模块5 5大万能亮眼结尾-【创新教程】2025年高考英语复习读后续写写作一本通（新高考）

读后续写 模块五 5大万能亮眼结尾 精彩的结尾能给阅卷人留下深刻的印象，所以有一个精彩的结尾对于读后续写得高分至关 重要。文章常见的结尾方式有点题式、主题升华式、人生感悟式、发人深省式、寓情于景式等，合 适的结尾方式能凸显文章主题，起到画龙点睛的作用。 [类型1]点题式结尾 点题式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时，通过一两句话点明文章主旨，突出文章的立意。一般可 以通过总结阅读材料写出点题式结尾。 ◆[公式l](形容词+)无灵主语+动词(+in one's mind/heart或+宾语/宾语从句) ★主旨通常蕴含在无灵主语或宾语从句中，作定语的形容词常符合主旨情感色彩。 示例 分析 In a moment I would never forget,he said, 1.故事讲述的是作者每日偷偷从父亲 "Son,I've known since the first day you took the money."I was shocked to hear my father say so. 的衣兜中拿走零钱，买来冰激凌三明治与 朋友们分享，这种情况持续了两周，作者终 Suddenly,I didn't know what to say.Dad con- 于感到愧疚，主动向父亲承认错误。续写 tinued,"But,son,I'm waiting for when you can 第二段描迷述了父亲对作者的暖心教诲，点 realize your mistakes.I put change in my pocket 明了故事的主题—犯错误不要紧，关键 every day,and even changed into two dollars to- 是要有勇气承认错误并纠正错误，最后一 day.You know,mistakes are like the money, 句说明了父亲的教诲对作者的深远影响。 more and more,bigger and bigger.Fortunately, 2.从语言角度看，最后一句中的“my you found the mistake that made you feel uncom- father's plain but encouraging words"替代 fortable and have the courage to admit it.I think you've done a good job,son."Since then,my 了前面作者父亲所说的话，是无灵主语，谓 语则是有灵动词sounded.。这种“无灵主语 father's plain but encouraging words have always 十有灵动词”的表达方式，使文章更形象生 sounded in my ears from time to time,guiding the 动，富有诗意。 way of my life. [万能结尾语料] 1.The narrow escape enlightened me about how treasurable life was. 这次死里逃生使我意识到生命是多么珍贵。 2.The funny story taught us that never should we judge a book by its cover. 这个可笑的故事告诫我们永远不要以貌取人。 3.At the same time,happiness brought along by his pure friendship soaked through my whole body. 同时，他的纯真友谊带来的快乐浸透了我的全身。 4.The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned pro- ject. 这整个经历提示我，团队合作是我们成功地完成这项任务的关键。 5.From then on,the precious value of hard work took deep root in my heart,encouraging me to move forward in my life. 从那以后，努力工作的珍贵价值深深扎根于我的心中，鼓励着我在生活中继续前进 82 第四章读后续写必备素材 ◆[公式2] When/Whenever/Every time looking back on/thinking of/...the story experi- ence/...,sb.still feels.. ★时间状语从句（省略形式）承接前文所述故事，主句用来点明主题。这种结尾使主旨表达清晰 而凝练。 示例 分析 Twenty minutes later,they saw the cabin.Edun and Will 文章描写Edun懒于运 started racing up the hill.Finally,there they were in the small动，在妈妈的坚持下，不情愿 but cozy cabin.Through its window,Edun saw faraway mead-地与哥哥Will和蚂蚂一起去 ows and lakes,.and many more mountains,a whole new world爬山远足。最终，Edun见到 emerging before her eyes.That night,.everybody stayed up late了迷人的山景和夜空中闪烁 to see the stars.So many stars clustering up there,Edun said,的群星，她欣喜若狂，流连忘 “I need to take a picture of them."“Click!”The camera froze返。最后一句，作者使用“回 the moment..Radiant with a smile,.Edun approached Mom and顾往昔式”表达来，点明主 hugged her,whispering,"Mom,thank you for having me- 正是那次远足让 come!”And now,when looking back upon that experience,Edun Edun成了一个热爱大自然 still feels that it was that experience that transformed her into a的人，突出那次远足给Edun nature-loving being. 带来的深远影响。 [万能结尾语料] 1.Whenever thinking of that heart-warming scene,Jenna couldn't help getting deeply moved by the selfless love and care of her neighbors. 每当Jenna想起那暖心的场景，她都会情不自禁地被邻居无私的关爱深深打动。 2.Every time we talked about the terrifying incident,I thought that it was Father's bravery and wisdom that saved our lives in such a dangerous situation. 每当我们谈论起那次可怕的事件，我认为正是父亲的勇敢和智慧在那样危险的情况下拯救了 我们的生命。 3.I would still feel a strong sense of responsibility as part of the community whenever I looked back on the volunteering service. 每当我回忆起那次志愿者服务经历，我仍然会有一种强烈的作为社区一员的责任感。 ◆[公式3]衔接语十sb.十逐渐/终于/突然意识到/感觉到十呼应首段… ★“衔接语”承接前文，“呼应首段…”点明文章主题。这个表达方式前后呼应，结构完整，使文 章浑然一体 示例 分析 原材料首段：Sadie,alo0-pound German Shepherd(德国牧 羊犬)，was very anxious and especially uneasy around humans.. 文章讲述了牧羊犬Sa die因其一见人就非常紧张 Due to her anxiety issues,she had been turned down by three shelters.She eventually was taken in by the Ramapo Bergen 的天性被人拒绝收养，最终 Animal Refuge in New Jersey,which is a shelter where dogs go 好心的Myers给了Sadie一 when other shelters could not rehouse them.The dogs who end 个家。一天夜里，Myers摔 倒了，无法动弹，Sadie帮他 up in this shelter can sometimes spend the rest of their days without a family to love.Thankfully,there was one person out 拿来手机，他才能够及时拨 打急救中心的电话并得到及 there who was willing to give Sadie a home. 续写第二段：Thanks to Sadie,Myers was rushed to the 时的治疗。Myers最终意识 hospital.Due to timely treatment,Myers was out of danger,but 到，虽然他给了Sadie一个 家，但是Sadie却给了他更美 suffered from some after-effects.For a long time afterwards, Myers was accompanied by Sadie in recovery training.Every 好的东西—第二次生命。 time he trained,the dog watched him carefully and occasionally 续写第二段的最后一句话， barked,as if cheering him on.Now Myers has pulled through. 既与原材料首段遥相呼应， 又点明了本文的主题，起到 Following this event,he came to realize that while he had given 画龙点晴的作用。 Sadie a home,it had given him a bigger one-a second life. 83 读后续写 [万能结尾语料] 1.Not until then did I come to understand what my teacher meant by saying"You're unique in the world.” 直到那时，我才明白我老师说的“你是世界上独一无二的”是什么意思。 2.Eventually,the reason why my mother got popular in the community struck me.It was because of her kindness and readiness to help others. 最终，我突然意识到妈妈在社区受欢迎的原因。那是因为她的善良和乐于助人。 3.At the sight of my parents'working hard on the farm,it occurred to me that it was their self- less devotion that gave me a happy life. 见到父母在农场辛勤工作的身影，我突然醒悟，正是他们无私的奉献给了我幸福的生活。 4.Following that,it gradually dawned on me that the love of Mother is priceless,which nothing can match. 在那之后，我逐渐明白了母爱是无价的，什么都不能与母爱相比。 [类型2]主题升华式结尾 主题升华式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时，通过一句高度凝练的话来对主题进行升华，使文章 主题上升到一定的高度，给读者以启示。这种话往往是一些名言或谚语。 ◆[主题1]勇往直前 示例 分析 One day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for 在一个心理课合作项目 a serious disease.I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I 中，作者被分配与一位成绩 should visit him in any case..He was a little surprised and优秀但高傲的同学合作。作 moved to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flow- 者起初消极参与，但两人渐 ers and fruits.I offered to do the rest work of our project and渐有了交流，最后两人谕快 he was willing to listen to my ideas.We began to work as a fine合作，任务顺利完成。续写 team and finally finished our project on time..Our hard work部分以谚语“一个人可以走 paid off and Dr.Henderson was very satisfied with our wonder-得很远，但一群人可以走得 ful findings.From this project,we both learned the significance 更远”结尾，点明了团队合作 of teamwork.Just as the saying goes,"One person can go far, 的重要性使主题得到了 but a group of people can travel farther. 升华。 [万能结尾语料] 1.Where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 2.The journey to success is not smooth.It is full of challenges and difficulties. 通往成功的道路不会平坦，那里充满挑战和艰辛。 3.If you get discouraged by these difficulties,you can not attain success. 如果你因为这些困难而灰心丧气，你就不会获得成功。 4.Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal. 战胜恐惧和实现目标需要决心和乐观。 5.Actually,each individual possesses a talent for something.Be brave,rise to setbacks and make efforts.You will end up creating miracles. 事实上，每个人都有某种天赋。勇敢，直面困难并付出努力，你终将会创造奇迹。 6.Seize the day,and chase your dreams.As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it,you will stand a chance to realize your dreams. 珍惜每一天，追寻你的梦想。只要你抓住每一次机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。 84 第四章读后续写必备素材 ◆[主题2]助人为乐 示例 分析 The parents of the child who just arrived from work 作者在回家路上遇到暴风骤 were totally shocked to hear of what had happened. 雨，电闪雷鸣。他发现有小孩掉进 They were more than grateful and thanked us.With an 了路上的洞里，急忙找到最近的房 outpouring of relief,I was also proud of myself,as I had 子的主人帮忙，最后他们合力把孩 never imagined I would be part of a rescue party and the 子安全地从洞里救出，孩子的父母 act of neighborliness could really make such a differ- 很感谢他们。最后，作者表达了帮 ence.All of a sudden,thunder crashed overhead.Seeing 助他人后的自豪，以自己的感悟结 the man was covered with muddy water,I walked up to him and said,"Thank you."I would never forget the good 尾，用谚语“快乐在于帮助他人”对 故事的主旨进行总结和升华，启发 feeling of helping someone in need,just as a famous say- 读者要乐于助人。 ing goes,"Happiness lies in giving help to others." [万能结尾语料] 1.Roses given,fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰，手留余香。 2.Small kindness can bring rich reward. 小小的善意可以带来丰厚的回报。 3.Small acts of kindness can bring/contribute to/give rise to a big difference. 小善举带来大不同。 4.The miracle is this:the more we share,the more we have. 这就是奇迹：我们与人分享的越多，我们拥有的就越多。 5.If you light a lamp for somebody,it will also brighten your path. 为别人点亮一盏灯，照亮别人也照亮自己。 6.A small act/gesture of kindness will perhaps melt/cure one's loneliness. 一个小小的善意行为可能会融化/治愈一个人内心的孤单。 ◆[主题3]家庭亲情 示例 分析 作者疼爱弟弟Tex Late that afternoon,Mom knocked at my door and asked me to 和妹妹lndi,但有时候 go downstairs for a family meeting.Obviously,Tex and Indi had told 因为他们不尊重自己拥 Mom what had happened.We sat down to talk things over."Every- 有的东西而生气。在家 one has their own privacy,which deserves to be respected by oth- 庭会上，Tex、lndi和作 ers,”Mom said seriously.“Tex and Indi,do you think so?”Tex and 者都认识到了自己的错 Indi realized their misbehavior and they took my hands,sincerely 误，相互道歉，最终和好 begging for forgiveness.Blushing with shame,I also apologized for 如初。最后，作者以一 losing my temper so easily and promised to be gentler and more un- 句名言“亲情是生命中 derstanding to them from then on.The unpleasant atmosphere dis- 最好的礼物”结尾，点明 appeared and we made up happily.Just then,an old saying appeared 了故事的主旨，同时启 in my mind that"Family love is the greatest gift in life." 发读者重视亲情。 85 读后续写 [万能结尾语料] 1.Motherly love is the greatest force in the world. 母爱是世间最伟大的力量。 2.Father's love is as deep and broad as the sea. 父爱如大海般深沉而宽广。 3.Family and friends are hidden treasures. 家人和朋友是隐藏的珍宝。 4.Family,a wonderful shelter and a 24-hour harbor,is always there for us. 家是一个非常好的庇护所，是一个24小时的港湾，家永远在那儿等着我们。 5.Family is to us what harbor is to ships. 家庭之于我们就像港口之于船只。 6.Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life. 家庭是波涛汹涌的生命海洋中的救生衣。 7.Families are the compass that guides us. 家人是指引我们的指南针。 ◆[主题4幻意外事故 示例 分析 Recalling the terrible experience,Scott thanked his friend and Paul和Scott遇到 the rescue team.When buried under snow in the enclosed space, 了雪崩，面临着生命危 Scott drifted between terror and panic,.hoping that his friend Paul险。是幸运、急救知识、 was not buried so deep.He held on to that faint possibility like a友情和救援小队使他们 rope which could pull him to safety.He painstakingly took only tiny从灾难中获救。他们呼 breaths,fighting to stay positive by focusing on his breathing.Time吸着新鲜空气，如获新 ticked away slowly..Just as he was feeling himself fading away,the生。最后，作者用“人们 rescue team arrived.In that one-in-a-million chance,they made it..只有经历了灾难才会意 With the dull sky clearing up,both Paul and Scott breathed in the识到生命多么珍贵”收 fresh air with abandon,feeling the rebirth of life.They realized that尾，使故事的主题得以 only when people have experienced a disaster can they realize how pre- 升华，并启发读者珍爱 cious life is. 生命。 [万能结尾语料] 1.It turned out that there is always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱任何困境。 2.Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties. 只有那时我才意识到，行动能治愈恐惧，勇敢能战胜困难。 3.Never should we give up our hope whatever setbacks we are faced with. 不管我们遇到什么样的挫折，我们都永远不应该放弃希望。 4.Never had I fallen into such a dangerous situation before.The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me to respect nature. 过去我从来没有遇到过那样一种危险的情形。这次经历被我深深记在了心中，它提醒我要尊 重自然。 86 第四章读后续写必备素材 [类型3]人生感悟式结尾 人生感悟式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时，用一两句话将作者从故事中悟出的人文情怀、人际 关系、个人奋斗等方面的感受表达出来。此类结尾宜用倒装句和强调句表达。 示例 分析 After they left,I got into my Jeep and opened the pa 文章讲述了作者的汽车频繁 per bag.There were some delicate fruits in the paper bag. 出故障，大部分人都不愿帮忙。 I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them. 有一次，他在路边求助了很久，但 At the same time,there was a note written by a girl, 是没有人停下来帮忙，就在他打 which read"We are very happy to be able to help you.We 算放弃的时候，一个路过的墨西 have encountered many difficulties and been disappointed. 哥家庭停下来，提供了帮助并给 But we met a lot of helpful people,which made us feel ver- 了他水果。作者读完他们留下的 y warm.To help others with one's own ability is also a 纸条，被陌生人给予的关爱深深 kind of lifting a finger.The beauty of life comes from 地打动了。文章用作者的感悟作 these lifting a finger.I hope you have a good life and a 为结尾，既点明主旨，又将陌生人 happy mood."No sooner had I read it through did I become 的关爱体现得淋漓尽致。 deeply moved by the true love and care from a stranger. [万能结尾语料] [句式l]From then on,非谓语表目的十感悟到的道理 (1)From then on,in order to express my gratitude to that generous and kind lady,I made up mind to pass on this“love”to others.. 从那以后，为了向那位慷慨、善良的女士表达感谢，我下定决心向别人传递这种“爱”。 (2)From that day on,to help build a harmonious community,Lily made up her mind that she would offer a helping hand to those in need in the future. 从那天起，为了帮助建立一个和谐的社区，Ly下定决心，以后遇到有需要帮助的人，她会主 动伸出援手。 [句式2]From this,sb.learned what true十主旨名词十was:感悟到的道理。 From this,Lily learned what true friendship was:A friend in need is a friend indeed. 从这件事中，Ly知道了什么是真正的友谊：患难见真情。 [句式3]Itis/was+主旨名词+that.,,which sb..felt deep/was deeply engraved in one's heart/mind. (1)It is love that makes the world go round,which Bernard felt deep in his heart. 正是爱让世界转动，Bernard在心里深深地感受到了这一点 (2)It was Mr.Johnson's encouragement that gave me courage and confidence. 正是Johnson老师的鼓励给予了我勇气和信心 87 读后续写 [类型4幻发人深省式结尾 发人深省式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时，用简短的语言总结主人公从个人经历中得到的成功或失 败的原因。此类结尾通常以一句名言警句或发人深省的话作为主人公的心理感受或感慨。 示例 分析 Finally the day for the performance came.Emily's eyes danced Emily天生有很多身 with excitement as she stepped onto the stage.Standing still,she体缺陷，她嗓音甜美，但 heard noises among the crowd..Obviously not cheers！Emily felt是被音乐老师Owens拒 nervous again and even her legs began trembling.At that moment, 绝参加选拔，她决定不再 her eyes parked on Mr..Butler at the corner..He nodded and ex-尝试。后来，在新的音乐 changed a determined glance with her,which put her heart back in老师的鼓励下，她参加并 place.With the music rising,Emily began her singing.Her sweet通过了选拔，最后在礼堂 voice poured and the audience fell into abrupt silence.When she献出精彩的表演。最后， finished,the auditorium erupted into a sea of cheers..Emily,in作者引用名言，跳出了原 tears,with so many birth problems in her body,became the shini-本的故事结构，将文章主 est star！Just then she thought of Mark Twain's famous words“All题升华到一定高度，给人 you need in this life is confidence;then success is sure." 以启示。 [万能结尾语料] 1.It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light. 越是在最黑暗的时刻，我们越要集中精神寻找光明。 2.One small positive thought can change your whole day/life. 一个积极的小想法可以改变你的一整天/整个人生。 3.Fear never builds the future,but hope does. 恐惧不能创造未来，但希望可以。 4.It's not what happens to you,but how you react to it that matters. 在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对它。 5.Happiness depends on your mindset and attitude. 幸福取决于你的思维模式和态度。 6.Keep your face always toward the sunshine,and shadows will fall behind you. 让你的脸永远向着阳光，阴影自然会落在你身后。 88 第四章读后续写必备素材 [类型5]寓情于景式结尾 寓情于景式结尾是指在故事结束之后，融情感或感悟于外部环境中，情与景协调一致或构成 强烈的对比。这种写法往往会让读者产生情感共鸣 示例 分析 I had to find him and gave back the change. 文章主要介绍作者排队结账时对身后 Out of the supermarket,an old man with a dirty 衣衫褴楼的老人心生厌恶，便让老人先于 overcoat and sockless ankles caught my atten- 她结账，不料老人把找回的零钱塞进作者 tion.I ran to him quickly,pressing back the 孩子的手中就离开了，这令她惊讶并惭愧。 change into his hand with a big bag of bread for 她急忙找到老人还回零钱并以一大袋面包 his kindness.I hurried away before he expressed 作为答谢。老人的善意行为让作者的心情 his thanks.At this moment,my guilt gave way 转好，家庭和生活在她心中都变得美好了。 to the relief.Also,I felt comfortable about my 故事最后呈现出了这样一个美好的画面： home,family,and even my life,rather than be- 微风拂面，我怀着愉快和感激的心情与可 ing mad.A gentle breeze softly kissed me as I went 爱的孩子一起回家。自然环境与作者的心 home with my lovely child happily as well as grate- 情达到了完美的和谐。 fully. [万能结尾语料] 1.人文环境：（优先与原文故事有关联） (1)At the same time,all of them laughed with excitement,and the laughter echoed in the room. 与此同时，他们都兴奋地笑了起来，笑声回荡在房间里。 (2)Radiant laughter burst out from the room constantly,and the whole family was surrounded by intense happiness. 房间里不断传出灿烂的笑声，整个家庭被包围在强烈的幸福中。 2.自然环境十人：（优先顺承写原文已有景物）》 (1)sb.does sth.,with +the+wind/air/sunlight...+blowing/whipping/whisper- ing greeting/..（十对应介词)十sb.身体部位十副词. al:After a whole day of volunteering service in the nursing home,we headed for our home, with the setting sun smiling upon our happy faces appreciatively. 在养老院志愿服务一整天后，我们动身回家，落日赞赏地把余晖照耀在我们愉快的脸上。 (2)As sb.does sth.the++wind/air/sunlight...+blows/whips/whispers/greets/... (十对应介词)十sb.身体部位十副词，动词-ing形式. l:As I was on the way home regretting what I'd done,the chilly wind whipped my face sharply,as if punishing me for my wrongdoing. 当我走在回家的路上，对我所做的事情感到后悔时，凛冽的寒风像鞭子一样抽打着我的面 庞，好像在惩罚我的过错。 (3)Feeling thewind/air/sunlight/...+blowing/whipping/whispering/greet- ing/...,sb.does sth. Feeling the warm sunlight breaking through the window,the whole family hugged in happiness. 家人感受着穿窗而来的温暖阳光，高兴地拥抱在一起。 (4)Despite the+wind/air/sunlight/...,sb./sth.is full of love/warmth/... l:Despite the chilly autumn wind,their home is full of love and the warmth of reunion. 尽管秋风凛冽，他们的家充满了爱和团聚的温暖。 89