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Unit 6 A Day in the Life
Section B(2a-2b)
Writing
Aftre class, students can:
Language ability
Cultural awareness
Thinking ability
Learning strategy
*Use proper
expressions to
write about their
school days;
*Figure out the
ways to organize
the text.
Learn the importance of having a healthy daily routine;
Learn to use the sample to collect the content, figure out the structure and refine the language;
*Improve the
thinking ability
of logic by
analyzing the
sample.
Lead-in
Part 1
假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank即将来你的学校参加交流活动。他给你发来邮件,想了解你的学校生活,请你用英文回复一封邮件,谈谈你的学习日,包括你的作息,你的日常活动等。
What to write
Part 2
Quick response in rows.
Talk about the daily routines.
You can talk about various daily routines.
2.Put the expressions into sentences.
(1)Peter通常早上6:30起床。
___________________________________________________________________ (2)然后他整理一会儿床铺。
___________________________________________________________________ (3)他先穿衣服,然后刷牙洗脸。
___________________________________________________________________ (4)在那之后,他带着早餐去乘车去学校。
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(5)那是一个10分钟的路程。
___________________________________________________________________ (6)课程在8:30开始。
___________________________________________________________________ (7)有10分钟的课间休息。
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(8)12:20左右,我去学校食堂吃午餐。
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(9)我在教室午休到下午2:20。
___________________________________________________________________ (10)下午我有4节课。
___________________________________________________________________ (11)我放学后的第一件事情就是写作业。
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(12)晚饭后我经常和父母一起散步。
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(13)听一些轻音乐是睡前很好的放松方式。
___________________________________________________________________ (14)利用好每天的时间会让我们受益匪浅。
___________________________________________________________________ (15)俗话说“早睡早起身体好”。
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(16)时间流逝似沙漏里流动的沙粒,利用好时间才能让它们闪闪发光。
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Keys
How to write
Part 2
time order
transition words
Summary/Comments
How can we organize the text?
Sample Analysis
Part 3
Analyze the sample from the aspects.
1
2
3
content
structure
language
Aim of writing
Details:
*time;
*activities;
*saying;
Feelings & Comments
Outline
Different activities in time order
Summary
丰富短语表达
句式多样
过渡自然
比喻修辞
谚语增彩
Writing
Part 4
假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank即将来你的学校参加交流活动。他给你发来邮件,想了解你的学校生活,请你用英文回复一封邮件,谈谈你的学习日,包括你的作息,你的日常活动等。
Assessment checklist
1.Content --- clear aim of writing; detailed
daily activities with different
times; feelings or comments;
2.Language --- correct; rich expressions;
3.Structure --- clear levels; transition words;
Excellent
Good
To be improved
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