三、2024年1月浙江卷（教师用书）-【启航英语】2025版高考英语读后续写高分策略(读思写)

第一章 读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 (2) It was a breakthrough moment for both Hilda and Katherine, as they recognized the need to adjust their training 原因状语从句 methods and approach to accommodate the dolphins' natural behaviors 译文:这对Hilda和Katherine来说都是一个突破性的时刻,因为他们意识到需要调整他们的训练方法和途径来适 应海豚的自然行为。 【优秀范文2】 "This is Maug's secret." Hildo soid with a big smile. Puzzled but curious Katherine moved close to those items and found thot theu were wastes such as cling flm paper baos and so on Pointing ot the filter hox in the back of the tank Hildo explained to Katherine whu these items were hidden underwater without being discovered lt wos due to their flat and thin shapes that theu were able to stau in the chinks of the box for long time and haven't been cleared Thanks to the keen, sense, of smell of Maug, she successfullu found out where the garbage wos and tried to inform people of the foct in her own wa Now Katherine reolized what hod been going on. Knowing that she had misunderstood Hlildg, Kotherine's face flushed with embarrassment Holding Hilda's hands tightt Katherine looked into Hildg's eues with newfound respect and soid" Thank uou, Hilda I owe ou an apologu""No apologies necessar." said Hildo with o grin "it just reminds me to be more careful in the future." After listening to their conversation Mouo leaped out of the water and drew g beautiful arc as if she felt hanpu for such an ending as well From then on Hildo and Katherioe became friends Theu paid more attention to the intelligent animgl and took care of her more carefull lt wos Maug who brought the relationshin between the two people closer 拓展 1.重点单词和短语 move close to靠近 due to因为 thanks to多亏,由于 inform...of提醒..... flush with 满脸通红 owe sb.an apology欠某人一个道 leap out of从.....跳出 2.重点句型 (1) Pointing at the filter box in the back of the tank, Hilda explained to Katherine why these items were hidden 动词-ing形式作状语 宾语从句 underwater without being discovered. 译文:Hilda指着水箱后面的过滤盒,向Katherine解释为什么这些东西藏在水下却没有被发现。 (2) Maya leaped out of the water and drew a beautiful arc, as if she felt happy for such an ending as well 方武状语从句 译文:Maya跳出水面,画了一个美丽的孤线,好像她也为这样的结局感到高兴。 一三、2024年1月浙江卷 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文 Eva spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building. It was a six-story building. On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions. leading to classrooms, laboratories, and teachers' offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library, a cafeteria. andagym. Having a poor sense of direction, Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about, let alone commit to memory. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist. In her fast P. E. class. Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that evervone had to run one mile around the tracl outside. She searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile. To Eva. "a mile" was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather's, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car! When Coach Pitt blew his whistle(哨子), Eva figured she would be left in the dust. However, while some of her classmates edged ahead, others actually fell behind."It's just the beginning," she thought."I'll come in last for sure." 011 启航英语 高考英语读后续写高分策略·读思写 Soon Eva began to breathe hard. with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind wick on herself. She stopped thinking about the word "mile". Instead, she focused on reaching the shadow east on the track by an oak tree up ahead. Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved(拐弯). After that, she tried to see if she could complete her first lap. One lap turned into two, then three, then four 1.续写的词数应为150个左右;2.请按照如下的格式在相应位置作答。 When Coach Pitt said"Nice work!" to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. 读一 1DUD 在阅读此语篇的内容时,同学们可以从所给文章的主题、情节以及伏笔等方面进行着手,厘清文章的脉络,把握 文章中人物的身份、关系以及性格特点、事件发展的基本线索、故事的主要矛盾,寻找续写的伏笔等。 [一)读主题 本文主题:自我成长--学会解决问题,超越自我,终将获得成功 (二)读情节 Eva在高中的第一周面对一栋六层教学楼林林总总的各种功能室,方向感不好,记不住地方,又遇到体育老师要 求学生跑一英里,对于她来说,坐车2英里的路途都觉得遥远。Eva本认为自已肯定是一英里跑步的最后一名,结果 她使用心术(mindtrick).只专注目前的距离,重复一圈又一圈,最终,她成功跑完一英里 (三)读情感和语言 根据所给文本,我们可以从下面几点来描述Eva的情感:1.原文部分:worried(one of the major headaches for her) →brave to overcome difficulty( pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist)→shocked( had to run one mile around the track)→panic→desperate;2.续写部分:根据所给文本的内容,然后就可以在续写中从开始的担心、震惊、绝望,到最后 的成功。通过续写告诉学生通过努力挑战自我,成就优秀的自己!本文中心理活动描写、修辞的使用,使文章丰富厚 重,增加了叙述的画面感。另外,在语言的表达上采用很多的伏笔,如:Eva spent the firstweekof highschool trying to keep her head above water. 续写照应 1: Eva fitted in with the new school life. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building.... On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions, leading to classrooms. laboratories, and teachers' offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library. a cafeteria, and a gym. 续写照应 2: Eva familiarized herself with all the sections of the huge building on every floor 思一思SYS1 1. 根据第一段续写的内容When Coach Pitt said“Nice work”to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. 可知,本句 出现的人物CoachPitt和Eva,那么此段就可以从这两个人物入手,通过具体的描述,叙述故事内容,特别是Eva在跑 步时使用了心术(mindtrick)。以Eva为主推进叙事,描写Eva长跑结束时,不敢相信自已的成绩,以及运动后气喘 吁吁,汗流浃背的模样。 2. 根据第二段续写的内容 Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. 可知.Eva 继续用类似 的方法让自已熟悉学校的综合楼。本文续写一定是在第二段解决冲突,而且应该是分解任务,最终搞清楚学校各个 部门的分布,从而顺利融入高中生活。关键词thesametrick,theschoolbuilding;推测应该是体育课后返回教学楼实 践 Eva的mind trick. 写一写对EY1xE 【优秀范文1】 When Cooch Pitt said "Nice work!" to her at the finish line, Evo was surprised. She just couldn't believe the words "nice work" Stillout of breath, Evo cast a sumpathetic look at her classmate lagging hehind. When asked how she mode it she excitedl explained how to emplou her mind trick to Coach Pitt Literall it wos the first time in her school life thot she had accomplished the one-mile race and won such o remarkable place Overwhelmed with an enormous sense of thrill mingled with delight she couldn't wait to share her secret trick with her fellows who congratulated her on her newlt-made victoru Closs over Evg returned from the plauground to her classroom for the next session chatting cheerfullu with some of her classmates As she raised her eues and stared at the overwhelming school building, a qreat ideo suddenl crossed her mind Evo decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. What she expected wos that her mind trick in the one-mile roce did appl to the overwhelming maze. After what seemed like centuries of struggle, Evg now 012 第一章 读后续写的要求和历届高考真题分析 felt like a fish in water Her journeu from feeling lost in the yostness of hiah school to conguering her first one-mile un transformed her gradugll The unexpected encouragement from Coach Pirt as well os her new found communit helped her achieve constant triumnhs over new challenges and occumulated her confidence. High school once on ouenwhelming moze, had hecome a perfect place of persongl orowth, Hndoubtedlu. Eyg would embark on her colorfu knowledge journeu from here. Evg would open her new chopter of school life from here 拓展 1.重点单词和短语 out of breath 上气不接下气 chat cheerfully with...与.....愉快地聊天 stare at 着看 achieve constant triumphs 不断取得胜利 2.重点句型 (1) Overwhelmed with an enormous sense of thrill mingled with delight, she couldn't wait to share her secret trick 过去分词作状语 with her fellows. who congratulated her on her newly-made victory 非限制性定语从句 译文:兴奋中夹杂着巨大的兴奋感,她迫不及待地想和同伴们分享她的秘诀,他们祝贺她取得了新的胜利。 (2) What she expected was that her mind trick in the one-mile race did apply to the overwhelming maze. 主语从句 表语从句 译文:她所期望的是,她在一英里赛跑中的心术确实适用于这个难以忍受的迷宫。 【优秀范文2】 When Cooch Pitt said "Nice work!" to her at the finish line. Evo wos surprised. Never in her wildest dreom had she expected such a sianificant reduction in the one-mile run. achieved through her clever mind trick This invoved matking the, shodow, of the oak tree or the bend enabling her to accelerate and rush towards these small targets Collapsing onto the. ground. Evo gave Coach Pitt his best smile as she whispered in a panting voice“l made itl" After what feit like an eternitu her pounding heart gradugll slowed down, and a sudden ideg snrang into her mind lf l can remember the landmarks on the track field I can do the same for the six star maze -like school building Fueling her with hope and determination this thought made her leap un her fnce now filling with expectation. Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. Rather than seeing them as invisible she carefullu marked the shelves of the libraru on the second floor, the spacious cofeterig on the first floor and the bustling gum on the third Euen the modest lab on the fifth floor is etched into her memor And it works greatl within o week or two Evo had. found eyer facilitu and room effortlesslu with o newfound sense of confidence The difficulties that she had previouslt met were replaced bu an unprecedented adantabilitu to high school life like o full-fledqed duckling novigating through water She witnessed the areot impact a simple ming trickcould.dol 拓展 1.重点单词和短语 slow down慢下来 spring into one's mind使某人忽然想起来 leap up跳上来 etch into one's memory铭刻在某人的记忆中 be replaced by被......所替代 2.重点句型 (1)Never in her wildest dream had she expected such a significant reduction in the one-mile run, achieved through 否定副词短语放于句首,句子使用了倒装句 her clever mind trick. 译文:在她最疯狂的梦想中,她从来没有预料到通过她聪明的心术,一英里的跑步会有如此显著的减少。 (2) The dificulties that she had previously met were replaced by an unprecedented adaptability to high school 定语从句 life. like a full-fledged duckling navigating through water 介词短语作状语 译文:她以前遇到的困难被前所未有的适应高中生活的能力所取代,就像一只羽翼丰满的小鸣在水中航行 0③