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读后续写 途径二 句式升级 高人一筹 专家支招高效备考 ·[句式升级1] 无灵主语句 ①The last twenty vears has seen witnessed great changes of our hometown. 我们的家乡在过去的二十年里发生了很大的变化。 ②Suffering and despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep. 痛苦和绝望击跨了我,我倒在门阶上哭泣。 。[句式升级2 形容词短语作状语 ①Eager and excited, she waved her hands, trying to attract others'attention 她兴奋地挥手,试图吸引别人的注意 ②They finally returned to their campsite,tired and hungry. 他们终于回到了营地,又累又饿。 [句式升级3 分词短语作状语 ①Seeing none noticing us, I put the Christmas present down and left. 看到没有人注意到我们,我放下圣诞礼物离开了。 ②For a few moments, I just stood there, holding that ten-dollar bill and wondering what to buy and who to buy it for. 有那么一会儿,我只是站在那里,拿着那张10美元的秒票,想知道该买什么,买了给谁。 ·[句式升级4 非限制性定语从句 ①He was a sweet companion to me and my sister,who always made us happy when we got home after school. 他是我和我妹妹的好伙伴,当我们放学回家时,他总是让我们很开心 ②We'll also spend some time together singing, dancing and plaving games, which we hope wil make them pleased 我们也会花一些时间一起唱歌、跳舞和玩游戏,我们希望这能让他们开心 ·[句式升级5] 倒装结构 ①Not until then did he know what had happened. 直到那时,他才知道发生了什么事。 ②Away went the crowd one by one. 人们一个接一个地走开了。 ·[句式升级6] 强调句型 ①It was on the top of the mountain that we saw the sunrise. 我们就是在山顶上看到了日出 ②It was not until I got home that I realized I had left my keys in the office. 直到我回到家,我才意识到我把钥匙留在办公室了。 ·[句式升级7 therebe句型 ①There isaboy,agirlandtwowomen inthehouse.房子里有一个男孩,一个女孩和两个妇女。 ②There are ten students anda teacher inthe office.办公室里有十个学生和一个教师。 16 第二章 读后续写3大高分策略 ·[句式升级8] 独立主格 ①He stood there,(with) tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. 他站在那里,眼中涌出了感激的泪水。 ② Her father was lying on his back,(with) his dog trapped under the truck 她的父亲仰面躺着,他的狗被困在卡车下面。 学以致用能力生成 请用高级句式升级下面考生续写中加黑的一般句式 Paragraph 1: What a sense of shame did James now feel! ①Little (1)用分词作状语改写句① Caroline seized his arm, and pulled him into the room. But he hung down his head, and covered his face with his hands. His uncle went up to him, and kindly taking away his hands. (2)用强调句型改写句② said,"James, will you not bid me welcome?" But quickly starting back, he cried,“Brother, this is not your son. ②The boy who so shamefully insulted me in the street!" Paragraph 2: (3)用非限制性定语从句改写 With surbrise and grief did the good father and moth- 句③ er learn this. His uncle was ready to forgive him, and forget the injury. ③But his father would never permit James to have the gold watch, nor the beautiful books. His uncle had brought them for him. The rest of the children were loaded with pres (4)用部分倒装改写句④ ents. James was obliged to content himself with seeing them happy. ④ He never forgot this lesson so long as he lived. It cured him entirely of his low and insolent manners. 途径三 丰富细节 内容充实 [细节描写1] 人物肖像描写 专家支招·高效备考 1. I saw a tiny woman with silver hair, wearing an ordinary blue suit. 我看到一个身材娇小的银发妇人,穿着普通的蓝色套装。 2. She'd arrived late for class, her hair wet and messy 她上课迟到了,头发又湿又乱。 3. His strongly-built body and suntanned skin make him look like a sportsman. 强壮的身体和晒得黝黑的皮肤使他看起来像一个运动员。 4. Everything about him was old except his eves,and they were the same color as the sea and were cheerful and undefeated. 他身上的一切都显得苍老,除了那双眼睛,它们像海一样蓝,是愉快而不肯认输的 学以致用·能力生成 父亲有一头白发,看起来很老,额头上有些皱纹。当他微笑时,他的眼睛旁边也有皱纹,但是他 的微笑仍然像以前一样温馨,一个只是希望他的家人有一个美好生活的父亲的微笑 17读后续写 参考答案 途径四 读后续写 ] 学以致用 1. she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset 第二章 读后续写3大高分策略 策略三 happily with them 途径一 学以致用 ①huge ②continued ③swimming ④shouted to 2. the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before can't wait to / terrified/ frightened scared 3. Are you really willing to lead a tough life with make efforts to grab ⑧calmed down me? Yes! For me, it is not a suffering to live. turned out get lost appreciative/grateful 4. Every coin has two sides determined returning 途径二 学以致用 5. fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars (1) Little Caroline seized his arm, pulling him into 6. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous va the room. cation before. The special trip to the Wild West (2) It is the boy who so shamefully insulted me in made a deep impression on my mind the street! 第三章 读后续写话题详析 (3)But his father would never permit James to have 话题一 the gold watch, nor the beautiful books, which his 学以致用 uncle had brought for him. [参考范文] (4) Never did he forget this lesson so long as he My grandmother drove over to pick me up. Re lived. alizing I was unusually quiet, she asked me what had 途径三 学以致用 细节描写1 Father, who had white hair,looked very happened. I talked about the talent show. Looking old with some wrinkles on his forehead. He also had at my face from the mirror in the front of the car. wrinkles next to his eves when he smiled, yet his She said gently, "Honey, your ideas deserve to be smile was still as heartwarming as before, the smile considered carefully."She also suggested I tell the of a father who iust wanted a good life for his fam truth. Hearing what she said, I thought about it ily. 细节描写2 He stared at me again,meeting my eyes over and over again. I began to realize that it with the strangest expression on his face-it was wouldn't hurt to let Tina know what I really wanted hostile and angry. I looked away quickly, shocked. if she was a true friend of mine. Finally, I made up and my face went red again. my mind to talk to Tina. 细节描 写 3 I'm totally not an extrovert person. 1 When we got home, I took 12 deep breaths be- don't really like to talk a lot to strangers, yet the people who know me will tell you that I'm very fore I called Tina, With butterflies in my stomach talkative. I'm not a sociable person, but I wish 1 I waited for her to pick up the receiver. After I got are. Last but not least, I'm very optimistic. I al- through, I told her that I was going to do my jugg ways see things very simple, but I don't take ling act alone. Much to my relief, she said OK after things for granted. 细节描写4 I sat frozen in my seat, staring blankly a short silence. Before hanging up, she also wished at him. He was so mean. It wasn't fair. I began me success. The next day, she described her act and gathering up my things slowly, trying to block the I talked about my practice. We encouraged each oth sorrow that filled me, for fear that my eyes would er and exchanged ideas. I found it not so hard to tear up. 细节描写 5 Then, suddenly,at the back of the speak up for myself. On the day of the talent show. church, there was a total silence and everyone my wonderful performance received thunderous ap turned to see what was happening. And soon. plause from the audience. It was the talent show walking before them all were the very two boys that boost my confidence and made me into a better they were there to pray for. 细节描写6 1. Lucy said,"It's very nice of you to person by speaking up bravely. 话题二 学以致用 invite me. 2."I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Please [参考范文] take a seat at the head of the table. It's an infor- Approaching the doorway, Lucy was very mal dinner and please don't stand on ceremony. nervous and took a deep breath. Standing in front of Mrs Smith continued"Mr. Liu, would you like to have some chicken?" the door, she was afraid whether her mother would 3."What kind of life do you prefer, city life or coun- forgive her for her rudeness. But when she thought try life?"Jim asked. of her mother's familiar face and the noodle seller's 细节描 写 7 The church was filled with singing kind advice, she decided to knock on the door brave voices. Tom even sang loudly. He knew that this ly. Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so would be a day he would always remember. ashamed that she didn't know what to say. 137