Unit 11 作文讲解与练习课件 2024-2025学年人教版九年级英语全册

Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. Writing Now write a diary entry for your own school trip. Explain if you liked it or didn’t like it and why. Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad. Tell your partner about them. Use the following ideas to help you.  winning/losing a competition  getting good/bad grades on an exam  performing something well/badly in front of a big group of people  getting into a fight with your best friend  your first trip outside your hometown Now write a diary entry for your own school trip. Explain if you liked it or didn’t like it and why. Write a story similar to the one in 2b using your notes in 3a. In your story, try to explain the following: What happened? When did it happen? Where did it happen? How did it make you feel? Why? What did you learn from the experience? 作文写法 ①开篇点题 I want to share an unforgettable experience with you. ②个人经历 On a..., I... Suddenly, ... ③分享感悟 From the experience, I learn that... 总 分 总 第一人称, 一般过去时 宁愿做某事 使人发疯/发狂 如此...以至于... 越..., 就越... 有很多共同之处 成为某人(更好)的朋友 感觉被冷落 想要做某事 面色苍白 would rather do sth. so...that... the more...the more... have a lot in common be (better) friends with sb. feel left out feel like doing sth. 短语储备 (as) pale as chalk drive sb. crazy/mad 召来;叫来 在某人心里 既不...也不... 首相;大臣 担忧 取代某人的位置 起初;开始时 搜寻;寻找 即使 call in in one’s mind neither...nor... be worried about =worry about take one’s position to start with search for 短语储备 prime minister even though/if 眼睛盯着...;注视 错过做某事 使失望 开除某人 一...就... 敲门 让...进来 对某人苛刻;对某人要求严厉 与...交流 keep one’s eyes on... miss doing sth. let...down = disappoint sb. as soon as knock on the door 短语储备 kick sb. off let...in be hard on sb. communicate with... 而不是 齐心协力;通力合作 令某人放心的是 同意 给某人提供某物 pull together to one’s relief 短语储备 rather than in agreement offer sb. sth.=offer sth. to sb. ①开篇点题 1. 时光流逝,很多事情已从我的脑海中消失。 2. 但有一件(我永远不会忘记的)事。(定语从句) 3. 我想和你分享一次难忘的经历。 But there is one thing that I will never forget. 句型储备 As time goes by, lots of things have disappeared from my mind. I want to share an unforgettable experience with you. ②个人经历 1. 在一个星期天的下午,我正在回家路上。 2. 突然,天开始下大雨。 3. 幸运的是,我随身带着雨伞。(have sth. with sb.) 4. 然后我看到了一对母女在街上走。(see sb. doing sth.) On a Sunday afternoon, I was on my way home. 句型储备 Luckily, I had my umbrella with me. Then I saw a mother and daughter walking on the street. Suddenly, it began to rain heavily. ②个人经历 5. 她们既没有伞也没有雨衣。(neither...nor...) 6. 我看见这个母亲脱下外套 (see sb. do sth.) 7. 尽全力保护她的女儿免受雨淋。(protect...from...) 8. 那一刻,我被她深深地打动了。 They had neither umbrellas nor raincoats. 句型储备 I saw the mother take off her coat and try her best to protect her daughter from the rain. At that moment, I was deeply moved by her. ②个人经历 9. 毫不犹豫地,我把我的伞给了她们。 10. 这个母亲非常感激,并且一直说“谢谢”。 11. 我什么也没说,开心地跑回了家。 句型储备 Without thinking twice, I gave my umbrella to them. The mother was very thankful and kept saying "thank you". I said nothing and ran home happily. ③分享感悟 1. 从这个经历中,我学会了爱让世界更美好。 2. 帮助别人使我感到很开心。 From the experience, I learn that love makes the world more beautiful. 句型储备 Helping others made me feel very happy. As an old saying goes, “The rose in her hand, the flavor in mine.” 范文: I want to share an unforgettable experience with you. On a Sunday afternoon, I was on my way home. Suddenly, it began to rain heavily. Luckily, I had my umbrella with me. Then I saw a mother and daughter walking on the street. They had neither umbrellas nor raincoats. I saw the mother take off her coat and try her best to protect her daughter from the rain. At that moment, I was deeply moved by her. Without thinking twice, I gave my umbrella to them. The mother was very thankful and kept saying "thank you". I said nothing and ran home happily. Helping others made me feel very happy. From the experience, I learn that love makes the world more beautiful. 参考模板: I want to share an unforgettable experience with you. On a , I . Suddenly, . . . From the experience, I learn that . . 快乐可以让我们的身体更健康,生活更美好。请讲述你通过传递快乐,感染他人的一件事,并描述事情的经过、结果和你的感悟,词数90左右。 Homework spread happiness share interesting things tell humorous stories do funny things laugh with others praise others ...... $$