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第三章 读后续写话题详析 第三章 读后续写话题详析 话题一 比赛收获类读后续写 专家支招 高效备考 [典题示例](2023·新课标I卷) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing con- test. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had al- lowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: "Because I love your stories. If you're willing toapplyyourself, I think you have a good shot at this."Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith(银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else's choice. What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again." I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it. the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win,I wouldn't care. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。 A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest,there came the news. I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. 23 读后续写 [五步续写] 第一步 把握原文大意 明主旨和两线 主旨 文章主要讲述了作为英语为非母语的主人公,原本非常讨厌写作,但是在老师的鼓励下 大意 参加了英语作文比赛并获奖 情节线:老师要求作者参加作文比赛→作者拒绝→老师鼓励和支持→选定写作话题→ 原文 自我怀疑→反复修改中发现写作的乐趣 两线 情感线:unconfident→creative→diligent→determined→enjoyable 写作 只要我们勇于创新,并付诸持之以恒的努力就可以克服困难并从中获得乐趣和成长 意图 第二步 根据首句信息。 定续写方向 由第一段首句关键信息“therecamethenews.”和第二段首句关键信息“1 两段首句 wenttomyteacher'soffice”可知,第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖,在颁 定一框 奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感激 由首句关键信息“I went to myteacher's office after the award presenta- 二框二首 tion.”可知,第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作,自此作者坚持写作取得 正能量 了成功;由正能量结尾可知,作者将这一切归功于自己的老师 第三步 原、续两线同 加合理细节 Pari.1 文 Para.2 △4.iors ti,saysrin! ndin-. 17.Mymil xilisin! ___--- ilehsc:ersaihj_ei! --_-_ _6ipt-adie irl 2.ioireitar! _ientJ_r! △s.iron thefirit_rr 1:The tencher asked me to enten 1rritin, couteM...--.--- i!iny::i! Ending 情节 lBeginning 高度融洽 续写部分情节线体现的是作者高兴,感谢老师,坚持写作并取得成功。比赛消息传 来--作者获奖--高兴--颁奖典礼感谢老师--颁奖后来到老师办公室--老师告诉作者 坚持写作一-作者表达了对写作的喜爱一-作者写作取得了成功一-感激老师 情感线的走向应该是作者对老师的感激之情激动和感激(grateful)。 添加细节 ①情感描写;续写第一段应该写作者在听到这个好消息以及在颁奖现场的激动之 情。②情感细节:刻画作者的自豪兴奋和对老师的感激之情,尾句可描写作者深受鼓舞,继续探 索创作,升华主旨。 第四步 沿原语言特点 完美连贯表达 原文利用简单句、并列句、非谓语动词和主从复合句描写动作(加框内容)、对话和社会环境(加下 画线内容),故续写部分可沿用原文特点。可利用afterthat,later,onreturning等恰当过渡衔接。 2 第三章 读后续写话题详析 第五步 临摹衡水字体 打造完美卷面 A few weeks fater , when f aimost forgot the contest, there came the news.t won the first place. My heart skipped a beat and disbelief washed over me. The award ceremony hosted in the schoof half,the headmaster kindly presented me with a certificate of achievement: My face lit up with joy as accepted the award. My smite fitted with pride. A round of applause rang through the half.Meanwhite,t thought of my sociaf studies teacher.(首尾衔接) f went to my teacher's office after the award presentation."Congratutations again! I knew you had it in you,"he said warmly,signaling me to take a seat.(与i首句衔接)"Thank you."! replied; with a mixture of gratitude and excitement. I reftected on my initiat doubts and hesitations. Some- times all it takes is someone who befieves in us, someone who sees our potentiaf even when we don't see it ourseives: teaving his ofice that day,+ feit a renewed sense of purpose and determ- ination: I knew that this was just the beginning. f was inspired to keep writing and expforing my creativity. 学以致用能力生成 (2024·辽宁教研联盟高三调研)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使 之构成一篇完整的短文。 A school talent show would be held three weeks later. I told my best friend, Tina, the news. My older brother had been teaching me juggling(玩杂要), and I knew he'd help me with my act for the show. Tina ran over to the noticeboard and read the poster. But when Tina asked me what our act was going to be, I didn't know how to speak up for myself. I held on to my books tightly. Tina laughed and pointed to the poster. It said acts can be individuals, partners. or small groups. My grip(紧握)on my books now became uncomfortable. I asked Tina if she wanted to do an act with me. She nodded. I hesitated for a second before continuing. "I've got an ide and..." Tina interrupted me immediately. "Yeah,me too; let's talk about it over lunch." During math, I tried to think of how I would tell Tina that I wanted to do my own act. Af- ter all, we were best friends: we should be able to see eye to eye about this. The problem was Tina always took charge. I never spoke up, and then I ended up feeling angry. I desperately wan ted to win, but it was more than that. I wanted to win on my own-with an act that was all mine 2 读后续写 At lunch, Tina started talking as soon as we sat down, She had it all planned out. She said we could sing along to a song and do a dance routine, and her mother could make us costumes. However, I got up the courage and told her about my juggling act. Tina said she didn't think she could learn to juggle in three weeks and that she would probably drop the balls. She didn't want to be embarrassed. I didn't say anything, but after school, I ran around the track a couple of times just to let off steam. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。 My grandmother drove over to pick me up. When we got home, I took 12 deep breaths before I called Tina. 26 第三章 读后续写话题详析 话题二 善行助人类读后续写 专家支招高效备考 [典题示例](2020·新高考I卷) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some peo- ple in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed,his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy-his name was Bernard -had interested her very much. “I wish you could see him,"she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara."He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money,but I don't see what he can do.” After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard. "I wish we could help him to earn money."said Clara."His family is suffering so much." "So do I,"said Harry. "We really should do something toassist them." For some moments,John said nothing,but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried ,"I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成)." The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea,it was sure to be good one."I tell you what we can do,"said John."You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it." 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one,too. With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business. 27 读后续写 [五步续写] 第一步 把握原文大意 明主旨和两线 主旨 在社会经济萧条的背景下,Mrs.Meredith和她的三个孩子帮助贫困家庭的Bernard赚 大意 选钱的故事 情节线:Mrs.Meredith乐于助人→孩子们听说了Bernard一家的情况→John想到了 原文 “爆米花计划” 两线 情感线:caring,willing,helpful→sympathetic andeager→upset→excited 写作 通过叙述一个助人为乐的故事表达人与人之间的爱、互帮互助和善行 意图 第二步 根据首句信息 定续写方向 由第一段首句关键信息“agoodone”及第二段首句关键信息“everythingready”可 两段首句 知,本段可叙述“爆米花计划”的准备过程;告知Bernard该计划;Bernard一家对该 定一框 计划的反应 由首句关键信息“everythingready”和“startedoutonhisnewbusiness”可知,本段 二框二首 发展方向应该是Bernard开始卖爆米花,一方面是特别顺利,一方面是开始不顺利 正能量 但在孩子们的帮助下克服了困难;由正能量结尾可知,最终爆米花都卖出去了,Ber nard赚到钱补贴家用 第三步 原、续两线同 加合理细节 Pari.! 文 Para.2 4.Jnhn h gd iden 1liok homeome mounry r! 一 △7:infirmned theamnily ofithe: pn(nxitt!nkfrl)! _llig1nzrateD)! 1)..---- ___二_ pomije).--)-) lerA inMiraitaorodotn)o 。_snt:toielyornlhupr 1.Mrs. Meredith乐于人 h......-.....- _ Ending: →情节 Beginning 高度融洽 续写部分情节线体现的是Meredith乐于助人,Bernard需要帮助→如何助人→双 方得偿所愿,情感线的走向应该是激动和感激(excitedandgrateful)。 添加细节 ①动作细节;续写第一段添加孩子取出叔叔送的玉米,准备纸袋的动作细节,呼应 原文伏笔;②情感细节:刻画Bernard一家的激动和感激的情感,尾句可描写Bernard的心理活 动,升华主旨。 第四步 沿原语言特点 完美连贯表达 原文利用简单句、并列句、非谓语动词和主从复合句描写动作(加框内容)、对话和社会环境(加下 画线内容),故续写部分可沿用原文特点。可利用afterthat,later,onreturning等恰当过渡衔接 28 第三章 读后续写话题详析 第五步 临摹衡水字体 打造完美卷面 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. She nodded with a smife and encouraged the chitdren, "Let's get started!"mmediately,Clara votunteered to get the box of corn and began to make popcorn. Meanwhile, John went to purchase some paper bags and put all the popcorn in place: After that,Mrs:Meredith with her chitdren paid another visit to the family to tell them about the popcorn plan. Seeing the popcorn arranged in a basket, they were overwheimed with excitement and gratitude With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business: Athough things were tight for everybody: Bernard's business worked out amazingly welf. Carrying the basket he went door to door to sell the popcorn. Surprised to see such a poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, peopfe would buy one pack or two. On returning he thanked the Meredith family with watery eyes Later, every week Bernard coufd make some money by setfing popcorn. ft is fove that makes the worid qo around and Bernard feit it deep in his fittte heart 学以致用能力生成 (2024·江苏泰州中学高三下一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lucy was the only child in her family. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn't help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the mid dle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she gave a sigh and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,"Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?" “Oh, yes, but I don't have money on me,”she replied. “That's nothing. I'll treat you today,"said the man. “Come in." The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Lucy criedsilently. “What is it?"asked the man kindly. 2 读后续写 “Nothing. Actually, I was just touched by your kindness!" said Lucy as she wiped her tears."Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!" Hearing the words, the seller smiled,"Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a ba- by. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?" Lucy sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered her mother's familiar face and weathered hands. "Why didn't I think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful. Why haven't I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?" On the way home, Lucy made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rude- ness as soon as she arrived home 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。 Approaching the doorway. A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. 30 第三章 读后续写话题详析 话题三 人与动物类读后续写 专家支招高效备考 [典题示例](2020·浙江高考7月卷改编) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside"the polar bear capital of the world"-the town of Churchill in Mani- toba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous, Polar bears-like all wild ani- mals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear. I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 3o minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pic tures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 3o more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。 A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. 31 读后续写 [五步续写] 第一步 把握原文大意 明主旨和两线 主旨 大意 作者和妻子待在营地准备冒险拍摄北极熊,结果北极熊闯人,一场人熊大战即将展开 情节线:在营地等待拍摄北极熊→一头北极熊被美味吸引企图闯入→制造噪音无法 原文 吓退北极熊→向营地经理求助→喷胡椒粉喷雾剂暂时赶走北极熊 两线 情感线:excited,nervous→surprised→worried,frightened→anxious→a little relieved 写作 讲述人与北极熊对抗成功并脱险,主人公成功拍照心想事成 意图 第二步 根据首句信息 定续写方向 ①首句衔接段首语,可描写被喷雾刺痛眼睛的北极熊肯定被激怒了,会更猛烈地袭 两段首句 击围栏,主人公需采取有效办法避险,如利用随身物品应对北极熊的攻击,可描写 定一框 妻子的动作和情绪烘托场面的危险;②尾句将人与北极的冲突达到最大,营造危急 的场景,如北极熊马上要破栏而入,呼应第二段段首句中的“verymoment' ①首句衔接段首句中的“thehelicopterarrived”,可描写人物“绝处逢生的喜悦”作 二框二首 为第二段开头,接着叙述利用直升机的优势解决问题,如利用蝶旋桨发出的巨大声 正能量 响吓走北极熊成功脱险等;②结尾应呼应原文主旨:成功拍照 第三步。 原、续两线同 加合理细节 原文 Para.1 Para.2 _ ihelng_nlt! △4.fradioed Th manager 12ook phoio:(impressed) 4forhelP(anu)!. 3.defendedursels y! 6.frielfiscar"theiar awty! △11.ijulleil ihiTe_:ril. !making noises(frightened) the fencn(sur_jsel)! lhut in vain(iupljintea)_y! △2.icooked dinner and a 7 hear came (surprisedy △6.ithe angry bear aitacked dsafe.relicved)-- ! △1.waited to take photos of more fiercely (terrified) bears (amazing,dangerou Bcginning Ending 高度融洽 续写部分两情线的发展应与原文两情线一致,达到“两情相悦”,续写部分情节线体 现的是:双方对峙→采用新办法避险→脱离险境→拍好照片,情感线的走向应该是:紧张→恐惧 →松一口气但仍心有余悸。 添加细节 ①心理描写:夫妇二人面对北极熊一定很恐惧,但脱险后,心理活动会有变化,既感 慨逃过一劫又觉得不虚此行,可通过直接或间接的方式,刻画人物心理;②环境描写:在渲染北极 熊袭击围栏的危险场景时,可描写时间紧迫或用拟人的手法描写周围的事物(如风声、草等),间 接烘托人物内心的恐惧。 第四步 沿原语言特点 完美连贯表达 原文利用简单句、并列句、非谓语动词和主从复合句进行动作描写(加框内容)、情感描写(画波浪 线内容)和心理描写(加下画线内容),续写部分可利用适当的并列句、非谓语动词和复合句描写 动作和情感。 32读后续写 参考答案 读后续写 途径四学以致用 1.she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset 第二章读后续写3大高分策略 happily with them 策略三途径一学以致用 ①huge ②continued③swimming④shouted to 2.the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before ⑤terrified/,frightened scared⑥can't wait to 3.Are you really willing to lead a tough life with make efforts to⑦grab⑧calmed down me?Yes!For me,it is not a suffering to live. ⑨turned out0@get lost QDappreciative/grateful 4.Every coin has two sides 12determined Breturning 途径二学以致用 5.fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars (1)Little Caroline seized his arm,pulling him into 6.Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous va- the room. cation before.The special trip to the Wild West (2)It is the boy who so shamefully insulted me in made a deep impression on my mind the street！ 第三章读后续写话题详析 (3)But his father would never permit James to have the gold watch,nor the beautiful books,which his 话题一学以致用 uncle had brought for him. [参考范文] (4)Never did he forget this lesson so long as he My grandmother drove over to pick me up.Re- lived. alizing I was unusually quiet,she asked me what had 途径三学以致用 细节描写1 Father,who had white hair,looked very happened.I talked about the talent show.Looking old with some wrinkles on his forehead.He also had at my face from the mirror in the front of the car. wrinkles next to his eyes when he smiled,yet his She said gently,"Honey,your ideas deserve to be smile was still as heartwarming as before,the smile considered carefully."She also suggested I tell the of a father who just wanted a good life for his fam- ily. truth.Hearing what she said,I thought about it 细节描写2 He stared at me again,meeting my eyes over and over again.I began to realize that it with the strangest expression on his face-it was wouldn't hurt to let Tina know what I really wanted hostile and angry.I looked away quickly,shocked, if she was a true friend of mine.Finally,I made up and my face went red again. my mind to talk to Tina. 细节描写3I'm totally not an extrovert person..I don't really like to talk a lot to strangers,yet the When we got home,I took 12 deep breaths be- people who know me will tell you that I'm very fore I called Tina.With butterflies in my stomach, talkative.I'm not a sociable person,but I wish I I waited for her to pick up the receiver.After I got are.Last but not least,I'm very optimistic.I al- through.I told her that I was going to do my jugg- ways see things very simple,but I don't take ling act alone.Much to my relief,she said OK after things for granted. 细节描写4 I sat frozen in my seat,staring blankly a short silence.Before hanging up,she also wished at him.He was so mean.It wasn't fair.I began me success.The next day,she described her act and gathering up my things slowly,trying to block the I talked about my practice.We encouraged each oth- sorrow that filled me,for fear that my eyes would er and exchanged ideas.I found it not so hard to tear up. 细节描写5Then,suddenly,at the back of the speak up for myself.On the day of the talent show, church,there was a total silence and everyone my wonderful performance received thunderous ap- turned to see what was happening.And soon, plause from the audience.It was the talent show walking before them all were the very two boys that boost my confidence and made me into a better they were there to pray for. person by speaking up bravely. 细节描写6I,Lucy said,“It's very nice of you to 话题二学以致用 invite me. 2."I'm very glad you could come,Mr.Liu.Please [参考范文] take a seat at the head of the table.It's an infor- Approaching the doorway,Lucy was very mal dinner and please don't stand on ceremony. nervous and took a deep breath.Standing in front of Mrs Smith continued"Mr.Liu,would you like to the door,she was afraid whether her mother would have some chicken?" 3."What kind of life do you prefer,city life or coun- forgive her for her rudeness.But when she thought try life?”Jim asked. of her mother's familiar face and the noodle seller's 细节描写7 The church was filled with singing kind advice,she decided to knock on the door brave- voices.Tom even sang loudly.He knew that this ly.Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so would be a day he would always remember. ashamed that she didn't know what to say. 137 参考答案 44444年 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind 话题五 学以致用 back.Lucy couldn't help crying and said "Sorry, [参考范文] mom,I know I have made a big mistake.I shouldn't Guyo took a deep breath and stretched out his have quarreled with you.I shouldn't have run away arm.“I can do it！I can do it!”he repeated.He from home.Could you forgive me?"Lucy's mother closed his eyes and forced his hand into the hole.No was moved,saying "Good girl,never mind.I also stings!The smoke worked.Reaching as far as he should make an apology to you for scolding at you could,he pulled out several large pieces of the hon- angrily.I am very worried about you."Tears rolled eycomb filled with sticky honey.Grandfather said, down from both of their faces and they hugged each "That's fine.We need to leave enough for the other tightly. bees."They backed away from the hole just as the 话题三学以致用 bees started to make noise again. [参考范文] Grandfather put most of the honeycomb inside Lillard,however,had an unexrpected solution. his container.He handed Guyo a piece."Give this Her grandparents,who lived near her in Tennessee, to the honeyguide."Guyo placed the piece at the happened to have a home in Michigan,too,and they base of the tree where the honeyguide sat."Thank would be coming up in December.Tucker could you for sharing this treasure with us.The hon- catch a ride with them and Lillard's grandfather eyguide dropped to the ground to eat his reward.As would drop him off at MeCall's new place.Thus, they walked home,Grandfather placed a hand on McCall was able to be reunited with him."What are Guyo's shoulder."We'll be able to sell the honey in the odds?"Lillard asked,laughing.Excited and the village.It's a great help having you around. overjoyed.MeCall of course accepted Lillard's sug- Guyo smiled,"I guess being little is sometimes a gestion with gratitude. good thing..” Lillard's grand father completed the 600-plus- 话题六学以致用 mile journey with Tucker.Getting together with [参考范文] Tucker,McCall said her joy was beyond descrip- Hearing a noise,Alan froze,feeling some- tion."He returned to me right before Christmas, thing was there in the darkness.A ripple of fear and I was having a really hard time then,she said. crept up on him as he cast a glance there.Heart "It was a wonderful thing."Not only did MeCall get beating wildly,Alan made his way to the noise, Tucker back,Lillard also sent along a handmade with both of his legs trembling uncontrollably.A closer look convinced him that it was only a rabbit, Christmas gift for MeCall,with some money inside, which moved MeCall to tears.There is no doubt which quickly disappeared in the dark.In relief,he that Tucker's cross-country adventure was the start felt the gentle breeze rubbing his face.The moon shedding its silver light on the woods,Alan was to a lasting friendship between McCall and Lillard. greeted by the sound of birds and insects.Enveloped 话题四学以致用 by fragrant air,he felt as if in the wonderland. [参考范文] The next morning.the officer asked for re- Immediately,the class became excited.Some ports.Other campers bragged about their adventure could hardly wait to tell their classmates about their in the dark-how they ran into some "horrible" holiday trips,eyes shining and faces glowing with creatures and bravely scared them off.The officer, joy.Those who hadn't been anywhere bombarded wearing a doubtful look,offered no comments. them with inquiries.Enormous joy welled up in ev- When it was Alan's turn,he told the truth that ery corner of the elassroom.Obviously confused there were no scary animals but breathtaking scenery to about the sudden noisy situation,Mark turned to me be explored.A smile blossomed on the officer's for explanations in written words.Surprisingly,my face.That was exactly what the camping was all explanation put a smile on his face."Any volunteer about.Only after one overcame the fear in his own to share your story?"asked Ms.Green,whose heart could he embrace the real beauty of nature. words I set down on paper for Mark. 话题七学以致用 Then Mark rose from his chair and walked on- [参考范文] to the plat form.Greeting us with a confident smile, VNext,he turned to Mike and yelled,"Give me a Mark shared his story in a magnetic voice,which rock！”With the rock,he hit the window over and left me stunned.I felt more ashamed to learn that he over but had little success.Hugh then shouted to ran a website to help children with hearing problems Jack to move away from the window.He balanced than guilty about stupidly thinking disabled people himself on the truck,leaned back and threw the rock couldn't be intelligent.Then his voice was drowned at the window.Finally,the glass broke and Hugh out by a thunderous outburst of applause.Having a kicked in the remaining pieces of glass.Relieved, lump in my throat,I clapped my hands even more loudly, Jack reached out for Hugh's hand and was rescued. determined never to judge a book by its cover. The two men escaped and returned to safety. 38 444444 读后续写 Jack was about to thank Hugh and Mike when She didn't notice her daughter took a phone home the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.With until it rang.She returned the phone to us and re- trembling hands,Jack took out the phone and put/ fused any reward.We felt lucky to meet such kind pressed it to his ear.His mother's anxious voice people as Mrs.Hichens and Laura and had a friendly came over the phone,"Are you home yet? chat.While the adults were chatting,I noticed my Everything's good?"Tears welled up in his eyes grandson was playing happily with Judy.Such a rolled down his cheeks at the familiar sound of con- warm scene reminded me that the language barrier cern.Jack choked up as he explained the accident to can never be a problem between kind and friendly his mom and comforted her.Hanging up the phone, people. he turned to Hugh and Mike and sincerely thanked 话题十学以致用 both of them.Cold as the rain was,great warmth [参考范文] filled his heart like never before. Tom was shocked when he saw his parents ap- 话题八学以致用 pear at the ceremony hall.He stood rooted to the [参考范文] floor for a moment,not knowing what to do.Sec- The tailor seemed to understand what I was onds later,he tried to contain himself and awkward- thinking at the moment."Do you trust football, ly walked up to greet his father,ignoring his young man?"I nodded.He pointed to a shelf lined mother's existence.But when he heard others whis- with footballs."I like collecting discarded footballs. pering about his mum's ugly face,embarrassment Repairing a football is quite healing.Sewing one is came over him.With anger written all on his face, as challenging as playing it,for every stitch counts. he pushed his mum hard out of the hall.Seeing Now,would you..."I handed him my shirt.He ex- Tom's mum leave with deep sorrow,his father fol- amined the tear and started his work professionally. lowed her out. While mending,he asked about my favorite football- Hesitating for a moment,Tom's father told er,and the pleasant chat perfected the repairing. him everything that happened many years ago.His Suddenly,I noticed a photo of a football team mum got burnt severely to save him in a terrible next to the sewing machine.Flashing a knowing fire.Tears streamed down his face when he recollec- smile,he explained it was a long time ago.when he ted how much he had hurt her all these years,how was the captain and when he did not undergo the op- he had ignored her and he realized the amount of eration that stopped his dream.His story just pain and agony she had gone through.After the cer- pushed me to speak out mine.He told me to pursue emony,he found his mum and embraced her,saying my dream and act like my idol,Messi-"the smallest "Sorry"again and again.From then on,he thought player on the pitch but the greatest player of our of his mom's face even with scars as the most beauti- time".I thanked him,saying that not only did he ful face in the world and his mom as the most mend my shirt with his craftsmanship but he also re- respected woman in the world. paired my dream with sportsmanship.Giggling,he 第五章读后续写分类实战演练 exclaimed,"Told you!All kinds of repairs and serv- 实战演练一 ices!" A.[参考范文] 话题九学以致用 Suddenly Blake slowed and sat onto the ground [参考范文] painfully.Then I hurried up and ran up to him, In no time,we all got into our car and headed only to find that his leg was cramping.I tried to for the address.When we got there,Leon mes- help him stand and move forward,but he refused. saged again,telling the lady we had arrived.After a He asked me to run after the others so that I could while a young lady appeared from the apartment get the first place.I thought for a second and decid- building.We got out of the car and the lady greeted ed to accompany him for a rest.Then we ran slowly us and told us in very good English that she was forward together.Although we ran slowly and were Laura,Mrs.Hichens'neighbor.Mrs.Hichens had overtaken by others,I felt relaxed and we finally just come from Mexico and her English was limited. crossed the finish line together. As her husband was away on business,she asked A reporter took a picture of this moving scene Laura for help.Laura showed us into an apartment, and posted it online.During the time,the photo got where Mrs.Hichens and her little girl were expec- a lot of likes.Many strangers sent the emails to ting us. praise me about the incident.In fact,I was a little With Laura's help,Mrs.Hichens was able to hesitant at the beginning,but the moment I decided explain to us what had happened.That Friday,she to help Blake,I felt calm and relaxed.I'm happy also took her kid,Judy,on a horse and buggy ride. that I did the right thing. 139