2024年江苏省苏州中考英语书面表达复习课件

书面表达 Every day deserves to be expected 写作专题 写作专题 Every day deserves to be expected 中考冲刺 写作专题 01.考情分析 02.写作步骤 03.语言升级 04.题型分析 目录 CONTENTS 第三章 第四章 Every day deserves to be expected 写作专题 中考冲刺 考情分析 中考冲刺 Every day deserves to be expected 01 写作专题 Every day deserves to be expected 写作专题 中考冲刺 01、考情分析 年份 分值 体裁 题型 2023 25 应用文（发言稿） 介绍如何使家乡变得更美 (Starting from me and now) (触动你的事情+启示+倡议）--用英语讲中国故事 2022 25 议论文 围绕谚语展开写作 (Practice makes perfect)（含义+经历+感受） 2021 25 记叙文 半命题作文写个人故事型 ( A conflict with...)（事情的发生和解决） 2020 20 应用文（发言稿） 根据海报信息介绍俱乐部 2019 20 应用文（回信） 关于mistake回答问题（观点+经历+做法+感悟） 以记叙为核心，加入不同题材的考察 Every day deserves to be expected 02 写作步骤 Every day deserves to be expected 写作专题 中考冲刺 02、写作步骤 审 审体裁、人称、时态 抓 抓住要点 列 思考文章结构，列出提纲 连 查 抄 用过渡词（句）连接句子和段落 检查拼写、时态、主谓一致、标点 誊写 WRITING Every day deserves to be expected 02、写作步骤 根据体裁特点使用适当的语气，如呼吁、动员、期望等。 人称确定好，并保持全文一致。写作过程中，避免we和you 混用。 切忌盲目组织汉语，再翻译成英语，容易钻进死胡同，套住自己。 已知要点不要逐字翻译，省略号补充点1-2个，看字数及分数布局来取舍。 Every day deserves to be expected (2023·江苏省苏州市)Happy Home Club本期的主题是"How to make Suzhou more beautiful"，你打算以"Starting from me and now"为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括： 1.触动你的一件事情； 2.这件事给你的启示； 3.你的倡议。 注意： 1.词数：100左右。 2.内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分） 3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 Starting from me and now ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 原文解读 Every day deserves to be expected 原文解读 定体裁 定人称 定时态 定要点、 定结构 Every day deserves to be expected 参考范文 Starting from me and now Last weekend，I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try our best to keep the city clean. First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time. As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful. Every day deserves to be expected 03 语言升级 Every day deserves to be expected 写作专题 中考冲刺 词汇升级 书面表达评分标准也鼓励考生使用高级词汇，但使用高级词汇并不等于使用一些偏难、古怪的词汇，而是使用一些表意准确、形象生动、语法正确且符合以英语为母语的人的习惯表达方式的词汇。 01 无重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，恰当地使用同义词,增强段落的统一性和连贯性。 02 03 语言升级 具体化 写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词，而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。多用实词，少用虚词，避免空洞。 晚词优先 尽量用高年级阶段学到的词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。know→realize 04 短语优先 用短语代替单词或词块使文章增加亮点。 Every day deserves to be expected 词汇选择 4.短语优先 (1)形容词变短语的方法：of＋同根名词 very important = of great importance very useful =of great use very valuable= of great value very beneficial= of great benefit very helpful= of great help Working as a volunteer will be very beneficial to my oral English. →Working as a volunteer will be of great benefit to my oral English. Every day deserves to be expected 4.短语优先 (2) 动词变短语的方法：同义短语替换 think = hold the view/opinion know/realize=be aware of use= make use of/take advantage of 词汇选择 Every day deserves to be expected 常见词汇替换 词性 普通词汇 高级词汇 形容词 good great, perfect, excellent, fantastic, outstanding, wonderful important be of great importance,play an important role in helpful be of great help, rewarding clever intelligent, bright, wise honest truthful, sincere pretty/beautiful attractive, charming，eye-catching hopeful full of hope,promising different various ,vary from person to person 副词 very extremely, pretty sometimes at times, once in a while 词性 普通词汇 高级词汇 动词 should be supposed to want would like, be willing to think believe, insist, hold the view that，as far as I am concerned like be interested in, be fond of, be crazy about，be keen on be addicted to finish achieve, complete,fulfill use make good use of solve work out, deal with,address focus on pay attention to, concentrate on cause lead to, result in try struggle, spare no efforts ,attempt, make great efforts 语言升级 增加细节 特殊句式 02 01 句式升级 一篇优秀的书面表达首先内容要全、段落层次清晰、行文逻辑通顺连贯，同时还要注意恰当地运用高级句式，彰显考生的丰富的语言内涵。但是，在使用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。平时要注重有意识地积累和背诵原汁原味的英语句子和文章，有意识地尝试使用或模仿。 在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。 Every day deserves to be expected 特殊句式之it It is important/（necessary, difficult, convenient, possible）for sb. to do sth. 在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。 It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world. It is high/(about) time that ... It is a great honor for me to .... It is certain that .... 显然，早该采取一些积极的措施来解决问题。 Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem. 很荣幸给你介绍我的一位好朋友，刘翔。 It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang. 可以肯定，如果开车的人少一些，空气污染就一定会减少。 It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution. 特殊句式之比较级 (1)The+比较级..., the+比较级... (2)比较级+and+比较级. 你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。 The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make. Nothing is more important than to receive education. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide. 特殊句式之状语从句 如果你坚持阅读，你会在英语学习中取得更大的进步。 世上无难事，只怕有心人 Nothing is impossible as long as you put your heart into it. You will make greater progress in your English if you keep on reading. You will make greater progress in your English unless you give up reading. 特殊句式之状语从句 无论什么时候我向他求助,他总是乐于帮助。 他乐于助人，周围的人都很喜欢他。 He is so helpful that everyone around likes him. Whenever I ask him for help ,he is willing to give me a hand. He is such a helpful boy that everyone around likes him. No matter how/However tough the task is，there is no doubt that we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed. 不论多么困难，毫无疑问我们将会克服所有困难并且成功。 特殊句式之定语从句 我认为，我们学校应该进行垃圾回收利用。 5月8日，星期天，我们将会参观拥有400多年悠长历史的北京。 On Sunday, May 18, we will visit Beijing, which has a history of 400 years. From my perspective, our school should be a place where rubbish can be classified and recycled afterwards. As is known to all，Chinese food has become increasingly popular around the world. 众所周知，中国食物在世界越来越流行。 特殊句式之名词性从句 人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。 记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。 The best way to remember new words is that/to practice them everyday. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful. What matters most is that we everyone should develop the awareness of protecting our environment and take actions from now on no matter how small it is. 最重要的是，我们每个人都应该树立保护环境的意识，从现在开始行动起来，不管事情大小。 毫无疑问，玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。 特殊句式之名词性从句 在校园内，学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。 There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study. 特殊句式之not only...but also... 苏州历史悠久，美食众多。 不仅仅是为了我们，更是为了我们的后代，我们应该行动起来，使这个世界变成更美好的家园。 We should take actions to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations. Suzhou has not only a long history but also a variety of tasty snacks. Not only does Suzhou have a long history, but it is also home to a variety of tasty snacks. 倒装句 在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有： Not only+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语+其他，but+主语+also+谓语+其他 不仅……而且…… 该句型中Not only…位于句首时，前一分句句子采用部分倒装语序（前倒后不倒）。 海洋不仅提供丰富食物，还能保持生态平衡。 Not only does ocean offer us plenty of food, but also it keeps the balance of nature. Only+时间副词/介词短语/(when/if引导的)状语从句+助动词/情态动词/系动词+主语+谓语+其他； 只有……才…… only后的状语从句中,主谓不倒装。 只有通过成为聪明的网络学习者，我们才能真正享受现代技术的好处。 Only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology. 只有当我们都行动起来时，我们的环境才能得到真正的改善。 Only when we work together will our environment become better. 特殊句式之强调句 强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成： 强调句型基本结构为“It＋is/was＋被强调部分（除谓语外）＋that/who＋句子其他部分”。 With your generous help，I believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible. →It is with your generous help that I believe that I will adapt to the college life as soon as possible. 正是他的行为让我意识到我们需要做些什么来使我们的城市更加美好。 It was his behavior that made me fully realize we should do something to better our city. 特殊句式之修辞 排比句： 我们都需要呼吸清新的空气，我们都需要饮用洁净的水，我们都需要绿地来享受。 We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy. 比喻：A is to B what C is to D. (A之于B，就像C之于D) ① A is to B what water is to the fish 就像水对于鱼② A is to B what food is to the body 就像食物对于身体 阅读之于知识就像食物之于身体。 Reading is to knowledge is what food is to the body. The beatiful environment to human is what water is to the fish. 环境之于人类就像水之于鱼。 特殊句式之非谓语 Moved by the story, the man determined to keep on guarding the forest. 听到这个故事，这个男人决定继续守卫这片森林。 Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English. 出于英语教师世家，她对英语有着特别的兴趣。 看到这个，我彻底理解了这句话的含义。 Seeing this, I totally understood the meaning of this saying. 被同学们包围着，他觉得自己像一个英雄。 Surrounded by students, he felt himself like a hero. 增加细节之with With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work. If we take actions from now on, we will see Suzhou as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky. We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention. 增加细节之程度 I have fully realized that English is essential to my future. 我充分认识到英语对我的未来是多么的重要。 Now, I think it is really a successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means. 现在，我想这真是一次成功的经历，并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。 04 题型分析 Every day deserves to be expected 写作专题 中考冲刺 04、例题解析 话题作文 在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，比如父母、老师、学习、爱好等。他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长，丰富我们的生命。请你以________Help(s) Me Grow为题写一篇文章，谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。内容包括：1.你过去的状态；2.你发生的变化；3.变化对你的意义。注意：1.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.需先把标题补充完整，文章内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。 _______ Help(s) Me Grow As we progress through life, a variety of things or people contribute to our personal growth and development. Every day deserves to be expected As we progress through life, a variety of things or people contribute to our personal growth and development. I used to be a shy person who never felt comfortable speaking in front of a crowd and I often felt like my voice didn’t matter. Growing up, I was often overlooked and felt like I was nobody.But all of this changed when I discovered my true love for writing. It helped me find my voice. I started to express my thoughts and feelings through my writing freely, which helped me grow more confident. Through writing, I was able to learn more about who I was and what I wanted in life. My growth and confidence have changed my life for the better. I have been able to realize my dreams with courage and faith. Writing has opened up many new doors for me and has made me into the person I am today. Writing Help(s) Me Grow 04、例题解析 材料作文 初中生活即将结束，你们即将开始新的征程，规划新的人生。请根据下列图示提示内容，以“My plan for the new life”为题，给你们学校英语角写一篇英语短文，介绍你的计划。 注意：（1）词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 My plan for the new life Our middle school life is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life. Every day deserves to be expected School life is Middle school is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life. First, I’d like to have a healthy lifestyle. It’s good for me to exercise more and keep running every day. I also want to go travelling to enjoy the natural beauty. Second, I hope to read books to learn about different histories and cultures. I will also work harder on my weak subjects. And I hope to be more confident to speak in front of many people as well. Moreover, I’m going to help my parents do some housework when I’m free. In a word, I’m looking forward to having a meaningful new life. My plan for the new life 明确写作目的：首先要明确写作的目的，是提出建议，还是请求帮助、表达感谢、邀请参加活动等。 选择合适的语气：对象不同，语气有所差异。在结尾部分，再次表达感谢并恳请收件人采取行动，例如回复邮件、提供帮助等。 清晰明了的开头：开门见山，简单明了。 主体部分，尽量详细，考点涵盖全面：在信件的主体部分详细阐述写作目的，并回答分析题目列出的要点或问题。 合理易操作的请求或建议：如果信件的目的是请求帮助或提出建议，要清晰明了地陈述请求或建议的内容。 书信/邮件 04、例题解析 Every day deserves to be expected 电子邮件 注意：1.字数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总字数; 2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、顺畅; 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下你在学校的学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受，请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容，结合你的实际用英语回复。 注意：1.字数100词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总字数; 2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、顺畅; 3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________ 04、例题解析 Every day deserves to be expected To: lihua@suzhou.com From: maryswift@london.com Subject: School life Dear Li Hua, How are you? I’m glad to hear you are a Grade 9 student now. I’d like to know something about you. Would you please tell me something about your life? What problems do you have as a Grade 9 student? Who do you often ask for help and what advice will he/ she give you? Who has influenced you most? Why? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Mary 04、例题解析 Every day deserves to be expected Dear Mary, I’m glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best, Li Hua 1.注意过渡，自然衔接。不要写成问答题。 （已给开头和要点1的过渡；每个要点间的过渡；要点和结尾的过渡） 2.合理分段，一段解决一个问题。 3.直抒胸臆，别让改卷老师猜。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to hear from you. As a grade 9 student, I feel stressed from time to time. I have some problems these days. For example, I have so much homework to do that I have to stay up late every day. As a result, I often feel sleepy in class and I don’t have enough time for my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to help me. She asks me to manage time better and go to bed earlier.She also tells me how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies. My English teacher is the person who has influenced me most. She is always kind and helpful. She cares about all the students. I want to be a teacher like her when I grow up. All the best, Li Hua 04、例题解析 稿件 投稿、发言稿、演讲稿、倡议书、报道...... 苏州某电台英文频道将开设China Impression栏目，面向全市中学生征集“中国印象”的英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文，根据以下提示词来写，向栏目组投稿。▲ Introduction（location; capital; …）▲ A traditional festival（list one and describe how to celebrate it）▲ A famous person in history（what he/she was famous for; his/her achievements）▲ Your feelings about China Every day deserves to be expected 注意事项：1. 征集稿须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2. 词数在100个左右，短文的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；3. 英文信中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置。 04、例题解析 China Impression China is a great country with a long history. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Every day deserves to be expected China is a great country with a long history. China is located in the east of Asia. The capital of China is Beijing. In China, the Spring Festival is the most important festival. Most of the families will have a big family get-together. The whole family will have a big meal on the eve of the Spring Festival. People will eat the traditional food—dumplings. The Chinese think the dumplings will bring them good luck in the new year. As you know, China is greatly influenced by Confucianism. So, today I will tell you something about Confucius. According to tradition, Confucius was born in 551 BC. He was a great Chinese thinker, educator and philosopher. His teachings may be found in the Analects of Confucius, such as “Keep what you say and carry out what you do.”, “Study hard and never feel contented, and never be tired of teaching others.” and so on. He has made a great difference in our education. China is a country with a long history and profound cultural heritage. I love my country deep. 04、例题解析 China Impression Every day deserves to be expected $$