专题06 书面表达-【好题汇编】5年（2020-2024）中考1年模拟英语分类汇编（山西专用）

学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxK.cOM 精选好题·分类汇编 专题06 书面表达 五年考情·探规律 考点 五年考情(2020-2024) Youth is a time for fighting 2024 1. your idea about what young people should be like 命题作文 2.one of your stories about fighting 3. the meaning of fighting I Find Myself Really Good 2023 1. 简要说明图表内容 命题作文 2. 从图表中任选一项,结合自已的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么 积极的影响。 书面表达 Students' Favorite Kinds of English Homeworl 2022 1.简要说明图表内容; 命题作文 2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种 作业的好处。 2021 描述一件自己感兴趣的事 看图作文 是如何遵从自己内心的感受,并坚持下来的短文。 针对我们成长过程中,面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评,有的同学不 2020 理解,有的甚至会有过激的反应这一现象,结合生活中的经历,写一篇 材料作文 短文,短文要求包含对这一现象的感想,自已所看或所听到的事情,从 中学到的道理。 _ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学1 好题汇编 www.zxxK.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 5年真题·精准练 1. (2024山西,中考真题)随着全球互联互通,青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youthisa timeforfighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行,你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写 一篇发言稿。 内容包括: your idea about what young people should be like one of your stories about fighting the meaning of fighting 要求: 1.词数不少于80词 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 2. (2023山西中考真题)青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学 们正确地认识自我,某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自已真的很好”为主题,对1127名学生进行了 问卷调查,下图是部分项目的统计结果。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxK.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 I Find Myselr Really Good 100% 86% 8 60% 47% 40% 2 01 not complaining seeing the world being potitirve with kind eyes (抱) (乐观的) 假如你是该校的学生,请结合以上图表信息以IFindMyselfReallyGood”为主题,用两段话写一篇短 文。内容包括: 1. 简要说明图表内容 2. 从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 要求: 1. 词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1.127 students on the topic of "I Find Myself Really Good". Here are the results 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxk.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 3. (2022山西中考真题)有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣,丰富学习经历,提升综合素养, 并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担,改进作业布置的方式,针对“你最喜欢的一种 英语课后作业类型”,对1267名学生进行了间卷谓查,下图是相关的统计结果。 Students' Favorite Kinds of English Homework others. 7% hands-on project (making English videos,- making English posters..). listening and speaking 22% -(watching English movies. going to the English corner...). 42% reading and writing (reading English novels and magazines,- keeping English diaries...). 29% 假如你是该校的学生,请你根据以上图表信息,用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1简要说明图表内容 2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种作业的好处。 要求: 1.词数不少于80词,首句已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名 3.参考词汇仅供参考。 WORDBANK arouse interest 微发兴趣 enrich experiences 丰富经历 promote competence 提升素养 A possible version A school did a survey among 1.267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxk.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 4.(2021山西,中考真题) 在我们成长的过程中,会遇到各种各样的选择,选择读一本喜欢的书:选择做感兴趣的事:选择与志 趣相投的人交朋友。,在选择面前,如何客观、理性,并且遵从自己内心的感受,这是我们应有的处事态度。 请根据以上内容,结合图片信息,写一篇英语短文。 内容包括: 1.从以上提示中选择某个方面,谈谈你对这个选择的观点 2.围绕以上观点,描述你曾经历过的一件事 3.这件事带给你的思考。要求: 4.词数不少于80词; 5.提示词会仅供参考; 6.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Word BANK objective adi客观的 reasonable adj.理性的 attitude n态度 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxK.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 5. (2020山西:中考真题 WORD 3AK remind r. 提 entirite t. 批评 chiectine nd. 客观的 calm a冷的 rasonahle a.理性静 教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评,有的同学不理 解,有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题,需要我们认真、理性地思考,并做出合 理应对,这正是教育要达到的目的。 请针对以上现象,结合生活中的经历,写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1. Your opinion about this phenomenon (现象 2. An experience you had/heard/saw 3. What you have learned from it 要求: 1. 词数不少于80词 2. 参考词汇仅供参考 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 remindv提醒 criticize v.批评 objective adj.客观的 calm adj.冷静的 reasonable adj.理性 6 # 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxk.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学1网 好题汇编 www.zxxk.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 1年模拟·对点练 6. (2024山西大同三模)假如你关注的某英文网站正在举办以“友情--力量的源泉”为主题的征文活 动。请你根据下面的提示要点,用英语写一篇短文介绍你与好友之间的真挚友情,用于投稿。 提示要点: 1. Introduce your good friend 2. Talk about one unforgettable thing between you two: 3. Share your ideas about friendship 要求:1:词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 A faithful (忠实的) friend is hard to find. So I feel very lucky to have my good friend 7. (2024山西忻州三模)面对转瞬即逝的初中生活,我们有太多的希冀与不舍,多少欢笑与泪水, 多少成功与失败,对于我们青涩的青春我们想到的是什么?拼搏,希望,信任,友爱,鼓励,请选择 一个关键词,并分享背后的故事和你的感悟 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxK.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 希望 拼搏 信任 要求:1.不少于80词,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.不得出现真实的校名、人名。 Looking back at my junior school life, I think of many things 8. (2024山西阳泉三模)请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 近几年来,中华传统文化正在走进我们的日常生活。越来越多的人穿汉服、诵读经典文学、演奏传统 乐器、学习制作传统手工艺品....。这些都是我们身边的传统文化。某杂志社为了鼓励同学们感受传统文 化之美,开辟了“Chinesetraditionalculture aroundme”的专栏。假如你是刘美,请你写一封信投稿 内容包括: 1.列举你身边的一种中华传统文化 2.谈谈你对这种文化的理解; 3.说明你是如何传播这种文化的。 要求: 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网 好题汇编 www.zxxk.coM 精选好题·分类汇编 1.词数不少于80词; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 3. 参考词汇仅供参考;4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 WORDBANK hanfun汉服 handicraftsn手工艺品 classicn经典作品,名著 musical instruments 乐器 Dear Sir/Madam. I'm glad to see that more and more people enjoy and spread Chinese traditional culture in our daily life Best wishes Yours. LiuMei 9.(2024山西晋城三模)作为初三学生,在紧张的复习阶段,有的同学可能会因为一时的“失败”而失去 信心。为了鼓励大家勇于面对失败并学会从失败中学习,某班开展“失败是成功之母(Failureisthemother ofsuccess)”的主题班会,要求每一位同学写一篇演讲稿。假如你是该班同学王强,请你结合自已的经历 写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括:1. show your opinion about failure 2. tell a story of how you leaned from failure 10 # 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 专题06 书面表达 考点 五年考情（2020-2024） 书面表达 2024 命题作文 Youth is a time for fighting 1.your idea about what young people should be like 2.one of your stories about fighting 3.the meaning of fighting 2023 命题作文 I Find Myself Really Good 1. 简要说明图表内容； 2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 2022 命题作文 Students’ Favorite Kinds of English Homework 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。 2021 看图作文 描述一件自己感兴趣的事， 是如何遵从自己内心的感受，并坚持下来的短文。 2020 材料作文 针对我们成长过程中，面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有过激的反应这一现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文，短文要求包含对这一现象的感想，自己所看或所听到的事情，从中学到的道理。 （A） 1．（2024·山西·中考真题）随着全球互联互通，青少年之间的交流日益增加。一个主题为“Youth is a time for fighting”的国际青少年交流沙龙将要在线上进行，你作为中国青少年代表将进行发言。请用英语写一篇发言稿。 内容包括： ·your idea about what young people should be like ·one of your stories about fighting ·the meaning of fighting 要求： 1．词数不少于80词； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （B） 2．（2023·山西·中考真题）青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我，某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题，对1127名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是部分项目的统计结果。 假如你是该校的学生，请结合以上图表信息以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，用两段话写一篇短文。内容包括： 1. 简要说明图表内容； 2. 从图表中任选一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2·文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （C） 3．（2022·山西·中考真题）有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。 Students’ Favorite Kinds of English Homework    假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1.简要说明图表内容； 2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。 要求： 1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3.参考词汇仅供参考。 WORD BANK arouse interest    微发兴趣 enrich experiences    丰富经历 promote competence    提升素养 A possible version: A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （D） 4．（2021·山西·中考真题） 在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择做感兴趣的事；选择与志趣相投的人交朋友……在选择面前，如何客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。 请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1.从以上提示中选择某个方面，谈谈你对这个选择的观点； 2.围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事； 3.这件事带给你的思考。要求： 4.词数不少于 80 词； 5.提示词会仅供参考； 6.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Word BANK objective     adi.客观的 reasonable  adj.理性的 attitude       n.态度 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （E） 5．（2020·山西·中考真题） 教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真、理性地思考，并做出合理应对，这正是教育要达到的目的。 请针对以上现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. Your opinion about this phenomenon (现象) 2. An experience you had/heard/saw 3. What you have learned from it 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 参考词汇仅供参考； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 remind v.提醒    criticize v.批评    objective adj.客观的    calm adj.冷静的    reasonable adj.理性的 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： （A） 1．例文： As young people, we should be brave, confident and creative, but the most important thing is to be willing to fight. Last year, I often made mistakes when I did English reading exercises. Remembering the teacher had ever told us the more we read, the higher our reading ability would be, I decided to try. I spent all my free time on English reading. Whenever I read, I made every effort to understand the articles thoroughly and wrote down my own understanding of them. Gradually, I made great progress in reading comprehension. It’s fighting that makes us better and better. Fighting is the brightest color of youth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，多种时态综合运用； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述个人观点，认为青少年应该是什么样子的，具备什么样的品质； 第二步，具体介绍个人的经历，阐述自己是如何奋斗的； 第三步，表达个人感悟，阐述奋斗的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①be willing to do sth愿意做某事 ②make mistakes犯错误 ③decide to do sth.决定做某事 ④spend some time on sth.花费时间做某事 ⑤make great progress in sth.在某方面取得巨大进步 [高分句型] ①Last year, I often made mistakes when I did English reading exercises.（when引导时间状语从句） ②Remembering the teacher had ever told us the more we read, the higher our reading ability would be, I decided to try.（the+比较级，the+比较级） ③Whenever I read, I made every effort to understand the articles thoroughly and wrote down my own understanding of them.（whenever引导让步状语从句） （B） 2．例文 I Find Myself Really Good Our school did a survey among 1,127 students on the topic of “I Find Myself Really Good”. Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don’t like to complain. As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为图表作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：要求以“I Find Myself Really Good”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍调查结果； 第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①As for至于 ②play a role in扮演角色 ③made an effort to尽力去做某事 ④all the time一直 [高分句型] ①I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English.（which引导的定语从句） ②In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.（强调句） （C） 3．A possible version: A school did a survey among 1,267 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. 42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing. The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose other kinds of homework. As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ago, we were asked to make an English poster about Dragon Boat Festival. Then I collected lots of information on the festival. Finally, not only did I finish the task perfectly, but also I got a deeper understanding of our colorful culture. In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my experiences in learning. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍问卷的调查结果，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍调查结果；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的作业类型和这种作业的好处。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 （D） 4．例文 There is no denying that it is important for us to make a reasonable choice in life. I am a volleyball fan so I choose to join the school volleyball club, which is beneficial to my growth. In my childhood, I fell in love with volleyball. Then when I was in Grade 8, I was eager to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to focus time and energy on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard with persistence in the club and learned what the true meaning of the teamwork was. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got a satisfying result in the test. All this showed that my choice was right. Needless to say, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述一件自己感兴趣的事，是如何遵从自己内心的感受，并坚持下来的短文。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。描述过去的事情要用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历；第三段谈谈这件事带来的思考。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 （E） 5．A possible version: As far as I'm concerned, it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame or criticize us, which is beneficial for our lifelong development. I still remember the day that I had an English class. Seeing Li Ming falling asleep, our teacher, Miss Hu, woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully. To my surprise, Li Ming rushed out of the classroom without permission. It was so impolite and rude to do so. Later, I talked with him and he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit and he wasn't so calm at that time. Therefore, he picked up his courage and said sorry to Miss Hu in front of the whole class. It's a good idea to keep calm and think about it for a moment whenever being blamed or criticized. Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life. 【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求针对我们成长过程中，面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，有的甚至会有过激的反应这一现象，结合生活中的经历，写一篇短文，短文要求包含对这一现象的感想，自己所看或所听到的事情，从中学到的道理。 2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、三人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述自己所见所闻的事情时用一般过去时；内容包含三部分：第一部分开篇点题，谈出了自己对这一现象的看法；第二部分讲述自己所见所闻的事情；第三部分讲了自己从中学到了什么。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。 3.高分亮点： 短语：of great importance；be beneficial for；fall asleep；wake sb up；to one’s surprise；without permission；develop a good habit；pick up one’s courage；say sorry to sb；in front of；the whole class；lead to。 句型：①方式状语从句、时间状语从句 As far as I'm concerned, it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame or criticize us. ②定语从句 I still remember the day that I had an English class. ③宾语从句 he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit. （F） 6．（2024·山西大同·三模）假如你关注的某英文网站正在举办以“友情——力量的源泉”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的提示要点，用英语写一篇短文介绍你与好友之间的真挚友情，用于投稿。 提示要点：1．Introduce your good friend; 2．Talk about one unforgettable thing between you two; 3．Share your ideas about friendship. 要求：1．词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 A faithful (忠实的) friend is hard to find. So I feel very lucky to have my good friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （G） 7．（2024·山西忻州·三模）面对转瞬即逝的初中生活，我们有太多的希冀与不舍，多少欢笑与泪水，多少成功与失败，对于我们青涩的青春我们想到的是什么？拼搏，希望，信任，友爱，鼓励……，请选择一个关键词，并分享背后的故事和你的感悟。 要求：1.不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.不得出现真实的校名、人名。      Looking back at my junior school life, I think of many things. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （H） 8．（2024·山西阳泉·三模）请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 近几年来，中华传统文化正在走进我们的日常生活。越来越多的人穿汉服、诵读经典文学、演奏传统乐器、学习制作传统手工艺品……。这些都是我们身边的传统文化。某杂志社为了鼓励同学们感受传统文化之美，开辟了“Chinese traditional culture around me”的专栏。假如你是刘美，请你写一封信投稿。 内容包括： 1.列举你身边的一种中华传统文化； 2.谈谈你对这种文化的理解； 3.说明你是如何传播这种文化的。 要求： 1.词数不少于80词； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 参考词汇仅供参考； 4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 WORD BANK hanfu n.汉服 handicrafts n.手工艺品 classic n.经典作品，名著 musical instruments 乐器 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m glad to see that more and more people enjoy and spread Chinese traditional culture in our daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   Best wishes. Yours, Liu Mei （I） 9． （2024·山西晋城·三模）作为初三学生，在紧张的复习阶段，有的同学可能会因为一时的“失败”而失去信心。为了鼓励大家勇于面对失败并学会从失败中学习，某班开展“失败是成功之母（Failure is the mother of success）”的主题班会，要求每一位同学写一篇演讲稿。假如你是该班同学王强，请你结合自己的经历，写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1. show your opinion about failure 2. tell a story of how you learned from failure 3. give your classmates some suggestions 要求：1. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Hello, everyone, We all know the saying that “Failure is the mother of success”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （J） 10．（2024·山西吕梁·三模）请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。 体育运动是现代生活的重要组成部分，不仅能帮助我们强身健体、促进心智发展，也有助于培养我们顽强拼搏、超越自我的品格。参与运动有助于我们建立规则意识，发扬团队精神。请你结合自己的经历写一篇有关体育运动的短文。 内容包括： ● your understanding of the sports ● an experience that your favorite sport has influenced you 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 参考词汇仅供参考。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！（北京）股份有限公司1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案 （F） 6．例文 A faithful (忠实的) friend is hard to find. So I feel very lucky to have my good friend. Sun Ping, a beautiful and lovely girl, is one of my best friends in my school. She is taller than me. We often study and play together. People say we like sisters. One weekend, we planned to see a film together. But she didn’t arrive. I was not happy. So I rode my bike to her home. On the way, I found her walking with an old lady. The old lady got lost. Sun Ping knew this and she decided to help the lady. Then we stopped our bikes beside the street, and took a taxi with the old lady to her home. Friendship plays an important role in our daily life. It is a gift for us. I think friends should always care about and support each other. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍介绍你与好友之间的真挚友情，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的朋友； 第二步，介绍发生在自己和朋友之间的难忘经历； 第三步，介绍对友谊的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth.计划做某事 ②play an important role in在……扮演重要角色 ③care about关心 [高分句型] I think friends should always care about and support each other. (宾语从句) （G） 7．One possible version: Looking back at my junior school life, I think of many things. Among them, encouragement impresses me the best, which is like a kind of magic. I am always encouraged to move forward because of it. I still remember when Mr. Li asked a question in the English class. I got an answer, but I was not sure whether my answer was completely correct because I was not a top student. All of sudden, I saw Mr. Li looking at me with a smile. Thinking for a while, I picked up the courage to say my answer. I never expected Mr. Li walked towards me and said loudly, “Perfect! What a great answer you gave.” Hearing this, my heart was full of hope, confidence and joy. Thanks to Mr. Li’s encouragement, I study even harder and I believe I can be a top student. It’s like the sunshine that lights the road ahead of me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：在写作时首先要选好自己要谈论的关键词，根据关键词介绍其背后的经历，并描述自己的感悟。写作时要注意语言的准确性和逻辑性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，明确要介绍的话题； 第二步，重点介绍该话题背后的经历； 第三步，介绍自己的感受，与第一步呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①because of由于 ②all of sudden突然 ③be full of充满 ④thanks to多亏 [高分句型] ①Among them, encouragement impresses me the best, which is like a kind of magic.（which引导的定语从句） ②I got an answer, but I was not sure whether my answer was completely correct because I was not a top student.（whether引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句） ③It’s like the sunshine that lights the road ahead of me.（that引导的定语从句） （H） 8．例文： Dear Sir/Madam, I’m glad to see that more and more people enjoy and spread Chinese traditional culture in our daily life. Paper cutting is a very common but typical traditional art form that we can see everywhere around us—on the windows, cups or bags. My mom loves paper cuttings and she puts them up when the Spring Festival is coming. When I was a little kid, she taught me how to make paper cuttings. In my eyes, paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese cultures and through paper cutting, people express their best wishes. I like the paper cutting of the Chinese character “chun” because spring means hope to me. I hope every spring is a good start for the year. Now I’m in a paper-cutting club. We often organize some activities or do some projects with our partners. For example, we can cut out some places of interest in Shanxi. In this way, we can introduce the local culture of Shanxi in a traditional way. I hope more and more people can know better about our traditional culture. Best wishes. Yours, Liu Mei 【详解】[总体介绍] ①体裁：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，越来越多的人在日常生活中享受和传播中国传统文化； 第二步：介绍某一种中国传统文化，并谈谈自己对这种文化的理解； 第三步：介绍自己是如何传播这种文化的。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the +名词复数 ……之一 ②places of interest 名胜古迹 ③in this way 通过这种方式 [高分句型] ①Paper cutting is a very common but typical traditional art form that we can see everywhere around us — on the windows, cups or bags.（定语从句） ②I like the paper cutting of the Chinese character “chun” because spring means hope to me. （原因状语从句） （I） 9．例文： Hello, everyone, We all know the saying that “Failure is the mother of success”. Failure is what often happens. It is everywhere in our life. I think we don’t take failure seriously. We should think that failure is the first step to success. Last term, there was an English speech contest in my school. I decided to take part in it, because I thought I was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches. I was sure I could win the contest easily, so I spent little time practicing. Did I win? Of course not. The winner was Jim, one of my classmates, who had practiced after school every day. “Practice makes perfect”, as the saying goes. No one can succeed without hard work. And I think we shouldn’t give up even if we face failures. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明自己对失败的态度； 第二步，介绍自己失败的经历； 第三步，介绍自己的一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do决定做 ②take part in参加 ③spend time doing花费时间做 [高分句型] ①I decided to take part in it, because I thought I was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②And I think we shouldn’t give up even if we face failures.（条件状语从句） （J） 10．例文 As is known to all, doing sports is good for our body and mind. I benefit a lot from keeping exercising. Once, I got into the junior high school. I felt tired and stressed out every day because of the endless schoolwork. As a result, I got disappointing scores in the final exam. Luckily, my headteacher found out what I suffered from and offered me a piece of good advice—to take up exercising regularly and keep it. I followed her advice and started to run for half an hour every morning. Although it was really tiring and hard to keep at the beginning, I didn’t give up. Believe it or not, since then I have felt healthier and happier. Thanks to exercising, now I am a sunshine boy with a strong body and smart mind. Why not join me and begin to enjoy the magic of exercising? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容结合自己的经历写一篇有关体育运动的短文，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己对运动的理解； 第二步，介绍你最喜欢的运动影响你的经历； 第三步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②as a result结果 ③a piece of good advice一条好建议 ④at the beginning开始 [高分句型] ①Luckily, my headteacher found out what I suffered from and offered me a piece of good advice—to take up exercising regularly and keep it. 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