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第二章 读后续写3大高分策略 ·[句式升级8] 独立主格 ①He stood there,(with) tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. 他站在那里,眼中涌出了感激的泪水。 ② Her father was lying on his back,(with) his dog trapped under the truck 她的父亲仰面躺着,他的狗被困在卡车下面。 学以致用能力生成 请用高级句式升级下面考生续写中加黑的一般句式 Paragraph 1: What a sense of shame did James now feel! ①Little (1)用分词作状语改写句① Caroline seized his arm, and pulled him into the room. But he hung down his head, and covered his face with his hands. His uncle went up to him, and kindly taking away his hands. (2)用强调句型改写句② said,"James, will you not bid me welcome?" But quickly starting back, he cried,“Brother, this is not your son. ②The boy who so shamefully insulted me in the street!" Paragraph 2: (3)用非限制性定语从句改写 With surbrise and grief did the good father and moth- 句③ er learn this. His uncle was ready to forgive him, and forget the injury. ③But his father would never permit James to have the gold watch, nor the beautiful books. His uncle had brought them for him. The rest of the children were loaded with pres (4)用部分倒装改写句④ ents. James was obliged to content himself with seeing them happy. ④ He never forgot this lesson so long as he lived. It cured him entirely of his low and insolent manners. 途径三 丰富细节 内容充实 [细节描写1] 人物肖像描写 专家支招·高效备考 1. I saw a tiny woman with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit. 我看到一个身材娇小的银发妇人,穿着普通的蓝色套装。 2. She'd arrived late for class, her hair wet and messy 她上课迟到了,头发又湿又乱。 3. His strongly-built body and suntanned skin make him look like a sportsman. 强壮的身体和晒得黝黑的皮肤使他看起来像一个运动员。 4. Everything about him was old except his eves,and they were the same color as the sea and were cheerful and undefeated. 他身上的一切都显得苍老,除了那双眼睛,它们像海一样蓝,是愉快而不肯认输的 学以致用·能力生成 父亲有一头白发,看起来很老,额头上有些皱纹。当他微笑时,他的眼睛旁边也有皱纹,但是他 的微笑仍然像以前一样温馨,一个只是希望他的家人有一个美好生活的父亲的微笑 17 读后续写 [细节描写2 人物神态描写 专家支招·高效备考 1. He turned and looked at me, with his eves filled with fear 他转身望着我,眼里充满了恐惧。 2. Her eves gleamed and her fragile face broke into a smile 她的眼睛闪烁着光芒,精致的脸庞展露出微笑 3. Color glowed in his face and his strange eves widened with jovfulness 他的脸涨得通红,那双奇怪的眼睛瞬得大大的,充满了欢乐。 4. She rode the rest of the way home wearing a smile of peace and grace 她面带平和优雅的微笑,骑着自行车走完了回家的剩余路程。 学以致用·能力生成 他再一次盯着我,用他那最奇怪的表情看着我的眼睛一-这种表情充满了敌意和愤怒。我震 惊地迅速移开目光,脸又变红了。 [细节描写3] 人物个性描写 专家支招·高效备考 1. Indeed,I grew up to be strong and fearless. 的确,我从小到大就是一副天不怕、地不怕的性格。 2. She is very clear about her goal,and is fighting for it firmly 她对自已的目标很明确,并且在坚定地为此拼搏。 3. She looks serious and is seldom seen to smile. She seems to be difficult to get along with 她看上去很严肃,很少见她笑,似乎不好相处。 4. She has a cheerful character,like a man,and nothing difficult makes her frown 她性格爽朗,像个男子汉,任何困难都难使她愁眉不展。 学以致用·能力生成 我完全不是一个外向的(extrovert)人,不太喜欢和陌生人说话,但认识我的人会告诉你我很健 谈。我不是一个善于交际的人,但我希望是。最后但同样重要的是,我非常乐观,总是把事情 看得很简单,但不会想当然。 [细节描写4] 人物情感描写 专家支招·高效备考 1. She sat on a chair in her ball dress, without strength to go to bed 她穿着舞会礼服坐在椅子上,没有力气去床上睡觉。 2. Mariam sat on her bed, embarrassed and confused. She cupped her face with her hands and closed her eves. She breathed and breathed until she felt calm. 玛利亚姆尴尬又困惑地坐在床上。她用双手捂着脸,闭上了眼睛。她一次次地深呼吸,直到平 静下来。 18 第二章 读后续写3大高分策略 3. There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby litle couch and weep. 很明显,除了坐在破旧的小沙发上哭泣,她什么也做不了。 4. Matthew groaned as he turned about and walked slowly down the platform towards her 马修响吟着转过身来,慢慢地下台朝她走去。 学以致用·能力生成 我呆坐在座位上,茫然地盯着他。他太过分了,这不公平。我开始慢慢地收拾我的东西,试图 不再伤心,因为我害怕我会流泪。 [细节描写5] 人物行为描写 专家支招·高效备考 1. She caught her breath in a short gasp and felt herself turn pale. 她倒抽一口气,恢复了正常呼吸,觉得自已脸色苍白。 2. The eyes turned slowly and looked at her sharply and steadily. 那双眼睛慢慢地转过来,月光锐利而坚定地注视着她。 3. She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile 她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前,最后她抬起头来,泪汪汪地微笑着。 4. One day she came into my room laughing merrily. Putting my hand on her face, she spelled l-a u-g-h. Then she tickled me into a burst of laughter 有一天,她愉快地笑着走进我的房间,把我的手放在她的脸上,拼出了l-a-ug-h。然后她挠我 瘁得我发出一阵大笑。 学以致用·能力生成 突然间,教堂的后面安静下来,每个人都将目光投向后面,看看发生了什么。不一会儿,他们所 期盼的两个孩子就走到了他们面前 [细节描写6] 人物对话描写 专家支招·高效备考 1.提示语在前 A few minutes later,she said,"Grandmother, I am finished now." 几分钟后,她说:“奶奶,我现在做完了。” 2.提示语在后 “Here isSusan!"the girls cried “这是苏珊!”女孩们大喊。 3.提示语在中间 “I'd like to go with you,"replied Susan,"but I cannot finish the task grandmother set me todo.” “我很想和你一起去,”苏珊回答说,“但是我不能完成奶奶让我做的任务。” 19 读后续写 学以致用·能力生成 1.露西说:“邀请我来做客,你真是太好了。” 2.“刘先生,您能来我很高兴,请上坐。这是一次家常便饭,请大家别客气。”史密斯夫人接着说, “刘先生,要吃点鸡肉吗?” 3.“你是喜欢农村生活还是城市生活?”吉姆问道 [细节描写7] 背景场景描写 专家支招·高效备考 1. The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down at the peaceful village 太阳在一个宁静的世界里升起,温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。 2. The sky is clear blue now and the sun is shining on the meadow and the river bank. 天空晴朗碧蓝,阳光洒在草原和河岸上。 3. The rose looks like an angel, swaying in the wind, dancing in the sun 这朵玫瑰就像是一个在风中摇摆、在阳光下跳舞的天使 4. The grounds were covered with dark green grass, through which stretched a straight stone path. 那儿处处是碧绿的芳草,绿草中延伸出一条笔直的石路。 学以致用·能力生成 教堂里充满了歌声。汤姆甚至唱起了歌,大声地唱着。他知道他将永远记住这一天。 途径四 漂亮结尾 高分稳握 专家支招高效备考 续写不能虎头蛇尾,结尾也要用心设计。由于文章的故事性、情节性强,所以续写的结尾可 以是自然的升华议论,亦可以是其他方式结尾。常见的结尾方式有五种,即画面定格、对话收尾。 主题升华、结尾留白和首尾呼应。 ·[方式1 画面定格法 (1)人物动作的画面定格 ①Slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd. 慢慢地,几乎是不情愿地,她的胳膊撵住母亲的肩膀,明显带着生疏,轻轻地引导她回到人 群中。 ②Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes. 朵拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来,把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里,泪水夺眶 而出。 2读后续写 参考答案 途径四 读后续写 ] 学以致用 1. she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset 第二章 读后续写3大高分策略 策略三 happily with them 途径一 学以致用 ①huge ②continued ③swimming ④shouted to 2. the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before can't wait to / terrified/ frightened scared 3. Are you really willing to lead a tough life with make efforts to grab ⑧calmed down me? Yes! For me, it is not a suffering to live. turned out get lost appreciative/grateful 4. Every coin has two sides determined returning 途径二 学以致用 5. fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars (1) Little Caroline seized his arm, pulling him into 6. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous va the room. cation before. The special trip to the Wild West (2) It is the boy who so shamefully insulted me in made a deep impression on my mind the street! 第三章 读后续写话题详析 (3)But his father would never permit James to have 话题一 the gold watch, nor the beautiful books, which his 学以致用 uncle had brought for him. [参考范文] (4) Never did he forget this lesson so long as he My grandmother drove over to pick me up. Re lived. alizing I was unusually quiet, she asked me what had 途径三 学以致用 细节描写1 Father, who had white hair,looked very happened. I talked about the talent show. Looking old with some wrinkles on his forehead. He also had at my face from the mirror in the front of the car. wrinkles next to his eves when he smiled, yet his She said gently, "Honey, your ideas deserve to be smile was still as heartwarming as before, the smile considered carefully."She also suggested I tell the of a father who iust wanted a good life for his fam truth. Hearing what she said, I thought about it ily. 细节描写2 He stared at me again,meeting my eyes over and over again. I began to realize that it with the strangest expression on his face-it was wouldn't hurt to let Tina know what I really wanted hostile and angry. I looked away quickly, shocked. if she was a true friend of mine. Finally, I made up and my face went red again. my mind to talk to Tina. 细节描 写 3 I'm totally not an extrovert person. 1 When we got home, I took 12 deep breaths be- don't really like to talk a lot to strangers, yet the people who know me will tell you that I'm very fore I called Tina, With butterflies in my stomach talkative. I'm not a sociable person, but I wish 1 I waited for her to pick up the receiver. After I got are. Last but not least, I'm very optimistic. I al- through, I told her that I was going to do my jugg ways see things very simple, but I don't take ling act alone. Much to my relief, she said OK after things for granted. 细节描写4 I sat frozen in my seat, staring blankly a short silence. Before hanging up, she also wished at him. He was so mean. It wasn't fair. I began me success. The next day, she described her act and gathering up my things slowly, trying to block the I talked about my practice. We encouraged each oth sorrow that filled me, for fear that my eyes would er and exchanged ideas. I found it not so hard to tear up. 细节描写 5 Then, suddenly,at the back of the speak up for myself. On the day of the talent show. church, there was a total silence and everyone my wonderful performance received thunderous ap turned to see what was happening. And soon. plause from the audience. It was the talent show walking before them all were the very two boys that boost my confidence and made me into a better they were there to pray for. 细节描写6 1. Lucy said,"It's very nice of you to person by speaking up bravely. 话题二 学以致用 invite me. 2."I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Please [参考范文] take a seat at the head of the table. It's an infor- Approaching the doorway, Lucy was very mal dinner and please don't stand on ceremony. nervous and took a deep breath. Standing in front of Mrs Smith continued"Mr. Liu, would you like to have some chicken?" the door, she was afraid whether her mother would 3."What kind of life do you prefer, city life or coun- forgive her for her rudeness. But when she thought try life?"Jim asked. of her mother's familiar face and the noodle seller's 细节描 写 7 The church was filled with singing kind advice, she decided to knock on the door brave voices. Tom even sang loudly. He knew that this ly. Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so would be a day he would always remember. ashamed that she didn't know what to say. 137