模块1 人物描写类高级表达-【创新教程】2025年高考英语复习读后续写写作一本通（新高考）

第四章读后续写必备素材 第四章 读后续写必备素材 模块一人物描写类高级表达 [类型1] 动作描写 索材1 嘴部动作 ●[高分语料] 1.The children were running around me, Tom glanced at Joe's iron face and his jumping and screaming. tongue failed him.The audience listened breathlessly,but the words refused to come. 孩子们围着我跑，又跳又叫。 After a few moments,however,the boy got a 2.The house was really noisy at that time, little of his strength back,and managed to with everybody hollering and shouting. put enough of it into his voice only to make 那时房子里非常吵，每个人都在大喊大叫。 some people in the house hear. 3.Helena pulled Mya into her arms and plan- Tom瞥了一眼Joe那张冷酷的脸，他的 ted a kiss on her forehead. 舌头就僵住了。听众们屏息听着，可是话还 Helena把Mya搂在怀里，在她的前额上深 是没有说出来。然而，过了一会儿，这个男孩 深地吻了一下。 子恢复了一点力气，勉强提高了声音，但房间 里还是只有一些人能听到（他的声音）。 4.As Mrs.Morena led him inside,she low- ered herself so Trevor could whisper in 素材2 眼部动作 her ear. 1.My sister stared sadly at the empty basket and said nothing. 当Morena太太领他进去时，她把身子放 我姐姐悲伤地盯着空篮子，什么也没说。 低，好让Trevor能在她耳边低语 2.The dog turned around,eyeing us,with his 5.The cookies cooled on the table,filling the tail swinging up and down. kitchen with their sweet smell,making her 这只狗转过身来，上下摆动着尾巴，注视着 mouth water. 我们。 饼干在桌上晾凉，厨房里充满了甜甜的味 3.I felt all the people present were looking at 道，馋得她流口水。 me with strange eyes. 我感到所有在场的人用奇怪的目光看着我。 6.I told her that every time my mom dropped 4.He turned his eyes to the door when he Trevor off at the day care center,she'd heard the handle turning. calm him down by blowing him a kiss like 当他听到门把手转动（的声音）时，他向门 this. 那边看去。 我告诉她每次我妈妈送Trevor到日托所时 5.The mother and daughter held each other 都会像这样给他一个飞吻让他冷静下来。 tightly,their eyes filled with tears. 7.His body trembled,his mouth half opened, 母女俩紧紧地拥抱在一起，眼里噙满了 泪水。 and he let out a scream of pain that felt like 6.Dad gazed at them and suddenly realized a knife cutting through his chest. that it was no longer disturbing to cele- 他的身体颤抖着，他的嘴半张着，他发出一 brate his birthday with the love of family. 声痛苦的尖叫，感觉就像一把刀穿过他的 爸爸凝视着他们，突然意识到用家人的爱 胸膛。 来庆祝生日已经不再令人烦恼了。 63 读后续写 7.I saw her eyes light up when she was pres- 素材4 手部动作 ented the most precious gift. 1.I struggled to wave my hands and legs. 当她收到这份最珍贵的礼物时，我看到她两 我挣扎着挥动我的手和腿。 眼放光。 2.When Grandpa took the cane,his hands ●[高分语料】 started to shake. My mother and I both stared at the little 当爷爷接过手杖时，他的手开始发抖。 boy on the stage.The color came back to his face and his eyes began to sparkle.He opened 3.“L,et's keep looking,”Mom said,grabbing his mouth and began to sing along,his weak my sister's hand. voice growing louder with each word. “我们继续找吧，”妈妈抓着我姐姐的手 我和妈妈都盯着舞台上的小男孩。他的 说着。 脸恢复了红润，眼睛开始闪闪发光。他张开 4.Instinctively,he reached for the knife in the 嘴，开始跟着唱起来，他那微弱的声音每唱 pocket of his backpack. 个字就响亮一些 他本能地伸手去拿背包口袋里的刀。 素材3 头部动作 5.Standing on the bridge,the two held each 1.He ducked his head and stepped back to his other's hands tightly with tears in their seat. eyes. 他低下头，回到座位上。 两人站在桥上，紧握着彼此的手，眼里含着 2.He scratched his head and looked thought- 泪水。 ful. 6.Lucy's mom sensed her daughter's worry 他挠着头，显出一副深思的样子。 and gave her a reassuring pat on the back. 3.I asked him his name,but he just shook his Lucy的妈妈察觉到了女儿的担忧，拍拍她 head and walked away. 的背安慰她。 我问他叫什么名字，但他只是摇了摇头，然 后走开了。 7.Emily,moved and grateful,hugged Gowan 4.At first the bird stuck his head out of his and extended her appreciation. cage just to take a sip of water and fill his Emily很感动，也很感激，拥抱了Gowan,表 mouth with food. 达了她的感激之情。 起初，这只鸟把头探出笼子，只是为了喝一 8.“We won！Championship game,here we 口水，把嘴里塞满食物。 come!"said Tara,giving Devin five. 5.I closed my eyes,threw my head back and “我们赢了！冠军赛，我们来了！”Tara说 ran with my last ounce of strength,in the 着，与Devin击掌相庆。 direction of the dream finishing line. 9.The man took the sack,reached into his 我闭上眼睛，仰起头，用尽最后一点力气，朝 pocket and placed four coins in my hand. 那条梦寐以求的终点线方向跑去。 那人接过麻袋，把手伸进自己的口袋，然后 6.He lowered his head,but soon looked up."I didn't buy books,”he said.“I gave my 将4枚硬币放在我手里。 money to some poor people who seemed 10.He put on the shoes and stepped on the hungry.” snow,with Judy hopping and clapping 他低下了头，但很快又抬起头来。“我没有 hands after him. 买书，”他说，“我把我的钱给了一些看起来 他穿上鞋子，踩在雪地上，Judy在他后面 很饿的穷人。” 拍着手跳着。 64 第四章读后续写必备素材 ●[高分语料] 4.As he paced anxiously outside the operating They decided to boil the porridge first. room,he spotted a glimmer of hope. They put some rice into a pot of water and 当他在手术室外焦急地踱步时，他看到了一 left it to boil while they made the French 丝希望。 toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and 5.When Peter slid across the stage,his family added in some milk.Jenna found the bread noticed his new ill-fitting shoes. and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next, 当Peter滑过舞台时，他的家人注意到了他 Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up 那双不合脚的新鞋。 6.The two brothers were soon bored with the frying pan.Everything was going smooth- adult conversation,went out and wandered ly until Jeff started frying the bread.The into the forest. pan was too hot and the bread turned black 兄弟俩很快就厌倦了大人的谈话，就出去 within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece 到森林里闲逛。 into the sink and put in another slice of 7.We jumped with joy,and at the same time, bread.This time,she turned down the fire so we recognized the car which belonged to an it cooked nicely. old lady in our neighborhood. 他们决定先煮粥。他们把一些米放进 我们高兴得跳了起来，同时，我们认出那辆 锅水中，一边煮一边做法式吐司。Jeff把两 车是我们那个街区的一位老太太的。 个鸡蛋打在盘子里，然后加入一些牛奶。 ●[高分语料] Jenna找到了面包，在鸡蛋混合物里放了两 Time passed quickly that year,and be- 片。接下来，Jeff打开第二个炉灶来加热煎 fore we all knew it,it was the last day of 锅。一切都进展顺利，直到Jeff开始煎面包 school.All the teachers filled the sidewalk, 锅太热了，面包几秒钟内就变黑了。Jenna把 waving goodbye to the kids.Steven walked 烧焦的面包片扔进洗碗槽，然后又放进一片面 slowly to the bus,his head down and tears in 包。这一次，她把火关小，因此面包煎得很好。 his eyes.He boarded the bus reluctantly,hesi- 麦材5】 腿部动作 tated,and then ran off the bus to hug Mr. 1.Seeing no other people notice us,I rose and Rowe.“"Idon't want to leave you,”he slipped out of the house silently. sobbed.With red-rimmed eyes,Mr.Rowe 见没有其他人注意到我们，我便站起来，悄 comforted him“I will miss you,too.” 悄地溜出了房子。 那一年时间过得很快，不知不觉中，已经 2.Before landing,my coach asked me to lift 是在学校的最后一天了。所有的老师挤满了 my knees to avoid falling over. 人行道，向孩子们挥手告别。Steven慢慢走 在落地之前，我的教练让我屈膝，以免摔倒。 向公共汽车，低着头，眼里含着泪水。他不情 3.He slid to the window of the hut,raised 愿地上了车，犹豫了一下，然后跑下公共汽车 himself on tiptoe and stole a glance. 去拥抱Rowe先生。“我不想离开你，”他抽 他溜到小屋的窗口，踮起脚尖，偷偷看了 泣着说。Rowe先生红着眼眶安慰他：“我也 眼。 会想你的。” 65 读后续写 [类型2] 心理描写 责材1 并心快东 ●[高分语料] 1.Amused by his silly mistake,we laughed our At the sight of the breakfast on the ta- head off. ble,the mother felt a warm wave of happi- 我们被他愚蠢的错误逗乐了，狂笑不已。 ness welling up in her heart and almost shed 2.The twins were overjoyed,delight spreading tears.She hugged the twins,holding them in through the room. her arms for a long time."It is really a surprise 那对双胞胎高兴不已，欢乐在房间里蔓延。 to me.I am so proud of you,"she said happily. 3.Face lighting up,the homeless man thanked 一看到桌上的早餐，母亲心中涌起一股 Robby and ate the food heartily in the sun. 幸福的暖流，几乎要哭出来了。她抱着那对 流浪汉面露喜色，谢过Robby,在阳光下痛 快地吃着食物。 双胞胎，把他们抱在怀里很长时间。“这对我 4.Full of excitement,she arrived home with a 来说真是一个惊喜。我真为你们骄傲，”她高 paper bag,in which there was a beautiful 兴地说。 rose. 羡新2 生气、愤怒 她满心兴奋地带着一个纸袋回到家，里面是 1.He was fuming with rage. 一朵美丽的玫瑰。 他气得大发雷霆。 5.Seeing his grandsons,Grandpa was wild 2.Anger flickered in his eyes. with joy and tried to get up with all his 他眼中闪着怒火。 strength from the chair. 看到孙子们，爷爷欣喜若狂，用尽所有力气 3.He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage. 努力从椅子上起来。 他几乎控制不住怒火。 6.As soon as I walked into the ladies'room, 4.He slammed the door and left without saying the old lady looked at me with a smile on a word. her face. 他砰的一声关上门，一句话也没说就走了。 我一走进女洗手间，老太太就笑眯眯地看 5.When Mrs.Morena came to pick him up, 着我。 he pulled a long face again. 7.The room echoed with applause and laugh- 当Morena太太来接他时，他又拉长了脸。 ter as Lucy joined other girls and had a good 6.I got annoyed every time my teachers com- time at the party. pared me with Vannilyn. Lucy和其他女孩一起在派对上玩得很开 每次我的老师把我和Vannilyn比较时，我 心，房间里回荡着掌声和笑声。 都很生气。 8.Eyes shining with pure delight and pride, Rosalee took Marcus'hand,inviting him to 7.They couldn't begin the feast,so red in the have a closer look. face with anger,they decided to speak to the Rosalee的眼睛里闪烁着纯粹的喜悦和骄 manager. 傲，她拉着Marcus的手，邀请他更近一点 宴会无法开始，因此他们气得满脸通红，决 看一看。 定与经理谈话。 66 第四章读后续写必备素材 ●[高分语料] 6.Upon hearing the bad news,she felt seized Jane went directly towards Amy,saying by a burst of sadness and couldn't help cry- “You've got my book.”Amy said nothing, ing bitterly. but her color rose.Jane cried,taking Amy 一听到这个坏消息，她就感到一阵悲伤，忍 by the shoulders.Amy shouted,"I have 不住痛哭。 burnt it up.Jane tuned very pale,while her 7.Seeing James'leaving,Christine fell into a cyes filled with anger.Her hot temper mas deep sadness. tered her.She shook Amy wildly,crying in a 看到James离开，Christine陷入了深深的 悲伤中。 passion of grief and anger. Jane径直走向Amy,说：“你拿了我的 8.Devin's heart sank.The concert was at 书。”Amy什么也没说，但她的脸红了。Jane 7:00 p.m.,the same time as the game.He 叫了起来，抓住Amy的肩膀。Amy喊道： couldn't possibly do both. “我把它烧了。”"Jane的脸色变得非常苍白，眼 Devin的心沉了下去。和比赛时间一样，音 乐会是在下午7点。他不可能两件事 里充满了愤怒。她的火暴脾气控制了她。她 都做。 疯狂地摇晃着Amy,又伤心又愤怒地哭着。 9.She was feeling rather hopeless at this 素材3 悲伤、忧郁 point,but then she remembered some sur- 1.I sat on my chair,tears rolling down my vival advice that was given to her by her face. father:If you see water,follow it down- 我坐在椅子上，眼泪从脸上滚落下来。 stream. 2.Her hands were shaking and she was on the 这时，她感到非常绝望，但之后她想起了父 verge of tears. 亲给她的一些生存建议：如果你看到水，就 她的双手在颤抖，她快要哭了。 顺着水往下游走。 3.Looking at the broken rope,Simpson shed ●[高分语料] tears of despair It was a cold,dark,November morning Simpson看着断了的绳子，流下了绝望的 several years ago.My alarm clock had just 泪水。 gone off but was having trouble getting out 4.He turned off the torch and sobbed quietly of bed.My Dad had died a few weeks be- in the dark,feeling overwhelmed by grief. fore.I felt weighed down by grief,sadness,and 他关掉手电筒，在黑暗中静静地抽泣，感到 depression.I didn't feel ready to go on 悲痛欲绝。 without him. 5.I walked slowly into my sister's room, 那是几年前一个寒冷、黑暗的11月早 where I found her sniffling quietly under 晨。我的闹钟刚刚响了，但我起床却很费劲。 the covers. 我父亲几周前去世了。我被伤心、悲恸和沮 我慢慢地走进妹妹的房间，发现她在被窝 丧压得喘不过气来。我觉得我还没准备好没 里轻声地抽泣。 有他的日子。 67 读后续写 责材4 害怕、热慎 3.I tensed as I heard about the coming test. 1.She felt a sudden clutch of fear. 听到关于即将到来的考试的消息，我紧张了 她突然感到一阵恐惧。 起来。 2.A flood of fear welled up in him./Fear floo- 4.With my heart pounding,I heard someone ded over him. announcing our grades. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧涌上他的 我的心怦怦直跳，我听到有人正宣布我们的 心头。 成绩。 3.Alicia was so frightened that she let out a 5.Dad's words hit me so hard that I sank dee- scream of terror and fell onto the ground. per into anxiety Alicia非常害怕，发出了恐惧的尖叫，倒在 爸爸的话狠狠地打击了我，我陷入了更深的 了地上。 焦虑之中。 4.The poor feathered soul was wriggling 6.She was terribly anxious about the competi- about,with a fearful look in its eyes. tion-so much/so that she couldn't even 这个可怜的长着羽毛的灵魂扭动着身体， have breakfast. 眼睛里流露出恐惧的神情。 她非常担心比赛，以至于早餐都吃不下了。 5.His face went white,and we could see the 7.With my paper in hand,nervousness filled panic in his eyes. my heart and my mind went wholly blank so 他的脸变得苍白，我们可以看到他眼睛里的 that I couldn't think of anything I had learned. 恐慌。 手里拿着试卷，我心里非常紧张，大脑一片 6.It was a miracle that she survived the 空白，以至于我想不起我所学过的任何 crash,but she developed a deep fear of fly- 东西。 ing and bad nightmares for years. ●[高分语料 她在空难中幸存下来是个奇迹，但她对飞 As Miya waited behind the curtain for 行产生了深深的恐惧，多年来一直做噩梦。 her turn to perform,nervousness started to 7.The tense rope exploded at the touch of the grow inside her.She kept repeating her lines knife,and I flew backwards into the seat as in a low voice and she even found herself the pulling strain disappeared.I was sha- trembling.Then she heard someone telling king with horror. her to get ready and the curtain in front of 紧绷的绳子一碰刀子就断了，随着拉扯的张 her was pulled.Miya heard applause from 力消失，我向后飞到座位上。我吓得发抖。 the audience but she just found it impossible 8.When buried in snow,Scott drifted into ter- to open her mouth and move her legs.She ror and panic,hoping that his friend Paul stood there unable to say a word.The three was not buried so deep. boys looked at her anxiously and there was 当被大雪掩埋时，Scot陷入了恐惧和惊慌 silence among the audience. 之中，他希望他的朋友Paul没有被埋得这 当Miya在幕布后面等待轮到她表演时， 么深。 她的内心开始变得紧张起来。她不停地低声 素初5 焦虑、紧张 重复她的台词，甚至发现自己在发抖。然后 1.She flicked him a nervous glance. 她听到有人叫她准备好，她面前的窗帘被拉 她紧张地瞟了他一眼。 开了。Miya听到了观众的掌声，但她发现她 2.She began to hear her own nervous breath- 张不开嘴，也挪不动腿。她站在那里，一句话 ing. 也说不出来。三个男孩焦虑地看着她，观众 她开始听到自己紧张的呼吸声。 们沉默了。 68