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第四章 读后续写必备素材
模块三
主题描写类高级表达
[类型1] 人际关系
2......
亲情
-友情
1. The whole family were watching our little
1. As time goes by,the relationship between us
boy, hoping he would pull himself together
has become closer and closer
and play his part.
随着时间的推移,我们之间的关系变得越来
全家人都在看着我们的小男孩,希望他能振
越密切。
作起来,扮演好自己的角色。
2. That day,Mike learnt the biggest lesson of
2. Deeplv moved by all that his son did, the fa
his life: It is always better to work as a team
ther could say nothing but to hug him
tightly, tears welling up.
than to work alone.
被儿子所做的一切深深地感动了,父亲说不
那天,Mike学到了人生中最重要的一课:团
出话来,只是紧紧地楼着儿子,泪水夺眶
队合作总比单干好。
而出。
3. I do know that no life is permanent. No
3. At that moment, she realized that it was
matter where she is, I will cherish our
the warmth and company of her family that
friendship and miss her forever.
enabled her to go through this difficult
我的确知道没有生命是永恒的。无论她在
time.
哪里,我都会珍惜我们的友谊,永远想念她
在那一刻,她意识到,是家人的温暖和陪伴,
4. I trusted my doctors to heal my body,but I
让她度过了这段艰难的时光。
4. It was through the love and support of her
depended on the group to heal my spirit and
grandparents that she was able to blossom
provide me with a unique fellowship
in the best woman gymnast in the world.
我相信我的医生能治愈我的身体,但我依靠
正是由于她的祖父母的爱和支持,她才得以
这个团体来治愈我的精神,并为我提供一种
成长为世界上最好的女体操运动员。
独特的友谊。
5. The twins were filled with excitement at the
5. Exhausted as Henry was, he was delighted
thought of the surprise they were planning
to help his friend. It was at that instant tha
for Mother's Day, How pleased and proud
he realized what is true friendship.
Mother would be when they brought her
breakfast.
尽管Henry很疲惫,但他还是很乐意帮助
这对双胞胎一想到他们为母亲节安排的惊
他的朋友。就在那一刻,他意识到了什么是
喜就兴奋不已。当他们给母亲送来早餐时,
真正的友谊。
她会多么高兴和自豪啊。
6. He had learnt that it was much better to
·[高分语料]
feel evervone's affection and friendship than
“Mom, I'm deeply sorry for my rudeness.
to be rude to others in an attempt to feel
It won't happen again. I promise! Would
better than them.
过you forgive me?"" You're always my little
他意识到,感受每个人的喜爱和友谊比为
girl!"Mom eyed Jenny tenderly. As the setting
了让自己感觉比别人好而粗鲁地对待别人
sun cast a golden glow on both of their faces.
要好得多。
they embraced each other tightly.
师生情
“妈妈,我为我的粗鲁深表歉意。这种情
况以后不会再发生了。
我保证!你能原谅我
1. My teacher repeatedly praised me and asked
吗?”“你永远是我的小女孩!”妈妈温柔地注
me to assist my classmates in their study.
视着Jenny。她们紧紧地抱在一起,夕阳投
我的老师一再表扬我,并让我帮助同学
下的金色微光照在她们两人的脸上。
学习。
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2. Finally,the family couldn't help but thank
4)
社会温情
the teacher for sending warmth in time when
1. We should appreciate what we have ob-
a child needed help most.
tained from life and seize every opportunity
最后,家人忍不住感谢老师,在孩子最需要
to help others.
帮助的时候及时送出了温暖
我们应该感激从生活中得到的东西,抓住
3. Mrs Collins encouraged her to compete for
每一次帮助别人的机会。
the reading award. With this kind teacher
2. I smiled back in tears. Not until that mo
cheering her on, she gained confidence and
ment did I realize what a big difference one
languageskills.
small gesture had made.
Collins老师鼓励她争夺阅读奖。在这位善
我含泪回以微笑。直到那一刻,我才意识到
良的老师的鼓励下,她获得了自信和语言
技能。
一个小小的手势有多大的影响。
4. Miva could remember she wrote about her
3. It dawned on him that love could exist for
parents,who loved her and took care of her
ever with the passage of time. And it is the
and her teacher, who encouraged her to be
kindness that makes the world a place full of
brave to raise questions
magic and love.
Miya还记得她写过爱她、照顾她的父母和
他开始明白,爱可以随着时间的流逝而永远
鼓励她勇敢提出问题的老师
存在。正是这种善良使世界成为一个充满
5. Just at that moment, she got a glimpse of
魔力和爱的地方
Mr, Smith in the corner of the hall, who
4. Now I realize that if you want to be forgiven
shot Emily a determined look and then
by others, you should show your kindness
clapped loudly to give her a cheer.
first. No one will refuse a goodwill gesture
就在那一刻,她警见了大厅角落里的Smith
offered by others especially when in trou-
老师,他坚定地看了Emily一眼,然后大声
ble.
鼓掌为她喝彩。
现在我明白了,如果你想被别人原谅,你应
·[高分语料]
该先表现出你的善意。没有人会拒绝别人
After the match, Steven sat as close to
友好的表示,尤其是在困难的时候。
Mr. Rowe in class as he could. When a
·[高分语料]
question was asked, Steven lit up; when he
We appreciated it so much that we got a
knew the answer, he raised his hand; when
free gift from the kind stand owner. What's
he answered the question , his voice shook.
the most impressive is that Robby passed on
He got the answer right! He said that with
the kindness to a homeless man too. We never
Mr. Rowe, his davs of the fourth grade
know what happiness a simple act of kindness
promised to be wonderful. It was obvious
will bring. By giving, we also teach others
that Steven grew to love Mr. Rowe more and
more with each passing day.
how to give. Remember: The fragrance al-
那场比赛后,Steven在课堂上坐得尽可
ways stays in the hand that gives the rose.
能靠近Rowe老师。当被问到一个问题时
我们非常感激,从好心的摊主那里得到
Steven面露喜色:当他知道答案时,他举起了
了一份免费的礼物。最让人印象深刻的是,
手;当他回答这个问题时,他的声音颤抖了
Robby也把这份善意传递给一个无家可归的
他的答案是正确的!他说,和Rowe老师在一
人。我们永远不知道一个简单的善举会带来
起,他四年级的日子一定会很美好。很明显,
什么样的幸福。通过给予,我们也教会别人
一天天过去,Steven越来越爱Rowe老师了。
如何给予。记住:赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
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[类型2] 个人成长
1. At the moment, I learned what my dad
5. I never forgot the feeling of powerlessness
meant and became willing to contribute
when faced with the injured in that acci
more to the household. I didn't feel confus
dent. It was that accident that changed
ed anymore about why I should hand in my
me, giving me an entirely new life.
我永远不会忘记在那次事故中面对伤者时
earnings, as it was indeed my responsibilit
的那种无力感。正是那次事故改变了我,给
to support the whole family.
了我全新的生活。
在那一刻,我明白了父亲的意思。并愿意
6. Since then I have often been reminded of
为家庭做更多的贡献。我不再对为什么我
the fish that I did not catch and the wisdom
应该上交我的收入感到困惑,因为养活整
of my uncle: Never brag of your fish before
个家庭确实是我的责任
you catch him
2. This made me very moved, and I would try
从那以后我经常想起我没有钓到的鱼和我
my best to help more people in the future
叔叔的智慧:鱼未抓到,莫夸其好。
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and bring warmth to more people
这让我很感动,以后我会尽我最大的努力去
At that moment, he realized there was
something more meaningful in life. He came
帮助更多的人,给更多的人带来温暖。
3. This experience made me realize that the
to know there were lots of people around him
who really cared about him. Thinking of
persons who you are grateful to are always
that,Glen had a bright smile spreading across
there and don't ignore them!
his face and felt a sense of responsibility. It
这次经历使我意识到,你所要感激的人一直
was he that shut the door of the whole
都在那里,不要忽视他们!
world. It was an unforgettable experience in
4. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always be
his life and luckily he was back on track
come the winner if I wanted something bad-
在那一刻,他意识到生活中还有更有意
ly and worked for it. I can be the master of
义的东西。他开始明白在他身边有很多人是
my own destiny.
真正关心他的。想到那一点,Glen的脸上绽
开了灿烂的笑容,他感到了一种责任感。是
十三岁的时候,我意识到如果我非常想要某
他把整个世界的大门关上了。这是他一生难
样东西并为之努力,我总是会成为胜利者。
忘的经历,幸运的是,他回到了正轨。
我可以是自已命运的主宰。
[类型3] 意外事件
动物追赶
·[高分语料]
1. When a tiger was approaching me, I froze
Matt got the upper hand, pinning the
with terror,too scared to move an inch.
当一只老虎向我靠近时,我吓得呆住了,一
wolf to the ground. But quickly the wolf
动也不敢动。
clamped its jaws onto Matt's arm and began
2. When I saw a snake, I felt so scared that
dragging Matt outside. It was then that Russ
my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
Fee appeared. He ran at the beast, kicking it
当我看到一条蛇时,我感到非常害怕,我的
in the hip. The wolf dropped Matt and
喉咙发紧,膝盖发软
3. The wolf edged closer, ears upright, body
turned its anger on Fee.
tense, and stopped a few yards off, her
Matt占了上风,把狼按倒在地。但那只狼
bushy tail wagging slightly.
很快咬住Matt的胳膊,开始把Matt拖出去。
狼慢慢靠近了,耳朵竖起,身体绸紧,在几码
就在那时,RussFee出现了。他冲向野兽,踢它
远的地方停了下来,她毛茸茸的尾巴微微摆
动着。
的屁股。狼扔下Matt,把怒气转向Fee
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惊险逃生
素2
6. Simpson noticed the flame was growing.
1. They both spent a minute catching their
Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the
breath and calmed themselves down.
spot. By then, he was coughing and his
eyes were stinging.
他们两人都花了一分钟时间喘了口气,让
Simpson注意到火势越来越大。他吓呆了,
自己冷静下来。
站着一动不动。到那时,他已经开始咳嗽,
2. Gathering all his strength, carefully, bit by
眼睛刺痛。
bit, Simpson climbed out of the snow hole.
4
水灾救援
Simpson用尽全身力气,一点一点地、小心
1. Without hesitation, he dove into the dam
翼翼地从雪洞里爬了出来。
water and, after a minute, pulled a fellow
3. He felt weak but otherwise fine. He was
student out.
glad to be out of danger and reunited with
他毫不犹豫地跳入大坝的水中,一分钟后,
his family.
把一个同学拉了出来。
他感到虚弱,但其他方面还好。他很高兴脱
2. That night, damage and flooding caused by
离了危险,与家人团聚了。
the storm were worse than they imagined.
4. The icy water pierced my skin like needles.
那天晚上,暴风雨造成的损失和洪水比他们
I was anxious to climb out by myself, but
想象的要严重。
3. The water was up to her lap, but Mary was
countless previous failures stopped me from
very strong and she struggled through the
struggling again
waves with me on her back.
冰冷的水像针一样刺痛我的皮肤。我渴望
水到了她的大腿,但Mary非常强壮,她背
自己爬出去,但之前无数次的失败阻止了我
着我穿过海浪艰难前行。
再次挣扎。
4. Someone came and pulled both kids away
素3
一灭灾救
from the water. The little girl lay on the
1. The firefighters went back into the house
ground, too frightened to cry.
with scant regard for their own safety.
有人过来把两个孩子从水里拉了出来。那
个小女孩躺在地上,吓得哭不出来。
消防员奋不顾身地回到那座房子里。
5. Unfortunately, with pipes burst all over the
2. Languell tried putting out the fire with
state,and piping materials difficult to find.
buckets of water but failed.
many families have been left without drink
Languell试着用一桶桶的水把火扑灭,但
ing water and with their homes flooded
失败了。
不幸的是,由于整个州的管道破裂,管道材
3. I jumped out of bed, opened the door and
料很难找到,许多家庭没有饮用水,房屋
stepped out into the passage. It was full of
被淹。
thick smoke.
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我跳下床,打开门,来到了走廊上。那里已
He'd have to rescue Mrs. Wilson him-
经满是浓烟了。
self. Luckily, he'd learned a little about first
4. A thick burning smell filled the air. When
aid and CPR from a class. He dived under
Tom opened the front door of his flat to
the water and swam toward her as fast as he
check,a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.
could. But when he got close to her still
空气中弥漫着浓浓的燃烧气味。当Tom打
body,he wasn't sure what to do. Mrs. Wilson
was so large. How could he possibly lift
开他公寓的前门查看时,一股浓烟迎面
扑来。
her? Jack wrapped one arm around her neck,
swimming with all his strength to the top.
5. Flames had already engulfed most of the
他得亲自去救Wilson夫人。幸运的是,
top of the house by the time the neighbor
他在一堂课上学到了一些急救和心肺复苏的
Angela Spynda called the fire department
知识。他潜入水中,尽可能快地向她游去。
for help.
但当他靠近她静止的身体时,他不知道该怎
等到邻居AngelaSpynda打电话向消防部
么办。Wilson太太个头很大。他怎么可能把
门求助时,火焰已经吞噬了房子的大部分
她抱起来呢?Jack用一只胳膊楼住她的脖
顶部。
子,用尽全身力气向上游。
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事故救援
·[高分语料]
1. After smashing the car door open with a
Coasting in my car, we came across a
rock, he pushed aside the airbag, grabbed
loose spot of gravel. My tires stuck in it.
Jane's arms and helped her out.
unable to escape. My car started fishtailing
他用石头砸开车门后,推开安全气囊,抓住
In panic,I pressed hard on the brake and in-
Jane的胳膊,把她救了出来。
stantly the car was out of control. The car
2. With only seconds to act, he hastily removed
was rushing from left to right,coasting along
her seat belt and pushed her out of the car
the gravel path like it was ice. Moments lat
before it fell down hill again with him trapped
er, the front of my car smashed into a tree.
inside.
只有几秒钟的时间行动了,他匆忙地解开了
The white airbag immediately hit me violent
她的安全带,把她推出了车,然后车又向山
ly. My body flew back to the seat like a rag
下坠落,他被困在了车里。
doll. Mike was thrown forward, while the
3. The car had come to rest on top of a road
seat belt which he was thankfully wearing
side wall, literally swinging on the edge of
pulled him back.
disaster. Even a small sudden move by any
我们开车顺坡而下时,遇到了一块松散
one inside could send it over.
的碎石。我的轮胎卡在了里面,无法逃脱。我
汽车卡在路边的一堵墙上,简直是在灾难的
的车开始摆尾。我惊慌失措地使劲踩刹车,
边缘摇摆着。里面任何人的一个小小的突
汽车立刻失去了控制。汽车从左往右冲,沿
然移动都可能让它翻过去。
着碎石路滑行,像在冰上一样。过了一会儿,
4. Together, we hooked up his car to the bro
我的车头撞到了一棵树上。白色的安全气囊
ken-down one with the tow bar. Slowly
立刻猛烈地撞击我,我的身体像布娃娃一样
we got to the gas station.
我们一起用牵引杠把他的车和那辆抛铺的
飞回座位上。Mike被用到了前面,所幸,他
车连接起来。慢慢地,我们到达了加油站。
系的安全带把他拉了回来。
模块四
1 28个提分句型公式
[类型1] 简单句
[公式1] 无灵主语:Awaveof十表情绪的
1. Uncontrollably,a wave of guilt washed over
名词十特定动词(短语)十sb.
me as I heard the bad news.
当我听到这个坏消息时,我感到一阵无法控
happiness joy delight 开心
seize 突然控
制的悔恨。
anger怒火/rage狂怒
制,strike猛地
2. A strong wave of fear sweeping over him.
sadness/ sorrow 悲伤
意识到,sur
round 围绕.
guilt内疚,悔恨
Ronny couldn't utter a single word.
A
admiration钦佩,赞赏
take hold of 控
一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身,Ronny一句
wave
十sh.
制, wash over
gratitude/appreciation感谢,感激
话也说不出来。
of十
horror恐惧/fear 害怕/terror 惊恐
升腾,come
3. A wave of panic seized her, but she forced
fright 惊吓/panie 恐懂 astonish
over
影响,
herself to leave the room calmly.
ment 惊讶shock 震惊surprise
sweep over 突
惊奋
然袭来
她感到一阵惊慌,但是强迫自己镇静地离开
了房间。
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