策略3 途径1 词汇升级亮人一眼-【创新教程】2025年高考英语复习读后续写写作一本通（新高考）

读后续写 续表 注意： 3.给出的第二段首句与续写第二段首句的衔接 1.续写词数应为150左右； I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I 2.请按如下格式作答。 should visit him in any case.(第二段首句写 We started to meet regularly to draw up 同伴因为一种严重的疾病住进了医院。本句 our plans. 接着写听到这个消息我感到很难过，我想无 论如何都应该去看他。) One day I got word that he was admitted 4.文章结尾升华与文章主题意义的衔接 to the hospital for a serious disease. From this project,we also learned the sig- nificance of teammates.(升华主题：队友合 作的重要性。) 参考范文] We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Though I wanted to share my ideas with him fully,though引导计步状语从句汁fai o so for fear that十would hold him back.十iust kept nodding when he asked me whether it's OK to do this way or that way.I thought it was impossible to persuade him into accepting my views,(it作形式宾语)so士didn't want to waste our time to discuss. 十started to wait to leave immediately we arrived at the place,(immediately引导t时f间状 i语从句)and so did he.十just hoped that the presentation day could come earlier One day寸got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease,(that引导同位 语丛句)十felt so sorry to hear that and I thought十should visit him in any case.He was a little sur- prised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits.I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it.We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time.Our hard work paid off and Dr.Henderson was very satisfied with our wonderful findings.From this project,we also learned the significance of teammates. 策略三精细打磨续写语言的4大途径 构思好续写情节以后，下一步就是进行续写。在阅卷时，阅卷老师首要关注的是续写的语 言，因此必须注重提升语言表达的质量。首先要规避常见的语法和词汇使用方面的错误，确保拿 到及格分：再次要尽力升级写作的语言，努力达到最高档。 途径一词汇升级亮人一眼 专家支招高效备考 ●[词汇升级1]笼统词→具体词 DBecause of her hatred,she looked at him Because of her hatred,she glared at him. 2As scheduled,we participated in several good activities. As scheduled,we participated in several instructive activities. 14 第二章读后续写3大高分策略 ●[词汇升级2]简单词→高级词 DThe advice the old man gave Tom was very important. -.The advice the old man gave Tom was very significant/vital/critical. 2I should be free any time after school next week. I should be available any time after school next week. ●[词汇升级3]单词→短语 DHearing the bad news,the boy cried sadly. >Hearing the bad news,the boy burst into tears sadly. 2After a day's work,we all tired. After a day's work,we all worn out. ●[词汇升级4幻运用有表现力的副词 DThe day was bitterly cold;the moon was shining brightly in the sky. Having no choice,I slowly raised the book,hoping to hide myself. I was quietly,joyfully and patiently watching as the sun painted a brand-new day. DOn our way back home,my father held me tightly,wearing a big frown. ●[词汇升级5]运用有表现力的介词短语 DShe gazed up at him,glowing happily. She gazed up at him,glowing with happiness. Like a lamp,the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes curiously. "Like a lamp,the moon shone from above.The stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity 学以致用能力生成 请用高级词汇升级下面考生续写中加黑的一般词汇 Paragraph 1: Moments later,Richard returned with a long vine ①big→ ()He tied one end of the vine around his waist and ②kept- the other end around a big tree.He dived into the river and swam toward the girl and her dog.Since the water ③going→ was muddy,Richard couldn't see clearly.However,he ④told→ kept going."Give me your hand,"he told the girl.Al- though the girl was afraid,she threw her hands and legs ⑤afraid-→ into the water and tried to get close to Richard and hold ⑥tried-→ his hand.Richard used all his might and pulled the girl and her dog toward him. ⑦hold→ Paragraph 2: ⑧settled down→ "Thank you so much !the girl cried as she finally fell on the muddy shore.After the girl settled down, ⑨was→ she told Richard the reason why she was there.It was that her dog ran away after hearing the sound of fire- ⑩go missing crackers.She was scared that he would go missing,so ①thankfu-→ she followed him on her bike to catch him.The girl was thankful that Richard had saved them.Learning the girl ②decided-→ was from his hometown,Richard decided to leave her at Bgoing→ her house first before going to see his parents. 15读后续写 参考答案 读后续写 途径四学以致用 1.she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset 第二章读后续写3大高分策略 happily with them 策略三途径一学以致用 ①huge ②continued③swimming④shouted to 2.the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before ⑤terrified/,frightened scared⑥can't wait to 3.Are you really willing to lead a tough life with make efforts to⑦grab⑧calmed down me?Yes!For me,it is not a suffering to live. ⑨turned out0@get lost QDappreciative/grateful 4.Every coin has two sides 12determined Breturning 途径二学以致用 5.fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars (1)Little Caroline seized his arm,pulling him into 6.Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous va- the room. cation before.The special trip to the Wild West (2)It is the boy who so shamefully insulted me in made a deep impression on my mind the street！ 第三章读后续写话题详析 (3)But his father would never permit James to have the gold watch,nor the beautiful books,which his 话题一学以致用 uncle had brought for him. [参考范文] (4)Never did he forget this lesson so long as he My grandmother drove over to pick me up.Re- lived. alizing I was unusually quiet,she asked me what had 途径三学以致用 细节描写1 Father,who had white hair,looked very happened.I talked about the talent show.Looking old with some wrinkles on his forehead.He also had at my face from the mirror in the front of the car. wrinkles next to his eyes when he smiled,yet his She said gently,"Honey,your ideas deserve to be smile was still as heartwarming as before,the smile considered carefully."She also suggested I tell the of a father who just wanted a good life for his fam- ily. truth.Hearing what she said,I thought about it 细节描写2 He stared at me again,meeting my eyes over and over again.I began to realize that it with the strangest expression on his face-it was wouldn't hurt to let Tina know what I really wanted hostile and angry.I looked away quickly,shocked, if she was a true friend of mine.Finally,I made up and my face went red again. my mind to talk to Tina. 细节描写3I'm totally not an extrovert person..I don't really like to talk a lot to strangers,yet the When we got home,I took 12 deep breaths be- people who know me will tell you that I'm very fore I called Tina.With butterflies in my stomach, talkative.I'm not a sociable person,but I wish I I waited for her to pick up the receiver.After I got are.Last but not least,I'm very optimistic.I al- through.I told her that I was going to do my jugg- ways see things very simple,but I don't take ling act alone.Much to my relief,she said OK after things for granted. 细节描写4 I sat frozen in my seat,staring blankly a short silence.Before hanging up,she also wished at him.He was so mean.It wasn't fair.I began me success.The next day,she described her act and gathering up my things slowly,trying to block the I talked about my practice.We encouraged each oth- sorrow that filled me,for fear that my eyes would er and exchanged ideas.I found it not so hard to tear up. 细节描写5Then,suddenly,at the back of the speak up for myself.On the day of the talent show, church,there was a total silence and everyone my wonderful performance received thunderous ap- turned to see what was happening.And soon, plause from the audience.It was the talent show walking before them all were the very two boys that boost my confidence and made me into a better they were there to pray for. person by speaking up bravely. 细节描写6I,Lucy said,“It's very nice of you to 话题二学以致用 invite me. 2."I'm very glad you could come,Mr.Liu.Please [参考范文] take a seat at the head of the table.It's an infor- Approaching the doorway,Lucy was very mal dinner and please don't stand on ceremony. nervous and took a deep breath.Standing in front of Mrs Smith continued"Mr.Liu,would you like to the door,she was afraid whether her mother would have some chicken?" 3."What kind of life do you prefer,city life or coun- forgive her for her rudeness.But when she thought try life?”Jim asked. of her mother's familiar face and the noodle seller's 细节描写7 The church was filled with singing kind advice,she decided to knock on the door brave- voices.Tom even sang loudly.He knew that this ly.Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so would be a day he would always remember. ashamed that she didn't know what to say. 137