微技巧2 外貌描写（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第二章 写作微技巧 7.泪水噙满我的双眼，顺着脸颊流了下来。 My eyes filled with tears which ran down my cheeks. 8.杰克迎面冲向她，眼里闪着自豪和兴奋的光芒。 Jack rushed up to her,eyes shining/sparking/sparkling/glistening/glowing with pride and excitement. 9.她盯着家庭相册，想起了和祖父母住在一起时的快乐时光 With her eyes fixed on the family album.she thought of the fun she had when she lived with her grandparents.(She stared at the family album and remembered the happy time she had when she lived with her grandparents. 10.她低下头想掩饰她的羡慕。 She hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed her head to hide her admiration. 11.他正要伸手抓我。 He was reaching out his hand to catch me.(He was about to stretch out his hand to grab me. 12.如果时间允许，你可以站起来到走廊走一会儿，仲仲胳脚，踢踢腿。 If time permits,you can stand up and walk in the hallway for a while to stretch your arms and kick your legs.(Time permitting,you can stand up and walk in the hallway for a while to stretch your arms and kick your legs. 13.他看到一个小男孩踮着脚按门铃。 He saw a little boy ringing a doorbell on tiptoes. 14.他突然笑了笑，这让她双膝发软。 His sudden smile made her go weak at the knees. 15.他一想到飞行就浑身冒汗。 He broke out in a sweat when he thought of flying.(He broke out in a sweat just at the thought of flying. 16.母亲因为害怕我们走丢，不准我们逛太远。 Because Mother was afraid we would get lost,we weren't allowed to wander far.(Mother forbade us to wander far for fear that we might get lost. 17.卡拉躺在沙发上，一边看电视，一边抚摸着她的猫。 Carla lay on the sofa.watching TV and petting her cat. 18.我试着跺脚想暖和暖和。 I tried stamping my feet to keep warm. 19.有时候这只狗会在深夜偷偷溜出家去陪伴它的朋友。 Sometimes the dog would sneak out of the house late at night to be with his friends.(Sometimes the dog would sneak out of the house late at night to keep his friends company. 20.看着这对上年纪的夫妻手拉手走在沙滩上，我有一种幸福的感觉 Watching the old couple walking along the beach hand in hand gives me a sense of happiness. 微技巧二外貌描写 外貌描写是通过对人物的体貌（包括长相、穿戴、体态等）特征进行写作，这样做可以丰富人物形象，展示出人物 的个性、思想、品质。不同的人设可以帮助读者理解不同人物的行为和心理，推进情节的发展，这对于写作是很有帮 助的。 ※一、如何描写身体的部位 常用词汇归纳 pigtail辫子：crew cut平头；bangs刘海 头 wavy波浪的：shoulder-length齐肩的：shiny有光泽的：smooth光滑的：sof柔软的：silken柔软的：hick浓 密的；fair金发的；jet-black乌黑发亮的 眉毛 heavy/thick浓密的：raised扬起的：thin稀疏的：questioning疑惑的 sparkling亮晶晶的：bright明亮的；sharp锐利的；decp-set深陷的：深邃的；expressive富有表现力的： 眼睛 humorous滑稽的；greed少y贪婪的：black-ringed有黑眼圈的：watery水汪汪的：shortsighted/nearsighted近 视的 035 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 续表 耳朵 sharp/quick灵敏的：pointed/.pointy尖的 鼻子 narrow窄的；lat扁平的；pointed尖尖的；straight挺直的 嘴部 even/regular/straight整齐的：dry干的：wide大的；irregular不整齐的 手 delicate纤细的：精致的：rough粗糙的：beautiful/pretty漂亮的：dirty脏的；long-fingered手指长的：sticky 黏黏的 经典句子 1.Bethan has long fair hair. 贝森有一头金色长发。 2.He has wonderfully expressive eyes. 他有一双会说话的眼睛。 3.Charles has a pair of sharp ears. 查理有一双灵敏的耳朵。 4.Her teeth were perfectly straight. 她的牙齿非常整齐。 5.Dave was tall and handsome with smooth hair and a deep voice although his facial expression never changed. 戴夫虽然总是面无表情，但是个子高大，相貌英俊，头发平整，声音低沉浑厚。 6.Wilson has a pair of sparkling eyes under heavy eyebrows. 威尔逊的浓眉下面长着一对炯炯有神的眼睛。 7.Heidi saw his bright eyes looking up at her in gratefulness 海蒂看到他明亮的眼睛充满感激地注视者她。 8.She is so nearsighted that she can just see the things put before her eyes. 她的眼睛近视得厉害，东西放到眼睛跟前才能看清。 9.Nothing can escape his quick ears. 没有什么能逃过他灵敏的耳朵。 10.The narrow nose and thin lips gave his face a very serious look. 窄窄的鼻子和薄薄的嘴屑使他的脸显得非常严肃。 11.The cute dog pushed its wet nose into my palm. 这只可爱的狗用它湿湿的鼻头蹭我的手心。 12.He suffered from a runny nose,streaming eyes and a slight cough these days. 这些天他流鼻涕，流眼泪，还有轻微的咳嗽。 13.Vivian smiled,showing her white and even teeth. 薇薇安微微一笑，露出了洁白整齐的牙齿。 14.The farmer's hands were rough with hand work. 这个农民常干手工活，手很粗糙。 15.That lady has delicate hands. 那位女士双手纤细。 ※二、如何进行面部描写 常用词汇归纳 wrinkle皱纹：scar伤痕 面部描写词汇 ound圆的：pale苍白的；rosy红润的：calm平静的：clear无瑕的；sunburnt晒伤的；晒得很黑的： expressionless面无表情的：plain相貌平平的：无姿色的：homely相貌平平的；good-looking好看 的；charming迷人的：可爱的；handsome(男子)英俊的：attractive俊朗的：迷人的 036 第二章写作微技巧 经典句子 1.Her face was covered with wrinkles. 她的脸上布满了皱纹。 2.The baby has a lovely round face 这个婴儿的脸圆圆的真可爱。 3.She was young with a fair,calm face. 她年纪尚轻，满脸的恬静。 4.Her fair skin on the face stood out in the sun. 她白皙的脸庞在阳光下格外显眼。 5.Isabel's round,rosy face seemed hardly to have aged at all. 伊莎贝尔那张红润的圆脸看上去几乎一点儿也没有变老。 6.The girl looked up at him with a smile.A soft pink flared in her cheek,and her eyes were kind and frank. 女孩拾起头，面带微笑地看着他，脸颊泛出淡淡红晕，眼里流露着温柔和坦诚。 7.A large scar marked his cheek. 他的面颊上有一大块疤。 8.She could not bear the touch of clothing on her sunburnt face. 她无法忍受衣服磨蹭自己被太阳晒伤的脸。 9.She is a shy,rather plain girl. 她是一个害羞、相貌平平的女孩。 10.That man was homely,overweight,and probably only two or three years younger than me. 那个男子相貌平平，身材肥胖，可能只比我年轻两三岁。 11.He is charming when he smiles. 他笑起来很有魅力。 12.He used to be described as "tall,dark and handsome". 他曾被描述为“高大黝黑、相貌堂堂”。 13.I thought she was very attractive and obviously very intelligent. 我认为她很有魅力，而且显然也很聪明。 ※三、如何精准表达年龄※ 常用词汇归纳 会暴露年龄的称呼 baby攀儿：boy男孩：girl女孩：man男人：woman女人：the elderly老人：the senior长者/前 辈：the young年轻人 岁数表达 10-year-old/'at the age of10/aged1010岁；middle-agcd中年的：in one's thirties三十多岁 其他词汇 young/youthful年纪小的：middle-aged中年的：elderly/advanced上了年纪的：grown-up成熟 的：成年的 经典句子 1.He was so young,so unworldly. 他那样年轻，那样不谙世事。 2.They are all children under five years old. 他们都是不满五岁的孩子。 3.He is going on eighteen years old. 他快满18岁了。 4.Miss Martha,aged 40,kept a little bakery on the comer. 玛莎小姐四十岁.在街角开了一家小面包店 5.Jenny was a pretty girl in her early twenties. 珍妮是一个二十岁出头的漂亮姑娘。 6.He was a youth eighteen or nineteen years of age 他是一个十八、九岁的小青年。 037 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 7.His audience was mostly middle-aged ladies. 他的听众主要是中年女性。 8.They have two grown-up children. 他们有两个成年的孩子。 9.He is five months off nineteen. 他差5个月就满19岁了。 10.The baby is two months past two years old. 那个孩子两岁零两个月。 11.Martin was now fourteen,broad and strong,and tall for his age. 马丁现在十四岁了，身材魁梧，在他这个年纪算得上高大。 12.White was a frail-looking,pale-faced boy,fifteen years of age and about four feet nine inches in height. 怀特是一个身体虚弱、脸色苍白的男孩，十五岁，身高大约四英尺九英寸。 ※四、如何准确表达长相测 常用词汇归纳 单词 短语 prey漂亮的；attractive有魅力的：handsome(男)英俊的：cute可 爱的：good-looking外表好看的：average普通的：plain相貌平平 with keen eyes有一双敏锐的眼睛；a flat nose扁 的：ugly丑的：baby-faced娃娃脸的；round-faced圆脸的：thin 平的鼻子；a straight nose笔直的鼻子；a pointed faced瘦脸的：fresh--faced面带稚气的：clean-shaved剃光胡须的： chin尖下巴：a broad forehead大w额头：a blank wrinkled有皱纹的：sunburned晒黑的：rosy-cheeked面色红润的： expression/Iook茫然的表情/神色：with long hair pale面色苍白的：dark-skinned深肤色的：long-haired长发的： reaching the waist长发及腰的：have delicate looks shoulder-length及肩的；curly hair卷发的：bald秃顶的：sharp 眉清日秀 cycd目光敏锐的：wide-eyed眼睛睁得大大的 经典句子 1.Looking at his weather-worn face,I was surprised. 看到他饱经风霜的脸，我吃惊不小。 2.His friend Mr.Darcy soon drew the attention of the room by his fine,tall person,handsome features,noble manner. 他的朋友达西先生立刻引起全场的注意，因为他身材魁伟，眉清日秀，举止高贵。 3.She looked around and found a strange-looking man at a table not far from her looking at her and Jane from time to time. 她环顾四周，发现一个长相奇怪的男人坐在离她不远的桌子旁，不时地看着她和简。 4.The light showed a pale.square-jawed face with keen eyes,and a little white scar near his left eyebrow 在灯光下，他露出一张苍白的方下巴的脸，一双锐利的眼睛，左边眉毛附近有一块小小的白色伤疤。 5.He is a fine young man,about 25 years old,tall and well-built,with a kind face and a nice smile. 他是一个很好的年轻人，大约25岁，身材高大健壮，憨厚的脸上带若善意的微笑 6.He had a brown skin,black hair,bright eyes and strong white teeth. 他生着棕色皮肤、黑头发、明亮的眼睛和洁白的牙齿。 7.His eyes are deep-set because he has worked till midnight for a long time. 他的眼睛深陷，因为他这段时间经常工作到深夜。 8.Even a plain Jane can live a wonderful life. 即使相貌平平的普通女生也可以拥有精彩的人生。 9.A child is so little,with his face round and full,orange-red hair like froth on the top of his head. 一个孩子是如此的小，他的脸圆圆的，满满的，橙红色的头发像泡沫在他的头顶。 10.He was a comely,handsome fellow,perfectly well made,with straight strong limbs,not too large,tall and well- shaped. 他是一个清秀、英俊的家伙，身材匀称，四肢笔直有力，不太大，身材高大，体型匀称。 38 第二章 写作微技巧 懿五、如何表达微笑和声音蕊 常用词汇归纳 a bright smile快活的微笑；a broad smile开朗的微笑；a charming smile迷人的微笑；a happy smile幸福的 微笑 微笑；a pleasant smile愉快的微笑；a sweet smile甜蜜的微笑；a pleased smile满意的微笑；an innocent smile天真的微笑；a kindly smile和离的微笑 a clear voice清晰的嗓音；a ringing voice响亮的嗓音；a loud voice洪亮的嗓音；a deep voice低沉的嗓音： 声音 a soft voice温柔的嗓音：a sweet voice甜美的嗓音：a thin voice尖细的嗓音：a fine voice美妙的嗓音：a pleasant voice悦耳动听的嗓音 经典句子 1.I was shy and had trouble making friends.But Susan drew me out.She was one of the friendliest people in school,with shiny black hair and a mile-wide smile. 我很害羞，很难交到朋友，但是苏珊感化了我。她是学校里最友好的人之一，一头乌黑发亮的头发，笑容满面。 2.My thinking was interrupted by a sweet female voice,"Hi,I'm Jennifer." 我的思绪被一个甜美的女声打断了：“晦，我是珍妮弗。” 3.A friendly smile will help you to win other people's heart. 友好的笑容能帮助你赢得别人的心。 4.Never think hard about past.It brings tears...Don't think more about future.It brings fears...Live this moment with a smile.It brings cheers. 不要太想念过去，因它会给你带来悲伤：不要太思考未来，因它会带给你恐惧；用微笑活在当下，它会带来喜乐。 5.There's nothing more beautiful than a smile that struggles through tears 世上最美的，莫过于从泪水中挣脱出来的那个微笑。 6.Though he was tiny,he had a very loud voice. 虽然他个头很小，嗓门却很大。 ※六、如何表达整体衣着 常用词汇归纳 well-dressed衣着华丽的，穿着考究的：neat仪容整洁的；untidy不整洁的：elegant优雅的；formal正式的： casual随便的；tailored定制的：loose宽松的：tight-fitting紧身的；poorly-dressed衣着寒酸的；tidy整洁的： 衣着 elegant优雅的：fashionable时髦的；casual休闲的；便装的：sensibly实用地，合时宜 in rags衣衫褴楼的 经典句子 1.She is wearing a neat black suit. 她穿者整洁的黑色礼服。 2.Patricia always dresses elegantly and tidily 帕特丽夏总是穿着优雅整洁。 3.My son's terribly untidy:my old daughter's no different. 我儿子邋遢极了，大女儿也不比他强。 4.Old as she is,she's always well-dressed. 尽管上了年纪，她也总是衣着讲究。 5.She looks very smart in a pale grey dress at the party. 聚会上她穿着一件浅灰色的连衣裙，看上去很得体。 6.Warren always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt. 沃伦总是穿休闲的衣服，比如牛仔裤和T恤。 039 启航英语高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 7.She was standing sideways near a platform,dressed a plain coat,dragging a suitcase,and holding a plastic bag in the other hand. 她侧身站在站台附近，穿着一件普通的外套，拖着一个手提箱，另一只手拿着一个塑料袋。 8.Five bodies showed up at my guiding desk,a pale short woman and four small children in untidy clothing. 五个人出现在我的导览台前，一个面容苍白的矮个子女人和四个穿着不整洁衣服的小孩。 ※七、如何表达穿戴 常用词汇归纳 穿戴 uniform制服：suit西服/套装；blouse(女式)短上衣，衬衫；jeans牛仔裤，工装裤：underwear内衣；button 扣子；pocket口袋；glove手套：boot靴子：necklace项链：tie领带：secarf围巾 经典句子 1.Jennifer who was wearing a beautiful and shiny diamond ring was sitting at a table,talking with her friend.Jane. 詹妮弗戴着一枚漂亮闪亮的钻右戒指，正坐在桌旁和她的朋友简聊天。 2.One afternoon,just as the school was dismissed,a stranger passed through the village.His dress was plain and somewhat old,but neat and clean.He carried a cane in his hand,the end of which was bundle,and he wore a broad- brimmed hat. 一天下午，学校刚放学，一个陌生人路过村子。他衣着朴素，有点旧，但干净整洁。他手里拿着一根拐杖，拐杖的一 端捆着一捆东西，头上还戴着一顶宽边帽子。 3.He wore a chef's hat and a clean white apron. 他戴着厨师帽，系着一条干净的白围裙。 4.Walking in my wide-brimmed hat and high-topped boots.I felt like a cowgirl. 我戴着宽边帽，穿着高帮靴，感觉自己像个女牛仔 ※八.如何表达身高/体型 常用词汇归纳 tall高的：short矮的：thin瘦的：athletic健壮的：muscled肌肉发达的；skinny骨瘦如柴的：slim苗条的： neat娇小的：fat胖的：overweight超重的；wel-developed发育良好的：weak虚弱的：tiny个头小的： underweight体重过轻的；medium-built中等身材的：beefy结实的；健壮的：overweight超重的：heavily- built体格健壮的：broad-shouldered肩宽的：medium--length中等长度的 身体 a striking figure/an imposing/a handsome appearance仪表堂堂：a graceful figure优美的身段：a shapely figure匀称的形体；awel-built man身材魁梧/体格健美的人：of average weight中等身材的：of average/, middIe/.medium height中等身高的：a skinny figure瘦削的身材：a slim figure纤细的身体；a well- developed figure发有良好的身体；have a good figure形体很好；show off her lovely figure显露出她优美 的身段：of medium/average build/height有者中等身材或身高的 经典句子 1.He used to be middle-sized,but with his getting old,he is becoming short. 他原本中等身材，但随着年龄的增长，他慢慢变矮了。 2.When my mother was young,she had a beautifully slim figure. 我妈妈年轻的时候，身材苗条，美丽动人。 3.He is a few pounds underweight for his height. 就其身高而言，他的体重还轻几磅。 4.He wanted his little son to become strong and athletic like his brother. 他希望他的小儿子变得像他哥哥一样身强力壮。 040 第二章写作微技巧 5.She said that it was a tall,stout man with grey hair. 她说那是一个又高又胖、头发花白的男子。 6.Before his illness,he was tall,broad and muscular. 生病之前，他身高体宽，肌肉发达。 7.Glen is well-built,of medium height,with dark skin. 格伦身体强壮，中等个子，面色黝黑。 室22 牛7刀小试 一、词汇训练。根据括号内要求，写出单词的正确形式。 1.rough smooth(反义词)】 2.pretty ugly(反义词) 3.loose tight(反义词) 4.casual dark/heavy(反义词) 5.common ordinary(近义词) 6.simple plain(近义i词) 二、小语境练习。根据中文提示，完成下列句子。 L.Henry is middle-aged(中年的).He's got broad shoulders(宽阔的肩膀)and is well-buit(身形魁梧的).He takes regular exercise,such as bodybuilding,weight-training and yoga. 2.Amanda is of medium/average height(中等身高).She has a slim figure/build(苗条的身材)and the light make-up(谈 妆)she wears makes her more attractive to her admirers.She is wearing tight-fitting jeans(繁身牛仔裤)and a pair of black boots(黑靴). 3.He had a dark face,with serious features/a serious look().His youth was past,but didn't reach middle age. 4.He wears small round glasses(戴着一副又小又圆的眼镜)，with his short hair.,which makes him look smart(这使得他 看起来很神气). 5.He was a kind old man with gray beard,blue eyes(长着灰白色的胡子，有一双蓝色的眼睛)，and a voice that all the birds loved. 三、把下面的句子翻译成英语。 1.他身材肥胖，几乎没有脖子，还蓄着一大把胡子。 He was a stout man with hardly any neck,and he had a very large beard. 2.他们浑身都是汗，脸上脏兮兮的，母亲过了一会儿才注意到这是她活泼好动的孩子们 They were dripping with sweat.and their faces were so dirty that it took their mother a moment to notice that they were her active children. 3.我们喝茶时，我不停地打量着她，看她那纤纤玉手，典雅的举止，亮品品的黑眼睛，毫无表情的清秀的脸 As we drank tea,I could not take my eyes from her small,delicate hands,the elegant way she moved,her bright,black eyes,and expressionless clear face. 4.一个高大的人站在门口。他的脸几乎完全被长而浓密的头发遮住了，但你可以看到他的限睛，在头发下像夜晚的 星星一样闪烁。 A tall man was standing in the doorway.His face was almost completely hidden by his long.thick hair,but you could make out his eyes,shining like stars at night under all the hair. 5.布朗太太皮肤黝黑，嘴巴很大。当她看着你的时候，她的眼睛好像睁大了，你会觉得她在看穿你。 Mrs.Brown had dark skin and a very wide mouth.When she looked at you,her eyes seemed to expand,and you felt like she was looking right through you. 微技巧三 性格描写 性格的描写是很重要的，一个人的性格可以反映出一个人的处世方式等。如何去看待一个人，最主要的不是外 貌，而是性格。一个人的性格好，即使他是不完美的，但却是这世上独一无二的存在。性格好的人身上总有一种独特 的魅力，总是会吸引你去了解他，让你想要和他认识，想要和他交朋友。或许是你在他身上找到了一种熟悉的感觉， 让你觉得很亲近。亦或许是，他的身上有让你钦佩的地方，让你心生崇拜之感。故在读后续写上要多进行性格方面 的描述，这样就能够增加文章的表达力。 041