result consequence prepare for the future. effect influence take pains;get prepared have possess 6.I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation,and I'd like you to help me. develop promote do me a favour/lend me a hand substitute 7.Cinemas have gradually given way to the rise of the 离 replace Internet and cellphones,and the ticket price is bear put up with increasing. consider take into account on the increase/rise 8.When you are bored with the people sometimes,you'd understand make sense of better find a quiet place,listening to some classical enough adequate music. rich abundant fed up with Ⅱ，请用亮点词汇替换下面考生作文中加黑体的部分 difficult challenging Dear Jason, 词 proper appropriate I'm very happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now I'd like to tell you important vital/significant something about my hometown Quanzhou. interesting absorbing/appealing Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its finally eventually economy has been developing fast during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been built,high-rise buildings barely 副 hardly standing in many parts of the city.More and more schools immediately in a flash and hospitals are useful for the native people.It is developing into a modern and beautiful city.But there are nowadays currently still some problems,such as heavy traffic in rush hours and 0 Week11邀请信&优秀品行类读后续写 serious air pollution,which have a bad effect on people's:答案： daily life.I think Quanzhou should develop healthily and 1.very-more than 2.fast-rapidly 3.built-set up scientifically,so that we could have a better hometown in 4.More and more-An increasing number of 5.useful future. available 6.beautiful-charming 7.But-However Yours. 8.serious-severe 9.effect-influence/impact 10.I think Li MingIn my opinion/As far as I am concerned Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 你校近期要举办一场以“Impressive changes around me”为主题的摄影展，请你代表学生会给外教Roy写封邮件邀 请他参加，内容包括：1.时间和地点：2.活动特色：3.你的期待。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Dear Roy, Yours sincerely The Students'Union [范文] Dear Roy, How is it going?I'm writing to invite you to attend a photography exhibition held in our school,whose theme is "Impressive changes around me".Here is some detailed information. The exhibition will last for about three hours in the school hall on Feb.15th.In addition,the exhibition will feature about fifty students'works centering on the ways people live and work in this fast-developing city.You will surely be amazed by the brilliant pictures and thus more familiar with the city. I would be very joyful if you could come.I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, The Students'Union 高分亮点 高分词汇：①exhibition n.展览，展出②detailed ad.详尽的，详细的③information n.消息，资料④feature v. 以…为特色⑤brilliant adj.巧妙的，使人印象深的 高分句型：（句型I)I'm writing to invite you to attend a photography exhibition held in our school,whose theme is “Impressive changes around me”.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句) (句型2)I would be very joyful if you could come.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文 When I left the office for a news assignment that early summer evening,I had absolutely no idea what life held in store for me. As a young photographer,I was on my way back from a photo shoot.I had shot rolls of films featuring beautiful scenery and scenes of daily life in the countryside.What a fulfilling day!Now what I needed was a hot bath and a good rest.I couldn't wait to return home.On the country road,with my camera bag containing my equipment and a phonebook on my back,I rode my motorbike so merrily that all the tiredness disappeared instantly.Suddenly,a big rock hit me from nowhere.All I knew was that I was no longer on my motorbike. I was thrown away from my bike and hit the road.Before I lost consciousness.I saw all my things scattered )my helmet (lying at a distance.Hours,maybe days later,I opened my eyes.I realized I was on a hospital bed and later learnt that I had been shifted to the ward after 7 days in the ICU.The crash was so severe that my head had been injured seriously,leading to other terrible conditions.Although I survived,there were a series of surgeries needed before I could fully recover-a reconstruction of the knees,my broken right wrist to be fixed and an operation on my nose.