十，2020年7月浙江卷改编（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

启航英语 高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 2.重点句型 (1) I wondered why she asked such a question-was she going to treat me to lunch or something? 宾语从句 同位语 译文:我想知道她为什么问这样的问题--她是要请我吃午饭还是什么? (2) Inside the bag was a chicken taco, whose smell made my mouth water. 倒装句 定语从句 译文:袋子里是一个鸡肉玉米卷,它的味道让我流口水。 【优秀范文2】 When I wos gbout to sou qoodbue, the qirl asked if r'd had lunch. Smiling awkwardluL nodded and said ues Howeyer the sound of mu stomoch grumbling betraued me Apparentl, she read mu mind A smile of sumpathu flickering across her face, she suddenly turned around and darted toward her truck Seconds later “Here gou are t wil do ou good." said the girl, grinning musteriousl I looked at the litle girl. whose starry eues glittered something slu The famil were readu to leovg, The father started the truck with the mother and the girl seated in the back seots waving qoodbue to me Waving bock with a smile and wishing them a safe trin watched the,truck disappear into the distance. After theu left. I got into mu Jeep and opened the paper bag. The food's delicious.smell filled mu nostrils. making mu mouth water Not until L opened the. paper bag did I spot a 2o-dollar bill along with o.note. reading. “Kindness is free." Stunned and moved stared at the note. feeling guit about m previous thought that all people were indifferent Having spent a tough ear littered with severe hordship I cried mu heart out in mu leen on this deserted road for the kindness from thg stranaers lf eventiollu dawned on me that kindness ang love do make a difference. From that dau on everu time I meet someone in need I awaus reoch out to them hoping to pass on the kindness that the. Mexican famil offered me. 拓展 1.重点单词和短语 tur around转过身 dosb.good对某人有好处 from that day on从那一天开始 make a difference有影响,起到重要作用 reach out to接触,把手伸向 2.重点句型 (1)The father started the truck, with the mother and the girl seated in the back seats, waving goodbye to me with复合结构 v.-ing形式作状语 译文:父亲发动了卡车,母亲和女孩坐在后座,向我挥手告别。 (2) From that day on, every time I meet someone in need, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness 状语从句 v.-ing形式作状语 that the Mexican family offered me 定语从句 译文:从那天起,每当我遇到需要帮助的人,我总是主动去帮助他们,希望能够传递墨西哥家庭给我的善意。 十、2020年7月浙江卷改编 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside "the polar bear capital of the world"-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear. I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. Bu sometimes. that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear, who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts 02 第一章 读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 Terrified. Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard. and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇). I took some pictures of the bear Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bear's eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and. through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意 1.续写的词数应为150个左右;2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 A few minutes later. the bear headed back to our camp. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived 读一读DUYDU 在阅读此语篇的内容时,为了使已知文本信息更加清晰,同学们可以根据记叙文的六要素来梳理故事情节,了解 主旨大意,把握故事梗概。从情节线、情感线和主题等角度,厘清文章脉络,把握人物身份、关系及性格特点、事件发 展的基本线索、故事的主要矛盾,寻求续写的支撑点和伏笔,同时感受原文的语言风格。 (一)读主题 本文主题:人与自然--尊重和谨慎对待野生动物。 (二)读情节 1.故事以给拍摄北极熊为主线,讲述了“我”和妻子Elli在营地遭遇北极熊袭击,最终获救的故事。 2.根据续写段首句提供的信息,续写段将依次叙述“我”和Elli再次遭遇去而复返的北极熊的袭击时的心理感受 和反抗措施等,以及登上直升机获救的过程。 (三)读情感和语言 “我”和Elli 的心路历程:1.原文部分:adventurous( amazing and dangerous)→determined→terrified→relieved(with a lingering fear):2.续写部分:terrified again→desperate→hopeful→relived→inspired上述情感变化折射出人与自然之 间的激烈矛盾:两位爱冒险的摄影爱好者拼死抵抗北极熊的袭击;而北极熊为了填饱肚子想尽办法闯进营地找东西 吃。在语言的使用上,精准运用动词和形容词进行动作描写、神态描写、心理活动描写等,将人与熊的激烈战斗、智勇 斗争的场景刻画得活灵活现。 思一思SYS 从原文中可知,文章主要讲述了人与能对抗之后成功脱险的故事。 1.续写第一段构思:由续写第一段首句“Afewminutes later,the bear headed back to our camp.”可知,熊发起了新 一轮的进攻。再根据第二段首句“At that verymoment,thehelicopter arrived.”可知,我们当时处境十分危险,但终于熬 过了这半个小时,等到了直升机的营救。利用逆向思维可以试问:在这“漫长”的半小时里,我们采取了哪些措施?这 些措施是否奏效?“我”的情绪有哪些变化? 2.续写第二段构思:根据续写第二段首句”At that verymoment,the helicopter arrived.”可知,我们迎来了逃离营地 的希望。可以试问:救援直升机到来后,我们如何利用直升机的特性解决问题?在此过程中有何心理感受?最终又 有什么样的收获? 1写一写 XVXE 【优秀范文1】 A few minutes later, the beor headed back to our comp. He must hove learned from experience. for he suddenlt stood on his back legs and attacked the fence with massive strength leaving a narrow onening on it Behind me Elli muffled o cru of terror We huddled together trembling with feor Mu eues were fixed on the uninvited giant while mu hands were groning for anuthing thot might keep us safe from the bear's attock Then Ifelt o beer bottle, Without hesitation I soueezed the bottle through the opening as the polar bear closed his jaws on it He pulled it out and smoshed it There wos a dead silence except for the sound of his hegv breathing and.sniffing. 027 启英语 高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 At that veru moment. the helicopter arrived. We ran back to the camn stumbling a hundred times in our haste I contocted the pilot over the radio Hearing that we had not suffered anu phusical injuru the pilot told us to stau still and cover our ears The harsh whooshing noises of the approaching helicopter frightened the uoung bear The animgl took a few hesitant stens back and eventuallu disappeared back towards the lake I snatched mu camero and snapped one last shot of the beor. 拓展 1.重点单词和短语 learn from从......学到;向......学习 tremble with fear 因恐惧而颤抖 fix on集中注意力 keep sb. safe from保护某人不受.....的伤害 without hesitation毫不犹豫地 except for除了 staystill保持不动 2.重点句型 (1) He must have learned from experience, for he suddenly stood on his back legs and attacked the fence with massive 蔺举句 for引导并列句 strength, leaving a narrow opening on it. v.-ing形式作状语 译文:他一定是从经验中吸取了教训,因为它突然用后腿站起来,用巨大的力量攻击树栏,在它上面留下了一个 狭窄的开口。 (2) Hearing that we had not suffered any physical injury, the pilot told us to stay still and cover our ears v.-ing形式作状语 that引导宾语从句 译文:听说我们没有受到任何身体伤害,飞行员告诉我们不要动,同时要捂住耳朵。 【优秀范文2】 A few minutes later. the bear headed back to our camp. Anaer overwhelming him he smashed his paws madlu aoginst the wire fence. thrusting his shorn claws at us Much as I wanted to photograph the approaching bear mu survival instinct overtook mu desire to copture, the. perfect photo. Suddenl. Elli dashed to the kitchen shauting that she went to fetch the qarlic hreod Then we threw the bread at the intruder a little bit at o time until it ron out Mith nothing to eot the quu wildlu hanged again and shoved. the wooden posts which were evidentlu collansingl With this angru giant beast within a stone's throw I huddled with Elli tiahtl I could heg nothing but the sound of our hearts beating violentlu in our chests At that veru moment, the helicopter orrived. The hovering vehicle swept awau aur choking feg immediatelu Out of the helicopter descended o rope to pulf us up Thrilled but relieved we caught the rope tightl and eventuall landed on the helicopter safe and sound While overlooking the bear from high above was amazed to spot this stubborn qug hod crushed the fence and headed toword our camp for the imiting garlic bregd At this once-in-a-lifetime moment I reached into mu backpack and pulled out the camern photographing.thot impressivescene. 拓展 1.重点单词和短语 dashto冲向 at atime每次;依次 sweep away一扫而光 safe and sound安然无善 pullup拿出来 2.重点句型 (1) With nothing to eat, the guy wildly banged again and shoved the wooden posts which were evidently collapsing with的复合结构 定语从句 译文:没有东西吃,那个家伙又疯狂地敲打着,推着那些明显要倒塌的木桩! (2) While overlooking the bear from high above, I was amazed to spot this stubborn guy had crushed the fence and v.-ing形式作状语 宾语从句 headed toward our camp for the inviting garlic bread 译文:当我从高处俯瞅熊的时候,我惊奇地发现这个顽固的家伙已经破坏了概栏,为了诱人的蒜蓉面包向我们的 营地走来。 02