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A篇
(2024·山东济南·统考一模)
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It was cool and bright and just right for running.I was in the first few miles of a 10-mile
race through some hills.Birds were singing on the trees.The soft wind was brushing my
cheeks.I felt rested and springy.Despite the hills,I thought it was going to be a fine run.
Ahead was Blake,a student from Burke High School.He was running easily,too,moving
along efficiently.The pace felt comfortable,so I decided to stay where he was;why bother con-
centrating on pace when Blake was such a nice pacesetter for me?I would overtake Blake later on
when he used up energy.
So I ran closely behind him.The course headed north for five miles,wandered west for a
mile,and then turned south again.The race was getting tougher.With three miles to go,it was
beginning to be real hard work.My lungs were on fire,and legs felt like stone.
Blake overtook the boy in front of him.Apparently he knew the boy,for they exchanged a
few words.Their brief communication worried me.Runners don't chat during a race unless they
feel really good,and Blake plainly was.There was still a noticeable bounce in his steps,but the
springiness I had once possessed was gone.
Still,I was close enough to overtake Blake if he was tired,so I didn't give up hope com-
pletely.We were approaching a hill,a mile from the finish line,so whatever happened on the
hill would almost certainly determine who crossed it first.
As I moved up the hill,my attention wandered for a few minutes.When I looked up,Blake
was moving away,first five yards,then ten,then more.There was no hope of catching Blake.
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Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onto the ground painfully.
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A reporter took a picture of this moving scene and posted it online.
B篇
(2024·山东·烟台二中校联考模拟预测)
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At Piedmont School,everyone wanted to be on the soccer team.Laura had dreamed of earn-
ing glory for the Falcons ever since she had witnessed her older brother scoring the winning
goal.On the day she joined the team,she felt like she could fly.
Unfortunately,her joy did not last long.She spent most of the matches on the bench.
Walking to the car after the last game,Laura's mother asked if she was feeling fine.Laura kept
quiet and tried to smile at her mother.Having spent yet another game as a reserve,Laura had
not even broken a sweat.Laura also joked that she would have baked in the hot sun if she had
played.Her mother assured her that she would have another chance to play.She also cheered
Laura on.Laura could only shake her head as she climbed into the seat,back hunched and face
down.
A few days later,Laura's mother found she sprawled on the couch,watching music videos
on her phone,so she tried asking Laura to watch soccer videos instead.Laura looked at her
mother blankly,rolling her eyes."They won't help me and I can't get better by myself,"Laura
said.
Sighing,her mother sank down on the couch."Laura,for every lock,there is a key.We
just have to find it.What if I film you practising to help you find ways to improve?"
"But the season's over,Mum.No more practice,remember?"Laura said.Her mother
looked at her resolutely and insisted that the best players keep practising even when the season is
over.Laura protested,"But to practise plays,I would need at least one other person to join me!
It is difficult to do that alone."
Laura's mother patted her and said,"We'll find that key too,but we have to start some-
where."While Laura's mother was searching her wallet for her gold key,she smiled gently at
Laura.She gave Laura an assuring nod before passing her the key."This key is a reminder for
you to be strong and not give up.Let's build something tomorrow."Laura's mother said.
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The next day,Laura and her mother built a goal and made a training plan.
One evening,Dequan,a boy from Laura's school and some other children saw Laura going
about her routine and asked her what she was doing.
C篇
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Allan,my husband,had recently moved up the tennis league's ladder(and would
compete against someone at a similar skill level."Do you know who your opponent is?"asked
him.My husband explained that although he knew his opponent's name,he had never met him.
That's when I saw a young man about twenty years old at the other end of the reception area.
The young man had large muscular arms and a well-built body.He was using a skip rope at
quite a fast pace;I thought he might be warming up for a tennis match.I smiled at my husband
and said that might be his opponent.Allan gave me a frustrated(look on his face,re-
marking it was an unusual way to prepare for a tennis match,as he continued completing his
usual warm-up routine.
The league coordinator (called out my husband's name,and then she called the
young man.I gave my husband a kind of smile that wives give their husbands when they are en-
couraging them.The coordinator gave them their court number.They introduced themselves to
each other,shook hands,and headed off.
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The young man was dressed in the latest trendy tennis clothes and looked great.With his
muscular body,he could have easily be a star athlete.Allan was at least thirty years older,
much less muscular,and dressed in an ordinary tennis shirt and untrendy tennis shorts.Allan's
focus had always been on good tennis shoes,socks,and,of course,the tennis racket.
When they walked onto their court,the pre-game warm-up began.The young man played
with confidence.It was almost as if he was showing his ability.Allan closely observed his vari-
ous strokes and powerful serves,while casually returning each shot.Then began the game.
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The young man quickly won the first round.
The young man was visibly frustrated by the end of the match.
D篇
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Ali and his younger sister,Zahra,lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their
mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job,and they had only a little
money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months,the landlord
was breathing down their necks.
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One day,Ali took Zahra's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed,but he lost them on the
way home.It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that
his parents would be angry and disappointed,so he begged his sister to keep it secret.Zahra
agreed and the two decided to share Ali's running shoes.Zahra's school hours were in the morn-
ing,so she would wear them first.After school,she would rush back and give them to Ali.He
could then run to his school,which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could,
Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.
Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city.When he learned
that the third prize was a new pair of shoes,he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and
promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start,but halfway through the race he began to
get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra
and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him
strength,and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners,determined to finish third.Sud-
denly,as the finish line drew near,another runner collided (with Ali from behind and he
crashed to the ground.
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Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.
Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.
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Jack was about to thank Hugh and Mike when
She didn't notice her daughter took a phone home
the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.With
until it rang.She returned the phone to us and re-
trembling hands,Jack took out the phone and put/
fused any reward.We felt lucky to meet such kind
pressed it to his ear.His mother's anxious voice
people as Mrs.Hichens and Laura and had a friendly
came over the phone,"Are you home yet?
chat.While the adults were chatting,I noticed my
Everything's good?"Tears welled up in his eyes
grandson was playing happily with Judy.Such a
rolled down his cheeks at the familiar sound of con-
warm scene reminded me that the language barrier
cern.Jack choked up as he explained the accident to
can never be a problem between kind and friendly
his mom and comforted her.Hanging up the phone,
people.
he turned to Hugh and Mike and sincerely thanked
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both of them.Cold as the rain was,great warmth
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filled his heart like never before.
Tom was shocked when he saw his parents ap-
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pear at the ceremony hall.He stood rooted to the
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floor for a moment,not knowing what to do.Sec-
The tailor seemed to understand what I was
onds later,he tried to contain himself and awkward-
thinking at the moment."Do you trust football,
ly walked up to greet his father,ignoring his
young man?"I nodded.He pointed to a shelf lined
mother's existence.But when he heard others whis-
with footballs."I like collecting discarded footballs.
pering about his mum's ugly face,embarrassment
Repairing a football is quite healing.Sewing one is
came over him.With anger written all on his face,
as challenging as playing it,for every stitch counts.
he pushed his mum hard out of the hall.Seeing
Now,would you..."I handed him my shirt.He ex-
Tom's mum leave with deep sorrow,his father fol-
amined the tear and started his work professionally.
lowed her out.
While mending,he asked about my favorite football-
Hesitating for a moment,Tom's father told
er,and the pleasant chat perfected the repairing.
him everything that happened many years ago.His
Suddenly,I noticed a photo of a football team
mum got burnt severely to save him in a terrible
next to the sewing machine.Flashing a knowing
fire.Tears streamed down his face when he recollec-
smile,he explained it was a long time ago.when he
ted how much he had hurt her all these years,how
was the captain and when he did not undergo the op-
he had ignored her and he realized the amount of
eration that stopped his dream.His story just
pain and agony she had gone through.After the cer-
pushed me to speak out mine.He told me to pursue
emony,he found his mum and embraced her,saying
my dream and act like my idol,Messi-"the smallest
"Sorry"again and again.From then on,he thought
player on the pitch but the greatest player of our
of his mom's face even with scars as the most beauti-
time".I thanked him,saying that not only did he
ful face in the world and his mom as the most
mend my shirt with his craftsmanship but he also re-
respected woman in the world.
paired my dream with sportsmanship.Giggling,he
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exclaimed,"Told you!All kinds of repairs and serv-
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Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onto the ground
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painfully.Then I hurried up and ran up to him,
In no time,we all got into our car and headed
only to find that his leg was cramping.I tried to
for the address.When we got there,Leon mes-
help him stand and move forward,but he refused.
saged again,telling the lady we had arrived.After a
He asked me to run after the others so that I could
while a young lady appeared from the apartment
get the first place.I thought for a second and decid-
building.We got out of the car and the lady greeted
ed to accompany him for a rest.Then we ran slowly
us and told us in very good English that she was
forward together.Although we ran slowly and were
Laura,Mrs.Hichens'neighbor.Mrs.Hichens had
overtaken by others,I felt relaxed and we finally
just come from Mexico and her English was limited.
crossed the finish line together.
As her husband was away on business,she asked
A reporter took a picture of this moving scene
Laura for help.Laura showed us into an apartment,
and posted it online.During the time,the photo got
where Mrs.Hichens and her little girl were expec-
a lot of likes.Many strangers sent the emails to
ting us.
praise me about the incident.In fact,I was a little
With Laura's help,Mrs.Hichens was able to
hesitant at the beginning,but the moment I decided
explain to us what had happened.That Friday,she
to help Blake,I felt calm and relaxed.I'm happy
also took her kid,Judy,on a horse and buggy ride.
that I did the right thing.
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Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.
The next day,Laura and her mother built a
He could not wait to see his sister and share the
goal and made a training plan.Every night before
thrilling news.On his arrival,Ali found Zahra was
dinner,they headed to an old car garage for one
waiting outside.She was really nervous whether her
hour,where Laura practised moving the ball by dod-
brother had brought her what she was expecting.
ging around old tyres,pretending she was protecting
“Zahra,see what I have got for you.”he took the
the ball from the best players in the world.Her
prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.The
mother recorded everything secretly.When Laura's
instant Zahra saw the shoes,her face lit up.So
mother showed her the videos,she saw her mistakes
thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali.
carefully and corrected them.
“Thank you!Ali.”Tears of joy welled up their eyes
One evening,Dequan,a boy from Laura's
as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.
school and some other children saw Laura going
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about her routine and asked her what she was do-
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ing."I'm practising moving the ball against imagi-
I stood by a small table in disa ppointment when
nary defenders,"Laura responded."Do you want to
Chloe came i.“Have you found the ring?”she
practise with me?"Dequan replied that he would,
asked curiously."No,I have already got to the last
but he could not run fast enough."Although I used
row but in vain.Maybe I should search all the coats
to be so slow,my leg muscles have been strength-
here."Looking at over 20,000 pieces clothing,
ened through practices.If possible,I can teach
Chloe lent a helping hand,"It's not an easy task.
you!"Laura said.Dequan happily agreed.Soon,
We opened one pocket after another,going to the
more children joined them.
second room,and then the third.We two were
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sweating heavily with red faces.Suddenly,I burst
The young man quickly won the first round.
out screaming,"Yes!That's it!"Chole ran to me
He was full of confidence at the start of the second
quickly.She patted my arm gently,"tell your mom,
round,especially when he won the first point.I
dear.”
watched with amusement as they volleyed the ball
I called my mom and now I was choking back
back and forth,knowing well that Allan's mental
tears.“mom,good news!”I could tell how happy
toughness would win even after his slow start.
my mom was by her laughter.After all,it meant a
Within minutes,Allan won the second round.The
lot.I thanked Chole and went home.The moment I
game continued,but the young man began to strug-
stepped out the store,the night sky was lit up by
gle and show his frustration.The final score was in
flashes of light quietly.Tiring as it was,the recov-
Allan's favor.
ery of this precious ring brought greater pleasure.
The young man was visibly frustrated by the
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end of the match.He was clearly shocked,having
I wondered,“Could it be him?”I dialed the
lost to his much older opponent.Allan shook hands
number,gave my full name to a secretary and was
with his opponent as they left the court.They were
put on hold.A long fifteen seconds later,a gentle-
talking to each other along the way.I heard Allan
man was on the line.His opening statement was,
say,“It's only a game-there will be others.”
"Mr.Kowal (or whatever),I've really...missed
Knowing that Allan had been playing tennis for over
you.Then there was silence.Tears welling up in
forty years,the young man regretted that he
my eyes,I blurted out between sobs,"Mike,I only
shouldn't have underestimated the ability of his op-
wish I'd kept in touch with you all these years.I'm
ponent.He thanked Allan for the lesson and left.
really proud of you."In a trembling voice on the
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other side,Mike answered,"I wouldn't be here now
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing
if it weren'tfor you.”
ahead.Refusing to give up at this point,he jumped
When we were able to get together,he told me
to his feet and ran as fast as he could.He dashed
his road to the law.Studying law in the library ena-
across the finish line and won the fourth prize.
bled him to explore his inner depths-the "gangster"
Thinking he would let her sister down,Ali couldn't
he had wanted to be was something of a hero protec-
help sobbing.Just then he suddenly heard the an-
ting the disadvantaged with knowledge.He studied
nouncement from the broadeast that he won the
all the way to the law university while working part-
third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was
time for his education fees.Now he had risen to be
disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoes
one of the most successful criminal lawyers in Cana-
close to his chest during the award ceremony,Ali
da.He owed all to me while I thought the greatest
felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the
good we teachers could do for the students was to
shoes for his sister.
assist in revealing the best of their own.
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