Week 7 道歌信&家庭亲情类读后续写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语应用文写作＋读后续写

Week 7 道歉信&家庭亲情类读后续写 Monday 如何写好道歉信 表明写信意图，对某事表示款意 道款信是要向对方陈述自已不当行为给对方造成不利影 道 响的歉意，或者无法答应对方不违常理的所托的原因。 说明道歉的具体原因 信 再次表明款意，请求谅解，并提 出补数措施 典题示例 (2021·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你和英国好友Jm原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。 请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因：2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意1.写作词数80个左右：2.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。 Dear Jim. Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 Step One 审题谋筒 体裁 应用文 时态 第一段和第三段为一般将来时，第二段以一般过去时为主 主题 道歉信 人称 以第一人称为主 结构 第一段：写信目的 第二段：道歉的原因 第三段：再次道歉 Step Two 词汇运用 L.道款，谢罪apologize 5.主办城市host city 2.去远足；去徒步旅行go hiking 6.不便，麻烦inconvenience 3.看病see a doctor 7.缺席，缺勤absence 4.相当多的，不少的quite a few 8.收到某人的来信hear from Step Three句式表达 1.完成句子 (1)我写信是为了向你道款。 I'm writing to apologize to you. (2)这个星期六我不能和你一起去远足了 I won't be able to go hiking with you this Saturday. (3)我昨天早上开始咳嗽。 I began to cough yesterday morning. (4)我去看病了。 I went to see a doctor. (5)她告诉我是重感骨。 She told me it was a bad cold. (6)我将不得不在家里待好几天。 I would have to stay at home for quite a few days. 68 Week7道歉信&家庭亲情类读后续写 (7)我真的很想和你在一起。 I'd really like to spend some time with you. (8)我邀请你下周六去张家口旅行。 I invite you to take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday. (9)张家口是2022年冬奥会的主办城市之一。 Zhangjiakou is one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics. (10)请让我知道你的想法。 Please let me know what you think. (11)再次为我的缺席给你带来的不便表示款意。 Sorry again for any inconvenience which was caused by my absence. (12)希望能尽快收到你的来信。 Hope to hear from you soon. 2.句式升级 (1)用tht引导的宾语从句合并上题中的句子(1)和句子(2)。 I'm writing to apologize to you that I won't be able to go hiking with you this Saturday. (2)用s0引导的并列句合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。 I began to cough yesterday morning,so I went to see a doctor. (3)用s0ht引导的结果状语从句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。 She told me it was a bad cold so that I would have to stay at home for quite a few days. (4)用which引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(8)和句子(9)。 I invite you to take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday,which is one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics. (5)用过去分词短语作后置定语升级上题中的句子(11)。 Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence. Step Four连句成篇 [范文] Dear Jim, I'm writing to apologize to you that I won't be able to go hiking with you this Saturday. I began to cough yesterday morning.so I went to see a doctor.She told me it was a bad cold so that I would have to stay at home for quite a few days.I'd really like to spend some time with you.I invite you to take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday.which is one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics.Please let me know what you think. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua Tuesday满分词汇句式&模板晨诵 晨诵1◆常用词汇及话题句式 常用词汇 awfully可怕地：十分；非常 personal reason个人原因 apology道款 set out开始；出发 convenient方便的，便利的 sincerely由衷地，真诚地 express表达，表露 definitely肯定地，当然 fantastic极好的，非常棒的 compensation赔偿金，补偿金 competition竞争：比赛 schedule安排，预定 postpone推迟，延缓 rearrange重新整理 cancel取消（计划好的事情）：终止 available可用的：有空的，有闲暇的 69 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 6.I want to know if it's convenient for you if we have our 话题句式 course next Wednesday..我想知道我们下周三上课你是 1.I'm awfully sorry that I have to cancel the oral English 否方便。 online course next Monday for my personal reason.7.I have just found that I have to attend an important class 抱歉，由于个人原因，我不得不取消下周一的英语口语 meeting that afternoon.我刚发现那天下午我必须参加一 在线课程。 个重要的班会。 2.I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you 8.I should be available any time after school next week.F on Friday afternoon..很抱款，星期五下午我不能和你一 周放学后我应该随时都有空。 起去书店了。 9.I wish it would be convenient for you to be our judge 3.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.我希： thcn.然后我希望你能方便的话来做我们的裁判。 望这一变动不会给您带来太多的麻烦。 I0.I sincerely hope you can accept my apology..我真诚地希 4.I'm sorry to tell you that the English drama competition 望你能接受我的道款。 scheduled to be held next week has been postponed for 11.Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. some reason.我很抱歉地告诉你，原定于下周举行的英 于给您带来的任何不便，我再次表示款意。 语戏剧比赛由于某种原因被推迟了。 I2.Please stay safe and stay in contact with me,请注意安 5.So I'm dropping you this line to express my sincere 全，并与我保持联系。 apologies..所以我给你写这封信来表达我诚挚的款意。 晨诵2◆背满分模板 Dear Miss White, I'm awfully sorry that I have to cancel the oral English online course next Monday for my personal reason. A friend that I haven't seen for a long time is coming to see me next Monday 模板中黑体字部分是描写 and I'm supposed to meet him at the railway station for it is the first time for him to 道歉时可以通用的部分，其他部 travel to my city.I want to know if it's convenient for you if we have our course 分可以根据写作要求灵活处理。 next Wednesday. 时态往往是一般现在时，文 I sincerely hope you can accept my apology.Once again,I am sorry for 章人称以第一人称为主。 any inconvenience caused. Yours, Li Hua Wednesday 应用文写作跟踪训练 跟踪训练1◆道歉信 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bb约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意： 2.说明原因：3.另约时间。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [范文] Dear Bob, I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out early so that we'll have more time to read and select books.If it's convenient for you,let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should be available any time after school next week. I sincerely hope you can accept my apology. Yours, Li Hua Week7道歉信&家庭亲情类读后续写 高分亮点 高分词汇：①bookstore n.书店②attend,出席，参加③set out开始；出发④convenient adj.方便的，便利的 ⑤available adj,可用的：有空的，有闲暇的⑥sincerely ad.由表地，真诚地 高分句型：（句型1）We can set out early so that we'll have more time to read and select books.(运用了so that引导的 目的状语从句) (句型2)If not,let me know what time suits you best.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略) 跟踪训练2◆道歉信 假如你是李华，不小心弄丢了交换生John借给你的英语小说The Adventures of Tom Sawyer。请根据提示，给他写 一封英文邮件，表达你的歉意。内容包括：1.表示歉意：2.解释原因：3.弥补措施。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [范文] Dear John, I'm really sorry that I've lost the English novel The Adventures of Tom Sawyer you lent me last month.So I'm dropping you this line to express my sincere apologies. The book is definitely excellent!So attracted was I by the fantastic plot that I took it everywhere I went until yesterday.When I got off the subway.I found it nowhere to be found.I immediately contacted the subway service department,hoping to recover it,but in vain.Considering this is your favorite book,I've bought the whole series for you as compensation. Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience coused. Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①express,表达，表露②definitely ad.肯定地，当然③attract,.吸引④fantastic adj.极好的，非常 棒的⑤plotm.情节⑥in vain徒劳无功⑦compensation n.赔偿金，补偿金 高分句型：（句型I)I'm really sorry that I've lost the English novel The Adventures of Tom Sawyer you lent me last month..(运用了that引导的宾语从句和省略that的限剂性定语从句) (句型2)When I got off the subway,I found it nowhere to be found.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句) Thursday 读后续写写作技巧7 精心塑造人物续写高考真题 读后续写的实质是根据原文所提供的情节写出合适的结尾。而这一切最终要落在对人物的塑造上，因为人 物是故事的核心，也是体现文章主旨、表达作者思想的关健。那么，我们该如何在续写中塑造人物呢？ 1.准确理解原文的主旨 尤其是对原文中刻画重点人物的关键细节描述要有准确的把握。所以，要想在续写中准确、合理、精彩地型 造人物，我们首先要读懂原文的人物人设。 2,通过对人物的语言、动作、心理描写来塑造人物 人物的形象展示不是单一的、片面的，而是立体的、多维的。要想塑造完整、鲜活、立体的人物形象，我们就 要通过引用人物的语言、播述人物的特定动作，描述人物的心星活动来全方位进行塑造。因此，我们在续写中塑 造重点人物时，要注意尽量符合重点人物的性格特点和生活背景。 为了更好地分析和展示人物的形象，在写作中，我们也经常使用心理描写。心理描写可以提供语言和动作 不能表达的信息，是塑造人物的重要方法。 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (202l·浙江6月卷)My dad,George,only had an eighth grade education..A quiet man,he didn't understand my world of school activities.From age 14,he worked.And his dad,Albert,took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses. I didn't really understand his world either:He was a livestock trucker,and I thought that I would surpass ( anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation. Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets,hitting a baseball,or throwing a football,preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team.In poor weather,I read about sports or practiced my trombone () The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task,the tractor fired up and we were off,riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals.After a short way.the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and over,but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,lambs-quarters,foxtails,and the king of weeds.the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work,but I looked forward to the pay,even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to. At home,my dad said."A job's a big step to growing up.I'm glad you will be contributing to the household."My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished. My labors lasted about two weeks,and the farmer said there might be more work,but I wasn't interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 The pay day arrived at last. understood immediately what my parents were worried about. 亮点再练 词汇积累 ①education n.教育：培养②expense n.开销：费用accomplish.完成，达成 ④chemical ad,化学的：化学反应的⑤contribute to捐献：促成 It was tiring work,but I looked forward to the pay,even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to. 长难句 分析 分析：本句是并列句。连词but前后为转折关系；在后一个并列句中even though I wasn'tsue how much it would amount to为让步状语从句；其中how much it would amount to为宾语从句。 翻译：这是一项累人的工作，但我期待着薪水，尽管我不确定能得到多少钱。 1.Should architects continue to be trained for five years at public expense (expensive)? 2.I am sure that this meeting will contribute to the reinforcement of peace and security all over the 跟踪练习 world. 3.I always cheer up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties.即使我遇到 了困难，我也总是振作起来，从不停止追求我的日标。 ☆语篇解读 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在 看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲 的故事。 写作步骤 1.人物分析 从以上文章和语篇解读可以看出，原文中作者是很自做也很自私的人。那么在续写中，就要体现这个性格特点。 72 Week7道歉信&家庭亲情类读后续写 2.续写人物塑造 (1)借助感情描写 根据续写所给的第一段首句“The pay day arrived at last.”可知，作者终于领到了工资，那作者会怎样处理这笔钱呢？ 这里的描述就要体现原文中所反映出的作者白私自做的性格特点。本段的描述中，首先要描写作者拿到工资后欣 喜的心情，然后描写原文中所暗示的其比较自私的性格特点。 在描写作者拿到工资时的心情时，可以用delighted,huge sum of money,with great excitement等词汇。为了描述作 者的自傲，可以用For my grand future,I need.,等句式。 本段重点要描写的是作者想起父亲可能会收回他的钱以供家庭使用时的心情。这里，我们可以使用一系列表示失 望的词汇，如heart sank(描述心情)，用这样的词汇来塑造作者最初的形象。 (2)借助正能量词汇描写 当然，正如之前所说，我们一定要准确理解文章的主旨。本文的目的背定不是描述一个自傲又自私的孩子，而是通 过一系列铺垫来反映人性之美、亲情之浓。因此，在下一段，就一定要用积极的、正面的词汇来塑造人物。第二段 的首句“I understood immediately what my parents were worried about."类定了下文的感情基调。续写第二段可以用 大量词汇和句子来描写作者对父母的理解，这些是作者心理转变的关键，如they had been working hard,hardly made ends meet.,they had a big family to feed等。关于作者心理的转变，可以用过渡句，如“Suddenly,I understood my parents and realized what I should do.”。在这一切铺垫完成之后，可以设计一个充满深情的话语表述：“Dad,here is what I got for my work.I hope it will help.”。这样，文章对重点人物的塑造就比较立体。 在第二段的最后，要写出父母看到作者懂事之后的积极感受，让文章得到升华。这样，文章的人物得到了合适的塑 造，而结尾也提升了文章的品质。 根据以上提示整理出答案： 高效临摹衡水体争抢满分作文 The pay day arrived at last.I was delighted to finally get the payment afterI worked hard for two weeks.On the way home I thought about how to make use of the "huge"sum of money with great excitement.But suddenly,I remembered my dad's words.My heart sank immediately.Approaching my house,I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck,looking sad."How much do we still need to pay for a new truck?"asked my mother."Eight hundred dollars.but we had little left. I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.I knew that the truck always broke down.My parents had been considering buuing a new truck. Although they had been working hard,they always hardly made ends meet,mainly because they had a big family to feed.Suddenly.l understood my parents and realized what I should do.I said."Dad,here is what I got for my work.I hope it will help." Delighted at what I did,my mom hugged me tightly.That night,I decided to continue mu work because I learned the true meaning of growing up. Friday 读后续写话题跟踪训练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My ten-year-old self loved summertime.The best part of summer was the community pool.Everyone was there. We didn't have a care in the world.Our biggest concer was which one of us could hold her breath underwater the longest.We didn't care what we looked like or who was cool.I never once thought about how I looked in a swimsuit or if my hair looked good.I was aware that I wasn't super-thin like some of the other girls I saw.but I didn't care. And then one day.I was taking my turn on the diving board with all the other kids.I jumped in,floated freely to the top and swam over to the ladder to make my way out of the pool.I noticed a girl standing at the top of the ladder.so I swam slowly,giving her time to move.I didn't know her.She looked cute and thin. 73 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 But instead of moving,a strange thing happened.This girl leaned over the pool and said to me,"They don't allow beached(搁浅的)whales in this pool..” Beached whales?I soon realized that I was the beached whale.Suddenly,my cool blue swimsuit didn't cover enough. I got out of the pool quickly and wrapped my towel around my body,feeling like I was going to throw up.From that moment on,I was aware of my size. Clothes became a horrible dream,and I struggled through my teen years and into adulthood.I cried over clothes that didn't fit.My heart had always hated the little girl by the pool.who took the confidence out of my life until I got my daughter,Lisa. One day I dressed my little girl in beautiful clothes and put a bow (on her head,but she refused because she liked to be comfortable.Is society interested in comfort?However,when I stared at her,I suddenly realized how beautiful she was,even though she was covered in mud. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 When Lisa was ten,I came across a picture of myself when I was ten and I showed it to her Then I told her the story of the little girl by the pool. 亮点再练 词汇积累 ①aware adj.知道的②instead of(用…)代替·，（是…）而不是…③freely ad.自由地，自愿地④wrap.包，裹；用绕住⑤confidence n.信赖，自信 My heart had always hated the little girl by the pool.who took the confidence out of my life until I got my daughter,Lisa. 长难句 分析：本句是复合句。主句为My heart had always hated the little girl by the pool:who took the 分析 confidence out of my life为非限制性定语_从句；until I got my daughter,.Lisa为时间状语 从句。 翻译：我内心一直很讨厌泳池边的那个小女孩，是她夺走了我生活中的自信，直到我有了女儿Ls。 1.Harry had carefully bought and wrapped (wrap)presents for Mark to give them. 2.After watching the shows,you will definitely feel the charm of Chinese Kung Fu and I have the 跟踪练习 confidence (confident)that you will be fond of it. 3.Mrs Smith.who has a lot of teaching experience at junior level,will be joining the school in September.史密斯太太将在九月份加盟这所学校，她在初级教育方面颇有经验。 [语篇解读]本文以人物为线崇展开，讲述了作者小时候在泳池边游泳，被同龄的女孩喻笑身型过脖，由此失去自信 的故事。但所有的政变都来自作者的小女儿。她让作者明白生活不是用衣服的大小来衡量的，不是由他人的眼光所 决定的，而是由自己决定的。 [段落续写]①由第一段首句内容“Ls十岁的时候，我偶然看到自己十岁时的一张照片，就拿给她看。”可知，第一 段可描写女儿Ls看到自已的照片后的反应，以及给作者带来的积极影响。②由第二段首句内容“然后我给她讲了 泳池边那个小女孩的故事。”可知，第二段可描写女儿听完后的反应，小女儿对作者的安慰，以及作者自身的感悟。 [范文] When Lisa was ten,I came across a picture of myself when I was ten and I showed it to her."That's me!"she said with a smile.But I shook my head.We could have been twins.Yes,she looked just like me,and I thought she was a beautiful and smart girl,full of confidence.What a pity I had missed myself.The fat little girl in the photo looked at me,as if she was reminding me that I was not a beached whale,but a beautiful little girl with dreams and gifts.Something started to stir in my mind. 74 Week7道歉信&家庭亲情类读后续写 Then I told her the story of the little girl by the pool.After hearing my story.Lisa was a bit confused about my life's being shaped because of a hateful little girl's words.But I explained quickly that I had already forgiven her.Anyhow,that was life,and you must find yourself once again.With this,Lisa smiled at me,"Oh,it seems that I'm a really lucky daughter,because I have a beautiful good mother.Time to swim now!"Watching her lively figure going away,I strongly believed that life is not measured by the size of our clothes but by who we are. 高分亮点 高分词汇：①smart adj.聪明的：敏捷的②be full of充满·③confused adj.糊涂的：难懂的④hateful adj.可 恶的，十分讨厌的⑤strongly ad血.强烈地：坚强地 高分句型：（句型I)The fat little girl in the photo looked at me,as if she was reminding me that I was not a beached whale,but a beautiful little girl with dreams and gifts.(运用了asif引导的方式状语从句；that引导的宾语从句) (2)After hearing my story,Lisa was a bit confused about my life's being shaped because of a hateful little girl's wods.(运用了时间状语从句的省略) Saturday 写作基本功讲练结合 英语三大从句讲练结合 复合句可划分为状语从句、定语从句和名词性从句 它对跟中国有关的任何东西都狂热的人一直都有吸 三大类，而名词性从句又分为主语从句、宾语从句，表语引力。 从句和同位语从句。 3 The film is mainly related to the development of our 一、条理分明的状语从句 school.which will greatly help us students know the 状语从句主要包括时间、地点、条件，原因、让步、比 school's history better and appeal to us to make 较、方式，目的和结果九类从句。在英语写作中，状语从 contributions to our school's development. 句是经常用到的句型，它的灵活运用使作文更具吸引力。 这部影片主要与我们学校的发展有关联，它不仅很 DFirst of all,you'd better arrive on time because it is 大程度上帮助我们学生更好地了解学校的历史，也呼吁 polite to be punctual in China 我们要为学校的发展做出贡献。 首先，你最好按时到达，因为在中国守时是礼貌的 4As we all know,most of the ratings are based on 行为。 others'judgment on the product or service concerned. 2If you want to apply for membership.you are 我们大家都知道，大部分排名是基于其他人对有关 required to fill in the application form and send an e-mail to产品和服务的评价。 pingpong@123.com. 5We are to meet on Sunday moming in the People's 如果你想申请成为会员，就需要填个表格并发送到Park,where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.. pingpong@123.com 我们打算周日上午在人民公园会面，那里空气清新、 3Whenever I encounter difficulties,you always 风景优美。 cheer me up and help me out. 在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个 无论我何时遇到困难，你总是使我振作起来，帮助我 定语从句，就是从低级到高级的转换。 摆脱困境。 DWhat's more,years of being monitor makes me a 4When I came back home.I shared my experiences brilliant organizer.and it will help a lot to keep the with my parents. exhibition in order. 我回家后，和父母分享了我的经历。 -What's more,years of being monitor makes me a 二、润色添彩的定语从句 brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the 定语从句能够比较清楚地反映出考生对于语言较高 exhibition in order. 的掌握能力，所以建议考生一定要在写作中至少使用一 2 During holiday seasons,I will live in the 个恰到好处的定语从句。 countryside.In the countryside air is fresh and people are (DDuring the coming-of-age ceremony,the headmaster friendly. congratulated us on stepping into the adult,reviewing the -During holiday seasons.I will live in the growth period that we had experienced. countryside,where air is fresh and people are friendly. 在成人礼仪式上，校长向我们迈入成人阶段表示祝 三、丰富多样的名词性从句 贺，回顾了我们成长的经历。 名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同 2It has always been an attraction for those who are 位语从句，是写作中常见的高级表达方式 keen on anything that is Chinese. 启航演语高考英语应用文写作+读后续写 ①Through the activity,what I felt is that I am able to:2.我们都知道，当我们需要帮助时，我们的朋友会伸出援 shoulder the responsibility and it makes us stronger and more 手，帮我们被过难关。 determined. As we all know,our friends lend us a helping hand 通过此次活动，我感到我能够承担贵任了，这使我们 when we need help and they help us get through difficult 更加坚强、更加坚定。 situations. ②is known that we can benefit a lot from playing3.使我印象最深的是他们都经过了专业培训。 ping pong. What impressed me most was that they had had 众所周知，我们可以从打乒兵球中获益匪浅。 professional training. ③I hope the change will not cause you too much4.我想知道你能否给我提供一些如何交朋友的建议。 trouble. I wonder if/whether you can give me some advice on 我希望这种改变不会给你带来太多麻烦。 how to make friends. ④To practise as much as possible is where the secret5.每当见到有人需要帮助，我就会尽力去帮助他 lies Whenever I see someone in need,I will spare no 尽可能多地练习就是秘密之所在。 efforts to help him. 5I hold the opinion that we should go to help them Ⅱ，利用从句，结合中文提示补全短文 (to)overcome the present difficulty. Dear David. 我认为，我们应该去帮助他们克服目前的困难。 I'm writing to express my grateful feeling to you.Thank 在写作中如果我们能够把两个简单句合并为一个 you for inviting me to your birthday party last week, 含有名词性从句的复合句，对写作是一种质的升华。 I.which brought me lots of entertainment_(它给我带 DHe said a lot at the meeting.His words were very 来了很多快乐). attractive. During the party,2.what attracted me most(吸引 -What he said at the meeting was very attractive. 我最深的)was your happy family.Both your parents were 2Our women volleyball team had won the enthusiastic over me.I really enjoyed it 3.because it made championship.The news encouraged us all greatly. me feel at home(因为它使我感到非常轻松自在).The -The news that our women volleyball team had dessert and other snacks 4.(that you offered us won the championship encouraged us all greatly. 提供给我们的)were tasty.In addition,the light music and candle light created a nice and warm atmosphere,5.in 跟踪练习 which I was able to open my heart to your other friends I,用三大从句完成句子 (在这种氛围中，我能够向你的其他朋友散开心扉). 1.我最大的爱好是读书看报，这已经成为我日常生活中 Thanks again for your dinner.I am sure 6.(that)the 不可或缺的一部分。 unforgettable experience will be stored in my heart forever My favourite hobby is reading books and newspapers, (这次难忘的经历会永远储藏在我的心中) which has become a necessary part of my daily life Yours, Li Hua Sunday 周末跟踪提分训练 第一节◆应用文写作 假定你是校英语话剧社社长李华，原定于下周举行的英语话剧表演赛因故推迟，请给担任评委的外教Katherine 写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意：2.推迟原因：3.后续调整。 注意1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 [范文] Dear Katherine, How are things going with you these days?I'm sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed for some reason. The school stadium,where the competition is to be held,is not available for use for some days due to essential maintemance.Thus,we've made a decision to reschedule it for next month when the maintenance work will be completed and the stadium will be ready for us.We'll let you know the exact time then.I wish it 76 Week7道歉信&家庭亲情类读后续写 would be convenient for you to be our judge.Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconvenience caused. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 高分亮点 高分词汇：①drama n.剧本，戏剧②competition n.竞争：比赛③schedule.安排，预定( ④postpone.推迟，延缓 ⑤essential ad.极其重要的；必不可少的 高分句型：（句型I)I'm sorry to tell you that the English drama competition scheduled to be held next week has been postponed for some reason.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) (2)The school stadium,where the competition is to be held,is not available for use for some days due to essential maintenance.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句) 第二节◆读后续写 阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Tom's family was a small family on the coastal line of a small village.Tom was 11 years old.He was tall,dark and handsome and had a lot of dreams.He had always dreamt of living in a city.He was always his dad's charm,as he was not quite happy to spend time with his mom.All he could remember about his mom was her scars,red and white scars on her face,neck and hands.He always felt unpleasant to see his mom's face.But what he did not know was that his mom scratched her beauty to save him from a fire when he was one year old.Not wanting to burden him with it,Tom's parents kept it a secret. His mom Maria used to drop him to school and pick him up every day.He felt awkward to see his mom with that scarred face standing in front of the school gate.As he was laughing and chatting with his fellow schoolmates,all of them became silent and started staring at the gate.So.Tom turned towards the gate with a lot of curiosity.He froze when seeing his mom,face covered with a piece of cloth.Tom felt ashamed and rushed out of the school with lots of anger. With days passing by.Tom started to dislike his mom more.He did not like to get picked up or dropped by his mom. He felt that she was ugly and so abnormal.As he grew old,he stopped going out with her to the market or anywhere outside.Maria tried her best to make her son happy,got him everything that he wanted and gave him his space.She understood what her son was going through and felt pity for herself and sad for her son.as she was helpless. When Tom turned 16.he was sent to a city high school 80 kilometers away from his coastal village.The very thought of not being with his ugly mother made him very happy. Three years later,then came Tom's graduation ceremony.His parents didn't want to be absent from such an important occasion,so they managed to be there without informing Tom. 注意1.续写词数应为150个左右：2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。 Tom was shocked when he saw his parents appear at the ceremony hall. Hesitating for a moment,Tom's father told him everything that happened many years ago. 亮点再练 词汇积累 ①coastal adj.近海的，沿海的②unpleasant adj.令人不快的，不舒服的③curiosity n.好奇心，求知欲④burden以.烦扰，使负重担⑤abnormal ad.反常的，异常的 But what he did not know was that his mom scratched her beauty to save him from a fire when he was one year old. 长难句 分析：本句是复合句。what he did not know为主语从句：that his mom seratched her beauty to 分析 save him from a fire为表语从句：when he was one year old为、时间状语从句。 翻译：但他不知道的是，在他一岁的时候，他的妈妈为了把他从一场火灾中救出来而毁坏了她的 关貌