模块4 28个提分句型公式-【创新教程】2025年高考英语复习读后续写写作一本通（新高考）

第四章 读后续写必备素材 事故救援 ·[高分语料] 1. After smashing the car door open with a Coasting in my car, we came across a rock, he pushed aside the airbag, grabbed loose spot of gravel. My tires stuck in it. Jane's arms and helped her out. unable to escape. My car started fishtailing 他用石头砸开车门后,推开安全气囊,抓住 In panic,I pressed hard on the brake and in- Jane的胳膊,把她救了出来。 stantly the car was out of control. The car 2. With only seconds to act, he hastily removed was rushing from left to right,coasting along her seat belt and pushed her out of the car the gravel path like it was ice. Moments lat before it fell down hill again with him trapped er, the front of my car smashed into a tree. inside. 只有几秒钟的时间行动了,他匆忙地解开了 The white airbag immediately hit me violent 她的安全带,把她推出了车,然后车又向山 ly. My body flew back to the seat like a rag 下坠落,他被困在了车里。 doll. Mike was thrown forward, while the 3. The car had come to rest on top of a road seat belt which he was thankfully wearing side wall, literally swinging on the edge of pulled him back. disaster. Even a small sudden move by any 我们开车顺坡而下时,遇到了一块松散 one inside could send it over. 的碎石。我的轮胎卡在了里面,无法逃脱。我 汽车卡在路边的一堵墙上,简直是在灾难的 的车开始摆尾。我惊慌失措地使劲踩刹车, 边缘摇摆着。里面任何人的一个小小的突 汽车立刻失去了控制。汽车从左往右冲,沿 然移动都可能让它翻过去。 着碎石路滑行,像在冰上一样。过了一会儿, 4. Together, we hooked up his car to the bro 我的车头撞到了一棵树上。白色的安全气囊 ken-down one with the tow bar. Slowly 立刻猛烈地撞击我,我的身体像布娃娃一样 we got to the gas station. 我们一起用牵引杠把他的车和那辆抛铺的 飞回座位上。Mike被用到了前面,所幸,他 车连接起来。慢慢地,我们到达了加油站。 系的安全带把他拉了回来。 模块四 1 28个提分句型公式 [类型1] 简单句 [公式1] 无灵主语:Awaveof十表情绪的 1. Uncontrollably,a wave of guilt washed over 名词十特定动词(短语)十sb. me as I heard the bad news. 当我听到这个坏消息时,我感到一阵无法控 happiness joy delight 开心 seize 突然控 制的悔恨。 anger怒火/rage狂怒 制,strike猛地 2. A strong wave of fear sweeping over him. sadness/ sorrow 悲伤 意识到,sur round 围绕. guilt内疚,悔恨 Ronny couldn't utter a single word. A admiration钦佩,赞赏 take hold of 控 一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身,Ronny一句 wave 十sh. 制, wash over gratitude/appreciation感谢,感激 话也说不出来。 of十 horror恐惧/fear 害怕/terror 惊恐 升腾,come 3. A wave of panic seized her, but she forced fright 惊吓/panie 恐懂 astonish over 影响, herself to leave the room calmly. ment 惊讶shock 震惊surprise sweep over 突 惊奋 然袭来 她感到一阵惊慌,但是强迫自己镇静地离开 了房间。 75 读后续写 [公式2] 无灵主语:The sight/thought of 2. It occurred to Elli that the bear might be sth. 士特定动词士sb.士表情绪的形容词/名词 distracted by the delicious bread. 表情绪的形容词:happy/ Elli突然想到能或许会被美味的面包转移注 joyful快乐,excited兴 意力。 奋,bored无聊,upset心 3. The mess in the kitchen reminded the twins 烦,angry愤怒,terrified of the importance of practice. The made 恐惧,shy害羞,lonely孤 厨房里一片狼藉,这提醒着双胞胎实践的重 sb. sight/ 独,sad悲伤,jealous嫉 要性。 thought 妒,shocked 震惊,fright 4. It hit me that I had a choice of sth. ened 害怕,astonished/ surprised 惊讶,anxious 我突然意识到我可以有所选择。 5. It dawned on me that the chocolate my 焦虑 mother gave me was a reminder that I must filledsb. 表情绪的名词[参见上述 公式1] be honest. with 我突然意识到妈妈给我那块巧克力是提醒 1. The very sight of the bear made him nerv- 我一定要诚实。 ous. 一见到那头熊,他就紧张。 公式4 连贯动作:sb. did A,did B and didC. 2. The thought of the moments shared with 1. Without hesitation, he dashed to the man. grandpa filled me with great joy. grasped his hand and started to have a wild 想到和爷爷度过的时光,我就感到十分 argument. 快乐。 他毫不犹豫地冲向那人,抓住他的手,开始 3. The thought of Nick's rudeness made her 激烈地争论起来。 angry. 2. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed 想到Nick的粗鲁态度,她就很生气。 the present down,pounded his doorbell and 4. The sight of its owner made the little dog ex rushed into the car. cited. 看到自己的主人,小狗兴奋起来。 看到没有人注意到我们,我放下礼物,用力 5. The thought of being left alone filled her 按响门钗,然后冲进车里。 with horror. 3. She woke up, slipped out of bed and tiptoed 一想到被独自留下,她就不寒而栗 to the door. [公式3] 无灵主语:An idea十struck十 她醒了,溜下床,踮着脚走到门口。 sb.that...某人突然想到...... 4. He lost his balance, staggered back agains 相关句式有: the rail and fell over. 表示“某人突然想到”:Anidea十struck 他失去了平衡,往后趟想撞在栏杆上摔 sb. that...; It occurredto sb. that... ; It hit 倒了。 sb. that. .. 5. The man took the sacks, reached into his 表示“某人逐渐/突然意识到”:Itgradually pocket and placed four coins in her hand. dawned on me that...; All of a sudden, I 那人接过麻袋,手伸进口袋,拘出4枚硬币 came to realize'understand that.. 表示“某事物让某人想起”;sth.remindssb.of 放在她手里。 1. An idea suddenly struck the twins that they 6. Joe also ran in my direction, gathered me could ask their dad for help. into his arms and kept patting my back. 双胞胎突然想到一个主意;他们可以请爸爸 Joe朝我这个方向跑过来,把我拥入怀中, 帮忙。 不停地轻拍我的后背。 76 第四章 读后续写必备素材 [类型2] 非谓语动词 [公式1] 分词短语作状语 [公式3] 独立主格:逻辑主语(表身体部 1.I opened the letter carefully, hoping for 位的名词)十非谓语/形/副/介短 some clues to the identity of the owner of the 1. The boy rushed to the old man's house,his wallet. face covered with sweat 我小心翼翼地打开信,希望能找到一些有 关钱包主人身份的线索。 男孩冲到那位老人的家里,满脸是汗。 2. Having experienced so many failures one af- 2. As we hugged Ruth goodbye, she said ter another, she finally picked herself up. nothing,her eyes filling with tears. 她接连经历了那么多次失败后,终于振作起 当我们和Ruth拥抱告别时,她什么都没 来了。 说,眼里了满了泪水。 3. She felt exhausted, so she sat by the stream 3. A young man stood in the street, holding a resting her aching feet. 她感到精疲力竭,于是坐在小溪边,让自己 small red flag, his face red with cold 疼痛的双脚休息一下。 一个年轻人站在街上,举着一面小红旗,他 4. Knowing no help could come in a short time. 的脸冻得通红。 she took a photo of the nearby road sign 4. He raced to the bus stop,his heart pounding and posted it online. violently. 知道在短时间内没有人会来帮忙,她拍了一 他飞快地跑到公共汽车站,心抨悴猛跳 张附近路标的照片并把它发布到网上。 [公式2] with复合结构:with十名词十非 5. Her eves glittering with relief, my mother 谓语/形/副/介短 embraced me tightly. 1. We all pretty much slept with one eye open 妈妈眼睛里闪现着宽慰的神色,紧紧地抱 till morning came. 住我。 我们几乎都是睁着一只眼睛睡到天亮 6. My arms aching and knees trembling,I 2. My fifteen-year-old son leaned against the crawled out of the cave and shouted for kitchen counter with his arms folded across help. his chest,glaring at me. 手臂疼痛、膝盖发抖,我爬出了洞,大喊 我15岁的儿子靠在厨房的操作台上,双臂 救命。 交叉在胸前,怒视着我。 3. With tears welling up in his eves, he thanked 7. So many eyes looking at her, Mary felt the police with a trembling voice. very shy. 他热泪盈眶,声音颤抖着感谢警方。 这么多双眼睛望着她,Mary感到很害羞。 4. With his plan ruined by the accident, he le 8. His heart filled with regret, he apologized out a cry of anger for what he had done. 这场意外毁了他的计划,他愤怒地大叫了 一声。 他内心充满懊悔,为自已所做的事情道歉。 [类型3] 从句 [公式1定语从句:主句,whose十表身体 3. John, whose heart was racing wildly, stepped 部位的名词十谓语动词 onto the stage and began his speech. 1. Mother hugged the twins tightly,whose John的心狂跳着,迈步走上台,开始他的 faces were glowing with excitement 演讲。 妈妈紧紧地拥抱双胞胎,他们兴奋得满脸 [公式2] 让步状语从句:形容词十as 通红。 though十... 2. Eagerly,the twins gazed at their mother 1. Cold and tired though we were, the kids whose eves were filled with tears of thrill. smiling faces cheered us up. 双胞胎热切地注视着妈妈,她的眼里充满 虽然我们又冷又累,但孩子们的笑脸使我 激动的泪水。 们振奋起来。 77 读后续写 2. Unwilling as I was, I had no choice but to 3. Exhausted and hungry as he was, he carried wash the dishes as told on climbing the mountain. 尽管我不情愿,但我别无选择只能按嘱咐 虽然他又累又饿,但他继续爬山。 洗碗。 [类型4] 倒装 [公式1] 副词/介词短语十全部倒装 [公式4No sooner... than...Hard- 1. Away went the runners. ly...when... 赛跑选手们跑开了。 1. No sooner had I finished the ice cream than my 2. Among them was my friend Jim. mom came back with a bowl of broccoli. 他们当中就有我的朋友]im 我刚吃完冰淇淋,妈妈就拿着一碗西蓝花回 来了。 [公式2] 表否定意义的副词或介词短语 十部分倒装 2. Hardly had I rushed out of the house when it crashed downfilling, the air with brick 1. While he was rescuing survivors in the ru dust. ins,little did he care about his own safety. 我刚从房子里跑出来,它就倒塌了,空气里 当他在废墟中营救幸存者时,他几乎不关心 充满了砖灰。 自己的安全。 公式5]So... that;Such...(that) 2. Seldom has he seen such a fierce creature 1. With crowds of the audience around, so before. embarrassed was she that she stood there 他以前很少见到这样一头猛兽。 awkwardly, feeling the blood rush to her 3. On no account should you judge a person by face. the appearance. 周围有大批观众,她感到很难堪,局促不安 你绝对不能以貌取人。 地站在那里,感觉血液涌上了自已的脸。 4. Not until the rabbit got completely out of 2. So scared was Mac that he failed to move our sight did we stop chasing after it. standing still like a stone. 直到那只免子完全消失在我们的视线中,我 Mac非常害怕,无法移动,像块石头一样僵 立着。 们才不追了。 [公式3] 句首Only十状语(Onlythen, 3. So swift was the flowing water that he failed to get close to the trapped car. Only when...,Only in this way) 水流如此之快,他无法靠近被困汽车。 1. Only then did she realize the danger of the 4. Such a funny story was it that it still lin situation. gered in his mind as years went by. 直到那时她才意识到处境危险。 这个故事如此有趣,多年过去依然留存在他 2. Only when things turn urgent will I take 脑海里。 action to get them settled 5. Such is the key to success-a little bit more 只有当事情变得紧急时,我才会采取行动 efforts and a little bit more determination 解决问题。 will create a little bit more miracles. 3. Onlv in this way could he approach the car 这就是成功的秘诀--多一点点努力,多一 trapped in the river. 点点决心,(你)就能创造出多一点点的 只有这样他才能靠近陷入河里的汽车。 奇迹。 78 第四章 读后续写必备素材 [类型5] 虚拟语气 [公式1] 情态动词(十not)十havedone本 [公式3]Without十名词,sb.would(not) (不)应该...... have donesth.没有......某人就(不)可能...... 1. Looking at the perfect breakfast cooked by 1. Without Eric's encouragement, I would have their father, they remorsefully thought they been immersed in sorrow for the rest of should have asked him how to make break the day. fast previously! 要是没有Eric的鼓励,我可能后半天都沉 看着爸爸煮好的完美早餐,她们懊悔地想, 浸在悲伤的情绪里。 应该先跟爸爸请教怎么做早餐的 2. Without their father's help, they wouldn' 2. Remorsefully I thought to myself: I shouldn't have succeeded. have angered it. What a terrible try. 没有父亲的帮忙,他们就不可能成功。 我懊悔地想,不应该惹怒它的,这真是个糟 公式4 but for要不是 糕的尝试。 1. But for this experience, she wouldn't have 公式2 ifonly要是......就好了 realized that she should spend more time 1. "If only I had listened to my mother's ad- with her family. vice!”the little girl whispered to herself. 要不是这次经历,她就不会意识到她应该花 “要是我当初听取了妈妈的建议该多好!”小 更多的时间和家人在一起。 女孩低声对自已说。 2. But for their common efforts, they could 2. Mom said delightedly, if only she could not have achieved so much in their project have such a delicious breakfast every day! 妈妈开心地说,要是每天都可以吃到这么 没有他们的共同努力,他们就不可能在项目 美味的早餐就好了! 上取得如此大的成就 [类型6 1 其他 [公式1 比喻式:be十as十形容词十as十a(n).. 1. Her face turned as pale as snow 她的脸变得苍白如雪。 be as pleased/delighted/cheerful/joyful 2. The teacher's comfort was as gentle as a as a flying bird. spring breeze. 高兴得像一只飞翔的小鸟 < be as nervous as an ant on a hot pan. 老师的劝慰如春风般温柔。 急得像热锅上的蚂蚁 3. Having walked in the snow for two hours. be as angry mad as a raging storm felt my hands were as cold as ice 愤怒得像狂风暴雨 在雪地里走了两个小时,我感到我的手冷得 忙得团团转 be as busy as a bee 像冰。 4. At the sight of the bear, he was as white as be as easy as a piece of cake 轻而易举 a sheet. be asbright as daylight 如目光般明亮 用 一看到那头熊,他就面无血色。 be as dazzling as diamonds 5. When we arrived at the lake eventually,we 像钻石般闪耀 found the water was as smooth as glass be as gentle as a breeze 像微风一样温柔 当我们最终来到湖边时,我们看到湖水平 如镜。 79 读后续写 [公式2 比喻式,特定动词短语十表情绪 2. Anger took hold of him like a wild beast 的名词,sb.didsth. like... 愤怒像野兽一样控制了他。 特定动词短语有;filledwith充满、falling into 3. Fear swept over him like cold, dark sea wa- 陷入、drowned in沉浸在、seizedby被......侵 ter. 恐惧像冰冷、黑暗的海水淹没了他。 袭、overwhelmedwith/by充溢着 [公式4]前置式:前置副词,sb.didsth., 1. Overwhelmed by sorrow, Mary cried like a doing sth. baby. 1. Unwillingly, I washed the dishes, feeling 悲痛不已,Mary像个婴儿一样哭泣。 impatient. 2. Seized by curiosity, Tom went out of the 我不情愿地洗了碗,感到很不耐烦。 room on tiptoe like a cat. 2. Gradually, she restored her faith in herself. Tom好奇心顿起,像猫一样踮着脚走出 taking back charge of the situation 房间。 渐渐地她恢复了自信,重掌了局面。 3. Filled with fear, I was shaking all over 3. Firmly,he pressed on the wound, stopping trembling like a leaf. the bleeding. 被恐惧笼罩,我浑身颤抖,像一片叶子似的 他用力压住伤口,止了血。 抖动。 4. Slowly, we approached the mountain top, 4. Filled with anger, he charged towards me taking a deep breath. like a bull. 慢慢地我们接近了山顶,深深吸了口气 他满腔怒火,如公牛一般向我冲过来。 5. Gently, she examined the child's leg, show 5. Falling into frustration, Rose buried her face ing great concern for him. in arms like a deflated balloon 她轻轻地检查了孩子的腿,展现出对他的极 大关爱。 满心泪书,Rose把脸理进双臂,像泄了气的 气球。 [公式5前置式:前置形容词(短语),十句子 6. Drowned in happiness,Jimmy dashed out of 1. Excited and moved, he followed the sound the school gate like a free bird and went out for help. 他又激动又感动,循着声音出去求助。 Jimmy沉浸在欢乐里,像一只自由的小鸟一 2. Speechless with happiness, she held her son 般冲出了校门。 tightly into her arms, with tears welling up [公式3] 比喻式:表情绪的名词十特定动 in her eyes. 词短语十sb,like... 她高兴得说不出话来,双臂紧紧地楼着她的 特定动词短语有:washover袭来、takehold 儿子,热泪盈眶。 of 控制、sweepover突然袭来 3. Tired and hungry,they rushed into the sho 1. Happiness washed over him like warm sun- and drank tea, ate biscuits and had a good shine/ like a beam of warm sunlight like a rest. warm sunbeam. 他们又累又饿,就冲进店里,喝茶,吃饼干, 幸福像暖阳洒在他身上。 好好休息了一下。 80 第四章 读后续写必备素材 4. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off [公式8]嵌入式:sb.sth.,嵌入解释“同 the path and ventured down the west side 位语/定语从句”,谓语...... 1. Bears, which are usually solitary creatures. of the mountain. can be dangerous. 由于看不远,他不小心离开了道路,冒险从 熊通常是独居动物,会很危险。 山的西侧下山。 2. Not her failure, but her courage,the courage 5. Safe and sound, Mary got out of the forest to go ahead,is what I remember then and saw her husband with the help of the 当时我想到的不是她的失败,而是她的勇 helicopter. 气,那种前进的勇气。 在直升机的帮助下,Mary安然无善地出了 3. My glasses, without which I was like a blind man,fell to the ground and broke. 森林,见到了她的丈夫。 我的眼镜掉在地上摔坏了,没有眼镜的我就 [公式6]嵌入式:sb./sth.十嵌入介词短 像个盲人。 语/从句+didsth. [公式9]强调式:It is/was十sb./sth.十 1. The helicopter,as expected,finally arrived that... 直升机如期待那般终于到来了 1. It was the whole situation that made her 2. The bear, in return, yelled with an angry very depressed and upset. 正是整个情况让她感到非常沮丧和失望 roar. 2. It's through commitment and sweat that I 那头熊回应了一声愤怒的咆哮。 can change myself inside and out. 3. I started taking the wheel off, and then. 正是通过投入和汗水,我才能彻底改变 believe it or not,broke his tire iron 自己。 我开始动手更换车轮,却把他的拆轮胎棒弄 公式10 长短相间式:小短句十长句 断了,信不信由你。 1. It proved a big success. A perfect breakfas was produced by their father like magic [公式7]嵌入式:sb./sth.,嵌入打比方 这证明是个巨大的成功。一顿完美的早餐 “like十同类人”,谓语...... 被他们的父亲魔法般地做出来了。 1. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should 2. Finally, they made it. A perfect set of be photographed from a safe distance. breakfast was ready and it was time to sur 北极熊,像所有的野生动物一样,应在安全 prise their mom. 距离之外拍摄。 终于,他们成功了。一顿完美的早餐准备 好了,是时候给他们的母亲惊喜了。 2. I,like many a procrastinator, failed to resist 3. What a fantastic breakfast! The twins the temptation of entertainments could not wait to show it to their mother. 我像许多的拖延症患者一样,没有抵挡住娱 多么美妙的一顿早餐!双胞胎等不及要给 乐活动的诱惑。 他们的妈妈看看。 81