读后续写微技能训练之一 悲伤“心理描写 课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写微技能训练之一 “悲伤”心理描写 一、素材积累 名词/动词：sorrow, sadness, grief, depression, sink(vi, 消沉) 形容词/副词：sorrowful, upset, frustrated, miserable, depressed, heart-broken, sadly, painfully,miserably 短语：1.sob/weep with one’s face hidden in one’s hands掩面啜泣 2.cry one’s heart/eyes out悲痛欲绝 3. be sad at heart心里悲伤 4.in a sorrowful tone/voice伤心地说 5.be overcome with sorrow伤心不已 6.be down/low in spirits情绪低落 7.be beside myself with grief悲痛欲绝 8.to one’s sadness/sorrow 让某人难过的是 9.with a heavy/sinking/sorrowful/broken heart怀着沉重/沮丧/难过的心情 10.break down忍不住哭起来 11. drown sadness in wine借酒消愁 12.fight back tears抑制住泪水 13. be in tears含泪 二、来自名著中的素材积累 1. Her face,which was once so full of life, was now miserable and full of pain, and her breathing was very bad. (神态描写+情感词汇) 2. I was very sad. I put my nose against hers but could find nothing to say that would cheer her up. （情感词汇+肢体动作描写） ——from Black Beauty《黑骏马》 2. While we were being told this, a woman entered the big hall, like mad, and forced her way through the crowd: she was Robetti’s mother, who had been sent for. Another woman hastened towards her, and flung her arms about her neck, with sobs: it was the mother of the baby who had been saved. Both flew into the room, and desperate cry made itself heard, “Oh my Giulio! My child!”(情感词汇+肢体动作描写+场景烘托) ——《爱的教育》 3. "Please don't kill it!" she sobbed. "It's unfair." Mr. Arable stopped walking.　"Fern," he said gently, "you will have to learn to control yourself." "Control myself?" yelled Fern. "This is a matter of life and death, and you talk about controlling myself." Tears ran down her cheeks and she took hold of the ax and tried to pull it out of her father's hand. （情感词汇+肢体动作描写+对话描写） _____《夏洛特的网》 三、小试牛刀（单句语法填空）1. At the bad news, so hopeless was he that he drowned _________(sad) in wine.2. He was in low _______(spirit), so he was in no mood ________ (walk) the dog.3. He shook his head ______(sad), and then he couldn’t help _______(sob), hiding his face in his hands.4. I tried to block the sorrow that ______(fill) me. _______(tear) rolled down my cheeks.5. ________ (feel) down, I stood _________ (silent), trying to fight back tears.6. With heavy hearts, people slowly made their way home. Everyone felt _______ (bitter) upset. 答案： 1. sadness 2. spirits, walking 3. sadly, sobbing 4. filled, Tears 5. Feeling, silently 6. bitterly 二次牛刀（给以下语篇选择最合适的结尾） I have seen mothers kissing for the last time the faces of their dead offsprings; I have seen them looking down into the grave, as the earth fell with a dull sound upon their coffins, hiding them from their eyes forever, but ___________________________. A. never have I seen such an exhibition of intense, strong and unbounded joy, as when Eliza ran to hug her child B. never have I seen such an exhibition of intense, unmeasured and unbounded grief, as when Eliza was parted from her child C. never have I seen such a look of terror and horror when Eliza saw her child jump off the tree D. never have I seen such a woman in depair as Eliza when she was taken away from home. “Don’t leave me, mama—don’t leave me,” screamed the child, as its mother was pushed harshly forward; “Don’t leave me—come back, mama,” she still cried, stretching forth her little arms imploringly. But ______________. A. she won her back B. she stopped crying C. she cried in vain D. she carried on crying 尝试落笔（用一句话给短文收尾） Eliza never after saw or heard of her children, Emily or Randall. Day or night, however, were they ever absent from her memory. In the cotton field, in the cabin(小木屋), always and everywhere, she was talking of them—often to them, as if they were actually present. ____________ __________________________________________________. 参考答案：Only when absorbed in that illusion, or asleep, did she ever have a moment’s comfort afterwards. Eliza was crying aloud, and wringing her hands. She besought(乞求) the man not to buy her boy, unless he also bought herself and her daughter, Emily. She promised, in that case, to be the most faithful slave that ever lived. The man answered he could not afford it, and then _________________________________. Eliza burst into a paroxysm of grief, weeping plaintively. 有效输出：请结合以上所学描写一段母子被迫分离的悲伤场面。（50个单词左右） Never had Elisa realized that the day came so soon. The master sold her today, without her children together.______________________ _______________________________________________________. 参考答案：Hearing this, she ran to the buyer and besought the man to buy her children as well. She promised, in that case, to be the most faithful slave that ever lived. The man answered he could not afford it, and then Eliza burst into a paroxysm of grief, weeping plaintively. Never have I seen such an exhibition of intense, unmeasured and unbounded grief, as when Eliza was parted from her child. But as a slaver, she had no choice but only to suffer the seperation. 高考真题实操（“悲伤”的表达） 技巧1. 用一个形容词短语开头，描写人物情绪 首句好例：（浙江高考）Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face. （2024年全国Ⅰ卷和Ⅱ卷读后续写） Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接： Sad and anxious, I observed Gunter’s look, in the hope of receiving a desired answer. 技巧2：用一个副词开头，简洁修饰全句、进行评注、顺承 首句好例： （浙江高考）Suddenly, we heard a noise in the forest. 衔接：Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. 2024年全国Ⅰ卷和Ⅱ卷读后续写） Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接：Very anxiously, I waited for Gunter’s response I desired while observing the change of his look. 技巧3：用现在分词短语或过去分词短语开头，描写动作或情绪 首句好例：（浙江高考）It was at daybreak when Jane woke up. 衔接：Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along teh stream to find the way out. 2024年全国Ⅰ卷和Ⅱ卷读后续写） Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接：Feeling sad and anxious, I waited for Gunter’s response I desired while observing the change of his look. 技巧4：用一个介词短语或with结构开头 首句好例：（浙江高考）It was at daybreak when Jane woke up. 衔接：At a distance, she spotted a misty figure. 2024年全国Ⅰ卷和Ⅱ卷读后续写） Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接：To my anxiety, I waited for a satisfactory answer. 技巧5：用一个从句开头 首句好例：（浙江高考）It was at daybreak when Jane woke up. 衔接：Though she was awake, she couldn’t believe she spotted a figure. Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接：As he was thinking, I waited for a satisfactory answer very anxiously. 技巧5：用一个特殊句式开头 首句好例：（浙江高考）It was at daybreak when Jane woke up. 衔接：Awake as she was, she couldn’t believe she spotted a figure. Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接：Hesitant as he looked, I still waited for a comforting answer. 技巧6：用问题开头， 叙述或进行内心活动描写 首句好例：（浙江高考）She trembled with fear. 衔接： Would there be fighting? Call a policeman? Paragraph 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 衔接：What would be his decision? I waited for a comforting answer anxiously. Homework 根据所给情节，用一句话续写，表现她见不到孩子的悲伤难过之情。注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 It was heartbreaking for her that she cannot see her children. 1. ____________________________________________________ _________________________(孤独悲伤，泪眼模糊) 2. ____________________________________________________ _________________________(心在滴血) 3. _____________________________________________________ _____________________________(悲伤涌上心头，心如刀割) 4. _____________________________________________________ ____________________________________(苍白、憔悴，眼睛满是哀伤) Thank you for your cooperation. $$