一、如何使句子出彩（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第五章 读后续写的写作策略 ※一，如何使句子出彩 由于受到中文思维的影响，很多同学在写句子的时候习惯以人称开头，通篇下来都是“He.,·:L.,·:The man.,” 等等，这样显得枯燥乏味。事实上，只要有意识地改写句子，尝试以多种方式开头，就能够使得表达更加灵活，重点更 加突出。 1,形容词或副词开头 用作修饰主语状态的形容词、用作修饰动作的副词，以及用作修饰整个句子的刷词，都可以放在句首，以突出该 形容词或碍词所传达的信息。 Quietly,I departed.悄悄地，我离开了。 Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the woods..顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。 Desperate and helpless,Anne knelt down.感到绝望而无助，安妮跪了下来。 Weak as she was,Jane struggled to her feet,continuing to seek help.尽管虚弱，简还是挣扎者站了起来，继续求助。 2.分词开头 句子开头以doing或done作状语，代替表示原因、时间、方式等的状语从句，能够使得句子简洁而灵动。 Making the best of this encounter,I took some pictures of the bear.为了充分利用这次邂逅，我给熊拍了一些 照片。 Falling in despair,Jane felt exhausted and overwhelmed.简陷入绝望，感到筋疲力尽，不知所措。 Bursting into tears,she threw herself into Tom's arms the moment she saw him.她一见到汤姆就泪流满面，扑到他 的怀里。 Thrilled yet relieved,we grabbed the rope and eventually landed on the helicopter safe and sound.我们激动而又松了 一口气，抓住绳子，最终安然无恙地降落在直升机上。 3.动词不定式开头 位于句首的动词不定式通常作主语或者目的状语。在读后续写当中，以动词不定式开头的句子通常是为了强调 日的状语，可以用in order to替代。 To save the child,he laid down his life.(=In order to save the child,he laid.down his life.)为了救那个孩子，他 献出了生命。 To get there on time,we hurriedly packed the car.(=In order to get there on time,we hurriedly packed the car. 为了准时到达，我们匆忙地装车。 4.介词开头 句子开头可以使用表示地点，时间、原因等带有介词的短语，如as a result:just at that moment:on my way back等。 在描述性的文字当中，以下三个普遍使用的结构值得同学们牢记 (1)Wth/Without-+宾语(+宾语补足语)，表示“伴随着；有者…；没有.”等。 Without saying a word,the man picked Kim up off the scooter and calmly stepped away.那人一言不发，把Kim从 托车上扶起来，然后平静地走开了。 (2)To one's+名词，表示“让某人…的是.” To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea,让我们如释重负的是，爸爸拒绝了这个主意。 To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest..让她吃惊的是，她看到的只有森林。 (3)m+名词，表示“…地”。 In relief,they found their way out finally.他们终于如释重负地找到了出路。 In delight,they entered the room,singing and dancing.他们高兴地唱着跳着进人房间。 5.倒装句 在英语中，有时候为了强调某些信息、平衡句子结构、使上下文衔接更紧密，会使用一些语序不正常的句子，我们 称之为倒装句。正常的句子语序应该是主语位于谓语之前。而倒装句则根据“不正常”的情况分为完全倒装和部分 倒装。 Out rushed the boys.(=The boys rushed out.)男孩们冲了出去 By the window sat a young man with a book in his hand.(=A young man sat by the window with a book in his hnd.)靠窗坐若一个手里拿着一本书的年轻人 Buried in the sands was a golden box..(=A golden box was buried in the sands.)埋在沙滩上的是一个金盒子。 31 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 Standing beside the table was his wife.(=His wife was standing beside the table.)站在餐桌旁的是他的妻子。 Little did he know the importance of this appointment.(=He knew little about the importance of this appointment.) 他对这项任命的重要性知之甚少。 Only then did I realize how important he was to me.(=I didn't realize how important he was to me only then. 那时我才意识到他对我有多重要。 Not only did she speak English.but she also spoke French.(She not only spoke English.but also French. 会说英语，而且还会说法语。 So cold was it that we had to stay at home,(=It was so cold that we had to stay at home..)天气太冷了，我们不得不 待在家里。 Not until then did I realize what kind of trouble I was in.(=I didn't realize what kind of trouble I was in until then. 直到那时我才意识到我陷入了什么样的麻烦。 Exhausted as/though he was,he didn't give up.(=Although/Though he was exhausted,he didn't give up. 筋疲力尽，但他没有放弃。 No sooner had she rushed out of house than tears of regret rolled down her cheeks.(=Hardly had she rushed out of house when tears of regret rolled down her cheeks.=As soon as she rushed out of the house,tears of regret rolled down her cheeks..)她一冲出家门，悔根的泪水就从她的脸颊上滚落下来 He doesn't enjoy being alone.Neither do I.(=He doesn't enjoy being alone.I didn't enjoy being alone,either. 喜欢独处，我也不喜欢。 Had you come earlier,you might have witnessed everything.(=If you had come earlier,you might have witnessed everything,.)如果你早点来，你可能会目睹一切。 牛刀小试 一、把下列句子改写成以形容词或副词开头的句子。 1.Jim carefully stepped over all the broken glass. Carefully.Jim stepped over all the broken glass. 2.Arthur skipped up the street joyfully. Joyfully,Arthur skipped up the street. 3.Tom was curious to know what was inside,so he tiptoed into the dark cave. Curious to know what was inside,Tom tiptoed into the dark cave. 4.Ben was unable to say a word and was rooted to the spot. Unable to say a word,Ben was rooted to the spot. 5.I was hungry and exhausted,and I wondered if we could find our way back. Hungry and exhausted,I wondered if we could find our way back. 二、把下列句子改写或翻译成以分词开头的句子。 1.After he looked around cautiously,Jim slipped into the room and softly closed the door. Looking around cautiously,Jim slipped into the room and softly closed the door. 2.While he was walking along the sands towards his boat,Simon saw the mark of a man's foot in the sand. Walking along the sands towards his boat,Simon saw the mark of a man's foot in the sand. 3.As he was surrounded by a group of young people,the old man felt pleased. Surrounded by a group of young people,the old man felt pleased. 4.As we were faced with this situation,we had to turn to strangers for help. Faced with this situation,we had to tum to strangers for help. 5.听到这个消息的时候，他们高兴得跳了起来。 Hearing the news,they all jumped with joy. 6.他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准狮子就射击了。 Walking slowly across the grass,he pointed the gun at the lion and fired. 7.当被问到发生了什么事情的时候，他垂下了头。 Asked what had happened,he lowered his head. 8.那个女孩陷人了沉思，没有注意到危险正在靠近。 Lost in thought,the girl didn't notice the approaching danger. 32 第五章读后续写的写作策略 三、把下列句子翻译成以动词不定式开头的句子。 1.为了避免尴尬，她梢悄转身，离开现场。 To avoid embarrassment.she turned around and left the scene quietly. =In order to avoid embarrassment,she turned around and left the scene quietly. 2.为了满足他的好奇心，他溜进了房间并轻轻关上了门。 To satisfy his curiosity.he slipped into the room and softly closed the door. =In order to satisfy his curiosity,he slipped into the room and softly closed the door. 四、用介词结构为开头，翻译下列句子。 1.眼里着泪水，简(Jane)抬头看着她的丈夫。 With tears in her eyes,Jane looked up to her husband. 2.那个瘦小的小伙子毫不犹豫地跳进冰冷湍急的河水中」 Without hesitation,the thin and small young man threw himself into the cold and swift river. 3.让她非常高兴的是，直升机注意到她并且着陆。 To her great joy,the helicopter noticed her and landed. 4.他们惊讶地睁着眼睛看结果。 In surprise,they kept their eyes wide open to read the result. 五、用倒装句翻译下列句子。 1.她一生中从来没有吃过比这更好的东西。 Never in her life had she tasted anything better. 2.我们一露面，狗就跑走了。 No sooner had we turned up than the dog ran off. Hardly/Scarcely had we turned up when the dog ran off. 3.虽然他很疲惫，但是他坚持要把工作完成 Tired as/though he was,he insisted on finishing the work. 4.我几乎没有意识到那天会发生一些异常的事情。 Little did I realize something different would happen that day. 5.直到那时，我才意识到，尽管乔(Jo)在做家务方面有困难，但是他还是懂得如何照顾我。 Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework. 6.他是如此绝望和无助，以至于跪了下来。 So desperate and helpless was he that he felt on his knees. 7.她几乎不知道的是，家里的一个朋友已经联系该组织了。 Little did she know that a family friend had already reached out to the organization. 8.她做梦也没想到自己会遇到这么大的麻烦。 Never in her wildest dream had she thought that she would run into such serious trouble. 懿二、如何正确使用修辞邀 在读后续写中适当使用修辞手法，能够突出所描写事物的特点，增强感染力和语言的生动性，丰富句子含义，给 人留下深刻印象。下面介绍四种常用且相对容易掌握的修辞手法。 1.明喻(simile),是将抽象事物具体化，复杂情况简单化，给文字增加画面感。明喻常用as,ike、asif,as though similar to、sem等词语指出两种不同事物的共同特征。基本形式是“甲像乙”，即“本体+比喻词+喻体”。以下是三种 常见的明喻结构。 类型 例句 s或者as.,as作比喻词 I reached out to touch her face,which was as cold as the ice.我仲手去摸她的脸，那张像 冰一样冷的脸。 Iike作比喻词 The icy wind started howling,cutting my face like a sharp knife.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利 的小刀一样刺痛我的脸。 asif作比喻词 Her hair grew grayer and grayer,as if it were covered with snow and frost.她的头发越 来越白了，仿佛盖了一头霜雪。 133