策略3 途径4 漂亮结尾高分稳握-【创新教程】2025年高考英语复习读后续写写作一本通（新高考）

读后续写 ◆学以致用·能力生成 1.露西说：“邀请我来做客，你真是太好了。” 2.“刘先生，您能来我很高兴，请上坐。这是一次家常便饭，请大家别客气。”史密斯夫人接着说， “刘先生，要吃点鸡肉吗？” 3.“你是喜欢农村生活还是城市生活？”吉姆问道。 [细节描写7]背景场景描写 ◆专家支招·高效备考 1.The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down at the peaceful village. 太阳在一个宁静的世界里升起，温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。 2.The sky is clear blue now and the sun is shining on the meadow and the river bank. 天空晴朗碧蓝，阳光洒在草原和河岸上。 3.The rose looks like an angel,swaying in the wind,dancing in the sun. 这朵玫瑰就像是一个在风中摇摆、在阳光下跳舞的天使。 4.The grounds were covered with dark green grass,through which stretched a straight stone path. 那儿处处是碧绿的芳草，绿草中延伸出一条笔直的石路。 ◆学以致用·能力生成 教堂里充满了歌声。汤姆甚至唱起了歌，大声地唱着。他知道他将永远记住这一天。 途径四漂亮结尾高分稳握 专家支招高效备考 续写不能虎头蛇尾，结尾也要用心设计。由于文章的故事性、情节性强，所以续写的结尾可 以是自然的升华议论，亦可以是其他方式结尾。常见的结尾方式有五种，即画面定格、对话收尾、 主题升华、结尾留白和首尾呼应。 ●[方式1]画面定格法 (1)人物动作的画面定格 DSlowly,almost reluctantly,she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd. 慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，她的胳膊搂住母亲的肩膀，明显带着生疏，轻轻地引导她回到人 群中。 2Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly into her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes. 朵拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，泪水夺眶 而出。 20 第二章读后续写3大高分策略 (2)特殊寓意的写景画面 DThe sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass was green underfoot.It was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment.Dawn had come. 天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时 刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面） 2The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it,the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas. 当我涉水而过的时候，清澈湛蓝的海水变得温柔起来，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（日 落时的美好画面) 3The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night,bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness.The never ending blackness consumed everything. 被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬 了一切。（描写夜空的画面）》 ●[方式2]对话收尾法 (1)When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life,Chester said,"I got family everywhere,so it might lead to many more trips now. 当被问及与父亲团聚将如何改变他的生活时，切斯特说：“我的家人无处不在，所以现在可能 会引出更多的旅行。” (2)"Even now,I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us,"said Nina,"I would never give this kind of friend away again.I never grow tired of repeating this-animals are the most devoted and loving creatures.They need our love and care. “即使是现在，我也简直不敢相信这只狗走了这么远的距离寻找我们，”尼娜说，“我再也不会 放弃这种朋友了。我从来没有厌倦过重复这句话一动物是最忠诚和最可爱的生物。他们 需要我们的爱和关心。” ●[方式3]主题升华法 (1)Someday,when I am older and have children of my own.I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom. 有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为和我妈妈一样伟大的母亲。（母爱的 深远影响) (2)In my opinion,money can't take the place of everything,such as your life,your time and your happiness. 在我看来，金钱不能取代一切，比如你的生活、时间和幸福。（表达自己的价值观） ●[方式4]结尾留白法 “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to cat?”I asked..“I'd love to,”she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds.And,this was the beginning of the end to my months of heart- break following Betsy's death. “你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗？”我问道。“我很乐意去，”她回答，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。 这是贝特西死后我几个月的心碎终于慢慢愈合的开始。（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间） 21 读后续写 ●[方式5]首尾呼应法 I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprises and amusements,all because of my mother-loving,sweet yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. 我有一个有趣的童年。充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲一一可爱，但心不在焉，健忘。 我11岁时，我们参加的一次奇怪的家庭旅行讲述了很多关于她的事情。 Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个善良的妈妈。 学以致用能力生成 根据汉语提示补全句子 1.Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever.On the top of the mountain, 然后蝴蝶就会和她的爱人永远待在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起愉快地享受着日出和 日落。 2.Looking up,I saw 抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。（特殊寓意） 3.They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, "She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily,saying," 他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。杰克问佩斯利：“你真的愿意和我一起过艰难的生活吗？”她拍 了拍手上的灰，满意地看着挂满东西的墙，说：“是的！对我来说，这样的生活并不是一种 痛苦。” 4.As a proverb says,“ Making full use of your strength is your achievement.Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. 正如谚语所说，“事物都有两面性。”充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，无论如何你都 不要放弃，尤其是在困境中。（借用名言警句来升华主题） 5.He unwrapped the white tissue paper,but to his surprise,there was no hard rock candy inside.Instead,into his fingers 他打开白色包装纸，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖果。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪闪发亮 的白色珍珠落进了他的手指里。 6.:It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decid- ed to take me on a trip to the Wild West. 那是夏天，我爸爸给我一个前所未有的度假胜地。他决定带我去一次西部荒野旅行。 结尾： 我以前从来没有过如此激动而危险的假期。这次特别的西部荒野旅行深深铭刻在我的脑 海中。 22读后续写 参考答案 途径四 读后续写 ] 学以致用 1. she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset 第二章 读后续写3大高分策略 策略三 happily with them 途径一 学以致用 ①huge ②continued ③swimming ④shouted to 2. the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before can't wait to / terrified/ frightened scared 3. Are you really willing to lead a tough life with make efforts to grab ⑧calmed down me? Yes! For me, it is not a suffering to live. turned out get lost appreciative/grateful 4. Every coin has two sides determined returning 途径二 学以致用 5. fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars (1) Little Caroline seized his arm, pulling him into 6. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous va the room. cation before. The special trip to the Wild West (2) It is the boy who so shamefully insulted me in made a deep impression on my mind the street! 第三章 读后续写话题详析 (3)But his father would never permit James to have 话题一 the gold watch, nor the beautiful books, which his 学以致用 uncle had brought for him. [参考范文] (4) Never did he forget this lesson so long as he My grandmother drove over to pick me up. Re lived. alizing I was unusually quiet, she asked me what had 途径三 学以致用 细节描写1 Father, who had white hair,looked very happened. I talked about the talent show. Looking old with some wrinkles on his forehead. He also had at my face from the mirror in the front of the car. wrinkles next to his eves when he smiled, yet his She said gently, "Honey, your ideas deserve to be smile was still as heartwarming as before, the smile considered carefully."She also suggested I tell the of a father who iust wanted a good life for his fam truth. Hearing what she said, I thought about it ily. 细节描写2 He stared at me again,meeting my eyes over and over again. I began to realize that it with the strangest expression on his face-it was wouldn't hurt to let Tina know what I really wanted hostile and angry. I looked away quickly, shocked. if she was a true friend of mine. Finally, I made up and my face went red again. my mind to talk to Tina. 细节描 写 3 I'm totally not an extrovert person. 1 When we got home, I took 12 deep breaths be- don't really like to talk a lot to strangers, yet the people who know me will tell you that I'm very fore I called Tina, With butterflies in my stomach talkative. I'm not a sociable person, but I wish 1 I waited for her to pick up the receiver. After I got are. Last but not least, I'm very optimistic. I al- through, I told her that I was going to do my jugg ways see things very simple, but I don't take ling act alone. Much to my relief, she said OK after things for granted. 细节描写4 I sat frozen in my seat, staring blankly a short silence. Before hanging up, she also wished at him. He was so mean. It wasn't fair. I began me success. The next day, she described her act and gathering up my things slowly, trying to block the I talked about my practice. We encouraged each oth sorrow that filled me, for fear that my eyes would er and exchanged ideas. I found it not so hard to tear up. 细节描写 5 Then, suddenly,at the back of the speak up for myself. On the day of the talent show. church, there was a total silence and everyone my wonderful performance received thunderous ap turned to see what was happening. And soon. plause from the audience. It was the talent show walking before them all were the very two boys that boost my confidence and made me into a better they were there to pray for. 细节描写6 1. Lucy said,"It's very nice of you to person by speaking up bravely. 话题二 学以致用 invite me. 2."I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Please [参考范文] take a seat at the head of the table. It's an infor- Approaching the doorway, Lucy was very mal dinner and please don't stand on ceremony. nervous and took a deep breath. Standing in front of Mrs Smith continued"Mr. Liu, would you like to have some chicken?" the door, she was afraid whether her mother would 3."What kind of life do you prefer, city life or coun- forgive her for her rudeness. But when she thought try life?"Jim asked. of her mother's familiar face and the noodle seller's 细节描 写 7 The church was filled with singing kind advice, she decided to knock on the door brave voices. Tom even sang loudly. He knew that this ly. Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so would be a day he would always remember. ashamed that she didn't know what to say. 137