Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 导学案-2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

如何写建议信 写作技巧 一般而言，建议信属于半开放式作文，大多要求学生根据所给的材料给出有针对性的解决办法或者提出合理的建议，材料多为征求建议的信件。写好建议信的两个要素： 1.合理安排建议信的内容结构 建议信一般采取三段式结构： 首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单表示感谢，亦可表明自己的意图。 主体：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，用准确委婉的语言提出自己的建议、方法。注意要充分考虑对方的实际问题，表达时应选择得体的语言，切忌用语生硬呆板，泛泛而谈。 结尾段：表达希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。 2. 掌握建议信的写作特点 语气要诚恳、有礼貌，顾及对方的感受；建议的内容要详尽具体，不能含糊其辞；可提供的建议通常是多个，因此要注意各个建议之间的衔接。 目常用素材 首段常用的句型： I am writing to share some advice with you. I'm sorry that you have trouble in... You have asked me for my advice about... 提出建议时常用的句型： I think it would be a good idea if... In my opinion, it would be wise to... I suggest that you should... 结尾段常用的句型： I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ tips practical/useful/helpful. 写作模板 Dear_______, You have asked me for my advice about（问题），and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action:________（建议内容） I hope you'll find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more detail. Good luck to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学以致用 一 句式练习 第一段 开门见山，表明写作意图，引出主题 1._________________________________（我写信是力了表达我对…⋯的一些看法）the further improvement of the hotel__________________________（以吸引更多的顾客）• 2._____________________________（我想给出关于……的我的建议）holding more activities to call on people____________________________________（加强他们的环保意识）. 3. I put forward this proposal____________________________（为了就•…发表我的观点）how the work should be done. 4. Here are____________________________（一些建议，希望可以有所帮助）• 5. _____________________________________（考虑到这一问题的严重性），I want to ____________________（做出如下提议）. 第二段：提出具体建议，并阐述理由。 6. I __________________________________________________（建议为学校图书馆增加新电脑以便）more students can have access to the Internet. 7. ____________________________________（我提议的理由是）that the students can't get enough exercise and that they need to relax themselves. 8. ___________________（我的建议是我们应该）set up an English corner where students can practice their spoken English and______________________________ ___________________________________（分享他们学习英语的经验）. 9.__________________（此外），many students are not aware of the importance of protecting the environment,______________________________（因此有必要组织一些活动）to increase their awareness. 10.____________________________________（我建议我们学校创办）a reading club to_________________________________（给学生提供更多机会去阅读）so that they can broaden their horizons and increase 第三段：希望建议被采纳，并表达谢意，盼望回复。 11._______________________（感谢你抽出时间阅读我的来信）.I hope my suggestion is constructive and if you have any doubt______________________（我们可以进一步讨论） about the details of the proposal. 12.__________________________（我恳切希望你能认真考虑我的建议）and I'm waiting for_______________________（你能尽快给我答复）. 13. I hope you will_________________________________（觉得我的建议合理）and _____________________（我将不胜感激）if you could accept my suggestion. 二 篇章写作 假定你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到高一新生 Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据表格中的提示写一封回信，根据 Ben 的问题提出你的建议并陈述理由。 Ben's problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少，感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团（club）-----结识更多朋友 2.（请你补充） 英语单词难记 1.多阅读英语故事、新闻-----在运用中学单词 2..（请你补充） 注意：1. 回信应包括所有要点； 2. 词数120 左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in secondary school. In your letter you said that Good luck with everything! Li Hua 参考答案 一 句式练习 Tina: 五、常用表达 1. I'm writing to express my views on/ about; so as to attract more customers 2. I'd like to offer my advice on; to raise their awareness of protecting the environment 3. to give my opinion about/on 4. some suggestions that I hope will be helpful 5. Considering the seriousness of the problem; make proposals as follows 6. suggest adding new computers to the school library so that 7. The reasons for my proposal are 8. My proposal/suggestion is that we should; share their experience in learning English 9. Besides/What's more/In addition; so it is necessary to organize some activities 10. I propose/ suggest that our school (should) start; provide students with more chances to read 11. Thank you for sparing time to read my letter; we can have a further discussion 12. I sincerely hope you can consider my proposal seriously/take my proposal into serious consideration; you to give me a reply as soon as possible 13. find my proposal reasonable; I would appreciate it 篇章写作 Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in secondary school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in our school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you'd better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day ill be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$